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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

thanks for adding my name yaar...well busy now but will soon come up with some nice anya dialogues...cya

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Kayalvizhi

@Kayal_SHAMYA

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Silla u r great dear... fabulous story...😃

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priyabiju

@priyabiju

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

@ Silla .. Silla amazing 👏👏👏 loved ur creation .. keep it up & continue plz

@ Zohr.. Zohr loved ur Big Bazaar break ... n the dialouges very intresting .. lldone 👍🏼

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

N: Ab yahaan se jaao Anant! Koi humein dekhega toh kya sochega?

A: Sochne do, jo bhi sochna hai! Apni hone waali biwi ke saath dressing room mein khada hoon, us par toh mer poora hak banta hai!

N (blushing): Nahi, jaao! (pushes him out of the room.

Navya is trying to untie the nada of her blouse, but is unsuccessful. She calls the attendant.

N: Jee, mujhe kisi ki hlp chahiye, yeh nada mujhse nahi nikal raha hai aur meri nanan abhi yahaan nahi hai.

Salesman: Jee, main abhi kisi ko bhejta hoon.

Salesman tries to find someone but all the salesgirls are busy. Anant sees and asks.

A: Kya hua?

S: Jee unhe kisi ki help chahiye nada nikalne mein, lekin unki nanan bahar hai aur humare salesgirls busy hai. Aap unke pati hain? Kya aap unki madad kar denge?

Anant laughs, gets a naughty thought in his head and agrees.

*knocks*

(Navya opens the door, not facing him or looking in the mirror. She's trying to fix her lehenga. Anant comes, locks the door behind, Navya startled)

N: Anant! Tum?

A: Koi salesgirl nahi tha, toh unhone tumhare pati hone ke hak se mujhe andar bhej diya!

N: Tum bahut badmaash ho! Ab sirf woh nada kheech lo, aur JAAO yahaan se!

(Pulls the nada, her blouse is loose now. He's mesmerised by her beauty, and she blushes. He pushes her against the wall, staring at her)

continue!

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Ritchelle good one , loved your imagination

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@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

thanks dear! 😊

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priyabiju

@priyabiju

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Nice one Richella ... like ur imaginary scenes .. well done

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ZOHR

@coolzohr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Thank's all 4 liking my break

n richella very nic imaginary scene

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ZOHR

@coolzohr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

BG [MY HEART GOES ON DHINTANA]

Thn Anant turn's her

n there is an eye lock scene n then hold's her hand n kisses it...

n thn kisses her on her forehead n thn cheek

Thn navya sys

Anant plss tum jaooo

Anant :nahiii

Navya:plss Anant

Anant :thik hai parr

Navya:par kya

Anant:tumhe meri ek shart manni hogi

Navya:woh kya.

[n notices a naughty smile on anant's face n cont..]

Anant tum kya ..mera matlab mujhe kya karna hoga?????

Anant :kuch zyaada nahi bas yeh hai ke tumhe mujhe ek kiss deni hogi aur bolna hoga

Anant I LOVE U..mai tabhi jaaonga

Navya blushes thn comes close 2 anant n goes 2 kiss thn again turn's her face 2ward's the other side[so tht she cant see anant's face]

Navya: Anant tum plss apni aankhe band karo mujhe sharam aarahii hai

[Anant does]

BG [PEHLA PYAAR HAI YEH PEHLA]

THN Navya turn's 2wards's him n kisses him on his forehead n thn cheek

n thn in his ear's she say's i love u Anant

n thn open the trail room dooor n pushes him out n closes the door

Anant out of the trial room holding his hand on both the spot's [fore head n cheek] where navya kissed him n smile's

AFTER sometime

Navya comes out n see's anant there thn

Navya:anant nimisha kaha hai abhi tak nahi aaee

Anant:woh apna dress lene gai thi na bohot tim hogaya kaha reh gayi

thn nimi enter's

NIMI:kyu navya kesa hai dress

Navya:perfect hai

Anant : tum dono ki dresses select hogayi

nimi:ha par abhi jewellary baki hai

Anant :thik hai woh baad me le lena abhi mujhe bohot bhuk laagi hai chalo koi restuarent me chalye hai..

Nimi:magar bhai ..

Anant:nahi mujhe bohot bhuk[hunger] lagi hai me ja raha hu

Navya:thilk hai anant hum pehle restaurant chalte hai baaki ki shopping baad me kar lenge

THN THEY LEAVE 4 THE RESTAURANT

AND AT THE RESTAURANT...

cont...

Edited by coolzohr - 13 years ago

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sassi

@silla

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Thank u thank u thank u guys fr encouraging me and appreciating me

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