Tongue in cheek verse: Navya Story so far!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am no poet - but Here's a light-hearted version of NAVYA to-date
To cheer up your weekend, as for Monday, we wait!!

Boy comes to the rescue

And their eyes met

She fell for him then

What follows is the rest..

He's already booked

She sadly realizes

Maybe it wasn't too serious

Yet the little J monster in her: rises

An accident, he's bruised

She notices with concern!

More accidental coincidences

Auto rides, and a parcel to return!

A timely rescue

And the competition vanishes

After some conversations

Her crush lead to more blushes!

Her friends set her up

A presentation - the excuse

A tiff and the making up

Result in a friendly truce :)

The friendship grows

Lo and behold - a mild flirtation begins

An engagement party

A class picnic - the perfect outing

Intimate conversations lead to a hug

Senseless, suspenseful occurrences,

The audiences' heart strings they tug

A passionate acknowledgement - IS this - love?

Reality intervenes

Family circumstances prevail

Broken hearts and shattered dreams

"See saw" ' their emotions sway

They say a disappearance

Maketh the heart fonder

It surfaced feelings and love

That could not be compromised longer

Duty or love: the question remained

Until fate intervened yet again

Hearts jumped for joy : at last it was OK

To declare their love, this time not in vain

Happy times followed

And a Birthday surprise

A caring relationship

That they hoped would last a lifetime

Sibling support was earned

Albeit the hard way

A moonlight date almost turned

Until his Friend saved their day

When mom discovered it all

No such luck prevailed

Punishments and separation

Only heart ache remained

Long letters, fond memories -

Family issues came and went

Anticipation dawned

When the six weeks were spent

It was time to reunite

Alas !! it was not to be

As family melodrama

Led only to more misery

Stuck between a rock

and hard place

The secret was out,

yet they had no say

A bright idea clicked in his head

Nervously - he asked her to wed

Overwhelmed, happy, and with some dread

"Give me just 24 hours", she pled !!

He waited impatiently

Until his lady love decided

A conditional yes - finally

But his fate - remains undecided.

A new-found courage in his heart

He braved his family's wrath

She found in grandma a kindred heart

Daadi v Deepu: you do the math

Her dad was won over,

Her spirits rose

When will I be able to tell him,

Hurray !! 1 down, and just 2 to go!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!👏loved it!the best!!!
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Waah...!! Awesome indeed!!! 👏
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Dee ...absolutely loved it👏.What a wonderful description..you write so well..keep these coming👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. Simply wow. Amazing poetry. Keep it coming Dee
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Dee, awesome poem. Absolutely fab. 👏 Keep writing... You have a great talent in putting things so succinctly. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant!!👏
Loved it n also found it cute..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous!! Complete journey wrapped up nicely into a poem. Very nice.
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Pfft who says you are no poet?? That was so brilliant!!👏 I LOWE it..Keep 'em coming please..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Neelu, Preethi, Geeta, Tanu, Zara, Nidhi, Fawaaz , @kriya 17, bbs... and sristi
Thank you for your encouragement - I did this out of sheer joblessness :) :)
Will update as we go along...
Cheers
Edited by anyafan - 13 years ago

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