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Posted: 14 years ago

a starting of a new morning but there was something different about this morning..the wind was blowing sweetly & it was raining out side,like every morning navya open her eyes & found her self in thos strong protective arms,but the owner of those strong arms hv a face which looks like a baby or angel while sleeping..it feel soo good to see Anant sleeping sooo peacefully tht i can spend my whole day staring at him 😍 says navya to herself..after tht she placed a kiss on his forehead & stare for some more time,whn she her eyes fall in the window she bcom really happy it was rainning out said,she get down frm the bed & went to their balcony,she jst close her eyes & feel the fres air along with the waters...she opened her eyes & bring out her hand to the out of the balcony,& start planying with the water drops..

after some time anant woke up & saw tht navya wasnt there he looked at the washroom door but found se wasnt there then she noticed tht navya was in the balcony..
the rain was increasing & it had dreanched navya's hand's arms & face as well as some of her body part..still navya was njoyin the weather whn she felt a warm hand bside her hand,her hand touching with him,he was sooo close to her tht she cn feel his warm breath on her neck..he whisper to her ear..
Anant: tumhe barish bohat pasand hai na??
she shyly nod her head as Yes & he said
Anant: mujhe bhi


after tht i want someone to continue bcos i think rain & romance both create magic & i always wished to see something like this on Anya Day Dreaming☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
contd...
A: Hmm - toh yahaan door se dekhne mein kya phayada? Itni hi pasand hai - to chalo mere saath!
N: Nahin Anant - Kaam hai.
A: Navya ab bahut time hai - koi utha bhi nahin - aise hi chalo. He runs to the wash room and then he drags her downstairs with him. In her home salwar and they take a big multi-colored umbrella and head out...
N: Hugging Anant - and vice versa: Starts laughing: yeh kya bachpana hai.
A: Arent you loving it?
N: Haan!
A: Then - why worry Ma'am!!
They walk out of loony quilla - and they see a chai wale ki dukaan near by and both head there.
A: Chai logi?
N: Haan and Anant gets them two hot cups of tea!!
They both smile at each other. Hudlling together drinking Chai. Navya says - Anant mazaa aa gaya.
Suddenly the wind blows stronger and despite hugging each other - both get soaked completely.
Anant hurries Navya back
N: Anant - koi dekh lega to?
A: toh? Main apni bibi ko baarish mein ghumane le gaya - bas! Woh mujhe hi paagal samjhenge.. phikar math karo.
They walk in giglling - trying to stay as quiet as possible. And lo an dbehold - the house is still - koi awaaz nahin. Their rubber chappals make a squelching noise - as they try to sneak upstairs.
Suganda walks in - sees them and smiles. Anant indicates to his mom - with finger on his lips. Suganda smiles and says quietly - jaldi oopar jao and change karlo. Bimar math ho jaana.
They smile and walk upstairs.
N: Anant - mein bhool gayi . Geyser to on nahi kiya.
A: Maine kar diya tha ma'm.
N: Arre wah! Toh jaldi jao - mujh se zyaada tum bheege ho. Main towel se dry kar loongi. Please garam paani se naha lena jaldi.
Anant Throws off his kurta and rushes into the washroom. Andar jaake - towel ke liye chillata hai -
Navya apne aap par towel odthi hai and Anant ke liye jaldi se towel lathi jhai.
Anant drags her also in and shuts the door.
N: Kya kar rahe ho Anant?
A: Tumhein kya lagtha hai? apne bheegi hui bibi ko baahar chod dunga.
The hot shower steams the mirrors - and censored!
contd...
(sorry my first time at a romantic scene - I hope it works!)
Edited by anyafan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OK - now that I have started - let me finish this:
Conts from shower...
Several minutes later - Anant emerged from the shower and has a big grin on his face. He passes Navya some clothes and as she is holding her hands out for them - he first holds her hand.
N: Anant!
A: (Kisses her hand).. hmm..?
N: Anant... (warningly)
A: (Laughs and then passing the clothes) ... Jaldi tayyar ho. Hum late ho rahe hain!
N: Mere lines mujh ko hi?
Anant Laughs loudly.
Navya changes and comes out to dry and comb her hair at hte dressing table. She sees Anant fully dressed for work.
Anant hugs her from behind and they look at each in the mirror. Navya becomes shy. She lifts an arm and holds his head - close to her face.
A: (bends close to her ear and whispers) i love you and kisses her cheek.
N: Main bhi. Mujhe itna mazaa aaya baarish mein !!
A: Sirf baarish mein? (with a naughty smile)
N: Smiling and blushing a lot pushes him away
Anant smiles and gets his wallet and tie and is wearing his socks and shoes. Navya quickly towels her hair and combs it out to dry. She comes to help tie Anant's tie and then hugs him. He holds her and lays his cheeks on the top of her head as she hugs him.
Both have their eyes closed and feel a wonderful sense of peace and happiness. No words were necessary - and Navya remembered the first time he held her like this at a picnic more than 2 years ago. Lots of things in life had changed - but not this - the feeling of belonging - of being home in Anant's arms this way.
Anant: Baal dry kar le na - varna cold lag jayegi.
Navya smiles and nods.
They hold hands and walk downstairs together. Navya leads him to the mandir first and they pray together for a few minutes in silence. Anant and Navya both think - bhagwanji hamein bas ek dusre ka saath chahiye - hamesha ke liye. Thank you.
Suganda watches them from the kitchen door and smiles thinking - "Bhagwanji - in donon ki khushi ko kabhi bhi kisi ki nazar na lage. Kaash mere Mohan ko bhi yehi khushi mile. Please. Mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye Bas yahi ek kami rah gayi hai."
contd...
Im done for now folks. :)
Edited by anyafan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HELLO GUYS TODAY NO UPDATES... COMMON WRITER PLEASE KEEP WRITING... PLEASE UPDATE... EAGERY WAITING FOR UPDATES...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Anyafan & liana ... Good job , very well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
PLEASE KOI TO AEYE AUR KAHANI KO AAGE BADHAEYE...

I M WAITING TO READ...

LIANA.SILLA.JOAPAKHI WHERE ARE YOU GUYS... PLEASE COME AND UPDATE...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anyafan

OK - now that I have started - let me finish this:

Conts from shower...
Several minutes later - Anant emerged from the shower and has a big grin on his face. He passes Navya some clothes and as she is holding her hands out for them - he first holds her hand.
N: Anant!
A: (Kisses her hand).. hmm..?
N: Anant... (warningly)
A: (Laughs and then passing the clothes) ... Jaldi tayyar ho. Hum late ho rahe hain!
N: Mere lines mujh ko hi?
Anant Laughs loudly.
Navya changes and comes out to dry and comb her hair at hte dressing table. She sees Anant fully dressed for work.
Anant hugs her from behind and they look at each in the mirror. Navya becomes shy. She lifts an arm and holds his head - close to her face.
A: (bends close to her ear and whispers) i love you and kisses her cheek.
N: Main bhi. Mujhe itna mazaa aaya baarish mein !!
A: Sirf baarish mein? (with a naughty smile)
N: Smiling and blushing a lot pushes him away
Anant smiles and gets his wallet and tie and is wearing his socks and shoes. Navya quickly towels her hair and combs it out to dry. She comes to help tie Anant's tie and then hugs him. He holds her and lays his cheeks on the top of her head as she hugs him.
Both have their eyes closed and feel a wonderful sense of peace and happiness. No words were necessary - and Navya remembered the first time he held her like this at a picnic more than 2 years ago. Lots of things in life had changed - but not this - the feeling of belonging - of being home in Anant's arms this way.
Anant: Baal dry kar le na - varna cold lag jayegi.
Navya smiles and nods.
They hold hands and walk downstairs together. Navya leads him to the mandir first and they pray together for a few minutes in silence. Anant and Navya both think - bhagwanji hamein bas ek dusre ka saath chahiye - hamesha ke liye. Thank you.
Suganda watches them from the kitchen door and smiles thinking - "Bhagwanji - in donon ki khushi ko kabhi bhi kisi ki nazar na lage. Kaash mere Mohan ko bhi yehi khushi mile. Please. Mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye Bas yahi ek kami rah gayi hai."
contd...
Im done for now folks. :)



you are an aweeesomeee writer...!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Anant office chala geya...

Navya in kitchen with sugandha.

S: Navya?

N: gi Maa.

S: Anant tumhe jayda pereshan to nahi kartehe na?

N: nahi, Maa, bilkul nahi...

S: dekho beta, mera bera thodasa pagal hai, Thodasa jiddi vi...laikin uska dil bahot saccha hai...

N: janti hoon maa...isi liyee to...

S : isi liye?

Navya blushes...

S: janti hoon beta... usse bahot paayar karti ho...

After a while...

N: maa, Anant kya khane jayda pasand karte hai?

S: Vo to Aalu-mator bahot pasand kartehe...

N: Mai Aalu-mator banana shikna chati hoon...

S: thik hai beta, tum aaj hi banao, mai tumhe shekha deti hoon... Anant bahot khush hoga jab vo shunega ki tumne banaya hai...

Navya Alu-mator banaya...then she goes to her Room...

Room mai jake Navya Anant ko bohot miss karne lagi... usse barish wali incident... wash room wali incident yaad aya aur vo anant ko aur vi miss karne lagi...

Dhireche Navya Anant ki photo ki paas geya... she kisses on his photo & says... Anant, tumhara har paagalpan mujhe bohot Aachi lagti hai... isi liye to mai tumhe itna miss karraha hoon... Aur tum? tum to bohot busy ho office mai... mere bare mai kheyal hi nahi hai!

Then She looks at the Bed... she goes towards the bed... Takes Anants pillow in her arms... hugs that thightly ... keeps her nose on the pillow...close her eyes trying to fell the fragrance of Anant.

After a while she opens her eyes & finds that there is a paper under the pillow...

she finds that its a letter from Anant...

He wrote... ' Mujhe bahot miss kar rahiho na? Isi liye to Mera pillow uthaya... Main vi tumhe Bahot miss kar raha hoon... Love u...'

Navya Takes the ph & makes a call to Anant...

A: HelIo darling, kaise ho...

N: Main thik hoon, tum?

A: tumhara bina kaise katahe janti nahi...

Navya blushes...then she says mujhe vo mila...

A: kya?

N: Vo letter...

Anant whispers on ph ph... Bohot miss kar rahi hoon na mujhe?

Navya also whispers... bohot...

A: mai vi... tum ek kam karo...close ur eyes...

Navya Aakhe bandh kiya...

Then Anant whispers... Main tumhara bilkul paas hoon...tum mehsus kar rahi ho na?

N: Haan...

A: Tumhara neck pe mera saas mehsus kar rahi ho na?

N: Navya shievers & says haan...

Then Anant kisses her over the ph...

Navya blushes...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: renchos

PLEASE KOI TO AEYE AUR KAHANI KO AAGE BADHAEYE...


I M WAITING TO READ...

LIANA.SILLA.JOAPAKHI WHERE ARE YOU GUYS... PLEASE COME AND UPDATE...



I hv a lots of Imagination in my mind...
But I'm lil buzy today...
Will try to post some new scene soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
SORRY GUYS I WS BUSY TODAY FR SURE LATE NITE MEIN UPDATE KRDOONGEE

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