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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsummm update :)) pls update next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -meru-

Wowww lovely updt.. Cute Anya scn ... Loved it alot cont sooon :)

Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JutheeAlam

aww cute update and AnYa 's hug .. loved it..

Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Perfect update
anya discussion was superb
awww anya first hug that to
at sunset point lovely
update soon dear

Thank you dear will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: silla

Awsummm update :)) pls update next

Sure dear will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Anya hug was I like their conversation about city and village thank u for the update. Next pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sure dear will update tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ILuvAnya

Sure dear will update tomorrow

ok.thank u .will wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
CONTINUE...
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At night, navya was sitting in garden playing with the grass. She was smiling thinking about Anant. The moment spent with him today came infront of her eyes. When she thought about their first hug she smile and hits her own head in disbelief. Suddenly her thoughts got broke by ritika.
RITIKA - navya..
Navya got up and looks at her
RITIKA - mene tumhe pure hotel me dhundh liya aur tum yaha bethi ho
Navya smile lightly
NAVYA - what happened? Kuch kam tha kya
RITIKA - Kam to tha par uske liye tumhe mere sath chalna padega
NAVYA - kaha
RITIKA - uffo.. Itne sawal. Bhabi hone wali hu tumhari. Meri bat mano aur chalo
Navya fakes a smile and follow her. They enters ranbir's room where Anant Ranbir and few of their cousins were sitting
RANBIR - lo agayi navi
Anant looks at her and so as she
NAVYA - kya hua Ranbir? Q bulaya he?
PAYAL - oho navi di. Betho to pehele
Navya sat beside Anant. They both doesn't look at each other because of nervousness.
RANBIR - to suno. Shadi ki rasme shuru hone se pehele kuch masti honi chahiye na
ANANT - kya matlab?
RITIKA - Matlab ki bhai.. Q na hum log kal apni party kare.. Cocktail party
Anant and navya looks at each other while Ranbir and ritika were waiting for their decision
ANANT - cocktail party? Matlab jisme sirf humlog rahenge?
ADITYA - ha Anant bhai. Wohi wali. Bohot maza ayega. Hum log dance karenge gana bajana hoga bilkul late night parties jaisa
NAVYA - nahi nahi. I don't think it will be good
RANBIR - oh come on navi. Sirf hum log hi to he. Wo bhi party yahi hotel me rahegi
ANANT - fir bhi Ranbir. Bade log permission denge?
RITIKA - bhai please. Parso se to shadi ki sab rituals shuru hojayenge. Fir hum sab kab party karenge?
Anant looks at navya and she nodded in yes. Ranbir and ritika along with others looks at Anant and he smile and nodded in yes. Ranbir and ritika became happy and hug each other while navya and Anant looks at them and then at each other
Next morning Anant and navya goes towards garden where all elders were sitting
ANANT - dad
OM - are Anant. Me tumhe hi bulane wala tha. Mr Mehta tumse bat karna chahte he. Ek bar unse mil lo
ANANT - ok dad
Saying this Anant was about to leave when navya holds his hand
NAVYA - kaha ja rahe ho? Cocktail party ke liye permission leni he na
Said navya in a whisper
ANANT - yar navya. Mujhe bohot darr lag raha he
NAVYA - acha? Waise to bade sher bane ghumte ho. Ab kya hua? Ab to bade fattu lag rahe ho
Navya teases him for which he looks at her angrily
ANANT - acha.. Ruko tumhe dikhata hu asli sher
Anant turns and goes towards Om and deepak.
ANANT - dad.. Uncle.. Aap dono se ek permission leni thi
Said Anant hesitantly for which deepak and Om looks at him in confusion
DEEPAK - kya hua Anant?
Anant looks at navya who was hiding her smile.
ANANT - wo.. Uncle.. Ranbir aur ritika chahte the ki.. Aaj.. Wo ho
Navya laugh for which meeta hits her shoulder
DADI - wo matlab kya beta?
ANANT - cocktail party
SUGANDHA - cocktail party?? Matlab
ANANT - wo mom.. Wo bas youngsters logo ki party hoti he. Bride and groom ke friends shadi se pehele unko congratulate karte he party karte he
All elders looks at each other. Navya also looks tensed. Dadi was about to say something when navya inturpts her
NAVYA - one minute Dadi. Aap kuch bolne se pehele me kuch bolna chahti hu
DADI - ha bol
NAVYA - Dadi.. Hum ab tak sab kuch Ranbir aur ritika ke marzi se kar rahe he na. Unki khushi me hum sab khush he. To ye cocktail party bhi unki khushi ke liye kar lete he na
MEETA - par navi. Itne sare rishtedar he bade log he. Kya sochenge wo
DEEPAK - aur sabki soch Mumbai wale logo jaisi nahi hoti navi
NAVYA - par papa is party me bura kya he? Bahar ka koi nahi rahega. Sab ghar ke he. Hamare yaha ke bacche aur inke yaha ke bacche
Deepak and Om looks at each other and thought something. Navya and Anant looks nervous. Meeta and sugandha were also looking tensed
DEEPAK - thk he. Kar lo party
Anant and navya became happy. Anant side hugs her and she also hugs him
ANANT - thank you aap sabko
Saying this they went from there. Sugandha watch them going and smile in herself
At evening the hall was fully decorated for the cocktail party. Ranbir was dressed in white color suit. While ritika in white color off shoulder one piece till her knees. Anant was talking with some of his friends dressed in black color suit. But his concentration was far away as his eyes were searching for someone special. Suddenly his eyes caught the entrance from where the beauty was approaching. Navya who was dressed in black color gown her hair tied up in a loose juda while some hair tendrils were left open. She was looking immensely beautiful. Anant had a smile across his lips. He moves towards her. They both looks at each other
NAVYA - Anant.. Me.. Kaisi lag rahi hu?
Asked navya nervously. Anant just smiled and replied
ANANT - very very beautiful
Navya smile and looks down feeling shy. Just then some of her cousin came there
SID - navi. Yaha kya kar rahi he? Chal na
They took her with them keeping Anant sad
The party was going on smooth. Few of them dance with their partners. Ranbir and ritika also dance while everyone clapped for them. Now they both decided to bring the upcoming couple on floor
RANBIR - now it's the time for my beautiful sister to come here
Navya who was standing with some of them gets nervous
NAVYA - no Ranbir. Not me
RITIKA - kya no navya. Come on. Infact tum akeli nahi ho. Anant bhai bhi dance karenge tumhare sath
Anant became happy when ritika announced it. All of them started cheering them up. They both looks at each other and goes towards the stage. The spotlight falls on navya who was standing alone. Everyone started cheering for her but she was feeling nervous. Suddenly a second spotlight falls on Anant who came from her behind. He gave her his hand and she offers it. He pulls her towards him. She fall on his chest. They both stare each other and started doing some steps. Anant holds her one hand and from other hand holds her waist. They both started swinging slowly. He makes her goes round around him and when she was about to fall holds her from waist while she kept her hand near his chest. They both looks at each other. Everyone started clapping for them. Hearing everyone's clap they broke their eye lock. Anant makes navya stand properly. They smile lightly looking at everyone. And then they smile looking at each other...
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" IF I DID ANYTHING RIGHT IN MY LIFE IT WAS WHEN I GAVE MY HEART TO YOU.. "
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute romantic updt..loved it alot cont sooon

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