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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandni4433


Evening means what in gowri's style ?? πŸ˜•

evening means the next dayπŸ˜†,but today,it is now😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u Thanks alot for ur loveπŸ˜›next pt is hereπŸ˜ƒ

Part30:

Navya:tum yahan kaise???πŸ˜•

Anant was still leaning at the wall and continuously staring at her romanticallyπŸ˜‰.

N:uss bachu kahan hai???(and started calling for tat boy"chotu,chotu'.")

Still no response from Anant.

N:oh!!so yeh sab tumaari plan tha!!😑

A:haan!!πŸ˜‰

N:tum yeh sab kyun karrahi hnoo Anant??😑

A:kyunki mae tumse kuch baat karni hai navya!!πŸ˜‰

N:Par merae pass waqt nahi hai,abhi mae chalna hai.😑

She went near the door to open the lock.Suddenly Anant pulled her hand and holded her waistπŸ˜‰.

N:Anant leave,'..,leave me(struggling to free from his hold)

A:I told na I've to talk with uπŸ˜‰

N:But I dnt want to'😑

A:I know u wnt listen to me,so only I always carry somethings with meπŸ˜‰

His words reminded the lift scene where Anant put tape to her lips and something something happened after tatπŸ˜‰(I think I dnt want to remind u guys what happened in liftπŸ˜†)

N:Anant,I know what u r gng to do next

A:oh really!!can u tell me what will I do next??πŸ˜‰

N:I know u r gng to wrap my lips with the tape na?πŸ˜†

A:wah!!kya baat hai navya!!tum toh bahut brilliant hnoo!!πŸ˜‰

N:Anant yeh mazaak karne ka waqt nahi haiπŸ˜†,chodo mujhe😑

A:Aisae kaise chod sakti hun navya!!πŸ˜‰I thought to leave u after 5minutes.but u changed my mood by reminding me the old memoriesπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

N:?? ?? ?? ??πŸ˜•

And he took a handki from his pocket and tied her hands with it by letting her free from his holdπŸ˜‰.

N:Anant kya karrahi ho tum??😑

A:oh ho navya cant u be quiet for some more minutesπŸ˜†(and he checked out his pocket again but he didn't find it)how I forget to take the tape today??πŸ˜†Anant u r so careless nowadays!!πŸ˜†

A:u escaped from the tape"MS.All India Radio"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

N:Anant Mark ur words,u've to suffer for tis laterπŸ˜†.

A:let it be,but dnt forget tat now u r under my custodyπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

N:u cant do anything Mr.Anant Bajpai😑

A:oh really,let me see Mrs.Anant BajpaiπŸ˜‰

N:kya chahiye tumhe??😑

A:tume patha nahi kya chahiye mujhe??πŸ˜‰

N:kya??πŸ˜•

He just give a mischievous smile without saying anythingπŸ˜‰.

Navya went lil scared and nervous seeing his smile and reaction tat she had frivolously found out what is cooking in Anant's mindπŸ˜‰.She was constantly looking at Anant and the locked door,trying to find out the way to escape from his trap.All the old memories were hitting her mind in subsequence(lift repaired and blocked,and the jungle scene in panchganiπŸ˜‰)

He pointed his lips with his finger and smiled wickedlyπŸ˜‰.

N(was frightened):Anant,I know u r a good boy,and u wont do such thingsπŸ˜†

A:I dnt want any gud boy certificates Mrs.AnantπŸ˜†

N:No I cant,I wnt let u to..πŸ˜†

He started stepping towards her slowly with a full romantic moodπŸ˜‰.

N(in scare,she knows what will happen nextπŸ˜‰):Anant,enough,stop'.stop there,just stop behaving like a RomeoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

But he didn't listen to her words,who keeps on coming towards her.Like in all romantic movies,like all heroines trying to escape from heroes in tis situation,but they get battered on to the wall and gets trapped into heroes netπŸ˜†,likewise the same thing happened here too.Navya now has no way to escape from Anant's clutchesπŸ˜‰.(I tried my best to give something new in tis place guys,but I didn't get any ideas except tis simple repeated filmy techniqueπŸ˜†)

N:Anant plz,let me go from here😳(and tried to walk away from there,but Anant grabbed her hand and holded his bare waist and increased her gripπŸ˜‰)

She got goosebumps on his touch 😳which sent a filled up vibrations to her nerves as like a vibration when string is striked by a light touch of soft iron.

N:Anant tum(but he stopped her by placing his finger in her lipsπŸ˜‰)

A:Shhh''(in husky voice)u should not talk anymore,plzzz'.πŸ˜‰

Navya couldn't resist him anymore but to remain silent.Her heart beats started to race fastly like a weak horse trying to move fast in the ground but ended in fail.He cupped her face in his arms softly 😳and leaned towards her face gradually,only few inches were left btwn them,his warm breath touched her face and give a chill effectπŸ˜‰ on her cheeks.He went nearer to her face and placed a soft,gentle and passionate kiss on her lipsπŸ˜‰.His touch made her go very weak to use her mind in tis inevitable situation 😳but to obey him.They felt like as they r separated alone in their own dream worldπŸ˜‰.

He left her free from his hold after few minutes and took hold of his ears,saying"I'm sry Navya,I'm really sry for what I've done,I know I should'nt lied u,I should'nt hurted u,but I didn't do tis purposely😳

She was very pleased to hear his words.She can see clearly the innocence in his speech and couldn't find any fault in it😭.

A:I've done these things only to live with u navya,the only reason is I dnt want to lose u😳,kyunki"

N:kyunki??😳

He took few steps back from her and knelt down his knees😳.

A:kyunki mae tumse pyaar karthi hnoo navya!!😳

Navya get melted on hearing his words.Only when a person gets to know tat "someone" loves him/her truly,two things will fight at the same time in his/her face to show the "someone"that they too loves him back more than he/she do,one is,light tears of happiness from eyes and the other one is an angelic smile with more love in it.Navya's face was filled with a same combination of both tears and smile😭😊when she see her love "Anant" and feel him.

She dnt want to wait for a second to let him talk anymore,bcoz she felt tat she had already turned into a creditor to him,She went very poor bfore his love,doesn't know how to repay for tis😭.She ran towards him and rested her head on his chest 😳and stained his shirt😭 by her light tears.Anant hugged her in happiness😳.

N:I love u Anant'I love u'.😳

A:I love u too pagal'😳

They remained as each other there for few minutes😳.

N(in hugging position):Anant'😳

A:hmmm'😳

N:Can u untie my hands now??πŸ˜†

A:oh haan,I forgot!!( he untied the handki from her hand)haan hogaya,Shall we cont?πŸ˜‰(and he went near her to hug her but navya pulled him backπŸ˜†)

N:Anant kya karrahi ho tum??bas karo,ab jaao,sab hume intezaar karrahega

A:nahi navya,bas kuch dher keliye(and hugged her againπŸ˜‰)

N: Anant tum bhi na'(and she too hugged him back😳)

N:Anant mae tumse kuch poochna hai??

A:haan poocho'(holding his grip tightly)

N:u should say only the truth..

A:hmmm'.😳

N:Did u loved tat nisha in school days??

Anant tries to play prank with herπŸ˜‰ and said"haann,but only during my schooldays"πŸ˜†

N:par mujhe lagta hai ki woh Nisha ab bhi tumse pyaar karte hai,kya tume bhi uss ladki pe crush hai??

A:no navya,I loved her during my school days seeing her beauty,but now she is not tat gud,so I rejected her(he again lied her to increase navya's eagernessπŸ˜†)

N:Anant,am I looking beautiful??😳

A:yeh kya sawaal hai navya??😑

N:Anant plz,bataao,kya mae sundar hai ya nahi??😳

A:haan bahut sundar hai,bilkul pari jaisi'.nahi pari jaisi nahi,U r my real pari😳

She released herself from the hug😳.

N:Anant will u love me forever or will u reject me in future,if I lost my beauty as like Nisha?

He went stunned hearing her question.He cupped her face in his armsπŸ˜‰.

A:I didn't see ur beauty and loved u navya,I just see ur kind heart,I wnt leave u,how can I live without my soul,u r my everything😳!!

He placed a gentle kiss on her forehead 😳and hugged her againπŸ˜‰.

N:Anant then y u left Nisha??

A:pagal,mae mazak kar rahi thiπŸ˜†

N(started hitting him on his chest playfullyπŸ˜†):Anant tum'😳

A:k,sry,sry'πŸ˜†

N:hmm'..😳

Meantime,Meeta ma was searching for navya everywhere,when she saw the boy who called navya to search the ball inside the room,reminded her tat she went into the room.She saw tat the room was locked inside.So she started knocking the door.

Anya still remained in hugging position 😳heard the knocking sound.

N:Anant,someone is at the door.

A:Let them be(he dnt want to leave herπŸ˜‰)

N:Anant plz'😳

A:no,I wontπŸ˜‰

Meeta ma at the other side,calling out"Navya,tum kya karrahi ho?itni dher tak kamre ke andhar lock karke kya kar rahi ho?dharwaaja kholo"😲

Navya is shocked 😲to hear her voice.

N:Anant,its maa,leave me now😳

A:Aunty kuch nahi karega,I wnt leave uπŸ˜‰

N(shouted):maa,mae saree correct kar rahi hnoo,bas dho minute mae aarahi hu!!

A:jhutee!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

N:Anant tum chodo,bahut ziddhi hogayi tu!!😳

Meeta:Saree??kya hua??dharwaaja kholo mae tume help karti hun😲

Both were shocked to hear😲 tis and Anant freed her.

N(faltered):nahi'..nahi maa,bas hogaya,aap jaao,mae aarahi hu abhi😲

Meeta:achha,jaldi aana,dher mat karo(and she went instructing her)

Navya looked out through the lock hole and checked whether she went or not.After confirming tat she left,she felt very much relieved.

She tried to open the door,but Anant clasped her by pulling her palluπŸ˜‰.

N:ahhh'Anant??πŸ˜‰

A:kya mae tumaari saree teek kar sakthi hu mam??πŸ˜‰

N:Anant chodo

A:u know only tis word ah navya"Anant chodo"(imitated in navya's voiceπŸ˜†)k,will let u,but u've to (pointing his cheeksπŸ˜‰)

N:no,impossible

A:then,dnt expect tat I'll leave uπŸ˜‰

N:Anant'

A:Navya(baby face)πŸ˜‰

She dnt know what to do,so she placed a kiss on his cheeks😳.

A:thank u!!😳

She asked Anant to come later from the room,so tat no one will doubt them.

Meeta ma waited for navya by standing lil away from the room.

Meeta:Arrae tum aagayi navya,saree teek kardhiya?

N:haan maa,hogaya😊

Suddenly Ritz and Appy came there.

Ritz:Navya,tum kahan chali gayi thi?chalo hamari saathπŸ˜›(and took her somewhere)

M:yeh ladkiyon bhi na??(while she turned to move from there,She saw someone moving out from the room,its Anant but she didn't see his face clearly)

M(to herself):yeh ladka,iss kamre se'πŸ˜•(Deepak came to her meanwhile)

D:Meeta,yahan kyun kadi hu tum?jaao,engagement start hone waale hai(and took her from there)

But still she didn't come out from confusionπŸ˜• who is tat person will be''


So I've given u guys a very very long update,i dnt know whether i fulfilled ur expectations or not,plz throw ur honest comments and hit like buttons,tamatars and chappals r also welcomedπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woow funny yet 😳 update want moreee romance btwn anyaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st πŸ˜› hahah Congo to me...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for giving an update full of Anya, nice romantic update Gowri.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my God partner...what an amazing update...i'm jst reading it again nd again...thats y replying late πŸ˜†
I thoroughly enjoyed the whole updae...u r jst fabolous in writing romantic scenes 😳
u knw that lift scene is my most fvt...u hv no need to take help 4om filmy scenes...ur imagination is much better..
Ur quotes nd xamples were xcellent..
Nd one more thing i want to know that something something... 😳 🀣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lagta hai aaja kal bhut movies dehk rahai hai Growi ji aapπŸ˜›πŸ˜†thanks for the lovely update:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow kya romance tha amazing just loved it alot:) love anya kiss hayee mein warri jawan<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a update yar:-) loved it :-) specially anant's naughtyness :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..what a romantic update..awesome.. loved it to the core..anant is so naughty...mindblowing update..do continue soon..

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