FF Sacrifice!! Part 21 Page 67 FINAL UPDATE!

Tacker_Holic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Hey my lovelies I was in the writing mood and I thought of writing this! Its an OS at this stage but it may be an SS soon depeding on the response I get from it! I havent PM'd anyone yet its emotional and I'm sorry if you cried but I wanted to write something different something other than romance but this will be emotional romance and understanding! 😭 😳

FF Sacrifice

He laid there like a dead corpse on the hospital bed surviving on a few machines that were attached to his wrists and chest. He was covered in wires, machines and a tightened oxygen mask that had almost embedded on his face as he had been there for so long. He was lifeless. His hair was scuffled and his skin was so pale that it felt as if his blood circulation had stopped. He was still unconscious after six months of complete bed rest only if he could remember what happened that night. Navya caressed his hair and just hoped and wished that he would open his eyes and she could witness those eyes that made her go crazy. Those hazel eyes which were so dreamy so deep so intense. There was fear and tears in her eyes which showed that she was alive only for him, as long as his heart was beating she would be there with him to hold onto him in her arms. The doctor walked into see Navya in the same place as she was for the past 24 hours. She hadn't gone home to change she sat there like a statue fixed on his face on his every move. He had moved his fingers a couple of times and this bought great hope in her heart that there was light at the end of the tunnel. The touch of his hand bought life to her soul and she would smile with joy before it was vanished again. The Bajpai's came to see Anant just for the sake of it there was no love, no affection left in them. Sughanda and Nimi were the only ones that cared. Navya would not leave Anant at any cost to anyone but the gang. She would get changed back in the flat and come back to sit in front of her life. Everything had become so depressed in Navya's life since this incident happened. The happiness was waved goodbye but she was happy that she was by his side. The doctor glanced over at the tired Navya who was developing bags under her eyes. "Navya, I think you should take some rest you are really tired!" the doctor emphasised this and held her by her shoulder. Navya didn't flinch and was in her own world. She realised the doctor was talking to her. "Doctor how can I leave him here like this? Just how. I have to wait for him" tears started strolling down her eyes again and she closed them to pluck up the courage again. "Look Navya if you don't look after yourself how is Anant going to feel when he opens his eyes and sees you like this?" Navya listened to what she had to say it recalled in her mind again and again. But how could she leave him. She felt his hand and stroked it on her face. "Doctor I'll leave as soon as someone is here!" She didn't want to be separated from him but she just had too. She hadn't been eating properly recently and had become very weak, her body was so sensitive that she was experiencing so many dizzy spells. But she still plucked up the courage for her Anant. There was a message for her outside which she had to attend she looked at him as she stood up and a tear of hers fell on his eye lid. He shook slightly from his position. His heatbeat rose and movements increased Navya ran out of the door to get the doctor who had just left. His heart was racing but her's was restless. What did happen to Anant that night that has taken away the life of this couple?

Contents Page

Part 1-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/navya/3103326/ff-sacrifice-part-21-page-67-final-update

Part 2-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/navya/3103326/ff-sacrifice-part-21-page-67-final-update?pn=5

Part 3-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/navya/3103326/ff-sacrifice-part-21-page-67-final-update?pn=7

Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62115915

Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3103326&TPN=55&#78877722
Part 18
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3103326&TPN=58&#79651408
Part 19
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3103326&TPN=61&#81524471
Part 20
Part 21
Edited by Tacker_Holic - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

428

Views

38.3k

Users

55

Likes

899

Frequent Posters

Rabia_H thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
it is awsome amazing continue plz😛
Tacker_Holic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: dmgfan

WOW nice. Pl. continue

Thanks glad you liked it! 😃
Tacker_Holic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: rabia_shamya

it is awsome amazing continue plz😛

Thanks for the PM as well means a lot! I will try too! 😃
-Divya.S- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Its marvelous sonia. love to read ua writing.. am lacking words.. superb, mindblowing.. i wish to read d continuation ths part.. plz do continue..
Parsh_shamya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
wow wat an update sonia it got tears in ma eyes...plz do continue soon...
shahz thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Brilliant...it was very emotional plz continue.Will be waiting for if next update.
sravs190 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
wow amazing and emotional one yaar . pls cont soon
Aishwarjya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
This is fabulous..Sonia pls continue it.it's a wonderful emotional update.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Parmasone thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
really really great one sonia i love love emotional storiess:) plz plz do continue sooon:))

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".