New FF: Opposites Attract Part 28 @ Page 141 & 143 - Page 87

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Intezar intezar aye na khabar shaya apka
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hmmm waitinggg!!!!!!!
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Part 27😊:
'But Ma! She called which his mother didn't hear as someone entered the room and she said 'Accha beta! Will talk to you later' and disconnected the call.

Navya seems to be worried now. Anant enters the room and looking Navya he asked 'What happened Navya?' coming near to her and cupping her face.

'Anant! She started 'Ma called. She has sent sadki for karwachath'

'Ok!' he replied

'But Anant!' she continued looking down and removing his hand with her right hand 'I can't fast. I can't stay without eating whole day. Sorry Anant!'

Anant felt a little bad but as he truly cares for her and doesn't want her to do anything forcefully, he said in a husky voice 'Don't worry! You don't need to'

'But Ma?' she asked worrying about how her mother will feel if she comes to know to which he replied 'I will speak to Ma' and then got her forheard closer to him and he kissed and asked 'Shall we go then?' with a cheering grin 'Or else, we will reach there only after the party is over'

'Yes! Let's go' she said happily holding his hand but then realized and 'You will go like this?' looking at his dress as he is wearing a white t-shirt and a blue nike shorts

'Oh!' he reacted 'I will come in a minute' and took out his clothes from the cupboard and went inside the bathroom.

Navya giggled and looked at the mirror.

The taxi stops near a taxi stand in Panjim. It's the capital city of Goa located on left bank of the Mandovi River on which the party is of their cruise is going on.

'Sir!' called the driver 'You need to get down here itself'

'Ok!' Anant wearing a plain black shirt bottomed with brown cord dry pant, agreed as he knows about the place as he had come here on his last visit though he had not gone inside that taxi's are not allowed to go near to the place and said 'Bhaiya! You wait here only till we are back' to which the driver agreed.

They got down to see the place full of black dirty mud around 'Chee' Navya reacted by holding her saree to save it from getting dirty with one hand and the other holding Anant's hand. Anant managed to get her out of the place and reached their destination.

There are many different cruises, the costliest being the Mermaid cruise. For every cruise, there is a separate entry. Outside, there are counters for tickets. While they were entering, Navya saw the famous director, Farah Khan coming from the opposite with three maids holding her triplets. Before Navya could react, one married couple went running towards them and pleaded have a click after which they rushed to escape before others also recognize her and went to entry to Mermaid cruise. She might have come for the bollywood festival which is going on from past one week for which most of the bollywood stars have come to Goa. After she left, the couple who took the photo was so excited that the girl is calling someone to tell whom she saw just now. Navya too was a little excited and tells Anant, but he just said ok and didn't react much as he is not very keen on bollywood movies except for those who have Amir Khan in it.

The ticket counter is filled with people waiting for their turn to get their tickets. Anant and Navya didn't have to worry as they already have the passes. Others were getting jealous seeing them getting inside without any effort and Navya is proudly getting in looking at them while Anant was feeling bad for them. They went inside through small queue and gets into middle floor of the ship having two more floors.The middle floor doesn't have anything except for few snacks stalls selling cold drinks, water, popcorn and chips like the ones we have in movie theaters. Since everyone was heading towards the top floor via steps on the right corner, they followed them and when they reached the floor, they were welcomed by a cool breeze flying Navya's pallu. Anant saw it and pulled it back against the wind and placed it back, holding it on her back as Navya had to concentrate on her hair which was also flying. It's an open one with lots of chairs kept in rows facing a big stage. A mix of old and young generation is available there with happy faces waiting for the show to begin. It's actually not arranged by the hotel people, instead they have reserved few passes for their guests.

Anant is feeling a bit guilty for asking her to wear saree as she is looking very uncomfortable. They took a place in the corner separating them from the stage by around 7 rows of chairs like a back bencher, contrasting his character, as he always used to sit in the front in college and school. He is too much influenced by his cute wife.

'Anant! Take pics na' she said and started posing.

Anant clicked a few pics of Navya who was happily posing though she had to face a lot of disturbance because of her hair getting messed up with the wind. Anant was secretly grinning looking at her cute face who is trying hard to give the best of expressions so that she can get some nice clicks to put in her facebook account and get maximum likes and comments from her friends.

The ship is waiting near a big bridge falling on the back of our lovebirds with Navya getting kind of bored as she had expected a rocking party and not something like this. She felt like banging the hotel boys head for wasting their time.

It's becoming dark now and the ship finally moved after 1 hr of wait with Navya struggling with mosquito's who are getting change to bite her seeing her bare back. Since Anant is wearing a full shirt, he didn't realize much in his case the tiny creatures are moving above this head making circles as he is wearing black. He looks at Navya and covers her back with her pallu and holding her arm allowing her to rest her head on his.

The show begins with a local dance which will be performed by kids on the song

Galyan Sankli Sonyachi, Hipori Konyachi (from movie, Dil hai ki manta nahi)

Cute small kids are dancing of the age between 2 - 4 years with boys dressed like a fisherman wearing colourful shirts teamed up with half pant and a bamboo hats and girls in cotton saris with their feet exposed with plain blouses which is called 'Nav-Vari'

While Navya is still stuggling with the mosquitoes, Anant becomes busy watching them with a big smile on his face.

'Anant!' she called shaking him slowly 'You are smiling? Here I am going mad with these stupid mosquitoes'

He looked at her and asked where and she showed her hands cutely to which he rubbed them and again started looking back at the stage 'You know!' he started 'I love kids'

'They are so innocent na!'

'You know, I always plan that when I get a kid, what will I do, where will I take them and all'

'You love kids and I hate them' Navya replied

Anant looked at her and asked 'Why you hate them? They are so cute'

'Ya, ya! They are only cute to see' she added 'But when it comes to managing them, it's a pain with all their nonstop susus and potties' she said

'But what will you do when we get our own kid' he asked

'I don't want so soon' she replied 'And when we get you are there na to change dipers and all' and grinned but to her surprise he happily agreed by saying 'Ok'

After the dance the host asked all the couples to come into the stage for dancing. Anant got up and asked Navya to come but she refused. Anant sat back and said 'Ok' considering it might be uncomfortable with the saree. The ship roamed for around 1 hour on the river and came back. People enjoyed to the core dancing and singing but since Navya had made a mind, that it's not good, she is not able to enjoy. Anant didn't forced her but silently enjoying the show.

After a not so pleasant evening for Navya, the couple came back to the hotel and at the entry Anant asked Navya to go to the room and he will come in a minute. When she went to the reception and asked for the key, the receptionist gave for room no 506 instead of 105 to which Navya said 'This is not ours. You have given a wrong one'

'No mam' the receptionist replied 'This is a correct one only. You room has been changed. It's now on the terrace floor'

'But why?' Navya asked

'Maam! We can't tell you now. We have been instructed not to tell you'

'Not to tell me' she asked surprisingly and was about to say something and then he got a call on her cell placed her hair on her left shoulder to take the call on her left ear and took the key and headed towards the terrace. But by the time she reached the terrace, she finished talking.

When she reached, she could see it's dark but few dim lights on which are fixed in four corners of the terrace giving it a very romantic look. The room is at the corner and looks like a special one. The place is looking completely private. She sees a board near the entry saying 'Do not Disturb'

She proceeds further and goes near the railing to see down and then suddenly felt a feather touching her back, giving her a tickle..

To be continued...
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Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely yaar..thanks 4 a long post...:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update 😛 continue soon😊
Edited by rashi_anya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
while expecting about karwah chaut update, u updated something different. Please extent the update of Anya's baby. It will be interesting, as Navya is careless type girl and not likes kid.
Edited by crazzymoon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely brilliant, eager 4 the next.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful!!😊👏⭐️..can't wait for the next update..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
tnice update and thanks for the long post😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an awesome update.👏👏 Poor Navya, she was struggling all the evening on the cruise and now very eager to read the next update. Cont. soon!!😊

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