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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update smitha..too gud..plz try to update next part soon..
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Very nice and interesting update!!😊please continue soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh tere u gave me the heart attack😛 plz continue soon now i cant wait anymore😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really nice update dear:) loved it alottt!! N can feel tht some good news is on e way fr our sweet Anya:) cant wait:) hope u'll come soon with another awsome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
I got it Navya going to be a Mama
thanks u r moving towards thats section now
lovely update!
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awesum update di 🤗 really loved it 😊
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i hope this update of mine is upto your expectations...

Anant noticed appy giggling standing behind ritz.. he was wondering what happened to them and moreover navya was no where in sight. Sab hai par wo kahan hai'

Then renu came up from the kitchen with tea for all. Still anant was restless'.his eyes were searching for navya but was not in a situation to ask about her'.but still he just turned round the kitchen to see if she is there'Deepak asked how his office works were going on and he replied ki it was fine ..but was not able to concentrate on the further talks ..

Itne mei daadi ne kaha'arey beta..jisse tum doond rahe ho wo tho'suddenly ritz spoke up cutting daadi's words' arey nahi daadi 'aise kaise jaldi batayenge aap..pehle 'hume treat tho wasool karne do..kyun renu di'teek hai na?
Renu didi also smiled back..haan haan hum treat liye bagair nahi jaane denge..

Anant was wonderng..office ki baatein inhe kaise patha chala par meine tho abhi koi decision nahi li hai'nahi nahi baat ye nahi hai..phir kya hai he was wondering in his mind'.

Daadi again spoke up: arey itnaa dimaag ladane ki zaroorat nahi hai'.ye tho hotha hai.. and smiled

Anant was looking at daadi'he told her: ji daadi mei kuch samjaaa nahi..kya baat kar rahi hai aap,

Meetha and deepak was also having a sweet smile but they didn't want anant to be troubled but ritz appy and renu had decided to just tease him. So they were quiet.

Renu : anant hame aaj dinner pe tum leke jaoge'yahi treat chahiye hume..

Ritz aur appy ne bhi renu ki side li'ritz: yahi kaafi hai kya renu di'aakhir hamari navya ka sawaal hai'and gave a small giggle.

Anant : again confused..navya ka sawaal hai?...navya ko kya hua'?

And looked at meetha who was also standing and smiling ..maa navya tho teek thi,bas daadi ki janamdin ke liye kya khareedna hai..ye sab leke pareshaan thi'.par 'anant was now totally restless and confused

she was about to tell sumthing to anant ki daadi: arey muje kuch bhi nahi chahiye'muje tho mera thohfa mil gaya hai'wo bhi pyaara sa'

anant couldn't make out any of these things happening around him'but rather than restless he was more worried for navya now'.kya hua wo dikhayi kyun nahi de rahi

now meetha came up to him'anant baat kuch nahi hai..wo mei aaj subah ghar aayi thi bazaar jathe waqt, tho muje laga ki navya thodi kamzoor lag rahi thi aur wo kuch kha bhi nahi rahi thi'.tho zabardasthi doctor ke paas le gayi'.

Anant too nodded for it

Anant: haan maa do teen dinon se kuch kha nahi rahi thi'.par usne kaha ki humne jo khana bahar se khaya tha uske karaan hoga aur phir 'agle din kuch teek thi. Issliye doctor ke paas nahi gaya aur wo zidd bhi kar rahi thi'

Meetha: 'haan usne bathaya muje tum bahut pareshaan the . par meine yu hi doctor ko ek baar dikhane ke liye le gayi''..aur phir doctor ne kaha ki '.wo teek hai bas ye kaha ki mei daadi ban ne waali hu' meetha ne yu jat se kah diya.

Anant was just listening to meetha's words when she was talking as he was worried for navya'ki anant didn't follow the last line properly.. acha tho doctor ne '.and he paused .. he was blank'..maa'daadi ban gayi'doctor ne ye kaha '.daadi matlab '.par renu di ki gudiya hai'..haaan nnn now anants mouth opened wide ''..what all expressions ran through his face he himself didn't know'in front of all''he was .blushing, was shy, was eager to meet navya.. what not he himself ddnt know how to react as all this was new experience for him. kabhi apne ghar mei ye sab nahi dekha tha'.ya phir ek baar jo dekh tha wo tho ''' he was more sh y now par wo kush tha apni kushi kaise '.dikhaun?

'..usse samaj mei aaya ki baat kya hai'itna tho samajtha tha ki daadi ban ne ka matlab kya hotha hai'.

Daadi now rescued him from the situation'.jao koi tumhara hi intezaar kar rahi hai'.uska chehre mei kya kya hai'ye tho tum dono hi jaane''daadi ne apna dialogue bol diya'and smiled

Anant wanted to meet her badly now..he kept his tea cup on the table..and got up frm there . appy was giggling..he was totally embarrassed . scratched his head a bit and just in a frction of a second was missing from there , he went in all of a sudden'.all laughed lightly in the hall'

Anant closed the door behind him'but navya was not to be found anywhere'he then knew where she would be. Straight away went to the balcony''.navya was standing there . she wasstanding as if she was enjoying the view but actually she knew anant was there at home and he will be here any moment. She too was blushing and feeling very shy .

Anant was having a sweet smile on his face while hugging her from behind'..he rounded his hands ..but then he suddenly stopped'.his hands slowly moved back and touched her tummy.she was stil facing her back to him'couldn't meet his eyes and kept it tight close. Anant brought his face front words to see her '.and now he stood in front of her'..navya ..aankhen kholo ,,,muje dekho'''

Navya opened her eyes and looked at him. Anant held her by the shoulder. They had a small eyelock there'..he wanted to pour out a his feelings to her but all came out through his eyes'..she reciprocated back to it by giving him a sweet smile covered with her cute shyness. He lifted her chin and brought his face near hers and now came even more nearer'.gave a sweet lip kiss and navya hugged him. They forgot for a moment that they were in the balcony.

Anant : tum teek ho na? he asked her looking at her

Navya just nodded aur tum? She asked'''.

Anant: mei? Mei tho bahut bahut bahut'.khush hu ki'..patha hi nahi kya karna hai'navya hum mama papa banenge'hai na? he asked her very excited'.and then he stood near the railings of the balcony and told '.yahan se chilaao kya'.stretched his hands and was showing the action as if he was going to shout out loud'..but lowering his voice he told 'navyaaa I love youuu

And turned to look at the navya who was trying to say him to be calm'shhh shhh anant ye kya kar rahe ho'''

Anant turning to her'maa ne jab baat kaha tho 'wahan sab ke saamne mei kya kartha'..muje daudke tumhare paas aane ko dil kiya '..par yahan tha na'wahan flat mei hotha tho''.and bend and lifted her yu tumhe uttatha aur jooor se chilatha''

Navy held him tight.: anant nahi neeche uttaro'aisa mat karo'..

Then anant remembered navya's condition now''..aur usse neeche uttaar diya'sorry'aaj se kya mei tumhe utta bhi nahi paonga''.?

Navya : wo baat nahi hai'..wo muje kuch thakaan ho rahi thi issliye''

Anant: tum teek tho ho na'.chalo andar chalo ..and made her to come in to the room and she sat on the bed.

Anant: wo navya 'and sat besides her'. Wo muje nahi patha ..ki kya karna hai ya nahi'..issliye muje zaroor batha dena''

And touched her tummy and told'.mei papa ban raha hu'..and gave his 100 volts smile'

Navya too smiled back and hugged him. He just hugged her tightly : Navya I love you navya'.

A few minutes later '..meetha ma knocked 'they both released their hug and anant opened the door'meetha was having a tablet in her hand.

Meetha: wo anant navya ko kuch dawayiyaan hai khane ko'. Issliye tume disturb kiya

Anant: nahi maa koi baat nahi'.aap aayiye na..

Meetha gave her the medicines..explained to anant what they all were for and told him the precautions navya has to take while at home. She assured the confused anant that there is nothing to worry and all such things are common. Anant too was happy now thinking he could take care of her. He was enjoying his moments now.

It was time for dinner,all ladies including appy and ritz helped to prepare diner in the kitchen..and they all sat down to eat. Navya too had her choice of food. Finally anant decided to stay there for that day as anyways it was daadi's birthday day after tomorw,so navya too could avoid travelling'..

Ritz and appy bid a gud bye to every one after dinner and made anant promise for the treat they had asked for. Now all sat in the hall for a small discussion' anant was now thinking of his office and the new suggestion put forward by rakesh sir''

Deepak noticed something was worrying anant'.he asked: anant ..kab se tumhe dekh raha hu'kuch pareshaaani hai kya'navya ke bare mei sochkar '?

Anant looked at him'nahi papa, bat wo nahi hai. wo aaj office mei 'he then loked to find where navya was, she was in daadi's room ..listening to a few old tales of daadi about her life and all.

Anant continued : wo papa aaj rakesh sir ne ek sujaao diya ki mei abroad jao..project ko complete karne'tho isi bare mei soch raha tha'kya decision lu samaj nahi aa raha'

Deepak and meetha was still when they heard this..as they knew navya wont be able to handle a situation like this now.

Deepak: kya kuch mahinon ke liye tum taal nahi sakthe..itna zaroori hai'

Anant: wo papa'wo project itna bada hai..ki usne mere baroose hi sab kuch kiya hai'aur yahan navya 'iss halat mei''..mei puri tarah confused hu and sat blank.

Samaj mei nahi aatha kya karu'.

Meetha : navya ko bathaya tumne

Anant: nahi maa, agar bathatha tho ..wo kya kahthi ...shayad jane ko kahthi par muje patha hai..wo kush nahi hogi...aur aisi halat mei hi muje uske paas zyaada rahna hai...haina ma?

Anant was not knowing how to handle the situation. Navya would be too sad he knew it.

Meetha ma also got worried now'Deepak : haa par navy ko tho bathana hoga agar tumhe jaana hi hai tho'.

Anant was about to say a no..ki navya stood there in front of them. She had heard a part of the conversation when she came out from daadi's room. She now wanted to know what the matter was. She insisted anant to say '.and finally anant told her the whole situation.

Navya was just looking at him plainly'she was sad thinking that anant would leave her here and go'.because she knew Deepak and meetha would be saying so''..

But she knew the pain that anant had in his mind' leaving her or leaving him was not an acceptable solution for both of them.

Navya didn't say anything and went in. meeta and Deepak wondered what was in her mind. Anant quickly followed her. Navya was sitting near her window where she usually loved to sit..looking out. Anant came and sat near her taking her hand into his.

Navya: still looking out: anant, tum muje bhi saath le chalo'.mei tumhe kabhi wahan tang nahi karungi''bend her head like a small kid..

Anant looked at her but was quite confused '.tang karne ki baat nahi hai navya '.par mei tumhe utna acha dekh paonga kya jitna maa aur daadi tumhe dekehnge? Iss liye yahi acha hoga na ki tum''..

Navya had tears in her eyes now'.

navya ..he called her softly.. he was not able to give out his expressions but didn't want to hurt her also. He just hugged her . both were not in a situation to speak up now... they kept mum.

Navya knew at this time it was her decision that has to give strength to anant, to cope up his confusions'wo project uski khud ki mehnat hai..aur issme muje anant ka saath dena chahiye.. nahi tho wo toot jayega'many thoughts ran through her mind.

She just caressed the hairs of anant who was lying with his head on her folded legs'.anant kab bathana hai rakesh sir ko'.? She asked'

Anant: lifting his head to her'shayad do din baad'

Navya; teek hai'mei teek hu'tum so jao abhi'..bahut thake hue ho aur muje bhi neend aa rahi hai''.

Navya had decided something in her mind.

Aaant too didn't utter a word, but he went to sleep with navya giving her a usual kiss on her forehead as he knew just like how he was confused navya too was in a similar situation so he didn't feel like troubling her. That night all slept but with a slight tensed mind''..

In the morning all were fine, navya was in to her daily routines'anant started to office with Deepak'food was ready..navya to had her part of food and medicines'.anant gave her the usual kiss but today to both of them his sweet wife and cute little one who was there in her now. But deep inside was worried about navya as to why she was so calm.

Later that morning navya went out with meetha ma 'and returned back home with a smile on her face. meetha ma was confused still thinking what would Deepak sand daadi say. The day passed by all making preparations for the next day's celebrations'inviting those who were left out, making the sweets and buying all the party items. Mohan and rama had agreed to come too. Bajpais were also invited but it was baba's decision not to attend it. Om had a half mind but still as he was more baba oriented he kept quiet.

It was evening and all returned from home. Anant too came back with a few left over items that had to be bought. Navya was loking very happy.. anant was happy that navya was happy but deep in his hearts sumthing hit him as he had to leave her here and go, atleast for the time being that was his thought seeing navya happy as he took it as navya had occupied herself here. As he didn't want to leave navay and go but for her health he knew only maa and daadi could take care of her.

But at night after dinner when all sat together navya came up: papa mei aap se kuch kahna chahthi hu''.

Deepak : bolo beta..kya baat hai'''

Anant too wondered what'.

Navya papa mei jaanthi hu, ki aap sab iss baat ko lekar bahut pareshan hai ki anant ko jaana hoga. Aur ye bhi hai ki aisa hotha hai aur muje samjana chahiye. Jiju jab bahar rahthe the tho deedi ko meine dekha hai'.. issliye samjthi hu. Aur ye bhi jaanthi hu ki aap bhi yahi chahenge ki mei yahan rahu ,,nahi tho aap pareshaan honge'..

Deepak didn't say anything but was listening to navya as he knew she had sumthing else to tell'. her eyes showed that determination.

Navya continued: par papa'.mei anant ke bina nahi rah sakthi'.aur ye bhi jaanthi hu ki wo mere bina nahi rah saktha. Yah project usske liye bahut hi important hai..and looked at him 'he was still wondering what navya was upto.

Mei aaj doctor ke paas gayi thi'doctor ne kaha ki mei teek hu..koi problem nahi hai..aur muje patha hai mei teek rahungi'.bas mei anant ke saath jana chahthi hu''..she told looking at her father.

Anant was in a standstill now as he too wanted to take her with him but was confused thinking about her state and moreover he thought he doesnt know how to take care of navya in such a situation. So he was quiet, but now when navya spoke up he was like''''..but looked at Deepak .

Deepak looked at meetha: ji wo mei aaj navya ke saath gayi thi, doctor tho kah rahe the ki koi pareshaani nahi hai jaane mei .log kahan kahan nahi jaate aur plane mei jaana tho'.koi pareshaani nahi hai aur phir ..sirf ye ki nayi jagah nayi log''meetha too had her set of confusions'..

navya spoke up now breaking meetha's confusions

Navya: papa , ma daadi, didi 'aap sab hai mere saath yahan pe..par wahan anant akela rah jayega'na baat karne ke liye ya phir jagadne ke liye koi hoga '..maa usske bare mei bhi tho socho'mei anant ko akela nahi chod sakthi'..mei uske saat aur wo mera saath hai tho ..koi pareshaani nahi hogi ma..aur phir hum dono aap ke saath har din computer se baatein karenge'aap se har baat pochenge.. aur aap bhi wahan aa sakthe hai na ..please maa. she went upto her and held her hand

Navya had already discussed all these with meetha and daadi in the morning .she only had to convince Deepak'.that she would be alright with anant. Not alright that is the only solution for this. Anant ka saath.

Anant too didn't have words now'.he had a drop of tear in his eyes. Deepak stoodup..and moved his hands on navya's head'teek hai'tum jao anant ke saath , apne aap ko itna tension math do'hum sab hai,,muje patha hai wo tumara acha khayal rakega'''.. he knew that navya wont be happy alone here, and moreover it was anant's attention that she needed more now...so he too was willing and moreover aaj ke zamane mei tho ye sab hotha rahtha hai bas apni beti ki baat aayi tho kuch pareshaan hua..

All were happy now as they knew navya was determined to go with him.

daadi tho chalo bahiyya...ab sab kuch teek ho gaya na, meine kaha tha na deepu ..navya bahut badi ho gayi hai, wo khud ko sambhaal sakthi hai.
They all went to sleep . Anant was standing near the window when navya came in'.she went upto him..and hugged him from behind'kya soch rahe ho'meine tho sarree pareshaani dur bhaga di ab kya?

Anant turned to her and held both her hands and kissed it: kyun karthi ho mujse itna pyaar? He asked tears rolling down his eyes'''.

navy couldnt see tears in his eyes..she wiped it.
told: kyunki tum meri zindagi ho. Aur ab koi aur bhi hai jo tumhe bahut pyaar kartha hai'tho usse tumhara pyaar nahi dena kya? Hum dono yahan akele kya karenge'? Sirf tumhe miss karene aur tum bhi '..

And smiled at him.

anant hugged navya and cried navya too hugged him back tightly.
He had another reason too to be happy now as rakesh sir had assured him that he would be given all facilities there and moreover anants friend too had shifted to that place recently after marriage..so his worries were less now.

They both were very happy. Next day morning all wished daadi, did puja and got blessings from her after giving her the gifts, mohan and rama too joind the fun. They were also happy to know they were becoming chacha and chachi. The day went well. All enjoyed including ritz appy ranbir . anant took care of the minute things that navya needed, never made her feel alone or sad. always brought a smile on her face . he had consulted the doctor too reagrding this. deepak and meetha was happy and content seeing all these.

A month went by with the preparations for navya and anant to go. Anant had a few immediate things to be completed so it got a bit delayed and so meetha was more ok with navya's health now. All things were packed and ready and now all were at the airport. Mohan and rama too dropped in to see of f them. Baba and others knew about it '..om and sugandha too came as they were happy for anant and navya now'

They took blessings from all and started for their new journey of life '''

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I am stopping my ss at this point as I had just continued from the track of the flat and the accident that took place. I just wanted to give a small deviation from there and penned down my ideas''..

Thanks for reading my ss and liking and commenting on it. The story can take a two way turn now where either

Navay and anant are invited back to bajpai mansion by baba due to the compelling by every one and where again bua dadi and baba play their set of games on them'..and finally navya and anant out wit them with the help of rama bhabhi and mohan bhaiyya. And finally they all become a family as a whole.Or else they flew abroad and then had a happy life there and returned after a few years with kids ,, and now baba realized his mistakes and this made to reunite the families.

These were just my imaginations from the flat track and my imaginations as to how the story would end if thought like this. I am really sorry, I know a few of u were realy liking it but there is no point in me dragging it again as I too had been drained out of ideas now. So kindly accept this as the last update of my ss . thanks once again from deep within my hearts to all those who liked it and gave me feedbacks which definitely had been a gud experience for me.

Edited by smivas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update. its lyk i'm flying in air reading ur update. nd fr the rest of d part jo bhi ho anya tho saath hai. that's enough fr me.
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Originally posted by: anyadiv96

superb update. its lyk i'm flying in air reading ur update. nd fr the rest of d part jo bhi ho anya tho saath hai. that's enough fr me.

thanks divya so much...and yess its our anya ,,,wherever they are they will be always together ... 😊
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awwwsomeee update di.. 😳 loved each & every bit of it.. ❤️ but am very sad ki ua ending it.. 😭 loved the way navya's family gave surprice to anant.. it was fun reading it.. anya's sweet convo, anya's happiness could clearly felt by ua writing.. navya's determination to go with annat & the way she convinsed deepu way excellent.. i really wish u culd continue it.. 😔 but i will be waiting for ua new ff or ss.. plz do write if u can.. & a tight jappi 🤗 for the lovely ss.. but plz its a kind request for new ff or ss.. am waiting..
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