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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow each and every part of the updt was awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowiii di fabulous update 👏
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wow..so sweet.. i wish ifff we had navya on air now...i badlyyy wish...😭
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I am following ur updates and Iam loving them but plz next time more ANYA scenes...
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aww shooo cuteee...really a lovely update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks to all for yr liking and comments , thanks to titli22, banfasha,momorockz,navya19,anyalover,anamika0,sravu.com,shibrah_rafaqat,rabia_shamya ,rashvin,richa_shamya,bharathi.ks,prince anant and all others...
i am continuing...
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Anant finished his works that had to be done ,navya too was feeling better , ek din kaise guzar gaya patha hi nahi chala. Raat ho chuki thi, they both had their food and anant made navya sleep on the cot. And he slept besides.. navya was feeling quite relaxed and ok now. Aankh bandh karne ki deeri thi neend apne aap hi aa gaya. Anant was also tired he too fell asleep soon.

Anant opened his eyes when navya gave him a hard shake: anant , anant utto na, der ho jayegi tumhe……

He saw navya standing near him even more fresh now. Anant looked towards the window sun was already out, he sat upright.

Navya tumne muje jagaya kyun nahi? Aur tum kab utti ?

Navya: tum soo rahe the aur meine socha tumhe baad mein jagaungi Kaam khtham karne ke baad. .kal itna kaam jo kiya.. tum bahut thak gaye the. Aisa kahke wo kitchen ki taraf bad rahi thi ki anant held her hand from back
Anant : tum ... teek tho ho na? ab bukhar kaissa hai. more concerned for her

Navya came and sat near him, ab bilkul bhi nahi hai, mei teek hu, tum jaldi fresh ho jao, office jana hai na? mei tumhare liye chaii lathi hoon

.she got up again……anant pulled her and made her sit on his lap.

Navya: ab ye kya anant….. tumhe sach mei der ho jayegi

Anant: hugged her by her waist : hone do, koi baat nahi …..

Navya : gave a staring look at him thinking again he is playing mazaak

Anant: tumhe yaad nahi , chaaii se pehle muje kuch chahiye…..

And moved his face towards her. She understood the notion of anant. But his hold was tight she couldn't escape and neither she wanted to. She just gave in for the kiss that he wanted. They were lost in their world for few minutes. Anant opened his eyes to see the blushing navya , he held her more tight : I love you……………..

Navya ; smiled with all the blushing and shyness she had ……. Luv you too she whispered in his ears ….. a swwet morning smile came into his face by hearing this

Navya then suddenly shouted in his ears : AB TUM READY HO JAO WARNA SACH MEIN LATE HO JAOGE….

Anant left his hold suddenly as the shout was too high he rubbed his ears , by then navya giggled and ran….

Anant: navya tum ye kahke he ran behind her, she ran to the kichen anant wanted to catch her, she turned round , nahi anant mei bhaag nahi sakthi….. saying this she again turned to the other side, anant was too close to catch her but skipped because of her sudden turn . she now ran towards the door , anant too follwed her he didn't want to give up……

Mere kaan ……. He told navya tumheaaj nahi chodungaa

Navya came near the door and opened it. Luckily it was not locked as she had opened it to get the milk packet in the morning. She came out giggling and was saying in between anant please anant please … nahi……

Anant too came out now , navay ran… but went and dashed the next door aunty who was cuming from the other side….

Anant suddenly halted sensing the situation.. navya to the aunty who was looking at ananat and navya surprised…..

Navya: sorry aunty wo mein…. She didn't know what to telll ……wo apko chot
tho nahi lagi she asked all of a sudden in her confusion

Aunty burst out laughing seeing both of them….. kuch nahi hua… tum log bhi na…..

Saying this she walked away smiling

anant too gave a smile . it didn't have much power as he was feeling embarrassed now…. He suddenly went in …….

Navya also slowly moved back and went in . anant went in and turned to look at navya. Navya came back of him and then closed the door. She looked at anant. She was wondering what anant wud say now…..

Anant looked at her and told in a very feeble voice….. rather no sound at all: he gestured … mein nahane jao?...

Navya looked at him and suddenly bursted out laughing…….

Anant: haso haso, muje kuch bhi sunayi nahi de raha…..itne zor se koi cjhillaatha hai kya….mein tumhe baad mei dekh lungaa

And he went to get freshened up. Navay was wondering as to what happened a few minutes back, she went to the kitchen thinking this………

Anant got ready in few minutes and started for office . navya got busy with her works at home and with kids. Their exams were near , so she decided to wind up the classes in another day or two.

Day went by very fast, it was almost 5 in the evening when navya go a call from anant:

Navya: haa anant bolo……..

Anant: navya tumhara sara kaam ho gaya na? mei aaj jaldi nikal raha hoon, hum daadi ko dekne jayenge… tum ready ho jao, mein I hour mein ghar pahunch jaaonga..

Navya was too happy to hear this. She too was longing to see daadi and moreover her house…….

Haa anant mei ready ho jaongi, aur maa ko phone bhi kar doongi.

Anant: teek hai… and he kept the phone..

As said anant came on time and they both left to navya's house. Meetha maa opened the door when the bell rang, they wee also happy to see anya ……

Navya ran and hugged daadi; daadi aap kaisi ho?

Daadi was happy to see her pothi back. She too hugged back. Meri beti kaisi hai…..

Deepak had also come early from office as meetha had informed him about anya's visit.

Al were happy to see them.

They all sat together in the hall. Harsh too came home from his cricket coaching…..

Gudiya was playing around…. Renuka di an d meetha maa went to kitchen to get the food ready as navya had promised thay wud have dinner from there.

Daadi: anant tum ab teek ho na?

Anant came and sat near daadi : han daadi hum ab teek hai….. Kanpur mein sab teek hai na?

Daadi: haan mei thodi pareshaan thi kuch din par ab sab teek hai wahan. Chachaji bhi teek hai

Par meetha ne muje san bathaya , tum log is tarah….

Anat : hume kuch bhi nahi hua daadi,, bas sab teek ho jayega…. Aap phikar math keejiye.. daadi smiled back , as she knew anant will make things right , she had that belief in him.

Daadi : waise hamari pothi tumhe acha khana khilathi hai na? …… aur tumhara khayaal rathi bhi hogi aakhir hamari pothi hai…

Anant: haa daadi rakhthi hai (giving a sigh) kabhi kabhi muje aisa lagtha hai ki mei koi chotta bacha hoon , aur wo meri teacher hai…..

Navya was getting angry hearing all this from kitchen as she was helping mom. Anant knew navya was hearing this.

Daadi too gave a laugh. By this time all the women had made the table ready for dinner…..

All gave a laugh seeing navya frowning at anant……..

They came and sat and had their dinner together. All were talking and discussing things …

Daadi; anant tum log aaj yahio raho , bahut din huye hai na? navya ko bhi dekhkar….

Anant looked at daadi and at navya . navya too was looking at anant . though she was feeling angry a few minutes ago, it vanished seeing him smiling and talking with others.

She didn't want to say no to daadi.

Anant suddenly remembering sumthing; daadi aaj nahi tho chalega? Parsoon muje ek meeting ke liye jaana hai, do theen din lagenge… mein navya ko yahi chodke jatha hoon , teek hai?

Daadi: was also happy to hear this. Teek hai, wahi teek hoga? Haina deepu?

Deepka: haan maa, muje koi problem nahi hai, ye donon kabhi bhi yahan rah sakthe hai.

They were all happy……but navya was too confused now. Ye kab ki baat hai . anant ne meeting ke baare mei kuch nahi bathaya tha. Aur aaj achanak , shayad office se kaha hoga aaj. But stil navya was having a double mind.

Daadi: teek hai navya tum aaogi na? waise akele wahan kya karogi? Hamare saath rahegi

She didn't want to say anything to make daadi upset. She smiled and nodded back.

Anant understood that smile was not a fuly agreeing smile.

He too knew what was in navya's mind but couldn't clarify her at that moment.

They all had dinner and anant and navya too bifd a gud night to them and stated for their house. Deepak dropped them back home… all the way home avya was confused thinking when anant is going where and all……

Deepak was busy talking with anant and he too was giving reponses but was loking at navya in between as he knew she was a bit moody then, navya was half listening and half in her confusion.

They opened their door and entered in. Deepak had already left leaving them down their apartment. Anant noticed navya , she was a bit worried….

Anant: navya kya hua….. meine meeting ke bare mei nahi bathaya iss liye naraaz ho…

Navya: looking at anant: kite din ka meeting hai anant?

Anant: came near her: navya muje aaj hi patha chala office se koi conference hai aur phir kuch delegates se milna bhi hai project ke bare mein…… meine socha ghar aake batha doonga par wahan daadi ne rukne ki baat kit ho laga ki tumhe wahi chod du… tumhe bhi acha lagega..

Navya : haaa daadi ke saaath bahut din ho gaye na? she smiled to him. She didn't know why her mind was too confused ……. Anant ke bina ek din bhi…. Kya karu daadi se nab hi nahi kah sakthi aur office ka kaam hai anant ko jana bhi hoga

Anant: navya mei jaldi aa jaonga, waise ek colleage ki shaadi bhi hai. .wo hbi attend karna hai.. raasthe mei hi hai, patha nahi ja paonga ya nahi, par agar meeting nahi that ho.. tumhe bhi…. Annt too didn't want to leave her, but this work was important for him as it was his proposal which was selected .

Navya: koi baat nahi anant muje patha hai, papa bi jab aise jaathe the tho hum hi rahthe the ghar pe…… nad she went to change her clothes.

Anant knew navya was disturbed might be she didn't want to hurt anyone so she is saying so but the thought of staying away from each other was just unbearable for them. He too wished .. kaash muje koi raastha mil jaatha navya ko saath le jane ke liye….. par wo wahan … akeli .. jab mei meeting mei hoga tho……, par navya ko bhi ek change ki zaroorat hai yahan se………..

😊😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Excellent update di, great going loved it, very wel written.. anya's early mrng nok jok was juz lovely n casual.. loved it..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dr👏
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Anya's lovey and sweet world😳loved their heart to heart connection and your way of writing.please update soon

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