KABHI ALVIDA NAA KEHNA... Updated @page 51

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A white car stopped infront of a hospital. A man in his early thirty's came out from driving seat. He opened the back door and carried a girl in his hand. She was unconscious having stain of blood all over her head and hands. The man carried her inside he was very frightened. He calls doctor who took her inside to check.
DOCTOR - oh god. Bohot blood loss hua hai
After checking the doctor came outside to inform that man.
DOCTOR - excuse me
He turn around, there he was - anant bajpayee, senior head at one of the multinational companies in Mumbai. He looks handsome and mature but now tensed to know about that woman.
ANANT - doctor, how is she?
DOCTOR - there is a lot of blood loss. We have to operate. You just fill that operation form.
The doctor gave him information.
DOCTOR - by the way, your relation with the patient?
Anant looks sad hearing the question. He thought for a while and then answer.
ANANT - actually I was passing by when I noticed her crashed with a car. And she is my... Old friend
The doctor left from there and anant goes towards reception to fill the form.
LADY - patient's name..
ANANT - navya.. Bajp...
Anant stopped in between and then continued
ANANT - navya Singh
The lady on the counter wrote as anant told everything. After completing the process anant looks at Navya's cell phone which he was carrying. He goes in contact and found the number.
ANANT - excuse me mam
LADY - yes
ANANT - this number... Is of her... Her husband... Will you please inform him about the accident. Please
The lady looks confused but then agrees to it. She dialled the number.
LADY - hello.. Mr ranbir Singh?
RANBIR - yes.. Who's this
Answer a good looking guy busy in his laptop in his cabin of another company in Mumbai.
LADY - I am speaking from city hospital. Your wife navya Singh, unka accident hua hai
RANBIR - what...
Ranbir stand up in a shock.
Here in hospital anant was looking at navya who was having oxygen mask and was sleeping quietly. In that state also she was looking heavenly beautiful. Anant got little tears. He turns around when he heard someone asking about navya and yes he was ranbir - her husband. Ranbir came towards him.
ANANT - Mr ranbir?
RANBIR - yes... My wife??
ANANT - she is inside.
Anant moved from there and ranbir stands there to look at her. Ranbir sigh relief when he looks at navya properly. While anant was looking elsewhere sadly. Ranbir looks at him.
RANBIR - thank you so much. Agar aap meri wife ko hospital nahi late to pata nahi kya hota
ANANT - it's ok Mr Singh
RANBIR - by the way.. May I know your name
ANANT - Anant... Anant bajpayee
They both shakes hand.
RANBIR - thank you again
ANANT - your welcome.. Again.. Ab mjhe chalna chahiye. You be there with... With your... Wife
Said anant sadly. Ranbir smile at him. Anant left from there while ranbir again looks at navya and prayed for her well being...
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wowww this seems interetsing next update please
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lovely concept dear continue soon please. thanks for coming up with new FF
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Interesting and different concept
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Thank you so much guys for liking my new story. I will definitely continue soon..
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Anant stopped his car near his flat. It was a normal 4 bhk house with all modern facilities. He opened the door and sits on sofa relaxing. His eyes were closed. When suddenly someone called him.
RITIKA - anant
He opened his eyes to look at the lady infront of him. She was ritika - anant's wife. She was carrying a glass of water in her hand. She gave him the water and he took it with a smile.
RITIKA - what happened anant? You looked so tensed?
Anant looks at her in tension.
ANANT - nothing... Just work load
He quietly drank the water and left from there while ritika looks at him in suspicious way.
At night in hospital ranbir was sitting outside Navya's room. Doctor came after checking her.
RANBIR - how is she doctor?
DOCTOR - better. Conscious now. She will get discharged till tomorrow.
RANBIR - thank you doctor
Doctor left from there and ranbir went inside to check navya. She was sitting on bed. He comes towards her and sits beside her.
RANBIR - how are you now?
NAVYA - fine
She answered smiling little.
RANBIR - you should be. And all thanks to that man who brought you here in time.
NAVYA - man? Who?
Asked navya in confusion while ranbir think of his name.
RANBIR - ha.. Anant bajpayee... Ya right
As ranbir said his name navya gets a shock. SHe looks at him in a shock.
NAVYA - anant?
Little tears started coming in her eyes. He looks at her and she wiped her tears.
RANBIR - ha navya. Par tum aise kyu puch rahi ho jaise is nam ko pehechanti ho?
NAVYA - nahi
Said navya hurriedly for which ranbir gets surprised.
NAVYA - m...Matlab... Na...Nahi me.. Me nahi janti.
Said navya looking down.
RANBIR - well chodo ye sab. Tum yaha aram karo me tumhare liye dinner lata hu. Ok
Navya smiled lightly and ranbir went from there while navya goes in thoughts.
Here anant was sitting on dinning table thinking something. Ritika came there and serve him the dinner.
RITIKA - jante he anant? Aaj mene apka favourite halwa banaya hai. It's your favorite right.
Asked ritika while anant was not answering and still busy in thoughts. She looks at him confused.
RITIKA - anant
She patted on his shoulder for which he gets into senses and looks at her.
RITIKA - kaha khoye hai aap
Asked she worriedly. Anant looks confused. He nodded in nothing and she serves him the dinner. She sat infront of him and both started having their dinner.
ANANT - ritika
Calls anant. She looks at him
ANANT - can I ask you something?
RITIKA - ha anant. Puchiye na
ANANT - we are friends right?
Ritika looks little sad. But then smiled and looks at him
RITIKA - yes anant. We were we are and we will be friends always.
Anant sigh relief and smile at her lightly.
RITIKA - anant mene apse hamesha yahi kaha he. Hum pati patni badme pehele friends he. We don't have love of a husband and wife but we have love of friends.
They both smile at each other and continued their dinner.
In hospital, ranbir and navya were also having dinner.
RANBIR - I am very thankful to Mr anant navya.
Said ranbir busy in having dinner which navya looks at him when he said Anant's name.
RANBIR - unhone tumhari Jan bavhakar hamari bohot help ki he.
NAVYA - hmm
RANBIR - I think we should thank him
NAVYA - q ranbir
Said navya hurriedly
NAVYA - mera matlab he we don't know his contact right. So how we will thank him
RANBIR - ya. You're right
Navya looks for words while ranbir catches her like this. He kept his hand on her. She looks at him in surprise and looking at her reaction ranbir took his hand away.
RANBIR - sorry. You ok navya?
NAVYA - ha ranbir. I am alright
Ranbir continue his dinner while navya again goes in thoughts.
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