Diary Entries: Navya, Meeta and Anant

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ashakd

@ashakd

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Hey Sajani,

wonderful diary enteries. Sorry, never read u r earlier ones. But this was superb. Navya;s diary was bang on. Anant;s was the last, got a little exhausted till i reached there, but u have done well.

Meetas was sensitive and very emotional. Only dont agree with the part where in u say meeta will now open her mind and listen to her daughter navya speak. I think meetas initial reaction would be anger and denial, and not acceptance to listen to her daughter.

Just my pov, but u did a fab job in the post. keep writing, waiting for more.

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supria

@supria

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: navyaalex8
I loved it...thank you very much for such an emotive piece...You have a wonderful knack for writing these diary entries ...I could almost feel navya's guilt condemning her reading your lines...👏... Do you think you collect all your diary entries into a single post like manoj does with his shayaris, please? Never mind if u cant, I shall dig through your past posts!

😊sajni...me too agree completely with nisha...if u cud compile all ur posts into a single thread...it wud be awesome...for many a time, i have read ur posts n rewatched some of my favo anya moments...esp one of ananths page when navya walks away from him...i sensed the finer nuances only after reading ur take...those are classic pages⭐️⭐️, n i cud read them any no of times...so if possible do try to string them all together...⭐️⭐️

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hey Sajni..fabulous post👏 .i have always loved your post..I am reaaly a fan of your wiritings...you bring life into the characters , and you do that so brilliantly that it always toches me...all the 3 diaries were amazin as always...Navya's gulit, pain, anxiety...Meeta's..hurt, pain, disappointment...and Anants...guilt and love...evrytihng was so beautifully expressed...

Along with Nish and Supria..even i would like if you can complile all your diary entries into a single post...try it if possible...

loved it...keep writing...

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sajni786

@sajni786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: navyaalex8
I loved it...thank you very much for such an emotive piece...You have a wonderful knack for writing these diary entries ...I could almost feel navya's guilt condemning her reading your lines...👏... Do you think you collect all your diary entries into a single post like manoj does with his shayaris, please? Never mind if u cant, I shall dig through your past posts!

hey sweetzzz...thank u so much for such wonderful words...they provide a new level of confidence in me...
As for ur request...Will defo try to work on that ...thx for the suggestion btw 😳

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sajni786

@sajni786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ashakd
Hey Sajani,

wonderful diary enteries. Sorry, never read u r earlier ones. But this was superb. Navya;s diary was bang on. Anant;s was the last, got a little exhausted till i reached there, but u have done well.

Meetas was sensitive and very emotional. Only dont agree with the part where in u say meeta will now open her mind and listen to her daughter navya speak. I think meetas initial reaction would be anger and denial, and not acceptance to listen to her daughter.

Just my pov, but u did a fab job in the post. keep writing, waiting for more.

hey asha...I hope u are the same antar yami tanu talks about alot...
I completely adore ur predictions...
thank u for such kind words of compliments...and as for the ur disagreement on meeta's reaction...I completely acknowledge n appreciate ur POV...n to some extent I do agree that she will defo be in anger n denial...but somehow I just cudnt see her not opening up to giving Navya a chance to speak in her defense...only coz...she already had doubts on her daughter...which got close (98%) to confirmation when she got hold of the b'day card...yet she was calm with her daughter on phone n when she reached home and was waiting in anticipation to hear her...n now when her doubts have fully comfirmed after seeing Anant...I wud think she really wud wanna know why her daughter did wat she did and why she hid all that from her despiter telling her that navya's was her only best friend hinting her that Navya can always confide in her mom...
I cud be wrong but I wrote her diary entry based on her actions n reactions so far and as much as I have studied her character...

thanks for the reply...😳

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sajni786

@sajni786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: barbie2011
Hey Sajni..fabulous post👏 .i have always loved your post..I am reaaly a fan of your wiritings...you bring life into the characters , and you do that so brilliantly that it always toches me...all the 3 diaries were amazin as always...Navya's gulit, pain, anxiety...Meeta's..hurt, pain, disappointment...and Anants...guilt and love...evrytihng was so beautifully expressed...
Along with Nish and Supria..even i would like if you can complile all your diary entries into a single post...try it if possible...
loved it...keep writing...

thank u so much sweets for such kind words of compliments n encouragement...
The sincere requests of u lovely ppl to put my diary entries in 1 thread is well absorbed n I shall defo act upon it as soon as I can get to it...😳

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svkworld2

@svkworld2

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Very wonderfully written. You have captured all the emotions so well.

Would go digging for your earlier posts!!!

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sajni786

@sajni786

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: svkworld2
Very wonderfully written. You have captured all the emotions so well.

Would go digging for your earlier posts!!!

awww...thanks for the such a wonderful gesture in ur commentary...🤗

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Ahhh I feel like I have just read pages from Navya, Anant, and Meeta's diary for real!!👍🏼 You did such a good job writing these entries from each character's perspective..My favourite one had to be Meeta's though..I pray fervently that what you wrote about her willing to see reason comes true..
Once again wonderfully written as always..👏

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Hey Shilpa, this post just blew me away...🤗. Have been reading Navya's diary all along( through your eyes and heart) and today's extract was just so guilt ridden. I could feel the emotions that she has bottled up, all this while and the predicament that she is facing...and now, she feels that, the time is right ,to break free... Meeta' s diary extract is so full of motherly love and her apprehensions, anxiety, turmoil... very heart rendering...

Anant 's views are anything but pragmatic,but , loved to see that he is absolute in his resolve to stand by his beloved , come what may...

Once again, a lovely post...