AnYa SS:That Innocent Beauty (updated last part :page 7) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it.. continue sooon... wud be waiting... and if can do pm me plz...
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superb dear...luv at 1st sight...awesome...do continue it dear :):)
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ya u did but at the time i posted it ur reply came before!😉😆
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Originally posted by: MeghAn_AnYaFan

ya u did but at the time i posted it ur reply came before!😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's beautiful. .and why not you started the story from such a beautiful city where my bankebihari ji is..please continue soon😊
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Originally posted by: son_s

It's beautiful. .and why not you started the story from such a beautiful city where my bankebihari ji is..please continue soon😊

actually I have never visited Vrindavan that is why I had to take help from Google itself about the names of the temples.So I didn't wrote the name of the temple where Anya met as I don't want to write anything imaginative there nd hurt the sentiments. I hope u understand and thanks for liking the story will continue as I get time!😊
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Too good dear waiting for more updates
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waiting waiting for more updates
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Wowww lovely plss update as soon as posible :-)
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Thanks a lot for the lovely replies and sorry for not thanking individually as my Board exams are going on and am getting very less time to visit India Forums. PART 2

I returned back to home. "She behaved strangely today". I thought " It seemed as if something was bothering her but what was it? why was is she in such a hurry today ?" All these thoughts kept bothering me and made me worried about her till late night.

For the next two days I visited that temple but she didn't come. I thought to inquire about her from the panditji but Vrindavan seemed to be a small town and asking about a girl like this might become talk of the town which I wanted to avoid.

After having lunch at 12:30 noon I decided to continue with my tour plan .I went to ISKCON temple and Bankey Bihari temple. At 5:30 p.m. I reached back home and decided to click some snaps of this area as well. I clicked the picture of that temple where I met that girl. A huge old tree under which little girls were playing and suddenly my camera caught the picture of that girl who was troubling me from past 2 days. I put down my camera and saw that very girl sitting beneath a tree with her friend and chatting merrily. She was wearing a pink coloured salwar kurta .She was looking gorgeous today. I was few inches away from her but she saw me looking at her. Her friend has gone away by now and we were looking at each other silently from a distance. I wanted to run towards her and ask about her not coming to that temple again and return her jhumkha as well but my legs seemed to be frozen and eyes strucked intact on that beauty. Our staring session was interrupted by her friend who took that girl away with her. I came to my senses a moment later and realized that she was gone.

"Oh God! not again.." I murmured and went back home with a sad face.

In the dinner table, Arun was asking about my tour but my mind was distracted and I was hardly able to make out anything what Arun and mama-mami were saying to me. I was silently nodding my head. Arun realized that something was wrong with me.

"Bro! Are you okey? You seem to be in some deep thought,looks like this holy place has affected you greatly." chuckled Arun followed by mami and mami.
I smiled a bit.
"I had eaten something on the way so can't eat more." I made an excuse and wished them gudnite and went to my room.

I laid down on the bed and thought "What kind of a game was Kanha playing with me? I am attracted towards a girl whom I have just seen twice.Without saying much she is affecting me so much.What kind of a feeling is it? I feel a certain kind of responsibility towards her and above all I don't even know her name." I sighed a took my camera out and I looked at her picture." This girl is driving me to insanity." I smiled and closed my eyes.

In the next morning I went to that temple again,hoping to see her there. As I was waking upwards I saw her making a beautiful rangoli.I realized so this was she who had made that rangoli when I came to this temple for the first time. She has not noticed me as she was engrossed with that rangoli.I hid behind a pillar to watch her.Today she was wearing a red coloured salwar kameez and was looking more beautiful.

Her eyes rose up to see that a little rangoli has smudged off from a corner.she raised her hands to make it but was not able to reach. She got up to come but stopped to find me making that corner. I looked up at her and said" maine theek kar dia hain" I smiled.
A smile came on her lips and she said" dhanyawad"
"You don't say anything else apart from dhanyawad or do u?" I smiled at her in a mischievous way.
"What else should I say then in place of dhanyawad?" she asked me innocently.
I got it that she didn't get my two-way speaking to her so I nodded my head and replied "nothing"
"vaise" I got up and continued "on that day your jhum--"
"Arae Navya beti!" I was interrupted by the panditji "when you came here and how is your Baba now?"
" I just came 15 minutes before and yes Baba is fine now,his health is improving" She said softly.
"Come beti, take these Ved books which your Baba has asked me for" panditji said and took her along with him.
Navya glanced at me once and then turned away and went.

I was super angry this time as this panditji always becomes a hurdle whenever I tried to talk with her but am thankful to him that at-least I got to know her name- Navya.
I smiled cheekily and prayed to god and went from there.
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Guys I will update the next part soon and it will be the final part of this SS. Do guys tell me if you are finding this SS boring,I will not continue.Hope to read your replies soon.😊


Edited by MeghAn_AnYaFan - 11 years ago

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