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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssbnnavya

subhah ki kiran ke saath aagayi ho tum mere pass
ab zindagi bhar rahunga tumhare saath
kabhi aansoon ko tumhari palkhon ko chune na donga
khushiya hi khushiya ab dunga tumhein...
kabhi door na jaana...kabhi kuch na chupana main hoon humesha tumhare saath
aur har pal karta rahunga tumse pyaar


you took my heart away from these lines isha❤️ amazing post👏 and story dear continue👍🏼


thnx it means alot 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow how cuteee nd romantic post loved it pls update it its another part😊
Edited by nikhitakumari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update..liked it😊pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
isha Dear Awesome Superb vry romantic Rs :))... Too good :))... waiting 4 your next update...thank u so much...god bless u !! :))
Edited by parineeti28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
are waah lovd d poetry isha ...waise aise jagah pr rukte nai😉 galat baat...continue jaldi
Edited by meenakshi.anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.Anant's shayari was awesome😳please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
recap : anant : accha...ok so jate hain (moved away frm her 😛😆)
navya : anant...
anant : haan...tumne kaha so jate hain toh main toh wohi kar raha hoon na 😛


nxt episode :
navya :haa par wo..
anant : haan navya bolo kya wo ??😆
navya :kuch nhi😳...
anant got up n sat close to her n wispered in her ear bolo na navya...kya ...waise mujhe pata hai ki tum kya kehna chahti ho...par main sunna chahta hoon...pls bolo na...😛
navya : nhi 😳 ( turns n lies down n bed...)
anant (came to her ) : pakka sona hai na ya...😉
navya (blushing turns to him) :ya ?? 😳
anant : ya bolke nhi karke bataun toh bttr rahega na...😳
navya blushes.. n dey hav a eyelock (bg : pehlaa pyaar...)
anant comes nearer n nearer both close dere eyes n hav a liplock...
(lights off)


morning : navya n anant's arms n anant is shirtless...navya opens her eyes...finds her in d safest n d most loving arms looks at his inocent sleeping face...smiles n again puts her head on his chest n places a small kiss on his chest...n says "i love u anant" anant smiles...n tighens d grip of his hands...n says "i love u 2 my jhalli"
navya : tum jag rahe they ??
anant : haan apni pyaari si jhalli ko sote hue dekh raha tha...tumhein pata kitni khubsurat lag rahi thi wo ?? 😊
navya : accha bht hua romance ab pls mujhe chodo na...(yawned )
anant : needh aa rahi hai na ?? toh chalo sirf se sojate hain...😊
navya : nhi anant...
anant : accha pls thodi der...plss (made a cute sa baby type face)
navya : accha baba accha..par pls mera phone do na..
anant : kyun ?? n mujhe sone do...
navya: anant... maine tumhari ek baat mani na ab tum bhi mano pls...
anant : ok (gives d phone)
navya chcks her phone...
navya : oh no !!! 😲
anant (scare) : kya hua navya sab theek toh hai ??
navya : anant dekho ritz ki 20 missed calls...humein pata hi nhi chala ...😲
anant : pata kaise chalta hum toh...ek dusre mein khoye hue they na...😛😳
navya :anant mazak chodo...bechari kitni pareshan ho rahi hogi...
anant :toh usse call karlo na...pareshan kyun ho rahi ho...apne aap pata chal jayega ki kya baat hai...

navya gets up n calls ritz...

navya : hello ritz ??
ritz : haan...kahan thi tu kal raat...itna call kiya tujhe...
navya : sorry ritz main call nhi utha payi...par wo sab chod bata kya baat hai ?? sab thek toh hai ??
ritz (low tone) kuch bhi theek hi hai navya (starts crying ) pls yahan aa ja jaldi...😭😭
navya :kya hua ritz kyun ro rahi hai ??😭 tu pareshan mat ho main aur anant aa rahe hain abhi...
both of dem get ready...as fast as dey cud...

n reached her house...
ritz house :
she was alone in d house...
opens d gate..(on d gate)
navya : tu theek toh hai na...?? kya hua tujhe ??
ritz : andar aao tum dono phir batati hoon...
anya enters...anant looks arund n he gets a flash back of d old bitter memories...navya looks at him n understands..n holds his hand...
looking at both of dem ritz : anant i knw tum dono yahan aake odd feel kar rahe hoge...isliye tum logon ko abhi bulaya jab mumma papa nhi hai...
navya : pagalon jaisi batein mat kar maar khayegi...chal bata kya hua...





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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice update dear...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update :) waiting to know what has happened now
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update.. do continue soon..

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