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ZOHR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: -ritchelle-
awesome stuff guys! do keep posting!

thank u dear😳

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navyanavya19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

nic thread

emmy n silla loved ur imgination

zohr loved ur add break's

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sarini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

@Silla: Awesome update dear. Keep it up👍🏼

@Zohr: Loved the ad break. Specially the Ice-cream part😉

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navyanavya19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: navyanavya19
nic thread
emmy n silla loved ur imgination
zohr loved ur add break's

and zohr loved ur cream add's

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navyanavya19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: zara990
@Silla: Awesome update dear. Keep it up👍🏼

@Zohr: Loved the ad break. Specially the Ice-cream part😉

ya me 2 loved tht ice cream 1

Edited by navyanavya19 - 13 years ago

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ZOHR

@coolzohr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: kriya17
nice dialogues yaar...cool thoughts

thank'sss dear

n welcome 2 the corner

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ZOHR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Seenavas
Nice dear. Luvd it

thank uu😃

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Kayalvizhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Fabulous thread dear... keep going...👏👏👏

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sassi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Shopping of marriage

the college ends ...
anant drops navya at home
anant navya in car nera navay's building

Navya:bye ab college khatm hogya anant ab!!

in between anant says

ab hamari shaadi hogee tum hamesha hamesha ke lye mere paass aajaogee

navya smiles

NAvya:lekin anant mein college buhat miss kroongee

Anant:hmm miss tou mein bhi akroonga roz college ke bahanay tumhein dekhna ka mouka jo milta tha

both laughs then anant hugs navya

navya :anant ab mujhay chalna chahyay BYE

anant:bye miss u

navya:miss u tooo

navya reaches home as she entered home meeta says
aray navay acha hua tum aagayee a jaao jaldi se cahnge kro hamein bazaaar jana hai

navya:maan mein abhi thakee huee aayee hoon mujhay kahin nhi jana

in between nimsha calls navya: and says navya tum kahan ho

navya:abhi ghar puhnchee hoon

nimsiha:acha suno aaj na designer ke pass tumhara engagemnt dress lenay jana tha usnay call kya ke aakay selct krlo tayeejee ne kaha navya ko sath le jaao uski psand ka lena hai

navya:acha

nimisha:tum tayar hojaao mein tumehin pick krnay aarhi hoon 5mins mein

navya:ok tum aajao mein ready hojatee hoon
nimisha was waiting fr driver car ws goen wd some wrk
in eman whiel anant reach home he saw nimisha searching ehre and tehre

anant:kya hua tum darwazay pe kyun khadee ho

nimsha: woh driver pata nhi kahan chala gya hai late horhee hai navya kod esigner ke pass enaggemnt dress ka trial karana tha uff ab kya akroon

anant:is mein kya prob hai mein chalta hoon na sath mein chalo##

nimsha:hmm aap thakay nahi ho bhai

anant:nhi tou

nimsha :han kaisay tahkogay navya ko jo sath lkay jana hai
nimsha says bhai jaldi chalo is s e pehlay bd aajayay

both elaves to pck nvya

nimsha calls navya to cum dwn

navya saw anant and says anant tum tumhein tou market mein bezari hote hai nahin

anant:navay zyada batein amt karo betho tumhari seat khaali apdee hai

navya sits

nimsha: ehem ehem waisay aap donon ko ek doosray ke baghair sukoon nhi aata na

navya shy

anant in naughty way:mujhay tou aajata hai lekin shayad navya ko nhi aata

navya:jee nhi mr anant bajpayee aisee koi baat nhi hai

thy reach mall then

designer says navya fr the trial of dress

it was sharara and cholee with fulll of sikon wrk of green and red itw a sbeautiful dress

Navya:ok trial room kahan hai

d:on right navya goes teher

in mean while nimshs say sto anant:bhai aap yaheen ho na navya ke pass mein bas abhi apna dress smanay wali shop se pick krkay aatee hoon

anant:han lekin jaldi aana

nismha leaves

navya wore that dress and was looking beautiful with ehr open hairs in front..then she calls nimsha to show her whetehr fitting is right or not and also fr dupatta pining trial

Navay:nimsha zara yahan aana ek minute

anant hears

designrs says she is caling someone

anant;wait let me check

anant goes t nvya in taht trial room navya ws busy in amnaging ehr dress

anant gets stunned seeing hr in dress and goes closer to ehr frm back

navya:anant tum!

anant wwhil buting his face on navya's shoudler says:haan mein

navya;nimsha kahan hai
anant:kisi kaam se gayee hai

anant:navya buhat pyari lg rhee hoo navay ebcame shy

and ws pining dupata
anant says mujhay do mein help krdeta hoon

then anant help her in pining dupata in emna hwile he ws stiring ehr frm the miriror infrn tehy were standing navya was cntinusly blushing

then he faces navya towards him

and says:lagta hai mujhay abhi isi waqt tumse shaadi krleenee chahyay

navya blushes

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