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Posted: 13 years ago
wow smitha great going lovd it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowiii lovely convo of Anya... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dee update was awesome.. waitin eagerly for next update <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for liking the post i am continuing as i got some spare time. will be a bit busy for next two to threedays so please here it goes...
Next day morning anant went to office early…. Navya had asked for the kids to come for the classes a bit early and she too left for outside thinking sumthing. In the mean time in bajpai house om and mohan were in busy discussion it seemd that they were going sumwhere for a conference. Their bags were being packed and sugantha was preparing om's bags and at that time rama bhabhi came from outside after a small purchase and also joined in packing the bags…..

Here navya was on the way back to home.. ki she got a call from anant….

Anant: navyaa tum kahan ho? Kahan chali gayi thi……

Navay : anant mein ghar wapas jaa rahi hoon …bazaar gayi thi rickshaw nmein hoon. Par tumhe kaise patha ki mei ghar pe nahi hoon?

Anant: mein ghar pe hoon navya... meine apni chavi se chola... tum jaldi aao muje.. nikalna hai abhi...

Navya: she thought anant is leaving today it self, ussne to kal ki meeting ke baare mein kaha tha...she felt a little sad. But told ok anant mei aa rahi hoon

Anant: tek hai jaldi aao mei wait kartha hoon

Jab tak navya pahunch gayi thi, anant bags pack karke neeche pahunch gaya tha. Navya jab auto se uttree anant bag leke usske paas pahunnchaa. Navya was surprised to see anant in such a hurry. She was hurt a little.. as she wil miss him for the next few days but thinking about anant's job she was calm. Anant; navya tum kahaan rah gayi thi.. chalo jaldi chalo….. and held her hand and walked towards the other side of the road..

Navya : arey anant …. Ek minute ye sabziyon ka bag to ghar mei rakhne do aur mera dresses bhi ghar mei hai..

Anant: tum wo sabji saath mei le lo tumhare ghar pe dedenge…. Dresses meine le liya hai

Navya was not able to understand why anant was in such a hurry…… she to felt haa ab tho ye bag ghar pe lake kya karungi.. and folowed anant.

Anant went near a car and kept the bag inside , he asked for the bag in navya's hand and kept that too inside.navya silently gave him the bag and was looking at him.

Anant: oh ye gaadi dekh rahi ho…..ye sir ne diya aaj meeting pe jaane ke liye, drivier tha par meine mana kar diya, kuch der driving karne ko man kar raha tha issliye….

Navya heard this silently and nodded her head….and sat inside….

Anant also seemed to be in a hurry. He closed the door and drove off. Navya tried to hide her tears in front of him. But anant was noticing it but didn't make a comment on it . he drove a bit fast

Navya: anant itni bhi kya jaldi hai

Anant: navya wo meine tumhe bathaya than a, colleage ki shaadi ke bare mei aaj night ko reception hai tho meine socha ki ussme attend karke phir chalthe hai….. issliye…

Navya : she remembered anant telling about it the previous day ,, but couldn't digest his absence for two to three days.

But made up her mind in mean time ki nahi rooungi….

They reached navya's flat… and navya wanted to avoid the direct convo so she went fast to her house. Anant too followed her as he felt she may cry…..

Meetha ma opened the door , navya walked in and by this time anant too reached …

Meetha : arey tum dono.. aaj kya hua…

Anant: kuch nahi maa (walking in) …….aaj jaa raha hoon meeting pe tho soccha bathake jaoo.

Itne mei daadi bhi aa gayi.. she too was wondering ….

Meetha : acha tho navya aaj se yahan hai

Dadi was also happy to see them, navya suddenly thought her bag was in the car……

Navya: mei bag leke aathi hoon .. gaadi mei hi hai...

Anant sudenly told... maa daadi wo aaj ... mei …..

Daadi arey bolo bhi kya hai…..

She understood navya was sad…. But when anant interrupted ….

Anant: daadi going near her.. wo meine navya ko kabhi kahi nahi leke gaya tho socha ki aaj apne sath leke jao… ek shaadi pe bhi jana hai.. mei akela kaise?

Daadi understood both oftheir minds… meeetha too was having a hidden smile in her. Navya was stunned when she heard it. She turned from the door as she was about to go down. Anant was looking at her with his naughty smile.

Navya was standing with moth opened …. She was not understanding what was happening there ….

Meetha maa and daadi gave a big smile at both of them , daadi: arey meri navya chalo, ab udaas math ho, mei tho samaj gayi thi ki tumhara chahara uttara kyun hai… par anant itna bad jatka dega patha nahi tha…

Anant; daadi … please …. Kneeling down to her

Daadi: koi baat nahi phir ek din rahenge…. Navya ko apne saath leke jaoo.. wo bhi yahi tho chahthi hai.. haina navya?

Navya couldn't look into anyone's eyes as she was feeling shy and all the more overjoyed..they both bid a gud bye to them and started off for their journey.

Navya: acha tho tum iiss liye nahi bathaya muje taaki mera chehraa dekh saku?

Anant: nahi navya aisi baat nahi hai… mei tumhe saath leke jaana chahtha tha par kaise ye sab nahi patha tha. Office ka kaam jo nikal aaya, phir baad mei shaadi ke bare mei socha tho laga ki hum saath challenge… mei kabhi tumhe akela chod saktha hoon kya?

Navya : leaned on his shoulder as he was the driving the car…..

Anant: aur jab rakesh sir ne gaadi di tho sach mei kush hua, ki issliye driver ko bhi cancel kar diya meine, sirf hum dono saath saath ……… put his left hand round her and kissed her forehead.

Navya was very happy she was not expecting this surprise from him. Anant was just happy more happy ki wo aaj navya ke saath ek drive pe jaa raha hai and will be able to make her world beautiful for her , he had planned something for her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
waaw di, aaj toh hamari lottery lag gayi, excellent update.. great going, it was like actualy hapening in frnt of my eyes.. lovd n enjoyd each n evry bit of it.. anya gng 4 a shadi, aln on a drive, so dreamy, loving it. waiting 4 next update di.. 😍
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome amazing lovely butiful RS GOING😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
www woaw amazing lovely 😳
awsome
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Posted: 13 years ago
both updates r awesom 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowiii lovely update n recurring updates haaan... hmmm thanxa load for ur amazing updates smitha😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashvin

wowiii lovely update n recurring updates haaan... hmmm thanxa load for ur amazing updates smitha😊

nothing special rashmi, had some time as next two days are holidays will be totally tied up at home with work
so just penned down...
waise yr update was too gud. loved it ... nice to see navya's reaction

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