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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: JutheeAlam
Woww nice update

Thank you so much dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

lovely updates want to know why navya angry with her father.

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Saumya96

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Originally posted by: sweety71
lovely updates want to know why navya angry with her father.

Thank you dear. Will surely update soon

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Saumya96

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FLASHBACK...

Anant and navya were sitting in a garden area. Anant was sleeping keeping his head on navya's lap.

NAVYA - Anant

ANANT - hmm

NAVYA - suno na

ANANT - hmm hmm

NAVYA - Anant please.. Suno na

Anant gets up and sits beside her.

ANANT - what happened navya?

NAVYA - Anant we are together from last 3 years. Mera college ka ye akhri Sal he. Aur tumhe b to itni achi job mil chuki he

ANANT - navya, I know all this

NAVYA - no I was saying, we should talk with my parents now

Anant smile looking at her while navya was looking at him with a hope.

ANANT - OK

Anant agreed to which navya became happy. She hugs him

NAVYA - I knew it. Tumhare parents to already mere bare me jante he ab bas mere parents ha bol de

ANANT - don't worry navya. Jaise mene mom dad ko mana Liya he waise hi tumhare mom dad ko b mana lunga

Navya smile looking at him

NAVYA - I know

ANANT - hmm to isi khushi me

Saying Anant came near her to kiss when navya stops him..

NAVYA - abhi nahi.. Shadi k bad

ANANT - kya navya tum b

NAVYA - Anant agar itni mjhse problem he to dhundh lete koi modern si ladki

Said navya getting angry while Anant decided to tease her.

ANANT - abhi nahi.. Shadi k bad

NAVYA - kya kaha

Anant started running while navya started chasing him

...

Next day at navya's house Anant was standing infront of deepak looking down while navya was standing besides Anant whereas meeta besides deepak

DEEPAK - I have asked your salary only why you taking so much time?

Anant gets little scared. He gulped his fear and answer.

ANANT - 20 thousands. Par temporary he sir. Next year it will get increased.

DEEPAK - so? Next year it will be 30? OK let's say 35. Then.. Uske agle Sal aur badhegi, sabki badhti he. What's new in that?

Anant looks at navya while she also looks at him.

NAVYA - papa.. Please

Before she could say anything deepak stop her by showing hand.

DEEPAK - aaj tak mene apni beti ko kisi chiz ki kami nahi hone di he. Aur na hi kabhi hone dunga.

ANANT - me b kabhi nahi hone dunga sir. I love navya. And I will make sure she will be happy with me always

DEEPAK - bas...

Shouted deepak loudly for which all became shocked.

DEEPAK - I am there to keep my daughter happy. I am there to think about her. You better stay away from her.

NAVYA - papa. Aap ek bar please ekbar. Anant ko mauka dijiye. Please papa

Tears started flowing from navya's eyes. Anant also became sad looking at her.

ANANT - navya please tum ro mat. I can't see you cry

Anant was making navya silent.

DEEPAK - out

They both look at him

DEEPAK - I said out

They all became shocked. Deepak hold anant's hand and took outside their house.

DEEPAK - aaj k bad agar meri bacchi se milne ki koshish ki to mjhse bura koi nahi hoga. Understand?

Saying deepak bang the door. Anant was still standing outside.

ANANT- uncle please listen to me once

NAVYA - papa you can't do this

Deepak take navya with him and locked her inside her room. She was crying.

NAVYA - please papa. I love him. Please

Her cries were heard by Anant who was also crying for his navya.

FLASHBACK ENDS...

...

It was navya's birthday party. They were having the party in one of the hotel. Deepak and meeta enters while Ranbir welcome them.

MEETA - navya kaha he beta?

RANBIR - ati hi hogi ma. Ayiye na

After some time Anant and ritika also enters. Anant was dressed in black suit with red tie. He was looking so good. His eyes were searching for his love. Deepak and meeta became shocked to see at Anant. Anant also became surprised. He proceed towards them. He took their blessing. Meeta smile at him while deepak looks away.

ANANT - how are you uncle, aunty?

RANBIR - ma...

Suddenly Ranbir enters there.

RANBIR - ma papa. Meet him. He is my friend Anant. Aur Anant ye he navya k ma papa

Both deepak and meeta look at Anant while he indicated them to keep quiet.

RANBIR - excuse me. Me Ata hu

As soon as Ranbir left from there Anant looks at them.

ANANT - Ranbir kuch nahi janta. Aap b please use kuch boliye mat

Meeta smile little while deepak looks at him in amusement.

RITIKA - Anant. Aap yaha kya Kar rahe he?

ANANT - uncle aunty ye ritika he.. Meri... Patni

Meeta looks at deepak while he bowed down.

ANANT - ritika ye navya k mom dad he

RITIKA - namaste

She took their blessing. Suddenly everyone's eyes falls on the birthday girl who have just made her entry. Navya was dressed in red shiffon saree with open hair on one side. Her backless deep blouse was giving her more beauty. Her crystal jewelry was making her look bright. Anant was just stunned looking at her. He was lost in her again which goes notice by deepak. Ritika moves towards her.

RITIKA - hi navya. Happy birthday

NAVYA - thank you

She smiled lightly. She comes towards meeta and took her blessing.

MEETA - khush raho beta. Happy birthday

Navya smile lightly. She took deepak's blessing without looking at him and saying anything to him. He kept his hand on her head and blessed her.

DEEPAK - God bless you beta

She goes towards Anant. He was looking at her smiling.

ANANT - happy birthday navya

NAVYA - thank you Anant

They were staring each other. When suddenly Ranbir inturpts them...

To be continued...

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sweety71

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Nice updates, hope navya will go back to anant

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Saumya96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hi guys..

Hope you all are well. Guys I am getting such a low response for this ff? I want to know the reason. Are you all not enjoying my writing.? I am feeling really disappointed and bad. Please guys give your suggestions and reply.

Updating soon.. Thank you

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Saumya96

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CONTINUE...

RANBIR - excuse me ladies and gentlemen. Thank you all for coming here. Today is a very special day. It's my wife's birthday.

Everyone clapped for navya while she smiled little. Anant was feeling little jealous.

RANBIR - meri aur navya ki shadi ko 3 saal hogaye he. Par hum dono bachpan ke dost he. Bachpan se best friends he. But one day my dad got transferred in shimla and we have to leave Mumbai. Aur jab wapis aya tab pata chala ki ye meri best friend ab meri patni banne ja rahi he.

Anant and navya looks at each other. They stare each other with teary eyes. Suddenly navya looks down controlling her tears.

RANBIR - and I must say you are the best gift I had my bestie. I pray God you should get everything you want and what you love. Once again a very happy birthday.

Navya smile little. Everyone clapped for Ranbir. He brought navya to middle of hall and waiters brought cake. She cut the cake and first gave to meeta and then to Ranbir. While all this Anant was staring her. He was happy for her but sad for himself. Navya also looks at him. When suddenly lights went off.

RANBIR - ARE GORE GORE MUKHDE

Suddenly light fall on Ranbir who started singing.

RANBIR - CHAND KE TUKDE

KALI KALI JULFE

NILI NILI AKHE

Everyone started clapping and lights went on. Few girls came beside Ranbir and he started dancing few steps.

RANBIR - ARE GORE GORE MUKHDE

CHAND KE TUKDE

KALI KALI ZULFE

NILI NILI AKHE

He came beside navya and sang looking at her.

RANBIR - KHWAB DIKHADE RAH BHULADE

HOSH UDA DE SABKE

CHAIN MITA DE TAN SULGA DE

MAN ME DE MASTI GHOL

He holds navya's hand while she smiled lightly. He again goes in Centre and dance few steps.

RANBIR - ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

DOLE YE MAN TERE LIYE

ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

KABHI TU B TO MERE SANG DOL

He goes towards ritika and makes her dance with him.

RANBIR - ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

DOLE YE MAN TERE LIYE

ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

KABHI TU B TO MERE SANG DOL

He goes towards meeta and dance with her. She caresses his head. Anant looks at them.

RANBIR - YE LACHKILE SE TAN

YE BALKHATE BADAN

PEHLE DIL HE MANGTE

FIR MANGTE HE JAN

Then he goes towards navya and sang. But she was looking at Anant.

RANBIR - YE RANGIN BIJLIYA

YE JADU GARNIYA

DEKHI HE SAU BAR PAR HU AAJ B HAIRAN

Then he goes at ritika. While she dance with him. Anant looks at both of them and then at navya.

RANBIR - OH DEKHO AYE OH DEKHO JAYE

KIS NAZ SE NAKHRE SE JHUM KE

APSARAYE HASINAYE EK PAL KO JO DEKHLE CHUM KE

Ranbir comes towards Anant while Anant just smile at him.

RANBIR - OH SARA ZAMANA HO DIWANA

DUNIYA GIRE KADMO PE

PHIR B YE PARIYA HUSN KI KALIYA

SAMJHE NA PYAR K BOL

He said indicating navya and Anant look at her.

RANBIR - ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

DOLE YE MAN TERE LIYE

ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

KABHI TU B TO MERE SANG DOL

He pulls Anant at Centre and makes him sing. Anant sang looking at navya.

ANANT - YE DILBAR YE HASIN

YE TO JANE NAHI

PYAR HE KYA CHIZ AUR HOTI WAFA HE KYA

Navya also stare at him and sang

NAVYA - YE PATHAR KE SANAM

INKO KISKA HE GUM

HUMPE KYA GUZRI BHALA INKO PATA HE KYA

While Ranbir and ritika again dance

RANBIR - YE ANJANE YE BEGANE

INHE KAM HE KYA JAZBAT SE

NA YE JANE NA YE MANE

DIL TUTE HE INKE HATH SE

Ranbir goes near them and stands in between them. He looks at Anant.

RANBIR - OH AAG SE THANDAK

BARF SE GARMI

MANG KE HUM PACHTAYE

He looks at navya then

RANBIR - DHYAN AB AYE

HUMNE GAVAYE

DIN KITNE ANMOL

He took both of them and makes them dance

RANBIR - ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

DOLE YE MAN TERE LIYE

ROCK AND ROLL SONIYE

KABHI TU B TO MERE SANG DOL

Navya gets bumped to anant. Everyone were busy in dancing and singing. Navya and Anant were looking at each other. Standing aside deepak and meeta were looking at them. Meeta goes near them and took navya with her. While going navya was still looking at Anant and so was he. They were having tears.

The party was going on well. Anant came aside. He was carrying a glass of drink. He was getting flashback about how Ranbir was singing and dancing with navya. He wanted to be at his place but his navya was with Ranbir. He was feeling jealous. Suddenly because of his anger the glass in his hand got broken up giving blood to him. His hand was bleeding while his eyes were teary. Here navya was searching for Anant. When her eyes falls on Anant who was standing back facing her. She moves towards him.

NAVYA - Anant wo it's time for dinner

He looks at her. She was shocked looking at his red teary eyes. Her eyes gets more wider looking at his bleeding hand.

NAVYA - Anant ye.. Ohh God

She clean his blood with her handkerchief. She tied it across his wound. While all this Anant was staring her. She was also having tears.

NAVYA - what was you thinking? Kitni chot lagi he

ANANT - I love you navya

She stop her work and looks at him. They both again looks at each other's eyes. This moment navya just wanted to hug him, cry in his embrace. She was waiting for this moment and when it has came she was speechless. She was about to speak when Ranbir came there.

RANBIR - navya

They both broke their eye lock and wipes their tears.

RANBIR - what you both doing here?

NAVYA - Ranbir.. Wo

RANBIR - acha leave it. Anant common let's have dinner.. Chalo navya

Ranbir took navya with him while Anant watched her going. He looks at his wound and closed his eyes getting frustrated...