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superb update smitha... seems so real...

Loved it , loved how Anant spoke, explained the situation to Deepak , liked Anant's dialogues. Anant's frustrations and anguish have been given complete justice by your mighty pen. The family dinner scene is also beautiful, shall wait for the next update.

superb di i loved the dialoges

very well writtn...ahh anothr bashan by majnu...luvd it...cntiue soon

😊 thank u all for yr comments. i was actually wondering that whether it would turn a bit dull but thanks for liking it. thank u all @ malini , banfasha, divya, anyalover, rashvin, parmazone, crazzymoon, neha, prince_anant, rashi, aishwarjya, anamika, seenavas, asihaseen, xchanzzx, momorockz, shibrarafaqat, richa_shamya .titli22... thanks for all yr likes and comments. hope i didnt leave anyone...

dee really cute.. loved the dialogues.. 👏i don think it is boring... its quite diff but i loved the update..😃

Originally posted by: samrutha

dee really cute.. loved the dialogues.. 👏i don think it is boring... its quite diff but i loved the update..😃

thank u samrutha... for this😊

(i know this time too its a bit long and boring as i wanted the story to move further...want to see them as papa mama soon ,so had to make it around like this...ande tamattar jo bhi ho ...plz...)

They al had food and deepak and meetha got ready to leave

Anant too was ready beforehand.

Deepak: arey navya, kya tum hamare saath ghar chal rahi ho? Bahut din hue naa

Navya: wo papa, mei kuch bachon ke liye tution le rahi hoon, wo aayenge abhi.

Deepak: haa meetha ne bathaya tha.

Anant : iss liye muje tassali hota hai ki navya din bhar akeli nahi rahthi, wo bahut ache bache hai.

Deeepak: meri beti vakkai mei bahut badi ho gayi hai. (to anant) teek hai, muje apne bachon par barosa hai.. agar tum logon ko kissi bhi cheeez ki zaroorat pade tho

Anant ; interrupting'haa papa, zaroor mangenge. Aapko batayenge bhi. Please phikar math kijiye.

Deepak was more confident now, he knew these generations of today do have the capacity to come up in llife par phir bhi bajpai khaandaan ke logon ke bare mein sochkar unhe dar lag raha tha. Par anant aur navya ke housley dekhkar wo sambhal gaya. Meetha maa was also happy to see deepak's reaction. She too bid a bye to navya and anant too came out.

They left together, navya was about to close the door she heard navya navya ruko'.

It was anant . before she could realise he came fast to her , held her hand, pulled her to him at the door and kissed on her cheek. I love you'''

Navay was stunned : anant ' tum ye '.. papa aur maa ' tum unke saath gaye the' phir kaise

Anant: arey ohhh! And kissed her other cheek .papa aur maa ko nahi patha. Mein chaltha hoon. Tum kush ho na

Navya: giggled pagal ho tum. Haaan bahut kush hoon, papa ko dekhkar. I love u too.

Anant smiled as if he got his gift and ran back and turned at her : chaltha hoon, shaam ko'.bye

Navya gave a sweet smile to him and felt happy too. She never thought papa would react like this after his phone convosersation from Kanpur. She went in and was busy with her work.

Days passed by, a month a passed anant started getting his salary. Baba knew all the happenings but this time didn't or couldn't interfere much as he knew Mr rakesh and also that they never made good company, so he was sure, his influence wont work over him. Deepak and meetha were much more worried about renu now, but she was stern on her decision and was continuing her work. Harsh was busy with his studies and dadi was still in Kanpur. Everyone at bajpai house were worried for anant but the news that he is fine and doing a job was a relief for only a ew 'nimmi and mohan. Rest all had the feeling that navya was the root cause of everything.

Mohan and nimmi used to have their share of talks with anant and navya through phone.

anant was happy in his job. Within a short span of time, he was able to make his mark there. He was appreciated by everyone at the office for his qualities and working nature. Mr rakesh too was impressed . rather more impressed that anant was more free to him now. Anant learned a lot from his new office.he got a new phone and they even got new things needed for their house, furnitures ,dresses , painted the house and made their home a sweet house. The business of ranbir ritz and appy was also picking up. They too were busy held up in their works that they didn't have time to meet often, it was all winded up in phone calls.

Here navya was getting busy day by day due to her classes as the exams of the kids were nearing. Stil she never used to move away frm her duties towards anant.

Taking care of him was her main work. Both of their days started and ended in eachothers arms. They had started their life together a new life that had only happiness moving round them.

Exams of the kids were nearing and navya had to spent more extra time on them that at times her attention moved away frm him. Anant had noticed it but felt that ki ye kuch dino ke liye hai, phir bhi jab bhi wo office se aatha , whenever he saw navya busy with classes at he felt little annoyed but never showed it out.

It was a very tough day in office for anant , that he was held up with meetings and discussions and had no time for food even. But he was very happy as his project got approved and all were appreciating him. He didn't tell navya about it , instead thought of a surprise'

He returned home tired' navay was with the kids' she had been to market and came and prepared food and sat with the children. This over work had made her also too tired

anant: kya navya abhi tak khatham nahi hua.

Navya: anant bas kuch der mein ho jayega.

Anant; haan jaldi karo, muje tumhe kahi leke jaana hai. Aade ganhte me ho jayega na?

Navya : haan ok. Ho jayega.

Navya went to her work and anant got fresehened up and went to kitchen. He took the food and had it. And was waiting for navya to finish. but navya was immersed in sum problems which the kids asked and completely forgot to wind up faster. In that tension she even forgot the time.When she finished it was late. Anant was reading a book. The kids left

Navya came up to anant: anant tumne khaana khaya na? tum kahaan jaane ki baat kar rahe they?

Anant didn't look at navya, he was angr with her now. He had a plan of taking her out as his proposal got approved he was given full incharge of the works from then on .but as navya didn't turn up, he felt too sad. Moreover he had booked a ticket for movie.

But navya never knew this as anant had planned it as a surprise for her.

Navya: anant bolo na, kya baat hai. navya was now feeling that anant was angry. She looked the time. She knew she was late.

Navya: sorry anant, kahaan jana tha, chalo ba chalthe hai.

Anant: tumhe jaana hai tho jao. Muje nahi.

Anant didn't look at her. He turned to other side. Navya was like crying but she controlled her tears. She knew it was a mistake frm her but she didn't knew what to do.

navya: anant ab bhi chal sakthe hai na? bahut raat nahi hua hai.

anant: kya ab theatre mei picture tumhare liye alag lagayega. Socha tha surprise doonga but''anant got up angrily and went near the window.

Navya: anant sorry , mei nahi jaanthi thi'. Please ab sirk paanch din bache hai exams ke liye'. Uske baad to free hoongi na (navya was feeling tired ,she was not feeling well too)anant didn't notice her tiredness, might be his excitement and anger didn't make give him feel that navya was too tired.

Anant: ab sorry kah kahke mera kaan math khao. (his phone rang) it was ranbir. He told that he was waiting for anant downstairs as he was going somewhere and had to meet anant for sum work.

Anant: mai neeeche jaa raha hoon, ranbir se milne. Tumhe jo kaam karna hai karo.

Navya felt very much depressed . she sat in the corner and started crying. Time kab nikal gay patha hi nahi chala. When anant returned after few minutes , he found naya sleeping on her lap with her legs folded in the corner. His anger was in his mind for a moment but suddenly remembered the situation how he left navya.

Anant: navya utto, chalo ab usse bhool jao. He called frm kitchen drinking water.

Navya didn't open her eyes. Anant called again.. navya utto

He felt why she's not getting up, went near her and shook her by holding her hands.

It was quite hot. He touched her forehead, she was having high temperature. He tried to call her but she was sleeping soundly.

Anant: mein kya karu, khhaa ma khhaam uspe gussa kiya, and shook her

Navya opened her eyes but was too sick to get up.

Navya: anant mei bahut thak gayi hoon thodi der so jaoongi tho teek ho jaongi

Anant: nahi navya, tumhe tho bukhar hai, mei dawayi leke aatha hoon, he stood up, and wanted to go, but leaving her' he was confused.

He got dressed and too a shawl and gave to navya ,, chalo doctor ke paas chalthe hai'

And slowly made her get up and made her walk...

He took her to the doctor who was there in the next street and got medicines and reached back home. He made her lie on the cot and gave her the medicines . navya was having high temperature that she didn't even feel like talking , she looked at him. He knew she was saying sorry to him , her eyes were having tears''.

Anant leaned towards her, mei tumse naraaz nahi hoon . tum so jao. Sorry muje bolna chahiye. He held her hands and lifted it and kissed it . she gave a small smile with her drowsy eyes and slipped off into sleep

Anant was sitting near her , he was looking at his sweetheart. Moved the hairs that covered her face.

Anant: (in his minds) tum jab teek ho jaogi tho tume ek bada sa surprise doonga. jitna socha tha usse zyaada. Jitna aaj sathaya usse bhi zyaada'''..