Two states(Thread 2)Part33 updated @Pg57

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Thanx a lot for ur wonderful support and comments.Agar aapki lovely comments or encouragement nahi hota hai toh,patha nahi kya hoga,i wonder and still i cant believe that my ff"Two states"will take a second thread.The whole credit goes to u my lovable ff reader's and supporters.I feel very happy to open tis thread and i need to say only one thing,love u all from my bottom of the heart.Keep loving and supporting,it makes me to write more and more๐Ÿค—

Thanx a lot for spamming neha(missing u,come back soon)and special thanx to jabi for joining her๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Two states First thread:

till pt26 check tis- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/navya/3299983/two-states-pt26-updated-pg128

index:

Pt27-pg1

Pt28-pg11

Pt29-pg17

Pt30-pg24

Pt31-pg41

Pt32-pg52

Pt33-pg57

Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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A personal note:

I always used to promise u that i'll update today,tomorrow or within 2 days(some of u jabi,neha,mariyam,akki,gracie,ria,mussu,samna knows that i always used to give some bahana's๐Ÿ˜†)but cant able to update within the time limit i've promised u all,sry for that,what to do,i'm really very very lazy๐Ÿ˜†but from now onwards no more promises,will update whenever i get time๐Ÿ˜ƒPromise,no i wnt put promise again๐Ÿ˜†

Sry for making u all wait for a long time๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for the second thread yah Gowri & don't be sorry. take ur time and carry on...
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Part27:

Anant and Navya both went shocked seeing them at the doorstep๐Ÿ˜ฒ.It was Ranbir and the gang(sry guys dnt throw chappals on me๐Ÿ˜†)

The gang too went frozen seeing them๐Ÿ˜ฒ.

Anant to avert the situation,spoke out:Hi guys๐Ÿ˜ƒ,how r u all?Navya what r u dng?ask them to cme inside๐Ÿ˜ƒ

N(came back to her senses and stammered):Haaan,guys andhar aao

The gang came inside and settled in couch but still they were like๐Ÿ˜ฒ and super angy on Anya๐Ÿ˜ก.

Anant:so guys,aap yahan kaise?๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Appy:y we should not cme here ah?๐Ÿ˜ก

Anant:arrae aisa nahi Appy

Ritz:๐Ÿ˜ก fir kya?i think v all disturbed ur romance hai na?guys,lets go and cme back whenever they are free(and they were abt to move but Anya stopped them)

Anant:Navya,v should not delay,lets tell the truth,otherwise things will go worse!!

N:Haan Anant,tum sahi kahi rahihu

The gang were confused ๐Ÿ˜•at what they were talking about.Anant signalled navya to do something,both Anya hold their ears and said"Sorry" ๐Ÿ˜ƒat once.The gang melted on seeing anya.They ran and hugged them๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿค—.

Anya:Missed u guys a lot๐Ÿ˜›

Ritz:Missed u both too๐Ÿ˜›

Harry:so u both rejoined,lover's united,congratz yaar๐Ÿ˜›

Appy:Arrae,ab yeh dhono husband-wife hai harry,lover's nahi,congratz โ€ฆ

Anya felt embraced๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Ranbir:Bahut saari good news are waiting for u both๐Ÿ˜›

Anant:good news?๐Ÿ˜•

Appy:haan,Shiva aur Shivani ka engagement hone waali hai๐Ÿ˜›

N:Wow,Shivani u didn't tell me,anyway congo my friend๐Ÿ˜›.

Both Anya hugged Shiva-Shivani and congratulated them๐Ÿค—.

Navya:tum lokh baeto mae jaake kuch refreshments lekhe aata hun

After sometime,she bought coffee and snacks,and the whole gang enjoyed having a great time with each other after a long gap๐Ÿ˜›.

Ritz:Navya,Anant jaao,jaldi jaake tayar hojaao,shopping jaana hai na?๐Ÿ˜›

Harry:haan Anant u cant come out in tis avatar to the mall,so go and get ready and dnt forget to rub ur cheeks firmly๐Ÿ˜†.

A:Kyun meri cheeks pe kya hai?(and he touched his cheeks)๐Ÿ˜•

Appy:waare Anant 3 red marks,kamaal hai yaar!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Gang started giggling๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.

Navya was confused๐Ÿ˜•and looked at him and went shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ.

N:Guys,wait for few minutes,hum abhi ready honke aati hun.Anant tum aao meri saath(she holded his hands and took him inside her room and locked the door).

N:๐Ÿ˜กAnant,u wont check ur face when u come out of the room ah?

A:๐Ÿ˜•But what happened?(and he looked himself at the mirror)

He found Navya's lip marks at his cheeks and forehead.He was like๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†.

N:๐Ÿ˜กAnant,tumari laparvahi ki wajase dheka kya hua?Appy,Ritz ,Ranbir,sab ko patha chal gaya,ab woh kya sochega hamari bhare mae?(and she spoke out without taking breath)

Anant pulled her close and holded her waist tightly๐Ÿ˜‰.

N:๐Ÿ˜กAnant tum kya karrahi hu?chodo mujhe

A:๐Ÿ˜‰shhhโ€ฆโ€ฆ

Both were looking into each other's eyes intensely๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

N:Anant chodo mujhe,jaake fresh hojaao,aur iss marksโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ณ

A:Iss marks ko kya kare?๐Ÿ˜‰

N:Anant tume patha nahi hai kya?wash it with soap,it'll go off๐Ÿ˜†

A:I think tis marks are so adamant that it wont go off easily๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

N:What does it mean?๐Ÿ˜•

A:It means,the thing which u had given me should be taken aback by only u๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

N:k,come I'll wash it off with soap

A:I think u've mistaken navya,u should take back the lip marks with ur lips๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

N:Anant aren't u ashamed to ask tis directly to me?๐Ÿ˜†

A:no!!y I've to be ashamed?kyunki tu mera wife hoon๐Ÿ˜‰

N:no,I wont do such things๐Ÿ˜ณ

A:then no problem,let us be here in tis position itself๐Ÿ˜‰(and he increased his grip tightly on her waist๐Ÿ˜‰)

Appy from outside knocked the door"Kya karrahi ho tum dhono,arrae tum dhono ki romance baad mae rakho๐Ÿ˜†,hum yahan intezaar karahi hu,jaldi aajaao๐Ÿ˜†"

N:Anant plz chodoโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Anant still in naughty mood nodded his head saying"no"๐Ÿ˜‰

N:Anant tum bhi na๐Ÿ˜ณ

A:nahi sirf mae nahi,tum bhi meri saath hai๐Ÿ˜‰

A light smile carved her lips๐Ÿ˜Š.Anant pointed his cheeks to erase the marks from it๐Ÿ˜‰.She slowly brushed her lips on his cheeks and foreheadโ˜บ๏ธ.She was blushing cant able to look into his eyes๐Ÿ˜ณ.

N(lowering her eyes down๐Ÿ˜ณ):hogaya!!!

A:But keep in mind,that u didn't erase it from me completely๐Ÿ˜‰,it still stains in my heart๐Ÿ˜‰,tum aur kuch karna padega,iss stain ko nikaalne ke liye๐Ÿ˜‰

N:Anant yeh tum kya baat kar rahi hu?๐Ÿ˜ณ

A(in husky voice๐Ÿ˜‰):tume patha nahi,mae khonsi bhare mae baat karahi hun!!๐Ÿ˜‰

N:Anant chodo,chodo mujhe,dher ho rahi hai๐Ÿ˜ณ

A:teek hai,mae ab chodungi๐Ÿ˜‰,par tum mera condition ek dhin poora karna hoga(and left her)๐Ÿ˜‰

Navya blushed and ran into the wash room๐Ÿ˜ณ. Both Anya get ready and went with gang and reached the mall for shopping.

Precap:Navya-Nisha(Anant's bhoot waali drama friend)meeting unluckily in mall๐Ÿ˜ฒ.


So how was the update?i know its boring and short too,will update the next part asap,plz hit like button and throw ur valuable comments,will be waiting for ur comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
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cono gowrii

wow second thread... its ok yaar take your time...๐Ÿ˜† luv you gowrii โค๏ธ and once again congratzzz๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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yeee me first...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

awesome,funny and romantic update gowrii...๐Ÿ‘

enjoyed it alot...love gang mastii๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...lipstick mark scene๐Ÿ˜ณ...kiss scene all are just superb awesome...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ love it to the core...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ and precap...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ do cont soon...ab no judai ok gowrii...๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by -meru- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread๐Ÿค—
lovely update๐Ÿ‘
Edited by -Rashi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashvin

Congo for the second thread yah Gowri & don't be sorry. take ur time and carry on...

thanks a lot di๐Ÿค—i always remember ur big wala comment di,it encourages me to write more๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago

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