*Anya's FF*Navya reject proposal ( updated@ 19)

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@ViraatMaanviLov

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: yamini_anya
Wow!!!! karan...awesome 👍🏼...when reading itself the scenes are coming infront of me...nice update...keep writing... waiting for next update...😃

thnx..

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Binu Shoba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Woowww karan..

Awesome update.. well written.. lovd it.

waiting eagerly..

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Ramya_anya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Hai karan. awesome update.. keep writing.. waitin for ur nxt update..

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Awesome, Karan !!! 👏👏

Loving the way the story is unfolding, ...please continue...and thank you so much for the PM..😃

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Dharshini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Hey..Lovely episode.👏.Happy to see our AnYa like this..

waiting to see that surprise Karan..😍

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harini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

well written yar ...👏

keep writing ...waiting for next chap😍

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Jaggy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Very well written ..

Keep writing

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@ViraatMaanviLov

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

CHAPTER-8

Anant takes navya at terrace and he slowly remove the cloth from her eyes, and navya was very surprised...and became very happy...terrace was full of diya & candles...the scene was very romantic...there was a water pool full of rose petals and candles... and navya was speechless and he thanks anant for that and asked him why did he do all those.
Anant replied coz she is the one who is special for him, otherside all was asking for light,then anant's bhai went to check the fuse...and anant & navya friends were lighting candles & diya outside and some were playing with crackers, then navya see at anant eyes and anant see her...then light wind blows and navya's hairs came infront of her eyes, anant slowly remove those hairs and navya & anant breath heavily...then navya feel little uncomfortable... and want's to go from there ...

anant stop her and asked don't u like my surprised,navya replied i liked this surprised al ot and thanks him for making her day so special...

anant's mom was searching for him and friends are also serching for both...anant's bhi found that somebody had took out the fuse and he call an electrician, then anant's mom asked anant's friends about him,they all replied they haven't saw him,then anant's mom went to search him.

anant went close to navya and navya remain still, light wind blowing and candles and rose petals making phool very bright..anant says to navya u r looking so beautiful tody...navya remain silent and smile .then anant kiss navya's hand...navya close her eyes...then anant slowly remove navya hairs aside from neck and softly kiss her neck...(background song- my heart goes dentanna)...then slowly he kiss her forhead...navya closing her eyes...they both was out of their controls...

anant's bhai otherside told all their families that some one took out fuse,then all surprised and says who can do so...then all family member decide to go out as their re candles and diyas...then all were going outside anant grandpa asked about anant, anant mom replied she was also looking for him but didnot found...and says he might be gone to bring lights...then grandpa says ok lets go he eill come...

anant was kissing navya...he kiss her forhead...and then nose ,and then cheeks...and breeze was blowing softly...and navya's heart beats was increasing...then anant went close to her lips...slowly, slowly he was going close to her lips...

anant's bhai came with electircian and went to put on the fuse...otherside cracker were brusting...anant and navya were both out of their control...anant was very close...electirician put the fuse and light came and terrace also glows with light.

navya open her eyes and both stunted...both were unable to say a word, navya think what had happen to her why she didnot stop anant...anant also thinking oh what i did...why i cannot control myself... then navya and anant look eachother and navya went from there quickly and went downstair and went outside where her friends were playing with crackers, they asked her where she was...navya says she was at terrace,but didnot tell them with whom she was...anant also came down...and went outside and his mom asked where he was...anant replied he was a t backyard...

Edited by karan_13 - 13 years ago