new ANYA ff- MY LUV WILL BRING YOU BACK... new update @ page 39 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates yaar both loved it excitement is getting increased
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONFUSED...CONFUSED...ND CONFUSED... i knw my story is making u all confused bt it vl surely be solved.. so here i m continuing...😉
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Navya was going in a auto. tears were flowing from her eyes.😭 she dont knw what to do. she reached a place. she gave money to auto wala nd he went back. she goes inside. it was an OLD AGE HOME. she goes in garden where all were sitting. suddenly she heard someone calling her...
DADIMA- payal beti..
NAVYA- are dadima.. ( she makes her sit) ab kaisi tabyet he apki?😊
DADIMA- ab thk he. aj mere liye red roses nahi layi?😊
NAVYA- sry dadima. wo actually mandir me mjhe itna l8 hogaya ki me jana bhul gayi..
DADIMA- are koi bat nahi.. me to aise hi keh rahi thi.😊.( she observed her tensed face). kya hua payal? tu aise q dikh rahi he?😕
NAVYA- wo actually dadima meri tabyet thodi thk nahi lag rahi.. me room me jake rest kar lu..?
DADIMA- ha beta ja..
navya goes in one of the rest room where she had kept her bag.. she closed the door of the room nd open the bag. she searched for something. she got it. it was a photo. she smiled looking at it nd tears started flowing from her eyes.. it was photo of her husband ANANT..😭
NAVYA- (keeping that photo near her heart) kyu bar bar mere samne arahe ho tum anant? q? 3 saal pehele tumse door gayi thi me, tumhare liye. 3 saal se bhagwan se tumhare liye pray kiya he. nd see bhagwan ne meri suni.. thank god tum thk ho. ( she wipe her tears nd continued) bt i m sry anant. mene tumse aise bat ki. me majboor hu. i m sry.. tumhari navya 3 saal pehele hi mar chuki he. ab me ANANT ki NAVYA nahi balki KARAN ki PAYAL hu...😭
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RITIKA- mjhe ab bhi yakeen nahi horaha he ki humne navya ko dkha..😭
RANBIR- payal... payal nam bataya usne ritz.. 😭
RITIKA- wohi to. usne aisa q bola?
RANBIR- ho sakta he wo payal hi ho. humare navya jaise dkhti ho? q anant?
ANANT- ( who was standing near window nd stairing at sky) wo navya hi thi..😭
RITZ ND RANBIR- kya?😲
ANANT- ha..( still stairing) i recognised her touch.. jab mene use hug kiya, use chua, to mjhe yakeen hogaya ki wo meri navya hi he..😭
RITZ- par wo aisa q kar rahi he? us accident me kahi uski memory loss ya aur kuch?😲
ANANT- dnt knw...😭
RANBIR- bt ab hum kya kare?
ANANT- mjhe kuch nahi pata ranbir.. kuch b nahi.. ( he closed his eyes)
FLASHBACK...
anant was in their bedroom arranging his clothes, taking out from bag nd putting it in cupboard.. suddenly navya enters..
NAVYA- are anant? tum? tum delhi se wapas kab aye?😲
ANANT- ( holding her hands) thodi der pehele hi aya hu.( nd kissed on her forehead)😳
NAVYA- meeting kaisi rahi tumhari? nd tumne mjhe btaya q nahi ki tum aaj arahe ho?
ANANT- oho... meri meeting bht achi thi.. nd me tumhe surprise dena chahta tha achanak akar par tum to ghar par hi nahi thi.. kaha gayi thi tum?
NAVYA- me to ritz k sath shopping pe gayi thi..
ANANT- wow biwi.. yaha tumhara husband tumhare bagair bilkul acha feel nahi kar raha tha aur yaha tum shopping kar rahi thi.? tumne mjhe bilkul miss nahi kiya na? tum mjhe bhool gayi na? (making baby face)
NAVYA- ( having some tears) chup... tumne aisa soch b kaise liya ki me tumhe bhul jaungi? me tumhe bht miss kar rahi thi. mjhe acha feel karwane k liye ritz mjhe shopping pe le gayi..😭
ANANT- ( hugging her) are navya... tum to rone lag gayi..😲 ( he kissed her again) me mazak kar raha tha.. tum b na..
NAVYA- ( hugging him tightly) tum meri zindagi ho anant, mera sab kuch, mera pyar... aur apne pyar ko bhulaya nahi jasakta...😭
( they both stud there for sometime)
FLASHBACK OVER...
ANANT- (opened his eyes nd having tears) pyar ko to bhulaya nahi ja sakta na navya? yaki kaha tha na tumne? fir? mjhe kaise bhul gayi tum? me to tumhara pyar hu? tum mjhe sachme bhul gayi?😭
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SRY again for confusing u all.. yes she is navya only bt y she is nt revealing her identity? y she is roaming as payal? nd who d hell is that karan? to knw more plz wait for my nxt update.. thank u..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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again a twist...i wanna name u as twister..lol...tooo goooddd...i'm fully into d stry...damn luving it...waiting waiting waiting for d next... :):) 😊 😛 suuupperb mind blowing dear :)
Edited by anyadiv96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! this twist was so unexpected.. 😲 Now who the hell is karan? 😡 Poor Navya.. Maybe she has become very helpless.. 😭 It was emotional still loved this update.. 😊 Waiting for the next.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG what is happening who is this Karan now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loving the updates but fully confused
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh god need long update next time plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Interesting one. ..please continue soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
HI GUYS.. HOPE U ALL R NJOYING THIS FF.. THANK U FOR LOVELY COMMENTS.😛.
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RANBIR- SHANTI VIHAR ye hi naam bataya tha na us auto wale ne jisne kal navya ko choda?
RITZ- ha bola to ye hi tha. par ye jagah he kaha?
ANANT- wo raha.. ( they stopped their car infront of same old age home where navya was there)
RANBIR- old age home? navya yaha kya kar rahi he?😕
ANANT- lets see..
( they enters the office of that place)
WARDEN- excuse me! may i help u?
ANANT- ya plz.. wo actually hume kisi k bare me puchna tha.
WARDEN- jee me yaha ki warden hu. aap mjhe puch sakte he.
RITZ- aap inhe pehechanti he? ( showing her navya's photo)
WARDEN- are ye to payal he. infact is waqt ye yahi hi. me use bulati hu..
ANANT- nahi wait..😲( stopping her) wo actually hum nahi chahte inhe pata chale ki hum yaha aye he..
WARDEN- jee? aap log kon he me jan sakti hu?😕
RANBIR- actually bat ye he ki... ( he dnt have any other way bt to tell that warden everything truly)
WARDEN- kya? unbelievable..😲. me apki kya help kar sakti hu?
ANANT- aap hume inke bare me kuch bataye na.. i mean wo kaha rehti he? kiske sath rehti he? kya karti he? ya aur kuch..
WARDEN- i m really sry mr. anant. but mjhe payal k bare me kuch nahi pata. actually wo pichle 2 3 saal se yaha ati rehti he bt usne ajtak apne bare me kuch bataya nahi aur na hi mene kabhi pucha.. ( hearing this anant, ranbir nd ritz got sad) bt ha.. 1 he jo apki help kar sakti he..
RITZ- kon?😲
WARDEN- hamare old age home me 1 dadima he, wo payal k bht kareeb he. to shayad unhe kuch pata ho..
RANBIR- aap plz unhe bula dijiye...
( warden goes nd called dadima- the same to whome navya talked last tym)
DADIMA- jee kahiye..😊
ANANT- namaste.. me anant hu. aur ye mere dost ranbir aur ritika.( they both also did namaste)
DADIMA- namaste beta. mjhe warden ne bataya sab kuch.. mjhe laga hi tha ki payal me kuch gadbad he. jab bhi usko dkhti thi kuch alag jarur lagta tha. hamesha kahi khoi rehti thi..
RITIKA- jee dadima. aap hume bata sakti he wo kaha rehti he?
DADIMA- beta jab mene use pucha tha ki uska ghar kaha he to usne bat ye kehke tal di ki uska ghar kabka tut chuka he.. par ha mjhe ye pata he ki wo jiske sath rehti he wo kahi bahar gaye he 2 3 mahino k liye isliye wo yaha reh rahi he..
ANANT- thank u dadima.. apne hamari help ki.. bt aap plz navya ko btaye nahi ki hum aye the..
WARDEN- aap log bilkul tension mat le hum iska khyal rakhenge. aur apko kaisi b help chahiye to plz mjhe bataye..😊
RANBIR- jee..😊
( they goes from there..)
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IN HOTEL ROOM..
RANBIR- do cheeze...
RITIKA- ( looking surprised) kya?😕
RANBIR- do cheeze ho sakti he... 1 to navya ko memory loss hua he ya fir doosra ye ki...
ANANT- ( inturupting) wo humse kuch chupa rahi he..
RANBIR- ya correct..
RITZ- bt ab age kya?😲
ANANT- age? hum navya ko wapis mumbai le jayenge..( saying confidently)
RANBIR ND RITZ- kya?😲
ANANT- ha.. mere pas 1 plan he guys.. jiske liye hum teeno k alawa aur do logo ki entry hone wali he..
RITZ- kon?😕
anant takes out his cell from his pocket nd dialled a number nd tell everything to that person.. ranbir nd ritika were surprised to whom is he saying all this..
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NAHI NAHI... plz mjhe jane do.. plz mere sath aisa mat karo.. mjhe mere anant k pas jane do plz.. plz...😲😭.. ( she woke up hurriedly after seeing a dream which she usually used to see. navya was crying nd sweating.. she dnt want to remember that day bt still it was roaming around her mind..)
PAYAL PAYAL.. she heard someone calling her from outside. she wipe her tears nd goes to open the door of room..
WARDEN- payal kya kar rahi thi? kabse awaz laga rahi hu..😲
NAVYA- sry wo meri ankh lag gayi thi to me...
WARDEN- anyways.. tum chalo tumse koi milne aya he..
NAVYA- mjhse?😕 ( she thought- kahi karan to nahi?)😲
( she goes with that warden to the sitting area in main office nd was surprised to see anant there.😲. she wanted to hug him nd cry in his arms bt stopped herslf nd started doing her acting.)
NAVYA- tum? tum yaha tak agaye? mene tumse 1 bar kaha na me navya nahi fir tumhari samajh q nahi ata?😡
DADIMA- are payal.. 1 bar sun to le use kya kehna he..
NAVYA- nahi dadima.. aap nahi janti ye kon he.. ye pichle 2 din se mera picha kar raha he.. aur ab dkhiye yaha tak agaya...😡
ANANT- plz aap 1 bar meri bat sun lijiye. plz..
NAVYA- dkho mjhe kuch nahi sunna.. jao tum yaha se..😡
DADIMA- are beta sun to le.. plz..
NAVYA- thk he.. sirf aap k liye.. ( looking at anant) bolo...
ANANT- thnk u.. ( he started his acting) apko to ye pata chal hi gaya he ki aap meri navya jaisi dkhti he. wo actually navya meri biwi thi. 3 saal pehele unki accident me death hogayi. wo achanak chali gayi jo hum sab k liye shock tha.. bt meri dadi ko nahi pta ki meri wife ki death ho gayi he us accident me. wo actually meri dadi heart ki patient he na to doctor ne mana kiya unhe batane k liye.. dkhiye me bas itna chahta hu ki aap meri help kare.. actually meri dadi mere ghar yane k mumbai ane ki bat kar rahi thi wo kanpur rehti he na.. to wo navya k bare me to puchengi.. to isliye... ( he looked at navya who was facing her back infront of him) kya aap navya ban sakti he?
NAVYA- ( in shock) kya?( turned to see him)😲
ANANT- i mean... navya banne ki acting kar sakti he? plz...
NAVYA- ( she was shock to hear this nd wanted to cry for dadi because dadi was the one who always supported their relationship nd she was vry close to his dadi)😭 ye aap kya keh rahe he? me ye nahi karungi..
WARDEN- are payal tumhe acting hi to karni he kya problem he?
NAVYA- ye galat he.. aap inke dadi k bare me sochiye unhe kya lagega jab unhe pta chalega ki me navya nahi hu..( she said last sentence looking down as if it was lie)
DADIMA- beta.. ( navya looked at her) dkh payal.. aaj tak tune hum logo k liye kitna kuch kiya he.. to iss bechare k liye b kar le.. dkh.. uski b to dadi he mere jaisi.. unki tabyet ka soch.. aur kuch dino ki to bat he. 1 bar uski dadi chali jayegi to tu wapas ajana.. ( navya looked down nd here anant was felling fear that what she is going to say now) aur waise b tu keh rahi thi na ki tu jiske sath rehti he wo bahar gaye he to utne samay k liye tu chali ja..
NAVYA- ( thinks something) thk he me jaungi.. ( anant jst wanted to hug her for this bt he controlled his feeling)
ANANT- thnk u so much ms. payal.. 😊( she was shock to hear payal from him) me apko kal lene aaunga.. ( nd he goes from there)
NAVYA- ( in mind) ye mene kya kar diya? mene ha q kaha? agar karan ko pata chal gaya to?😲
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LIKED IT OR NOT GUYS? hope i m going well... so from next update the real story starts😉... get ready for that...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Very interesting.u r superb writer😃

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