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hello navyan's/shamyan's..hmm..the title sounds quite different na..its a very romantic novel by wic i read recently..but dont worry it has gt nothin to do wit my RS..just a title i thot was better fr ma sequence..k..ths is an emotional RS..fr the first tym m writin n portrayin u the emotional side of me..coz as u all knw ma ff and the RS's till date had only three things in it..Romance..romance n just romance..so ths tym i made an attempt to write an emotional but yet romanctic RS..Hope u guys like it..
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(bg music..kal ho na ho..heart beats..)
all around is dark..i can see nothin..just a barren world..wer m all alone..i cannot feel anyone..nor any of of ma senses are with me..no i din't wanted this..i want to live..i want to speak up to my family..i want to hang out wit ma frenz..most importantly..i want to feel the man..the love of ma life..my husband..ohhh!!he might be just soo soo alone witout me..i need him..n he needs me more..yeah ths is wat turnin around her mind..yes navya's mind..she is unconcious..she is sleepin tyt..so tyt tat its almost 11 months she hadn't woken up..
navya had met wit a very serious accident..she was in a very critical condition n now she is in coma fr almost 11 months..sleepin in the ICU with the ventilator keepin her alive..
a man then enters the room wit a flower bouquet with full of white n red roses..ya he knew she loved roses a lot..he place the bouquet on the table beside her..she loved the fragrance of roses n he thot she cud sense them atleast..he sits beside her..holds her hand..n tears flow washin his face..a tear drop falls on her hands..
aww!!!she knew it was him..she doesn't need her eyes to see him..she cud just feel him wit his touch or maay be just his breadth..she screams within her mind..'i want to wake up god..my love needs me..my husnband needs me..i want to love him ..kiss him..n caress him..plss let me goo..plss'
ananth says 'open ur eyes darlin..i bought ur favorite roses fr u..the white n red ones..i knw u love them..come on wake up n kiss the flowers..'he is constantly cryin..his heart is weak anymore...no he cant wait any more..he needs her..he needs her love..he wants to hug her...wants to kiss her..want to feel every bit of her love n her body..he curses the day..tat black night..he had taken her out fr a surprise candle nyt dinner..she din't wanted to go out anywer..she was tired of the house wrk tat nyt..but but it was me..who forced her..'why??'he screams out loud..he hits his hand to the wall wic tares his skin..'why??'again he scrempt..n he started sobbin like a lost baby..who has lost his mother's hand in the crowd of an exhibition..he just felt like as if he was lost in the world..the darkness had swallowed him..he tried to escape..but he lost..
the doc entered into the ICU..the doc was a family friend too..he knew hw much ananth loved navya..the doc also had tears in his eyes..he approached ananth..
doc 'take care of urself ananth..hav faith in god..i knw hw much u love ur wife..but its all time tat can heal ur pain..'
ananth 'wat more tym??'he is still sobbin..'its almost 11 months..hw long will i c my love..my life in ths pathetic condition..it hurts yaar..it ain't easy..n my house condition..its gettin more n more worser..my family is thinkin of ma second marriage..they aren't bothered abt navya..they just hav those bloody supersticious beleif tat she is today in ths condition coz she was the bad air around me..n now she tuk all the probs comin my way on herself..tats it..wat nonsense is tat??hw can i think of someone else other than my navya..how??'he is frustrated..he is sobbin constantly..he holds his head n falls on the couch..
yes the bajpayees had decided to get ananth marry again..as they beleived tat navya wud never return..they decided themselves fr his 2nd marriage..witout askin a word wit ananth..
ananth fr days sat next to navya in the hospital waitin fr her to open her eyes..he read her favorite novels fr her..he daily ordered rose bouquets fr her..he hardly had food..or even water..he prayed to god evry moment to wake up navya..he loved her soo much tat he cudn't get anyone else in his life other than navya..he knew only navya cud handle him..she was the only source fr his livin..he knew she is breathin n tats the reason his heart is still beatin..he knew his love is strong enough to get thru ths tough situation..yes it was almost 20 days ananth din't bother to go to his house..its here..beside navya he found peace..he gazed her face day n nyt..he kissed her hand every now n then..he silently shed tears fr her..now he too feared tat he may lose her..he just slept next to her on the same bed lyin his head on her chest..huggin her..tears rolled on his face n her chest was wet now.. ..it was mid 3:00 A.M..he had fallen asleep after real long days as he was lyin on her chest comfortably..
navya was feelin every bit of her husbands tears..she was battlin in two worlds of life n death..she was battlin wit god..god said 'its done..u will hav to leave ananth..there is no way left anymore..' but she protested against god..'no..no..noo!!i will not cum wit u..i am still very young..n y u need me..??hu??' god said 'coz i love ppl who hav lots of love within them..i need love coz its lackin within me these days..' navya said 'ohh!!hw can u be soo selfish..u r almighty..u r our parent..our saviour..then hw can u play wit ur children like ths..just think of my husband..keep ur hand on ma heart..u ll feel the pain he is goin thru..he is cryin constantly..he is loosin strength..u take my breadth away..then u ll take the soul out of him..at a tym u ll be the murderer of two innocent lives..wat hav we done..to get such a punishment huh??we never hurted anyone..nor we ever wished bad fr anyone..then y??y such a punishment fr us..??' she scrempt wen she said this n she was sobbin helplessely...god felt her pain..ofcourse he is our creator..hw can he hurt his children fr long..he weeped with her..n said 'i m proud of myself...she luked in surprise..'yes' said god..'i m proud coz i created beautiful hearts like urs..i gav the hearts to feel love..to feel pain of losin ur loved one..to feel every emotion tat cud possibly exist..it was a test my child ' he said..'test of ur love..ur husband's love..i just thot tat love had vanished from ths cruel world..but u both proved me wrong..m happy tat love still exists in ths world n true love will soon conquerthe world n again n make it a beautiful place to live..u r free today..go live ur life..live ur love..n i will live within u..'
suddenly navya's breadth was high..her hands moved a bit..her senses wer reactin..ananth felt it too...he woke up suddenly..he was surprised n happy..for a while his life was back..his heart was pondering..he yelled fr doc..the doc heared him n came in ther..ananth said 'she is respondin..she is respondin..'tears of happiness agin in his eyes..the doc ananlysed her..n yeah!! doc said 'finally ..she is back..ananth ur love won..god lost the fyt..she is back frm her coma..'ananth was smilin..laughin..a mixed emotion of happiness n relief..he said 'i knew it..i knew she wud never leave me lonely..i tld u..i tld u she ll be fyn one day..n now..now..' he just hugged her..he was sobbin..he kissed all over her face..she slowly opened her eyes..finally..finally she made it..!!after such a long wait..she saw the man whom she loved immensely..the man who loved her selflessly..she cupped his face..they luked into each other's eyes..awww!!!such a relief their hearts felt..it had been almost a year she dint luk into his deep brown eyes..but not a difference!!she still saw the same love n care fr her in his eyes..she smiled..he luked at her lips..the smile playin ther..ohhh!!so much he waited to see tat smile wic lit his world..he finally felt darkness vanishin in the sea n the sun raisin..bringin back the sunshine of his life..
they had lost words..all they knew is lukin into each other's eyes,weep n again smile..poor god he too lost the battle of love...
ananth 'i knew u wud come back to me again..i knew our love wudn't go in vain'
navya 'ya..ma heart is safe with u ananth..then hw can it stop beatin huh??' she smiles...they again hugged each other...they kiss so passionately as if this was their last kiss..so much passion n so much love...
ananth ' let me cal our families tat ur back to normal..n they better keep their stupid plans away frm me anymre..'
navya 'plans??wat plans?'
ananth 'yeha!!they thot of my second marriage..'
navya 'wat??ur second marriage??n wer u ready fr it??(angrily)
ananth ' hmm..yeah..i jus thot i had a chance to fall in love fr the second tym..'(he smiles..u knw tat baby smile)
navya (she pulls him closer by his coller..)'so u think love can happen twice huh??'
ananth 'ofcourse it can happen twice..it happened to me too..'
navya stares at him confused
ananth 'yeah!!it happened to me today..a beautiful lady was sleepin fr soo many months makin me wait to just luk into her eyes..n finally today she woke up n broke the chains of pain tat had caught me..today lukin into her eyes i fell in love all over again..yes i fell in love fr the second tym wit the same lady love of ma life..LOVE CAN SURELY HAPPEN TWICE...'
as he said so..there was soo much of love n yearnin fr her in his eyes..those words wer magical..but he wasn't playin wit words..his words reflected his heart..his eyes spoke up wat his soul wanted to..tears rolled out of her eyes..she knew she was the most luckiest lady on this earth..her love her husband loved her soo soo immensely..tat no one ever cud match his love..she knew he was truly..madly n deeply in love with her..as so was she..
he cupped her face..leaned on her n pressed his lips on her's..the kiss was very gentle n soft..they wer soo much in their kiss tat they almost lost the breadth..so they backed out to handle their breadth..smilin..lukin at each other..tears still in their eyes..he touched his forehead to her's..n said
"I LOVE U BABY..THANX FR MAKIN ME FEEL HOW IT IS TO FALL IN LOVE FR THE SECOND TYM.." n both smile..wit their eyes too smilin..
n yeah this tym GOD was blushin too..nd was soo very happy with his two love birds..
my thought:'Love is not just about smiles,happiness,romance n beautiful moments...Its also about pain,sorrows,fear of loosin ur loved one's..PAIN ALWAYS COMES IN HANDY WITH LOVE..they cannot be seperated..all u can do is watevr is the situation just dnt stop lovin n losin hopes...
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K..i hope i made u guys cry wit this emotional romantic journey..hope u guys like it..make full use of the like button n ya imp do comment on ma first ever emotional write up..joothe chappals also accepted..hope m nt soo bad at ma emotional write up..
Thank u..
**Neethu**
Anupamaa
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