NAVYA'S SHAYARI CORNER UPDATED Pg No 157 - Page 10

Originally posted by: slmu

Very nice manoj.👏

Originally posted by: smisidren

Great work Manoj... u made something awesome from the waste episode👏...

My favourite lines 😆

dekhar is chudail ki harktin ko dil mein mere ek khaayaal SAMAYA

kyun iske baap ko us gandi raat ko jaldi Neend nahi AYAA

cant stop🤣

Manoj, Thanks for the PM. This is awesome 🤣.🤣 This is really funny 🤣

phir aagayi chudail aur cartoon bankar musibaton ki DEEWAR

paka rahi ti chudail Anant ko jaise phata hua DHOL
cartoon bi kaha door thi bangayi chipkoo FEVICOL

Keep writing more !

Originally posted by: chandni4433

awesome wrk manoj...

Originally posted by: ashakd

Manoj, thanks for the pm, well written, well scripted, beautifully verbalized, loved the last line...reminded me of 'DK bose", galti tu hai meri', ...just perfect, and so well rhymed. I am not a big fan of hindi script, as i am a little slow in reading , but understand it well, but this shayari, was spot on. Understood every word of it and luved it. U have got talent...( take a bow)...(saluting u).

Originally posted by: --Naina--

Manoj, Thanks for the PM. This is awesome 🤣.🤣 This is really funny 🤣

phir aagayi chudail aur cartoon bankar musibaton ki DEEWAR

paka rahi ti chudail Anant ko jaise phata hua DHOL
cartoon bi kaha door thi bangayi chipkoo FEVICOL

Keep writing more !

Originally posted by: rainurubal

hey

Loved this shayari episode from you

and loved that chudail and jasoos lines

thanks for the PM

Hope to see more funny shayari from you

I m wating eagerly for your next shayari

Love ya 🤗

Rubal