my poem on loonies & Anya marraige

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Udi baba / Shashikala aka hari om prabhuji n gorilla
Teeno ne mil kar banaya ek loonies villa
Ghar wala hai jaise un ke kaide
Jaise ki ho kisi ne koi chori or daketi...
Rama ke jaise sujha[idea] in ke bhi evil mind me ek pelan [plan]
Navya ko ghar me lakar kardenge us ki freedom ko ban...
Lekin unko kya pata ke un ka plan kare ga back fire
Na hogi fulfil unki koi bhi desire
Wit navya villa me hogi enter nayi sooch
jis se unko aayega hoosh
Ke ye 21st century hai koi purana zamaana nahi..
yaha Sms hote hai letter's nahi [plsss 4get anya's letter's 4 sum time]
Phir hoga looni villa bhi ek happy home
wit changed Udi baba ;Bua dadi and om
Then the dukhi atmas wil also bcome sukhi
Aur Sanjay chacha wil also get his hisse ka khushi
Phir rama ki nautanki bhi hojaye gi ban
phail hogaye ga us ka har ek pelan[plan]
Nimi ko bhi na hogi koi shikayat kabhi
as she wil b allowed 2 rom wit her hone wala hubby
Thn we wil b able 2 see more anant navya scenes
wit this the lif wil bcome lik a dream
SO HOWS MY POEM IF U LIK IT PLSS DO COMMENT AND HIT THE LIK BUTTON 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice poem zohr..loved it 👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice poem zohr ...👏
one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet078

Nice poem zohr ...👏

one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi

i heard in sasural genda phool tht shashikala is the name of a vamp so i kept her pet name as shashikala
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolzohr

i heard in sasural genda phool tht shashikala is the name of a vamp so i kept her pet name as shashikala


OHHH ..den meh mistake ...
BY d way nice poem .as always
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet078


OHHH ..den meh mistake ...
BY d way nice poem .as always

no probs
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet078

Nice poem zohr ...👏

one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi


there is no shashikala in navya...dadi's name is susheela...
anyways apart from name game the poem was too good...
loved the rhymes...

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