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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys... Dis is my 1st RS actually my literature is pathetic u will get 2 knw it after u read d 1st update...bt still I want 2 write Bcoz I m inspired by most of d forum member who r flawless in writing RS ,OS n FF...do read

Anant in office n navya at home around 4 in the evening...

Navya calls anant

Navya :anant Menai decide kar liya hai orchid hotel.

Anant:(in confusion) orchid hotel?

Navya :ha! Tu subha puch rahai thi na aaj mujhe dinner ki Lia konse restaurant mai jana hai vo mai tu he call kar kar bol tu ...to mujhe aaj palak panner kahani ka man hai aur vo to sabse tasty orchid mai hi milta hai...(blushing)aur vo to tumara bhi to favourite hai na...

Anant: navya vo...(anant was abt 2 say something ki navya interrupted)

Navya : aur anant mujh kuch bahana nhi Sunna tum nai promise liya tha (as she understood that he is going 2 cancel d dinner)

Anant : par navya vo office mai aaj bohot kam hai...

Navya :mai kuch nhi janti tu har bar aisa hi karti ho...pata hai hum 2months si bahar nhi gai hai tumari kaam ki vajasai...

Anant :par navya mai cancel thodi na kar raha hu bus mai tu yi bil raha hu ki kal chalti hai

Navya :mai kuch suna nhi chati ...aaj sham 7:30 orchid hotel pakka...aur tumhari liya yahi acha hoga ki tum mujh vaha milo...

And navya cuts d phone in angry...

Anant arre baap rai navya tu aaj bohot Kusai mei hai Hagar Kya Karo office ka bhi to kaam bohot imp. Hai...

N an idea clicks him...

N he calls d hotel manager...

To be continued...:)

Sry 4 d short update ...I m writing RS for d first tym so pls bare with my mistakes...

N do leave ur comments...u can even give me suggestions n if u want me 2stop pls write it down ...

Sry if it is nt up 2 d mark...:(

Edited by nancynnv - 13 years ago

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Parami

@Parmasone

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely start :)) pls continue:))

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Richa_shamya

@Richa_shamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice dr :)) cont soon 😊

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Sifarah

@sifarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

it's a good start.. please do continue.. and when you do pls give d link on d first page... good luck!!!

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A_Crazy_Leo

@A_Crazy_Leo

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi!! ur RS has a gud plot n u r doing a gud job,so plz do continue.Ur Hindi seems a bit on d down side.U not a Hindi speaking gal,r u?so Y not continue ur RS in English?Dat will keep d beauty of ur story intact.plz 4give me if dis hurts ur feelings,but I cudnt resist as ur storyline is beautiful,but ur Hindi is killing ur talent.SORRY!!

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Aishwarjya

@Aishwarjya

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice..😊 continue soon.

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sry there is something seriously wrong with my Internet connection...

I m nt able 2 hit d like button on any of ur comments nor able 2 reply u individually ...

Bt there r some comments which I were able 2 hit d like (don't knw how???:p)

I m very thankful 4 all ur appreciation I will surely reply u ppl..bt nt 2day :(

I will try n update d next chpt by 2mrw or very soon...

Once agin thank u very much 4 ur cooperation :)

Keep smiling 😊

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Divya

@anyadiv96

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Posted: 13 years ago

do update it soon...happy to have a new writer among us...

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gracie

@..gracie..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Good Start😊 plz cnt it soon..

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

First of all a HUGE THANK YOU for ur encouragement ,appreciation n suggestions by ur comments...

@ashwinomathew - I would 1st lik 2 thank u 4 my work n I do consider ur suggestion I m vry happy that u felt free 2 share ur suggestion .actually u r right my Hindi is very weak .i promise dat from further updates u will get more English n comparatively less Hindi narration. :)

WARNING- ppl u may feel dis chpt very boring n monotonous . Bcoz I knw we u r die heart anya fans N love them romancing together dis was nt possible this time bt surely we will see them romancing 2gether soon.

Here d chpt begins-

Anant calls d hotel manager

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(Late evening)

Navya enters the hotel with a red blown up face ( depicting anger). The doorman welcomed her in a royal manner . But she hardly noticed it . Bcoz her mind was occupied by a single thought, the thought in which she was planning what all will she do if anant is nt on tym in d hotel's restaurant .

As she entered d hotel n took a few steps towards d restaurant a hotel staff member came to her n handed over a red envelope saying " dis is 4 u mam " . " For me "navya asked in confusion . "Yes" d staff member replied n went away. Navya opened d envelope in confusion n first took out a key. She looked at it with a blank face not knowing what's going on. It seem 2 be a hotel room key as on d key was carved " room no 420" . She then took out a letter which was in d envelope n unfolded it.

Mei janta hu ki tum aapna phula hua face or aapni ghayal Karnai vali ankho sai mera he shikar kar rahi ho . Par thoda sabar to Karo . Mei bhi shikar Honai ki liye utavla ho raha hu. Phele tum is room mai to Jao.

Tumhara pyaara pati

Anant

With a slight smile within n a confused surprised face navya went 2wards d lift . Pressed d button n within few seconds lift came down ppl crowd came out n navya went in . Before navya telling d lift attendent which floor he himself pressed d 4th button n handed her another red envelope .

Ek baat to mei Bataan hi bulgaya " I LUV U" .

This brought a smile on her face n by this tym she knew who was d person.

By the tym even d lift had arrived d floor . She got out n started walking 2wards the room . After taking some few steps there was a staff member who came to her n gave a red packed gift box . She knw this was all anant's drama by she was loving d attention she was getting. This way to her way 2 d room she received 4 red packed gifts n the fifth was waiting 4 her at the room,s door . It was d only gift packed with silver gift paper. She picked it up n entered d room.

To be continued...:)

Do leave ur comments .

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