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Posted: 13 years ago
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ufff appuuu 🤗 big hugs & kisses for u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Navya breaks eye lock & start searching something….

A: kya dhund rahi ho?

N: Alarm clock..

A: Kiyu?

N: Alarm dena hai… subah jaldi uthna hai na… dekhona, Yha ek vi alarm clock nahi hai..

A: ek kaam karo tumhari cell phone pe Alarm set kaar do..

N: haan… thik kaha.. Kaha he meri celll then she start searching her cell & suddenly she see that her cell is on bed side table… which is beside Anant's.

Navya is abt to tell Anant for the cell But She see Anants eyes r closed… Navya scha Anant so geya….Navya Anant ko Jaagana nahi chahti…

Then Navya Dhire Anant ke body ke upor se uska haat baraya… to take the cell… lakin…suddenly Navyas hair fall on Anants face…

Anant open his eyes & see Navyas face on his face… he becomes speechless

N: sorry… vo mujhe… mujhe… cell lena tha… sorry…

Anant keeps his hand on Navyas lip… then keeps her hair slowly behind her ear… put his hand on Navya's back & Starts pulling her towards his face….

Navya closes her eyes…. Anant too…

Suddenly there is a knock on door….

Appy Ritz & Ranveer outside the Door…

Both Anant & Navya open their eyes..

A: Itni Raat… kya hua!

Navya feels shy… Vo Anant ki Ankhon se Ankhe chura liya…. & said, Mai dekhti hoon…

But Navy auth nahi paaya kiyuki Navya's hair stuck with Anants shirt button…

Navya is trying to be free… There r some more knock on the door… Anant starts helping Navya…

When Anant trying to get up… Anant cheek touches Navyas cheek… Dono Shama geya…

Finally they succeed but Navya ki mang se kuch sindoor Anant ka face pe lag geya…

Continuing….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Liana-

i love u di 🤗 thank u soo soo much for writting such wonderful scene 👏 u truely rock!!👍🏼😉 pls pls do continue soon waiting..😃



Thanks..
Kya karu... Aur Intezaar nahi ho rahi hai mujhe...

Isi liye lekhna poda...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super continue yeah😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow superb Yaar
Pls continue 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaopakhi



Thanks..
Kya karu... Aur Intezaar nahi ho rahi hai mujhe...

Isi liye lekhna poda...

i cn understand mera bhi kuch yehi haal hai & now i wonder di y u r not tht writter.. i really wish ther cv's to seek some help frm ur & silla's post!! u guys r amazing!!👏 👏👏 👏 di im jst drooling its magical 😳 but u need to edit ur post as u hv done 2 more post on pg 2 write it down evryone ll b able to knw&read
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
wow very nice
pls continue😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute and lovely continue continue dont stop plzzz
@liana dear u also a superb writer cvs ko tum se b thori advice leni chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Navya open the door'

Ritz, Appy, Ranveer in the room'

Ran: (to Anant) Sorry for disturbing u'.He wink

A: Rabveer, tu na! Hamesha kuch vi bol jati ho'

Ran: Mai Kuch vi bolti hoon? Mai?

A: Tu nahi to Aur kaun?

Ranveer holds Anants hand & Drag him towards other side of the room'

A: Kya kar rahi ho?

Ran: mai toh kuch vi bolti hoon' lakin tumhari gaal mai ye kiska Nissan hai?

A: Kiska?

Ran: Buddhu.. Navya ki Sindoor ka' Ranveer makes his face naughty..

A: Become surprised' Are! Ye kaise!

Ran: Anant, Hum loog baccha nahi hai' Aur tum vi Itna Sharmana mat' Aab tum dono Bf Gf nahi ho' pati patni ho'.

Anant feels Shy & go to wash room'.

Ritz, Appy: Are Anant kaha geya hai?

Ran: Vo avi ayega' ek problem hiya na isi liye geya'

N: Kya problem'?

Ran: kuch nahi' don't be tensed' vo avi aa jayega'

Than Anant comes & they celebrate Valentines day'.

After that Ritz, Appy, Ranveer go from the Room'

N: Anant, kya hua tha?

A: Kab?

N: Jab Appy Ritz Ranveer Aaya tha? Ranveer keh rahi thi kuch problem'

A: Nahi, kuch nahi' tum chodo na'

Navya comes close to Anant & looks at Anants eyes' Tum mujhse chupaogi?

A: Navya' kuch nahi' Baas Raanveer ne mera leg pool kar raha tha' kiyu ki'

N: kiyu ki?

A: Kiyu ki' tumhara mang ka Sindoor mere gaal mai lag geya tha'

Navya feels shy & Suddenly turns around'

Anant holds her hand & strat pulling her towards him'.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Wow amazing yaar plz do continue.

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