It could be better... Anya scene by rashvin(pg3)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ppl I knw u r seeing me after a long tym ...sry 4 that but as I returned I saw d forum is nt active as before no. Of posts r less ...so just thought 2 make it interesting...

We all knw we r die heart fans of navya n hv seen each n every episode of it so let us relive it again in a different way ...

So I hv an idea ...


PPL WHT WE R SUPPOSED To DO IS WE NEED TO GIVE A PART OR SCENE OR SOME EPISODE OF NAVYA THAT U CAN THING COULD BE BETTER ...I m not talking in technical terms or abt d entire story line only a part ...ok let me give u an example...

Remember navya n anant had a fight just before d karvachut day also on that day bt still navya fasted 4 anant . n he did not knw it ...but d next day ritz,apply told anant when they secretly took navya 2 anant's place .anant smiled then me made a angry child face n d karvachut topic was over .so I wanted to see anant's reaction on navya keeping karvachut for him ...wnted some love scenes between them on this ...I wanted Anant 2 give navya karvachut gift ...I knw navya kissed Anant bt not Bcoz of karvachut so I mean to say we could have had more anya scenes today if the topic was extended.


So this is how it goes know its ur turn comment below..
And if any writer(RS,ss,ff) wants to write on any of the topic they r free to do so ...so this can be the topic spot for d navya writer ...so pls do comment


Thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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even i too disappinted on that scene. CVs just spoil the scene😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HMMM Fascinating one...

okay m gonna sumup ma assumption on the above mentioned scene itself which was a real disappointment for the fans by the writers infact in the show..

Navya being enthusiastic to fast on karvachaut as she was deep in love with her lover boy Anant but dint wish Anant to know that shez gonna perform karvachaut for him.. It was the time to perform ritual and Navya after her Ma did karvachaut, Navya chup chupke will be moving from her room to the kitchen but then she hears her cell is ringing and gets interrupted a bit but move and answer the call as it was Ritz and Appy on the other side. Girls will be having a convo generally where in Appy asks Navya ki why are u in a hurry to drop the call. Navya unconsciously slip her tongue saying Appy mujhe jaane de, moon will be invisible if m late then.. Appy and Ritz wide open their eyes and ask her ki what for you dont want the moon to be invisible Navya(in a teasy naugthy manner). Navya bite her tongue being conscious. Navya- guyz woh main karwachauth wrath rakhne jaarahi thi(being blushy). Girls keep teasing navya on this and start giggling over Navya's condition. Further Navya ask her friends ki not to reveal the things to Ananth and friends agree on Navya's words. After Having dropped the call, Appy being a weirdo in her acts reveal Ritz ki let sound this stuff to Anant as it will be fun to see both of their reaction on this occasion. But then Ritz say Appy that this is not right yah. Navya has told us not to let the cat out of the bag, then how could we. Appy- Come on Ritz, whatz the big deal in this yah.. It will be real fun to see the love birds being in love that to in sucha wonderful situation. Both make up their mind and call Ananth and reveal the things. Anant will be dumbstruck and surprised on their words and will be wondering holding the cell. Ananth thank both the girls for revealing such an awesomiii stuff to him concerning Navya.

Ananth now being naughty and moody will be striking his head of how to meet Navya as an surprise for her on this auspicious day. Ananth doing some bahana get ready and will be supposed to move out where in his mom and Bhabhi stop him from going out. Ananth keeps begging the ladies at his side but Sugandha agree on a condition of letting him out after the ritual end up. Ananth will be disappointed partially as he gotta permission to move out but after all the things get fold. On the other side ritual has begun and all the Bajpayee ladies will be performing ready to perform the karwachaut where in Ananth will be wondering seeing the ladies uniformity performing the ritual fantasying Navya infront of him. Between he will be back to normal and will be struggling to get out of the scene from his mansion. While the ladies are busy in rituals, Ananth bid a bye from far to his Mom and leave the place. Sugandha gives a strange look at him and let him go off. On the other side at Mishra's, Navya will be enthusiastically waiting to perform the ritual holding Ananth's picture and other stuffs in her hand.

Navya holding his picture and sieve in one hand closing her eyes placing the stuffz towards the elegant moon, gradually open her eyes where she find Anant infront of her eyes. Navya will be shocked and surprised either to see Anant . Later she thinks that shez fantasying him and just casually smile herself. Anant strangely hit her head. Navya wide open her eyes and will be vey glad seeing Anant in real and try embracing him but then Ananth point out towards the moon being romantic and lovely without wording anything. Navya turning blushy red perform the ritual and finally ask Ananth to make her drink the water and feed her with the sweets from the plate signing at the plate. Anant look romantically towards her refuse to do so. Navya hit him on his head making her face plae. Anant smilingly make her drink water and feed her with the eatable. After having done with all the stuffs, Navya just embrace him. Anant break the hug and see that her eyes are slightly filled with tears. He wipe the tears and reveal ki madam mere liye fastin kar rahi thi aur yeh sab haan. Navya turn to the opposite side and cover her face with her hands being blushy. Anant make her turn towards him and near her closely and try kissing her lips. Navya either will be tempted at his gestures and will be lost at him. But then when both get very closer to each others lips, Navya try moving aside where Anant hold her hands from back and pull her closer to him ty8ly. Both will be lost in each other having a eyelock and followed by liplock..
Edited by rashvin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey that's s gud idea...ill also try to do something like this...idea is really cool...infact there r so many scenes that need a change...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Seenavas

even i too disappinted on that scene. CVs just spoil the scene😡


Thanks 4 agreeing wid me ... If even u have such any scene which u think could be made better pls share
Thanks once again :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashvin

HMMM Fascinating one...

okay m gonna sumup ma assumption on the above mentioned scene itself which was a real disappointment for the fans by the writers infact in the show..

Navya being enthusiastic to fast on karvachaut as she was deep in love with her lover boy Anant but dint wish Anant to know that shez gonna perform karvachaut for him.. It was the time to perform ritual and Navya after her Ma did karvachaut, Navya chup chupke will be moving from her room to the kitchen but then she hears her cell is ringing and gets interrupted a bit but move and answer the call as it was Ritz and Appy on the other side. Girls will be having a convo generally where in Appy asks Navya ki why are u in a hurry to drop the call. Navya unconsciously slip her tongue saying Appy mujhe jaane de, moon will be invisible if m late then.. Appy and Ritz wide open their eyes and ask her ki what for you dont want the moon to be invisible Navya(in a teasy naugthy manner). Navya bite her tongue being conscious. Navya- guyz woh main karwachauth wrath rakhne jaarahi thi(being blushy). Girls keep teasing navya on this and start giggling over Navya's condition. Further Navya ask her friends ki not to reveal the things to Ananth and friends agree on Navya's words. After Having dropped the call, Appy being a weirdo in her acts reveal Ritz ki let sound this stuff to Anant as it will be fun to see both of their reaction on this occasion. But then Ritz say Appy that this is not right yah. Navya has told us not to let the cat out of the bag, then how could we. Appy- Come on Ritz, whatz the big deal in this yah.. It will be real fun to see the love birds being in love that to in sucha wonderful situation. Both make up their mind and call Ananth and reveal the things. Anant will be dumbstruck and surprised on their words and will be wondering holding the cell. Ananth thank both the girls for revealing such an awesomiii stuff to him concerning Navya.

Ananth now being naughty and moody will be striking his head of how to meet Navya as an surprise for her on this auspicious day. Ananth doing some bahana get ready and will be supposed to move out where in his mom and Bhabhi stop him from going out. Ananth keeps begging the ladies at his side but Sugandha agree on a condition of letting him out after the ritual end up. Ananth will be disappointed partially as he gotta permission to move out but after all the things get fold. On the other side ritual has begun and all the Bajpayee ladies will be performing ready to perform the karwachaut where in Ananth will be wondering seeing the ladies uniformity performing the ritual fantasying Navya infront of him. Between he will be back to normal and will be struggling to get out of the scene from his mansion. While the ladies are busy in rituals, Ananth bid a bye from far to his Mom and leave the place. Sugandha gives a strange look at him and let him go off. On the other side at Mishra's, Navya will be enthusiastically waiting to perform the ritual holding Ananth's picture and other stuffs in her hand.

Navya holding his picture and sieve in one hand closing her eyes placing the stuffz towards the elegant moon, gradually open her eyes where she find Anant infront of her eyes. Navya will be shocked and surprised either to see Anant . Later she thinks that shez fantasying him and just casually smile herself. Anant strangely hit her head. Navya wide open her eyes and will be vey glad seeing Anant in real and try embracing him but then Ananth point out towards the moon being romantic and lovely without wording anything. Navya turning blushy red perform the ritual and finally ask Ananth to make her drink the water and feed her with the sweets from the plate signing at the plate. Anant look romantically towards her refuse to do so. Navya hit him on his head making her face plae. Anant smilingly make her drink water and feed her with the eatable. After having done with all the stuffs, Navya just embrace him. Anant break the hug and see that her eyes are slightly filled with tears. He wipe the tears and reveal ki madam mere liye fastin kar rahi thi aur yeh sab haan. Navya turn to the opposite side and cover her face with her hands being blushy. Anant make her turn towards him and near her closely and try kissing her lips. Navya either will be tempted at his gestures and will be lost at him. But then when both get very closer to each others lips, Navya try moving aside where Anant hold her hands from back and pull her closer to him ty8ly. Both will be lost in each other having a eyelock and followed by liplock..


Thank you very much ...u actually did d justice to the scene ...this is wht ppl wanted 2 see pls keep writing n trust me u hv done a very good work :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sio_AngeL

Hey that's s gud idea...ill also try to do something like this...idea is really cool...infact there r so many scenes that need a change...


Thanks 4 appreciating pls do share any such scene if u hv...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancynnv


Thank you very much ...u actually did d justice to the scene ...this is wht ppl wanted 2 see pls keep writing n trust me u hv done a very good work :)

😃thankz indeed. Actually i dreamt of this scene when i saw the show but was rather disappointed..
Edited by rashvin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashvin

HMMM Fascinating one...

okay m gonna sumup ma assumption on the above mentioned scene itself which was a real disappointment for the fans by the writers infact in the show..

Navya being enthusiastic to fast on karvachaut as she was deep in love with her lover boy Anant but dint wish Anant to know that shez gonna perform karvachaut for him.. It was the time to perform ritual and Navya after her Ma did karvachaut, Navya chup chupke will be moving from her room to the kitchen but then she hears her cell is ringing and gets interrupted a bit but move and answer the call as it was Ritz and Appy on the other side. Girls will be having a convo generally where in Appy asks Navya ki why are u in a hurry to drop the call. Navya unconsciously slip her tongue saying Appy mujhe jaane de, moon will be invisible if m late then.. Appy and Ritz wide open their eyes and ask her ki what for you dont want the moon to be invisible Navya(in a teasy naugthy manner). Navya bite her tongue being conscious. Navya- guyz woh main karwachauth wrath rakhne jaarahi thi(being blushy). Girls keep teasing navya on this and start giggling over Navya's condition. Further Navya ask her friends ki not to reveal the things to Ananth and friends agree on Navya's words. After Having dropped the call, Appy being a weirdo in her acts reveal Ritz ki let sound this stuff to Anant as it will be fun to see both of their reaction on this occasion. But then Ritz say Appy that this is not right yah. Navya has told us not to let the cat out of the bag, then how could we. Appy- Come on Ritz, whatz the big deal in this yah.. It will be real fun to see the love birds being in love that to in sucha wonderful situation. Both make up their mind and call Ananth and reveal the things. Anant will be dumbstruck and surprised on their words and will be wondering holding the cell. Ananth thank both the girls for revealing such an awesomiii stuff to him concerning Navya.

Ananth now being naughty and moody will be striking his head of how to meet Navya as an surprise for her on this auspicious day. Ananth doing some bahana get ready and will be supposed to move out where in his mom and Bhabhi stop him from going out. Ananth keeps begging the ladies at his side but Sugandha agree on a condition of letting him out after the ritual end up. Ananth will be disappointed partially as he gotta permission to move out but after all the things get fold. On the other side ritual has begun and all the Bajpayee ladies will be performing ready to perform the karwachaut where in Ananth will be wondering seeing the ladies uniformity performing the ritual fantasying Navya infront of him. Between he will be back to normal and will be struggling to get out of the scene from his mansion. While the ladies are busy in rituals, Ananth bid a bye from far to his Mom and leave the place. Sugandha gives a strange look at him and let him go off. On the other side at Mishra's, Navya will be enthusiastically waiting to perform the ritual holding Ananth's picture and other stuffs in her hand.

Navya holding his picture and sieve in one hand closing her eyes placing the stuffz towards the elegant moon, gradually open her eyes where she find Anant infront of her eyes. Navya will be shocked and surprised either to see Anant . Later she thinks that shez fantasying him and just casually smile herself. Anant strangely hit her head. Navya wide open her eyes and will be vey glad seeing Anant in real and try embracing him but then Ananth point out towards the moon being romantic and lovely without wording anything. Navya turning blushy red perform the ritual and finally ask Ananth to make her drink the water and feed her with the sweets from the plate signing at the plate. Anant look romantically towards her refuse to do so. Navya hit him on his head making her face plae. Anant smilingly make her drink water and feed her with the eatable. After having done with all the stuffs, Navya just embrace him. Anant break the hug and see that her eyes are slightly filled with tears. He wipe the tears and reveal ki madam mere liye fastin kar rahi thi aur yeh sab haan. Navya turn to the opposite side and cover her face with her hands being blushy. Anant make her turn towards him and near her closely and try kissing her lips. Navya either will be tempted at his gestures and will be lost at him. But then when both get very closer to each others lips, Navya try moving aside where Anant hold her hands from back and pull her closer to him ty8ly. Both will be lost in each other having a eyelock and followed by liplock..

wow superb creation 👏

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