FF: JANE DIL ME KABSE HE TU...!!! Updated @page 46 - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago
CONTINUE...
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It was evening, Anant was sitting in garden from long time. He was in deep thoughts thinking about the circumstances which have occurred in his life. Suddenly he felt someone's hand on his shoulder and at the next moment he recognized the touch. He looks at her. Navya was staring him blankly
NAVYA - it's getting cold. Come inside
Saying this she was about to go when he holds her wrist. He gets up and moves towards her
ANANT - mere pas aaogi to thand nahi lagegi.
Anant kissed her wrist and she took her hand behind.
NAVYA - please Anant
ANANT - what please Navya? You don't remember the moments we spent together?
Asked Anant getting hurt. Navya looks at him in teary eyes
NAVYA - they should be meant nothing now
ANANT - why? Kya tumhara pyar mere liye khatam hogaya he? Kya tum mujhse pyar nahi karti?
Asked Anant looking straight in her eyes. She looks away
NAVYA - nahi.. Nahi karti
Anant closed his eyes in frustration. Navya moves little closer to him and hold his hand
NAVYA - please mere liye ye sab aur difficult mat karo Anant. Please
Navya requested him. He throws her hand in air surprising her
ANANT - ye sab sirf tumhare liye difficult he? Mere liye nahi? Have you ever thought about me navya ki mujhe kaisa feel horaha he?
Navya turns around hiding her emotions. Anant wipes his eyes
ANANT - ya right. You will never realize it until it happens with you
Anant makes navya look at him in a jerk
ANANT - tum chahti ho ye shadi me karu, ok I will do it. Tumhe mujhe kasam di he na?
Navya looks at him in a confused state
ANANT - me b tumhe kasam deta hu. We have loved each other equally right? So why should only I sacrifice? Tumhe b shadi Karni hogi.
Navya's eyes became wide in shock
ANANT - get one thing clear navya. Meri aur ritika ki shadi tab hi hogi jab tum kisi aur se shadi karogi
Navya was utterly shocked by anant's decision. He was looking at her in anger.
ANANT - tumhe mere pyar ka vasta
Saying this Anant started walking. Navya falls on her knees crying
IS DIL PE LAGTE HE JO
WO ZAKHM DIKHATE NAHI
Anant looks at her crying. His heart wrench but he goes from there ignoring while navya kept on looking at him
APNO SE MILTE HE JO
WO DARD MITATE NAHI
Anant goes in his room and locked himself and started crying
ME PAS APNE NAHI
BAS DUR JABSE HE TU
Here navya was also crying sitting there.
BAS DUR JABSE HE TU...
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It was tilak day of anant and ritika. From last two days Anant didn't talk with navya or else ignored her. She was in a confusion about what to do. She discussed it with Ranbir and he also suggested her the same that for this marriage she should also sacrifice. Navya was dressed in brown chudidar suit working in kitchen. Sugandha came there
SUGANDHA - navya beta.. Come with me
Sugandha called her and she followed. Sugandha makes her sit near Om while meeta and deepak were also present there
NAVYA - what happened aunty?
OM - beta you remember? Last time we have told you about Aditya Verma?
Navya looks down and nodded in yes
OM - so have you came to a decision?
Om waited for her reply. He looks at deepak and makes him believe to not worry. Navya close her eyes and took a deep breath
NAVYA - me Aditya se milne ke liye tayar hu
Navya announced her decision. Everyone gets happy. Om caresses navya's head
DEEPAK - tumne ye decision soch samajhkar liya he na?
Navya nodded in yes. Meeta came near her and kissed her forehead. Deepak also hugs her
DEEPAK - we are so happy beta. Thank you.
Navya gets emotional. She goes from there while everyone became happy.
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Anant was sitting in hall in Orange color kurta and off white pyjama. He was looking sad. Ranbir who was dressed in green color kurta and off white pyjama was standing beside him. He patted on his shoulder while Anant doesn't look at him. Navya who was in her yellow color anarkali suit while ritika in baby pink anarkali suit headed downstairs. Anant's eyes caught navya but she didn't look at him. She made ritika sit beside Anant when her eyes falls on Anant who was staring her blankly. They have an eyelock. Soon navya looks elsewhere. Meeta came near them and does their tilak follow by sugandha. They gifted them some clothes and makes them eat sweet. While all this Anant was staring navya while she was looking down. Finally the rituals comes to its end
DEEPAK - baccho.. Come take everyone's blessing
Anant and ritika took Om and sugandha's blessing and later of deepak and meeta's
RANBIR - congratulations to both of you
Ritika smile at him. Ranbir and anant hugs each other but not happily rather with sadness. Navya moves towards ritika
NAVYA - congrats ritu
They both hug each other
NAVYA - I am so happy for you
RITIKA - thank you
Navya fakes smile
MEETA - panditji.. Sagai ki date bata dijiye
PANDITJI - agle mahine sagai aur shadi dono ke liye acha muhrat he
Everyone became happy except Anant navya and Ranbir. Navya goes from there in kitchen while Anant followed her. Navya was silently crying when Anant moves towards her
ANANT - navya..
He called her while she wipes her tears. She looks at him
NAVYA - you want anything?
Asked navya normally. Anant closed his eyes in frustration
ANANT - mujhe jo chahiye wo dogi?
Navya looks elsewhere. She was about to go from there when Anant hold her hand
ANANT - you cannot ignore me like this navya
Navya looks at him in teary eyes
ANANT - tomorrow we are leaving for London. Ek mahine bad meri shadi he navya. Hope you will get enough time to think about it
Anant left her hand and goes from there. Navya took a deep breath thinking about what will happen after one month...
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww nice updt... Cont soon pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really awesome ...hate ritika ;/
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Posted: 8 years ago
very emotional update...pls continue.
Edited by NAVANT28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVANT28

very emotional update...pls continue.

Thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
Will update today
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter098

loving your updates cont soon

Thank you so much. Updating
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Posted: 8 years ago
CONTINUE...
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AFTER ONE MONTH...
Deepak, meeta along with navya and ritika reached London. Navya was dressed in violet color top with light blue jeans. They were checking their luggage when announcement occurred -
ANNOUNCEMENT - may I have your attention please. This announcement is for Ms ritika mishra. Welcome to London hope you will have a great time. From Anant bajpayee
Navya and ritika gets surprised hearing it
MEETA - are Anant beta..
They look back where Anant was standing in blue t-shirt and jeans. Navya looks at him in confusion. He moves towards them and directly goes and hugs ritika ignoring navya. Ritika became surprised
ANANT - welcome to my city, my love..
Said Anant looking at navya. Navya looks elsewhere while ritika became happy
RITIKA - I can't believe it Anant. Ye sab tumne kiya?
Anant smile at her and took deepak and meeta's blessing.
ANANT - come on ritika. Pyar ke liye to kuch bhi kar sakte he. Right navya?
Anant asked her. Navya smile lightly.
ANANT - how are you navya?
NAVYA - fine.. You?
ANANT - bas ji raha hu
Anant gave an emotional reply. They both looks at each other. Deepak inturpts them
DEEPAK - omi kaha he beta?
ANANT - mom and dad are ready to welcome you at home. Come on let's go
Anant took everyone outside. Navya kept on looking at him
***
They reached at bajpayee mansion. Lochan brought water for them. Everyone were talking and having a light moment
DEEPAK - Sach omi.. Jitna shimla sundar he na utna hi London. Very romantic place
ANANT - to acha he na uncle. Apka aur aunty ka mini honeymoon hojayega. What's say aunty?
Joke Anant. Everyone laugh at him while meeta pulls his ear. Navya looks confused at Ranbir while he just nodded in no. Anant looks at navya
ANANT - why are you so quiet navya?
NAVYA - no nothing..
SUGANDHA - thak gayi hogayi bechari. Anant take navya to her room.
Anant nodded in agreement. Anant started walking while navya follow him
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Navya enters her room and started unpacking her bags. Anant closed the door and navya looks at him in a jerk
NAVYA - what are you doing Anant?
Anant moves towards her
ANANT - one month had left navya. Have you came to a decision?
Asked Anant being serious. Navya looks confused
ANANT - when are you getting married?
Navya looks elsewhere. Anant moves closer to her
ANANT - tumhe koi mila nahi ya tumne dhundha nahi
Navya was about to go when Anant holds her hand and pulls her towards him in a jerk
ANANT - don't try to fool me navya. Ye hasi bhi jhuti he aur khel bhi. Me ye sagai bhi tod dunga aur ritika ka dil bhi
Said Anant in anger. Navya looks teary.
ANANT - I have already told you navya. Me kisise nahi darta
Suddenly door knock. Navya looks frightened.
RITIKA - navi... Navi...
Said ritika from outside. Navya looks at door and then at Anant while he was staring her in anger
RITIKA - open the door navi.. You there?
NAVYA - Anant please.. Leave me
Navya requested Anant. He left her and she goes to open the door
RITIKA - what are you doing navi? Me kabse...
Her eyes falls on Anant. She looks at navya and then at Anant in confusion
RITIKA - kya horaha tha?
She asked navya while navya looks down
ANANT - so navya.. Shall I tell ritika what was happening here?
Smirk Anant while navya lightly nodded in no. Ritika looks confused. Anant moves towards ritika and gave her a white color small earrings
ANANT - for you. I was just showing it to navya.
Ritika became happy and hugs Anant. Navya looks elsewhere
RITIKA - I love you so much
Anant looks at navya while she also looks at him
ANANT - I love you.. I love you so much
Said Anant looking at navya while she looked down...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
silla thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thankuu so much for update ... Really short update :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
Woww so awesome bichare anya.. :(

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