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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all thank u so much for finiding out time and reading such a long update from yr valuable time...realy sorry if troubled you. and my heart felt thanks to all those who liked it and gave me their thoughts. it means a lot to me...thank u so much. 😃🤗
my thanks to all @malini @rashi @samrutha @anamika @divya @aishwarya @rashmi @crazzymoon @asihaseen @anyadiv96 @sweety71 @parmasone @son_s @anjumudd @smita_ar_anya @nimmi @banfasha @navya19 @arushi @ggmara_shamya @sio angel @momos @titli22 @ragzs @anya 29 @aditireddy @kpm madhu
i hope i have added all here 😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di superb update 👏 🤗
Edited by Richa_shamya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow its amazing , try to cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
anamika i cant stay online longer especialy during weekends as its holiday for everyone and moreover i cant get the system for long.
will definitely give my update by tuesday. please bear with the inconvinience, ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smivas

anamika i cant stay online longer especialy during weekends as its holiday for everyone and moreover i cant get the system for long.

will definitely give my update by tuesday. please bear with the inconvinience, ...



hm..ok..dear...i really wait for ur updates...sorry if im troubling u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating my post here ...and thanks for all who liked it ...

Navya was looking at anant , she felt he was fast asleep. She came near him,he was sleeping sideways….she slowly bought her hand on his forehead and caressed his hairs….. bahut pyaar karthi hu mei tumse anant. Her mind was speaking to him.

Aur muje patha hai tum bhi karthe ho…mei aaj jo khushi tumhari biwi banke mahsoos kar rahi hu ….wo mei kabhi bayan nahi kar paongi. mei bahut kush hu anant aur bhagwaan se yahi maangthi hu ki mei tumhe hamesha kushi de paao. Tumhare saath har kadam chal saku taki tum kabhi akela mehsoos naho…… wo sab de pao tume jot um chahthe ho ..navya was just looking at him and wishing all these ki she heard a voice……

Kya dekh rahi ho muje itnni der se….acha nahi lag raha kya?

It was anant , he was not asleep…but was lying simply…he was watching navya sitting beside him. But she didn't knew he was awake….

Navya: anant tum utt gae the? Bataaya kyun nahi ….

Navya was surprised to see anant awake.she felt that he was sound asleep. But she luved the way he was watching her…he just looked at her…….making himself lie straight and puled navya towards him….she fell on him with a sudden move with her chin on his chest. She just lay there keeping her face on his chest………

Anant : kya baat hai….? aaj bhaagna nahi hai…? and rounded his hands around her. She was feeling more secure and safe now . she smiled and lay there still …….

Anant: kya soch rahi thi.? Asked her moving her hairs that had cum forward on her face.

Navya: kuch bhi nahi..bas tume dekh rahi thi…..and cuddled even more towards him.

Mei mrs anant hone ki khushi mehsoos kar rahi thi…..

He was having a smile of content on his face,,. He kissed on her head…and slowly turned sideways with her making her lie straight and now he was looking at her…..lying sideways..

Navya: kya hua..asked at the staring anant…

Anant: just smiled back to her and leaned towards her and placed a kiss on her forehead saying gudmorning. Navya smiled at him and wanted to move ki he placed another one on her eyes : I love you……. Sh e didn't move her self now. Anant touched her face with his palm ……..navya was quite relaxed now…she was loking at anant …

Anant; man nahi hai aaj wapas jaane ka….yahi ruk jaye?

Navya: widening her eyes…anant….tumhe patha hai…ye holiday spot hai…tumhara meeting khatham ho chukka hai…..navya told him

Anant: bas nahi jaana navya ...and slowly brought his face closer to hers…….and gave his usual one to her. Navya's eyes were closed…but within a moment she opened it widely and told….anant!!! hamari gaadi….humne kal wahan choda tha…..!!!!
Anant too suddenly remembered that and sat upright on the bed…….

Haan mei tho bhul hi gaya tha….wo watchman tho shayad ab nikal bhi gaya hoga..tho hum kaise lenge usse wapas… kal tho wo bandh tha ..meine usse khulwaya tha…..

Chalo dekthe hai….nahi tho ….bas kuch gadbad na ho..and he got up. He was just worried ki wo office ki gaadi thi… and he didn't want to make any problem with it as the building which was an institution had holiday the previous day and anant had sumhow managed to make the watchman open it for them. He didn't want him to fall into trouble.

Navya also was a bit worried for it,, but anant made her stand there itself and he went to get the car. he was now standing at the entrance of the gate ki…he saw another watchman there…..he knew that the shift had been changed…..

But the previoays watchman was no where in sight. He went near the watchman to ask him….

Wo bahiyya …humne …

Itne mei anant ke peeche se koi bola…

Wo birju...ye hamare jaan pehchaan ka ek ladka hai..kal issne gaadi humare kehne par yahi choda tha..bahut baarish ho rahi thi na .issliye...tho aaj lene aaya hai...zara tum gate khol do..we le lega...and moved towards anant...

He was a bit aged so birju who was a young man respecte him and told ok and went to open the gate...

Watchman: arey beta tum log kaise bahar aa gaye..meine socha kit um undar hi rah gaye baarish ke kaaran..issliye subah jaane se pehhle tmhe doondne ke liye aaya.waise wo beti teek hai na? muje tum dono apne beta aur bahu ki tarah lage jo gaav mei hai….

Anant;: ji wo hum kal uss raasthe se nikal gaye the jo aapne kaha tha…issliye gaadi nahi liya… Muje der ho gaya na ..aane,mei..anant too was tensed. He didn't want this nice man to be blamed because of him

Watchman: nahi tum jaldi leke jaoo wo kya hai na principal saab abhi aate hi honge..aaj kuch programm hai yahan ...nuje nahi maaloom kya hai..issliye agar unhe patha chala ki hum baharwalon ki madad kar rahe hei tho ...

Anant: mei samaj saktha hu...bahut shukriya..mei abhi gaadi le letha hu and went fast towards the vehicle and took it out…he thanked both the watchmen and left from there.

Navya felt relived when anant narrated the whole incident and now they were ready to leave…..they packed their bags and paid at the reception and moved on. While descending down….navya was enjoying the beauty of the place..it was then that anant's phone rang….he was driving so navya answered the call it was mohan bhaiyya….

Hello bhaiyya anant gaadi chala raha hai….kuch kaam tha?

Mohan: nahi navya , wo kaam tumse tha……navya was confused..ji boliye….anant was wondering what was it….navya decided to put the call in speaker….

Mohan: wo rama tumse baat karna chathi hai…….and gave it to rama

Rama: navya …tum sun rahi ho?

Navya was surprised and happy to hear a soft tone from rama: ji bhahi boliye…..kya kaam tha . anant too was listening……

Rama: wo navya …….inhone muje kal wahan job hi hua ..usske bare mei bathaya…mei bagut hii sharmindaa hu navya tumse aisa begave karne ke liye…..and asked a sorry to her.

Navya: nahi bhabhi …please aap sorry math boliye…ye tho mera ..balki humara farz tha bhabhi…ki shagun ke liye job hi ho sake kare…aaj hum hi khush hai bhabhi…

She was not able to belive it was rama speaking in her favour.

Rama ….aaj se hum aapki didi hue , haina…hum aapse naaarj nahi hai..aur debar ji se bhi naaraaj nahi hai..jo kuch humne aapke saath kiya usske liye maafi maangthe hai…

Now anant spoke up: bhabhi….aap aone devar se maafi maangogi? He slowed down the vehicle…..hume aapse koi shikayat nahi hai bhabhi..

Mohan was also too happy to hear rama speaking these words. He knew this action of navya had definitely brought a change in her. He was happy for that now.

Navya and anant too felt very happy and they spoke for a while…and hung up teling that once they are back they would definitely meet eachother. It was a very happy moment for navya and obviously for anant.

They reached back Mumbai…anant went to office leaving navya at home…his work was appreciated there. Anant too was happy for this achievement. He was given instructions to carry out the project …under his responsibility…. Navya too was happy in her role as anant's wife taking care of him. They were able to pay back their owner's debt and now had a plan for getting a vehicle for his own. Rama often had a talk with navya through phone and exchanged their concerns for eachother. Nobody in bajpai mansion knew of this except mohan and nimisha. Days went by…it was navya's daadi's birthday nearing in another weeks time. This time Deepak wanted to celebrate it in a small manner calling at least naya anant , their frinds and also mohan and rama. Somehow mohan and meetha too had a feeling ki everything would turn out well. He too wanted to invite bajpais but was not having the courage to go there and invite them. Navya had promised that she would be there in mishra house a two days before the day …..

Anant was usual returned frm office…. And knocked the door. He waited ..but no one opened the door. He was then about to open the door ..that his phone rang….it was navya. He answered back but heard ritz's voice from the other side….. anant navya ghar pe nahi hai… tum seedhe yahan aa jao…navya ke ghar pe….

Anant: kyun ..kya hua,,,? He knew navya wont go anywhere without telling him.

Ritz: kuch nahi ..kah rahi hu na…yahan aa jao. Itne mei meetha ma ne phone liya…wo anant…kuch nahi..tum yahan aao …tumse kuch kahna hai…pareshaani kuch nahi hay..

Anant was totally confused thinking navya didn't cal him today at office ..the whole day and moreover he was busy with his work…and moreover rakesh sir had put forward the idea of him going abroad so that the project would move faster….

Anant too wanted to tell this to her s o he immediately took an auto to reach bajpai mansion…shayad navya jaldi gayi hogi daadi ke birthday pe…parson jo hai..kitna kaam hoga..bhool gayi hogi muje phone karna ……

When he reached there , all were present..ritz appy renu di ma daadi …..and papa too.

He was all confused…papa ka office hai na..aaj jaldi aa gaye honge and he wished and took blessings and sat in the hall. His eyes searched for sumone who was not seen anywhere…….. why ritz had a small giggling laugh in her face and appy too ..she was giggling but trying to hide it in front of anant….

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hehe navya is gonna become mumma :D am i right :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice..r u updating the rest now...you have not written anything😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was wonderful di, but u stopd @ intrestng point.. waw loving it.. anya gng to abroad, tht wuld b great.. and d best part was anya's pure love n lovely convo in d starting.. juz loved it to d core.. ❤️ plz dnt keep us waiting more n do continue soon.. and i juz loved d way u handled shagun n rama's wthout bring it to notice of those bajpayis.. 👏
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: son_s

nice..r u updating the rest now...you have not written anything😕

i didnt get u ..will update within two days time..i am going out now..so cant stay here for long...

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