how it would hav been so??

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Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Guyzzz ...
Spend a moment vth me...
One of ma favorite tracks was anya started living independently,i thought it wud gve d visualization f how d true love succeeded in d real life too.
so im giving an xtension to the track here...
plz pardon me if anybody has already posted interestng xtensn to this track...
First f all i am thanking neelima (chechi/ di) for inspiring me unkonwgly....
I am not at all good at narrating ... bt... im so sorry for d mistakes...
how he would hav spent his first salary.. ?????

sun rises...
Anya's flat
Anant laying on the bed,golden rays of sun is falling his face,it makes him more brighter,he also shines ...He pulled the sheet over his face,and turned a little...
Meanwhile Navya Called anant
Navya: Anant... get up...its too late already.. did u forget about the morning shift..???
Suddenly anant jumbed frm d bed,looked at d watch near by him..
and went for refreshing..
Navya is busy in d kitchen...
Later
Anant is ready to leave...Navya gave him d tiffin
Anant vth dat naughty smile.come closr to navya ...she kissed on his cheek...the happy anant did d same...
Navya smiles. door shut down...
Anant's office:
Heis busy wth his work... later he was called by d manager...
manager's cabin
Manager :Mr.Anant ,we r happy vth ur performance
anant smiles
Manager contd: Here is ur first salary...(And gave it hm)
He was very much excited and said thank u many tyms...
Returnd to d seat..
he is very much excited couldnt concentrate on his job too...
he stared at d clock.it seems movng slwly..He planned to surprise Navya...
(he found out the way to surprise her...)

He left the office,
getting dusk...
Anya's falt:
Navya is waiting for anant...staring at the clock,
Navya ( asking herself) : where is anant... why is he so late...????
Calling bell had rung...
She haply moved to d door... suddenly she stood dere.. decided to play trick on him for being late...
she pretended to b angry and opend d door...
Navya's eyes showing that she is surprised more...
Handsome ,charming anant with a bunch of red roses ...(our theme song in bg)

he enterd...
Navya: Anant... anant...
Anant gave d gift to her..
She wz very happy vth d chocolate,and d special gift...
She unveiled the special gift...
That was d lovely group photo f navya famly togth vth anya

Navya hugged anant ...
Navya... thank u so much anant...thank u... why dis day is so special...???
Anant: (emotionally) This is very special day for us navya... I can stand on ma own foot
Navya... we can live independently... I got ma salary today...
Navya is also excited so muchhh...
she hugged him again ...
Anant: navya ... I wil make u happy..
Navya: anant... If u r vth me nothng can make me more happy... really u r the precious gift of mine given by god...
her eyes filled with tears..
Anant: Navya...u knw i am d most happiest person nw... i want to make dis day very special...
Navya gets d meaning... (theme song in bg)
The situation turned to romantic ...


( sorry.. today's episode over... 😊)
romance on nxt day 😊)

can u plz gve ur valuable suggestions nd comments... surely try to improve nxt tym..


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sruthinavyarock thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
superb dear.your narration is so gud dat we can visualize the scenes.keep it up.👏
Edited by sruthinavyarock - 13 years ago
riasaran thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
very nice. i really wanted more flat scenes in the show. but thanks for ur imagination.
momorockz thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
lovely waiting 4 next update
coolfathema thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Good post yaar,,,,,,,👏 great job,,,,,,
soumyakerala thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
nice keep it up .😊
waiting 4 nxt update 😊
priyanka.710 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Its too good dear.kash aisa hi hota! Keep posting beautiful imaginations like dis:)
Parmasone thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
nice imagination :) me too missing the flat days
ragzs158 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
nyc one 👏 w8ng fr nxt😊

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