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Kanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Whole the truth of Neela death comes in front Neil and then the Khanna. How AvNeil bring forth Metali's real face. How AvNeil love and support helps each one of then fight with their believes and past wounds. Neil is not in love Metali he still loves Avni but got married to Metali just as self assumed punishment for not trusting supporting and accepting Avni after he found alive or even found out about Mowgli. Except Neil no one knows abut Neela death truth in Khanna house. For now not even Ali, Aman and DD eventually they will.

Index
Concept: Above
Part 1: Avni Secret - Synopsis and Index - Below
Part 1: Avni's Secret: Recap - Pg 2
Part 2: Day 1- The Truth : Synopsis and Index - Pg 2
Part 2: Day 1:The Truth:Recap - Pg 4
Part 3: Day 2 : Neil's Plan: Synopsis and Index - Pg 4

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Kanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1: Avni's Secret

The next three chapters will cover

- Syesha giving the footage to Neil

- Neil repenting his mistake of the misunderstanding Avni

- AvNeil spending time together

Index
{A}: Neil's Knowlage- Below
{B}: AvNeil Talk- Below
{C}The Night - Pg 2
Part 1: Recap

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Kanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

Head Notes

Color Code

RED: Neil's Heart

BLUE: Neil's Brain

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Part 1{A}:Neil's Knowlage

Khanna House

(Neil's Room)

I first took Mowgli from Avni then gave him back I thought I will at peace. I can never be happy without Avni. But I still don't have peace.

Peace and happiness lies only with Avni

I know that but she doesn't want be me.

You are the who gave her a divorce did you ask her

She has been stressing on me being with Metali she even broke the MS

It has been broken before you got it made.

But

That is your anger and ego my Avni can never be a fraud.

I love her a lot but she wants me marry Metali.

Wants or is forced to do it.

But why.

All I do is beat and love my Avni that's all I do ask your brain.

(Hall)

Bebe. Syesha says

Metali Self Talk] Why has she come.

Mishti Beta how are you. Bebe says

Why have you come has Avni send you that you again lie to to Neil for her and she can get Neil from me. Metali says

Is Neil on sale by any chance. Syesha says

No beta Metali is just joking. Metali behave Avni as well as Mishti are part of this family so behave and respect them. Shweta says

And another thing Metali you might getting married to Tillu and become his wife but you will never become the daughter... Bebe says

Bebe daughter she is not becoming the daughter in law of this family. Prakash says

[I]Shweta is shocked to see how Prakash distastes Metali he didn't even distaste Riya or Juhi like this.

Mishti beta, Tillu is in his room. Shweta says

(Neil's Room)

Neil. Syesha says

Mishti. Neil says

What happened. Neil asked

What happened happened 10 years back. Syesha says

What are you saying. Neil says

You are much elder then me Neil but I remember how much ever that might you promised you will always take care of Angel. Didn't you or that Neil my superman was someone you always understood and loved her but is love so short and shallow is the understanding everyone saw between you two before all an act now why I trusted Karan love for me so easily because of Angel and you but now has your love and understanding for Angel vanished but I doubt you even capable of jailing Vidyut if Angel wouldn't have done what she did. I know Angel still loves you only which will never change so all I will want to say is watch and you will know the truth the secret Angel hid from last 10 years was for you and your that is her husband only love of her life and their family safety, peace and happiness. Syesha says

Syesha hands him a him a chip and leaves. Neil puts the chip in his laptop.

Dad... Neela Maa saved me... Avni saved Dad... She always loved

What did I say my Avni is my Wifey

Do something withdraw divorce

Mr Singh If possible if the divorce can be withdrawn by any chance. Neil says

Yes sir but process is longer but it is will take time. But because you filed so it will easier. Mr Singh says

Okay get the process going. Neil says

Neil's heart} Avni you hurt her so much she just did what she thought was she was alone lonely hurt your ego and your anger that's all

I should go meet Avni I need talk to her

Dokhabaaz...

Joothi...

Selffish...

Hate...

Anger...

I will marry Metali she is better mother...

Neil was driving towards Sakoon House and all the past happenings their fight his anger his accusations his want for divorce his want of Mowgli's custody his want to give pain to Avni by marrying Metali. He was continuously crying while. He reaches Sukoon House

Sakoon House

Avni...Neil say

Neil what happened... Avni says

{B}: AvNeil's Talk

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I really liked this chapter but honestly I would not like to read Neil marrying Mitali under any circumstance...but it's your story. Please write it the way u want but I'm just bring honest with my feedback. After this chapter especially the only logical thing according to me is that neil calls off the wedding with Mitali...

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Kanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91
I really liked this chapter but honestly I would not like to read Neil marrying Mitali under any circumstance...but it's your story. Please write it the way u want but I'm just bring honest with my feedback. After this chapter especially the only logical thing according to me is that neil calls off the wedding with Mitali...

Neeraja just give it some time I think you will like it

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Previous: {A}: Neil's Knowlage

Head notes

Color Code

RED: Neil's Heart

BLUE: Neil's Mind

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Part 1{B}: AvNeil Talk

Sakoon House

(Hall)

Avni...Neil say

Neil what happened... Avni says

Neil hugs her tightly

Why didn't you tell anything why did you bear it all alone... Why Avni. Neil says

Neil what happened why are you crying is everything fine. Avni says

Neil shows her video

Tell me why didn't you tell Neela sacrificed herself your happiness and saved and your sacrificed everything to save Dad. Neil says

Papa. He is my father to. It is my family to. Avni says

Wifey you should have told me at least. Neil says

Would you have believed me you said I am using Mowgli to hurt you to make you fell guilty. Avni says

I know I hurt you a sorry wouldn't solve it all in one go. Neil says

lrt go inside. Avni says

Wifey please listen don't push me away. Neil says

We are divorced you are getting married. Avni says

No I told my lawyer to withdraw the divorce. I AM NOT GETTING MARRIED I AM ALREADY MARRIED YOU ARE MY WIFEY I CAN'T GIVE YOUR PLACE TO ANY ONE ELSE IN MY LIFE MY HEART MY HOUSE MY ROOM NO WHERE ARE YOU CLEAR. Neil says

Neil you can't spoil some one life. Avni says

She knows very I NEVER LOVED HER if she assumes this relationship has a future then she is fool. Neil says

But you promised her. Avni says

I even promised Neela Maa and you and THAT WHAT I VALUE MORE a women who loved more then my mom gave her live to save mine and YOU AVNI YOU GAVE UP ALL YOUR DREAMS FOR ME FOR THE FAMILY WHAT ABOUT US. YOU CAN BE AS SELFLESS AS YOU WANT TO BE I CAN'T I DON'T WANT TO. I AM GOING GIVE UP ON US. Neil says

Neil but you can't spoil Metali life what wrong has she done to you. Avni says

Wifey I will take care of Metali but I want you back in my life as my wife.

But Neil that not possible even Mummji wants you marry Metali. You can always meet Mowgli when ever...Avni says

This is not about Mowgli it is about US Wifey US do you get it AVNI NEIL KHANNA I HAVE LOVE YOU I LOVE I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU. Neil says

Neil you are getting married to Metali and Mummyji also wants you to move on. Avni says

Wifey serious you getting scared of Mom. Neil says

I don't want to fight. Avni says

Wifey I am with you. Neil says

I can't handle it I don't want any problems. Avni says

Wifey what wrong you don't trust. Neil says

It is not that I am just scared. I don't want any problems to come to you or our family because of me. Avni says

Wifey you were not like this. Neil says

What has it left me with I have lost everything first Ayesha Maa then Neela Maa then you I have nothing left it all because of... Avni says

Wifey first you are my lucky charm you my everything I can take any amount of risks to keep you with me. Where we together faced Dayawanti Mehta, Ragini Pandit, Juhi and Vidyut. Why are you scared it is only Mom I am with you. Neil says

Neil but Metali loves and she will keep you happy. Avni says

My happiness lies with you. Neil says

Please go. Avni says

I am leaving. Neil says

Neil is leaves

Fool it is Avni she as always is building walls around her securing herself and controlling her emotions

Ananya Verma remember she was deadly that much better then this

Neil turns back and goes in. He notices somebody holding the door he see Avni standing behind the door holding it crying

(Hall)

Wifey what are you doing. Neil says

You left. Avni says

I came back. Neil says

Why are you crying you want me go marry Metali. (Avni just nods) are you sure MRS AVNI NEIL KHANNA WHAT YOU WANT. Neil says

Avni tries to hid from him.

Neil please go. Avni says

Neil cups her face

Jaan what is wrong why are you doing I ready to live with all the difficulties with you if there is no there nothing worth living. Neil says

Neil please don't do this. Avni says

He holds her hand over his heart

Do you feel that (she nods) look at me Jaan (He could clearly see loveliness loneliness sadness pain and fear in her eyes) you want to me go. Neil asks

It not easy... please... Avni says

Why are you control I am not worth of knowing who you actually feel has 10 years taken that right away from me. Neil turns away

Neilu (Neil smiles looking away from her) it not that. Avni says

Then what's it Jaan. Neil ask

If... Avni says

If what...Neil says

If you don't leave I will not be able to let you go. Avni says

Who wants to go. Neil hugs her tightly

But you promised Metali and you always keep you word. Avni says with some pride in voice

Jaan I know I keep my promises when I can but not this one. Neil says

Mummyji... Avni says

Jaan what's wrong... Neil says

Please go... Avni says

Look at me you want me to marry Metali (She nods) fine but remember this marriage this marriage will be a PUNISHMENT for me. Neil says

Neil... Please don't say like that I just want everyone to be happy. Avni says

My happiness lie with you. Neil says

Is there any way to convince you to change your decision I want you be happy Neil. Avni says

Give me my wifey my Avni. Neil says

Avni cups his face in hands

Neil this is wrong you are getting married. Avni says

The marriage is wrong I AM NOT EVEN DIVORCED METALI WILL GO TO JAIL. Neil says

You wouldn't listen. (Neil shakes his head) But will leave after spending sometime here and get married to Metali. Avni says

Neil Self Talk] I have to find out what with me marrying metali what has Mom said to Avni or what has Avni overheard Mom say

Avni kisses him

I don't know if I will be able to let go now. Avni says

Who wants to go. Neil says

Avni kisses him again

Neilu... Avni says

Wifey I want a night with my wifey that I can live with those memories for rest of my life. Neil says

Neilu why are you making it difficult for me. Avni says

Because I am not you Jaan I am selfish as you can see. Neil says

But Neil... Avni says

JUST US no one else no MOM NO METALI NO ONE. Neil says

Next : {C}: The Night

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Loving it so far...but please don't get Neil mitali married!

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Sd1978

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Posted: 7 years ago

Pllease continue the story however way u want it to be...good start!

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1{C}: The Night

Sakoon House

If I don't stop you now I will never be able to let you go. Avni says

Why do you think I want to go to metali... Or why do you want me to go to Metali I know everything now so what is stopping from claiming what's your Wifey. (She tries to turn away) Turning away doesn't change what your heart wants Wifey. Neil says

But Mummyji wants you move on please don't be angry on her she just wants you be happy. Avni says

Without you I can't ever be happy. (she hugs him tightly) If that what she think and you are sacrificing us again then give tonight Wifey of US together. Neil says

Avni looks at him and totally unexpected to Neil she kisses him on the lips Neil responds to it she make it deeper by closing the distance between them. She starts to suck on his lower lip asking for excess when he grants happily

Wifey. Neil moan in her mouth

Neilu. Avni moans

Avni creases his arm sending shiver down him while kissing him.to his hand behind her back gets it in front and puts it under her top.

Please. Avni says looking into in his eyes

What my love. Neil asks with voice full of desire

I... Avni says

Yes Love. Neil says

Want.. you... Avni says

He picks her up in his arms

(Avni's Room)

Neil voh. Avni says

Wifey no stopping your self you are my wife and tonight I will stay with my wife. Neil says

He picks her up in his arms to the room. She kiss him again. He put her

down in the room while without breaking She takes his shirt off.

Wifey...Neil says

Avni struggles to pull down his trousers. Neil notices removes his belt and then unazip his trousers. His hands go underneath Avni's top.

Neil. Avni moans when Neil squeeze her breast.

Neil pull her closer he falls on bed. Avni is saddling him. He takes off her top and bra. He starts sucking her breasts. Avni grips on his thickness. Her core and his head come into contact put suck in breath.

Wifey please take it in. Neil says

This feels amazing. Avni says

Beyond amazing. Neil moans

You are so hard. Avni says

God 10 years wifey you feel like haven Neil says sucking her brests

Neilu... Avni says moans

Yes Wifey... Neil says

I... Both say togeter

I am going to cum. Neil says

She nods

Cum baby inside me. Avni says

This fells like haven both say together

Neil pins her to bed. She smiles

What happened. Avni says blushing

Jaan open your eyes. I missed looking into them for last 10 years. Neil say hair from her flushed face

You... Avni says looking down

I know do you want. Neil says

Avni shakes her. She pulls his face down kissing him again

Can you... Avni says

You want more. Neil says

You don't... Avni says

You still drive me craze Jaan I love it. Neil says

Neil starts sucking her on breasts softly sucking at intervals thrusting into her softly.

Neilu.. Avni maons

Wifey. Neil moans

Neil moves down slowly and slowly. Kissing her inner thighs and then kissing her core starts licking it. Her figures tangle into his hair.

Tillu. Avni moans

Neil smiles. Avni pulls him up they kiss long and passionately.

I want you inside me. Avni says

Neil re enters her.

ahh. Both moan together

She starts thrusting her hip from below

Jaan calm down I am here we have a lot time. Neil says

Eventually starts trusting into her slowly and then gain pace.

You are so deep. Avni says

Is it. ...Neil says

I love it. Avni says

They finally release and are exhausted they sleep in each others arms. Neil wakes up in a few hours (before morning) as he feels Avni's movement

Neil Self Talk] I wonder if she is actually sleeping

Jaan. (Avni doesn't respond. He feels her tears falling on him) Wifey look here. Neil says

Avni hide her face in in his chest

You will go in a few hours. Avni says

Neil gets up from the bed. He gets his refection in mirror a big smile spreads on his face

Jaan (pulling her close) look. (Realise she has tears in eyes) Jaan what wrong. Neil says

One night then you will go I know I should't be doing this but main aapne iss dil ka kya karu everyone who I love leave first Ayesha Maa then Neela maa now you bas ek Mowgli hi toh hai mera paas. Avni says

Jaan look at the mirror now (Avni looks) Thats us I WAS YOUR I AM YOURS I WILL BE YOURS ALWAY BE YOURS you see what have you done to me last few hours (Avni blushes) ONLY YOUR RIGHT JAAN I AM ALL YOURS JAAN FOREVER.

Neelu but Shweta Mom... Avni says

Shh no body come between us. Avni hai toh hi Neil Hai nahi toh Nahi samjhi. I Love you only and only. (Hugs her tightly) lets sleep for sometime. Neil says

They sleep in each other arms after a very long time

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Footnotes

1. Word Count: 869

2. This is the same day and night Neil get's to know about the truth.

3. This ends Part 1