my poem on loonies & Anya marraige

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ZOHR

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Udi baba / Shashikala aka hari om prabhuji n gorilla

Teeno ne mil kar banaya ek loonies villa

Ghar wala hai jaise un ke kaide

Jaise ki ho kisi ne koi chori or daketi...

Rama ke jaise sujha[idea] in ke bhi evil mind me ek pelan [plan]

Navya ko ghar me lakar kardenge us ki freedom ko ban...

Lekin unko kya pata ke un ka plan kare ga back fire

Na hogi fulfil unki koi bhi desire

Wit navya villa me hogi enter nayi sooch

jis se unko aayega hoosh

Ke ye 21st century hai koi purana zamaana nahi..

yaha Sms hote hai letter's nahi [plsss 4get anya's letter's 4 sum time]

Phir hoga looni villa bhi ek happy home

wit changed Udi baba ;Bua dadi and om

Then the dukhi atmas wil also bcome sukhi

Aur Sanjay chacha wil also get his hisse ka khushi

Phir rama ki nautanki bhi hojaye gi ban

phail hogaye ga us ka har ek pelan[plan]

Nimi ko bhi na hogi koi shikayat kabhi

as she wil b allowed 2 rom wit her hone wala hubby

Thn we wil b able 2 see more anant navya scenes

wit this the lif wil bcome lik a dream

SO HOWS MY POEM IF U LIK IT PLSS DO COMMENT AND HIT THE LIK BUTTON 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice poem zohr..loved it 👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice poem zohr ...👏

one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi

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ZOHR

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Preet078
Nice poem zohr ...👏
one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi

i heard in sasural genda phool tht shashikala is the name of a vamp so i kept her pet name as shashikala

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Preet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: coolzohr

i heard in sasural genda phool tht shashikala is the name of a vamp so i kept her pet name as shashikala

OHHH ..den meh mistake ...

BY d way nice poem .as always

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ZOHR

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Preet078

OHHH ..den meh mistake ...
BY d way nice poem .as always

no probs

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TheRoopsy

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Preet078
Nice poem zohr ...👏
one correction hari om parub ji aka sarswati not sashikala ...Sashikala is Navya dadi

there is no shashikala in navya...dadi's name is susheela...

anyways apart from name game the poem was too good...

loved the rhymes...

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