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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter ' 1

A girl standing in dark room her head rested on the pane of the window,cool wind was blowing v can hear only sounds of windchimes .Moonlight falling on her face her eyes were red she trying to control but tears started falling from her eyes.she was still crying when someone came to stand besides her. "Navya",dadi said but she was deep in her thoughts then dadi placed her hand on her shoulder.Navya truned and looked at dadi and said, "dadi aap kab aye?"

dadi asked, "tum soi nahi ab tak?" "nahi dadi need nahi aarahe" ,replied navya and hugged her. Then dadi wiped her tears and some how managed to calm her down.

Dadi gave a packet to navya and said "ye tumahre liye hai." "ye kya hai dadi?" "deepu ne diye tha usne socha tha navya exams deker ayage to khud doonga (with heavy heart)usne Mumbai me tumahere liye flat liye tha aur is mein car ki chabi bhi hai and tears staterd rolling from her eyes too." "Ye kya dadi ab aap bhi rone lagey." wiped her tears .

"aur.. then stopped for few seconds" "aur kya dadi?" "usne tere liye Mumbai mein ek ladka bhi pasand ker liya tha bahut khush tha woh us din kahe raha tha maa bahut acha ladka hai bilkul humari navya jaise .Navya ke padai puri ho jaye phir navya se puch ker us se aur uske family se baat karunga, bahut hi bada parivaar hai per mujhe yakeen hai humari navya us ko zaroor pasand aayage.per shayad .."then they both stood in silence for sometime.

After few minutes Navya broke up the silence "dadi mein Mumbai jana chahti hoon,yahan meri maan nahi lagta mein wahan koi achi se job dhund lunge" dadi said "beta tu chinta mat ker mein baat karunge teri chacha se" "nahi dadi koi zarurat nahi hai" replied navya in angry tone. "Theek hai toh mein renu se baat karunge ke who gautam ko keh ker teri liye koi achi se job dhoond de". "nahi dadi mein di ko is halt mein (renu is pregnant)pareshan nahi karna chahti aap toh jante he haina.

"toh thekh hai mein bhi tere saath chalunge" dadi replied. "nahi dadi phele mujhe job mil jaye phir mein aap ko khud le jayunge aur yahaan di ko bhi to aap ke zarurat hai unki delivery ki date bhi toh pass aarahe hai" "lekin beta??" In the meantime lights were on! Dadi said, "bahut bada tofaan tha tham gaya." "dekha dadi baghwan bhi yahi chahtane hai aur mere saath aap ka aur ma papa ka ashirwaad bhi toh hai aur Ritz bhi toh Mumbai mein hai aap meri chinta mat karana" "thekh hai beta lekin apna khayal rakhna mein deepu ko vachan diya tha ki mein teri ankh mein kabhi ansoo nehi aane dhungi."

After two days ,when she reached Mumbai called dadi to inform but she wants to talk with Ritz .Dadi , "Ritika beta mere Navya ka khayal rakhna tum toh use jante he ho na bahut masoom hai aur is time use kisi sahare ki zarurat hai"

Aap bilkul chinta mat kijeye mein us ke pura khayal rakhunge and cuts the phone.

After 15 days everything is settled in flat Ritz helped her in arranging that and she tried her best to keep her happy but still she missing her parents. Now Navya was searching for a job.

The next evening ,Navya was driving her phone rings .Navya "hello". Ritz replied "Guess what tday is the day when u find luv of ur life." "What ? what r u saying? Aur mujhe pata kaise chale ga ki he is same guy??" "Tujhe khud hi pata chal gaye ga ." "Navya laughed Ritz tu aur teri filmy bateein mujhe kabhi samjh nahi ati" Suddenly her car bumped into other car.

who the hell did this ?? a handsome man came out of the car (yells). Anant was looking as handsome as always. Navya too got out of car and looks at Anant and kept on looking at him . Then came back to reality and tried to speak " woh main.."

before navya could say anything Anant said dekhi nehi deta kya..gaadi nahi chlane aati ..

Navya was totally pissed off( in mind)ajeeb ladka hai baat karne ke tamejh nahi hai mein srry kahna chati hoon per ye bolne ke... aur galti is ke bhi toh hai.

ho gaya! saying this (in angry tone)she leaves.

Anant was confused and shocked too. Then came to his sense ye mujhe kya ho gaye tha ..he was crusing himself y he behaved like this?then his phone rings. "hello" Anant (in low voice). Ranbir, "tujhe kya hua hai 'uncle ka phone aya tha kya?" anant replied " hmmm," and told him about full incident. "Kya anant ! tu bhi na??" "ranbir, tu toh janta hai na jab papa ka phone ata hai mujhe pata nahi kya ho jata hai meri dimag kaam karna band ker deta hai .mein us bechari per apna sara gussa utar diya jab ki galti meri thi." "Waise uncle kya keh rahe the?" "kya kahna! Ek hi baat shaadi ker lo" replied in angry tone.

"Acha Anant ek baat bta who ladki kaise thi??"asked him playfully. "Ranbir' tu na kabhi nahi suder sakta.waise mujhe nahi pata batya na tujhe". " tujhe use srry kahna chahey." "Haan yaar ! per kese? Mein toh use janta bhi nahi" anant replied.

At nite , Anant was lying on his bed but thinking about that accident and Navya.

Here Navya sitting in room her phone rings " Navya mein teri liye job dhonde leye hai kal tere interview hai. Vajpee Industries ,meri office ke pass hai .Mujhe yakeen hai tujhe job mil jaye gi." Hmmm' thek hai"and asked about time and address. "Kya baat Navya teri mood kuch thek nahi hai?" then she expained her and said "bahut hi akdu tha! Pata nahi samjhta kya hai apne aap ko"

"Chal chod ab mujhe sone de subh mujhe jaldi uthna hai." Navya said . "navya, can I ask u something?? Who ladka tha kaisa?" ritz asked and giggled. Navya was lost in his thought (strangely attracted toward him) " tu na! then paused for few seconds ,thek thak tha" finally replied .

"tu chinta mat ker Anant Vajpee aise akdu nahi hai . mein suna hai ki who bahut acha hai" ritz naughtily . "Anant vajpee??" asked navya. "Company ka owner" ritz replied. Ok bye gud nite! And cut the phone.

Both of them forgot about that prediction!!

Next morning , Navya was going for interview then she noticed an old man trying to cross the road .she parked her car on roadside then moved to him and helped in crossing road. Anant 's car stops at traffic signal and his eyes falls on her he was very impressed. awww he can't leave his eyes off her. He watches her every movement, lost in her simplicity. he could see only her side face but not properly.suddenly wind started blowing and Navya's dupatta landed on her face .As navya moved her dupatta and turned .He stared at her and shocked..

Srry for updating it late ..was little busy.Just hope its not boring and u guys like it..

Comments and critisicm is appreciated. srry for mistakes..

Plz leave ur comments!!

Edited by rashi_anya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hey im first...wow rashi di u did an awesome job with ur update...interesting plot😊
Edited by Sio_AngeL - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
luvly di...it ws really awsum luved it...<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
WooW Very Beautiful Start Superbbb plz cnt it soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow lovely update Rashi...so Navya going to work in Anant's company...update when u r free...
Edited by navya19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
very nice.. waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
di love ly lovely start :)))))))))))
boss aur secertary love story;)))))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome update 😊 thoroughly loved it 😊
Edited by shamya_for_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome start di, loved every bit of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
luvd d 1st meeting of anant nd navya. superbbb

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