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Posted: 13 years ago
😍wow lovely SS neetha...
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rg8 work. luvd to the core
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superb, i always imagine shamya while reading any ff, os, ss

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amazing after reading the part & the point whr u stopped my duty is whnever im online i chck this thread jst to kne if u hv updted it or not must say a tricky way of writing & along with gr8 writting skills
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luvly update neetha di...:)<3
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neetha !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hayeee m having goose bumps reading it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty pretty update !!!🤗
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😆😆

Originally posted by: neetha

@divi n momna:u gals are very gud at spammin..pagal ladkiya,..😆

ahahahahah wah wah itna bara complement😆😆
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tune [hir se galat jagah stop kr diya na tu sudhre gi nahi 😆 😆
ab jaldi jaldi update kr de warna tuje pata ha k kia hoga
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CHAPTER 5

anant was leanin towards her body..she gulped out of nervousness..his eyes starin
right into her eyes..he had that fire n hotness deep in his brown eyes..his arms
slowly covered her n his hand moved towards her back..navya unable to luk at him
closed her eyes..his face crossed her shoulder..navya's cheeks cud feel his silky
hair..her face neared more to his head in want of them..his hand in no time
reached her back..his fingers ran on her bare back..he stiffened her dress n just
tightly pulled her zip..navya almost bumped on his chest..still her eyes closed..

anant:chale..
navya is still closin her eyes unaware tat anant had left her side long back..
anant:navya..
navya:huh..??
anantchale..
navya:(she touched her back to chek her zip)teek ho gaya??haan chalthe hai..
anant:yeah...

they walked towards the dance floor in silence..the dance floor was all epmty
just filled wit few love birds..

adi:hey navya..kaha chali gayi thi tum??
navya:woh..hu..
adi:btw yeh kaun hai..(lukin at anant)

anant luked at navya n just walked away frm thr..navya luked anant goin away frm
her in silence..

adi:(shook navya)kya hua??
navya:huh..no nothin m fyn..
adi:woh kaun tha??
navya:woh ..pata nahi..main sirf uske saat dance kar rahi thi tats it..
adi:oh k..chalo lets hav somethin..
navya:yeah

deep in her mind she still had the thoughts of anant.

anant:ranbir yaar..chalte hai plss
ranbir:kya hua??teek toh hai??
anant:haan teek hu..dekh presentation bhi tayar karna hai..kal ka meetin imp hai.
ranbir:oh haan..k chal..

night 12:30 ananth's bedroom

anant sittin wit his laptop n working fr his presentation.Anant was a business
tycoon like his dad.He is a perfectionist.Preparing a ppt was nt a tough job for
him..but now he had some serious problem wit him..

*anant to himself*

yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai..ek simple sa ppt nahi ho raha mujhse..wats happenin
wit me..he shuts his eyes in anger n all he cud see the angelic beauty..navya..he
opened his eyes..main kyun baar baar navya ko dekh raha hu..i mean i hate tat
gal..goshh!!he walks to his bathroon splashes water on his face..n luks at the
mirror n again he cud see the flashbacks of the party on the mirror..anant tu
pagal ho gaya hai sacj main..i mean woh sarfiri ke baare main itna kyun soch raha
hai..no seriously ye nahi ho raha...anant concentrate..again sits in front of his
lappy eyes wide open n starts workin wiout diverting his mind to any other
thoughts.He hard a hard time concentrating

night 1:00 navya's rrom

navya is rolling on her bed is taraf se uss taraf,catchin her teddy bear..

*navya to hersef*

mujhe sona hai bhagwaan..kyun so nahi paa rahi hu..plss..main tab se uss akdoo ke
baare main kyun soch rahi hu...again she enters into a trance n starts gettin
flashbacks abt anant..mujhe waise hua kya tha??i mean his eyes..ufff..navya tu
sach main pagal ho gayi hai..no..god plss n whining she sits on her bed..her chin
on teddy's head..teddy main uss anant se nafrat karthi hu yaar..n main uss
akdoo,sadu anant ke baare main nahi sochna chahthi..she turns the teddy..i love u
teddy n hugs the teddy n falls on the bed..

next mornin in the college

navya:hey ritz n appy aaj raat ko na mumbai ka sabse bada fashion show honewala
hai..
appy:tu fashion show main part legi??
navya:ek no ki duffer hai..main kyun usme part lungi??mere dad ko uske pass mile
hai..so i thoght we shud go..
ritz:k main clear kar dethi hu..main nahi aa rahi..
appy:main aa rahi hu..
navya:ritzzz plsss
ritz:no navya plss..n u knw kafi der ho jayegi n dad ko tu kanthi hi hai na..so
plss
navya:hmm uncle pata hai..accha teek hai its k main bhi nahi jathi..
ritz:pagal hai kya..tu jana yaar..aur waise hi appy toh aa rahi hai na tere
saat..
appy:haan navya hum chalte hai plss aur adi?/
navya:no..woh nahi aa raha..usko koi aur kaam hai..
navya:accha teek hai...main apne ek dost ko khush karne ke liye doosri dost ko
duhi toh nahi kar sakthi na??(winks at appy)
ritz:nautanki ho tum dono..ab chalo lunch karthe hai..

afternoon anant's office

ranbir:acche se ho gaya yaar..must say woh log kafi impressed hai
anant:haan yaar..this deal is really imp..
ranbir:but yaar in logon ne fashion show main kyun bulaya..
anant:arre woh log apna decision wahi batayenge..aur yeh fashion show ke
organiser wohi hai so..its obvious..
ranbir:hmm..mujhe koi prob nahi hai..but tu aur fashion show..
anant:business..iske liye mai kuch bhi kar saktha hu..kuch bhi!!

night 8:00 fashion show

navya n appy reach at the fashion show venue.Navya was wearin dark blue knee
lenght gown n appy was also wearin a balck gown.Even anant n ranbir reach at the
venue.Ananth wearin a white formal shirt wit balck balzer n black pant.Ranbir was
also wearin a suit.Anant meets his business partners..

raj:hello Mr.Bajpayee..thanx for comin??
anant:hello Mr.raj..its a pleasure..
raj:hello Mr.ranbir
ranbir:hello Mr.raj
raj:enjoy the fashion show..n main aap se thodi der baad milta hu
anant:yeah sure..

anant n ranbir sit on the seats alloted fr them..ranbir's eyes turn towards the
next table of theirs.

ranbir:hey appy..
appy:haa..hi ranbir..

anant n navya shocked luk at each other's face..

anant:oh god kahi bhi jao..yeh sarfiri mera peecha nahi chodthi..
ranbir:(gigglin)bechari yaar..itni khoobsurat ladki ko toh sarfiri bulata
hai..chii
anant:huh..tujhe badi khoobsurat dikh rahi hai woh..??(raisin his eyebrows)
ranbir:haan meri bhabhie hai..(laughin)
anant:teri bhabhie??
ranbir:tu na itna bada business man hai..fir bhi in sab mamlon main ek no. ka
duffer..(laughin)
anant:k..u mean tu meri aur uske baare main..god..aisi ladki teri bhabhie kabhi
nahi ho sakthi..no ways..
ranbir:u never knw brother..FATE..

navya:yeh har jagah iska chehra hi kyun milta hai??(angry)
appy:handsome hai yaar..
navya:handsome hone se kya fayda..thoda tameez bhi toh zaroori hai..
appy:he is a gentleman navya
navya:accha.usne bataya tujhe??(teasin)
appy:btaya nahi..par diktha hai..haan akdu hai but intelligent aur decent bhi
hai..
navya:watever..


the fashion show begins..it was almost 2 hrs tat anant n navya wer beside each
other as in seperate tables..but they dint bother to even luk at each other..they
actd as if they wer strangers..then Mr.raj comes to anant

raj:Mr.anant..hum yeh deal sign kar rahe hai..
anant:k..tats great..
raj:main ne apke office main hi decide kar liya tha..but pata nahi kyun just felt
like main apko yaha par invite karu..so..
anant:its k raj..itna bada deal hai..so its obvious ke apko think karne ke liye
waqt to lagega..
raj:ya may be uss wajah se..k.but aap yeh poora show dekh kar hi jayenge..k??
anant:sure..

navya:appy..main washroom jakar ati hu k..
appy:yeah k..

navya walks towards washroom..on her way some one by mistakes bangs on her n
spills the glass of juice on her dress..

guy:oh m extremely sorry..galti se..
navya:umm..no its k..
guy:no no its not k..aap..
navya:no..m tellin na its k..
guy:k..aap navya mishra hain na??deepak mishra ki beti..??
navya:haan..aap jante hai mere papa ko..
guy:aapke papa ko kaun nahi jantha..(smilin)
navya:k..(smiles)
guy:maine unke saat business kiya tha..
navya:oh woow tats nice.
guy:(offerin)juice??
navya:ya sure..

navya n the guy continue their talk fr alomost ten mins n suddenly navya's head
starts reelin n she faints..

~~~CHAPTER 5 END~~~

all jaldi jaldi like tab press karo aur comment karo..n ya next update is gonna
be interesting if nt romantic..
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Posted: 13 years ago
firstly a very very big 🤗 for the awwwsome update.. waise inzar karay ana reply keliye.. ye le updating all of it..
for the 3rd epi:
that was absolutely mindblowing.. excellent.. anant ko imagine karke behosh hone wali thi.. ☺️ navya ko toh pooch na hi mat.. 😳 n hot... song for dance was juz perfect..
but i juz wish navi culd hav seen tht jerk flirting.. adiii i wanna kill him... 😡

for 4th epi:
this chap was absolutely waw filled.. anya dancing.. haye so dreamy.. and the songs adds more to it.. 😍 anya's guesture imagine karne layak tha yaar.. i wish i culd see this on tv..
btw ran-ritz scene was lovely..
anya agar nafrat karte aise hai toh pyar karte.. 😍 phewww am gonig besharam.. anyways lovely update... 1 more tigth 🤗 the update..

for 5th epi:
the very first scene was breath taking here.. bechara apna bramhachari anant toh gaye kaam se.. aur navya toh juz ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
anya bechare ghar wapis aane ke baad bhi party se nahi laute.. and yes its excellent meating again in fashion show.. now i juz cant wait for next update.. plz update soon... dont make us wait more.. 🤗
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago

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