*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54) - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Preet- Awww jaaneman! Thank you so much! I didn't wanna make this too long, cause too much drama is not so nice to read, and we're already being subjected to so much drama from the show! The fic is now gonna show some of the characters questioning their teachings and values and morals, which will eventually bring out the Nayi Soch in it. Chapter 12 is under construction, will try and finish it and send it off to Soumya ASAP! Thanks once again for loving the chapter, and sorry for making it soo short!

@Nams- Lets just say that Nikhil makes an appearance really really soon! 😉
Edited by -ritchelle- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Nikhil creepwa ki entry?😲 This is gonna be interesting😃 Our CVs have forgotten abt this track, sadly..*sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Nams- As of now I'm not too sure if he's gonna be a creep-wa or no, but he's gonna enter soon after the Meeta-Anant-Navya track finishes, and this track is gonna continue for another 2-3 chapters max!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely work ,Ritch👏
And kudos to Soumya as well...😃
My fav part was Gautam's dialogue "iski blouse dori mein kuch problem hai"..I was like ROFLing🤣
You are making full utilization of him being a pervert...😆He deserved this even in the show!!😆
Edited by Nidhi82 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Nidhi- Thanks a ton babee! I've tried to do justice to the characters, and I hope you all liked it! Stay tuned for more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritch. Loved the way you handled Meeta maa, avoiding the possible horrendous mud slinging...Renu di's talks were the perfect eye opener for Meeta maa...Navya CVs never considered such an angle even after showing Renu confronting Anant...Gautam entering the room with a girl & Anant realising Gautam's truth was really hilarious...
Looking foward for the next update...Thanks to you & Soumya for the brilliant work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey I'm new on the forum.just wanted 2 say gr8 job.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritchelleee!! 😃
This is one of the best-est FFs I've read so far about Navya. Sorry, I got a trifle too late to reply as I didn't have an idea about them but, believe me, as soon as I realized about them, I ran over (skipping half of last night's episode!) to read them. 😉
I wish something like this had happened in the show as well! You should have been in the CVs team, though. You write beautifully, each and every chapter has its own significance which I can't really express in words. They're so damn A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!! 😃
And especially AnYa's segments, they're too pure and lucid. Oh how I wish all this could have replaced the Kanpur fiasco! The show could have turned out entirely different than what we are witnessing and detesting today..
But no worries, your FFs are our savior! They at least don't make me hate the characters, but the one who's behind them 🤢

BTW, (Forgot to mention earlier!), you are an amazing writer. I'll definitely go into the technicalities in the following chapters. This post is just to say a BIG THANKS to you for such lovely FFs. Keep bestowing us with such AnYalicious chapters in the future! 😃

\Respect/

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You Go Girl! 👏
Edited by nicky99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome write up. Why could we not see this in the epi. ?

Loved the way you did not make Meeta ma anal like she was in the epi. Glad that Meeta Ma realized right away the goodness of Anant and the perverty Gautam.

Enjoyed the talk between Renu and Ma. See talks of any maturity level are missing in Navya.

Enjoyed reading it and cannot wait for the next part.

Thanks Ritch and Soumya. Kudos to you both.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Reshmi- Hey! Thank you so much for liking and appreciating my work, and that of Soumya's as well! Well I had been watching the earlier episodes of Navya a couple of weeks back and during Navya's birthday track Gautam was trying to get fresh with Ritz, that too in front of all the Mishras. So if he was so besharam there, I wanted him to do something even worse, cause he knows that not may people are exactly keeping a watch on him! Meeta and Renu needed that confrontation, cause that was the only way Meeta would begin to realise her folly, and it also paves the way for future drama and some other aspects of the plot. Glad to know you loved our work, and I hope you keep on liking the fic!

@shahz- Really sweet of you, thank you so much!

@Nicky- I had been waiting for your reply since yesterday, considering you left Navya midway to go and read this! Anyways, thank you so so much for your kind words regarding my fic, it means a lot to me! Well I was frustrated with the Kanpur track and the wedding track, so I decided to try and see what would happen if I had to write the story, and that's how my FF began! I had to put some AnYalicious scenes, I mean, you know the crap we're subjected to on a daily basis! Once again, thank you so much for the love and appreciation!

@Isha- Thank you so much for the appreciation! Meeta is actually in a state of denial; she can't seem to wrap her mind around the fact that she made such a big mistake in choosing a guy for her daughter nor is she able to accept the fact that Navya could have taken the right decision! As I mentioned earlier, some of the characters are gonna question the age old traditions, which will eventually bring out the Nayi Soch in it! Thanks a lot for the appreciation once again!

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