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PART 1

1. Neil get to know the truth

2. Avni forces him to marry Metali

3. AvNeil doubt Metali

4. AvNeil spend time together
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Part 2: Day 1

Next 6 updates will cover the Day 1

1. Exploring Avni's internal trunmoil

2.Ali Aman and DD get to know the truth and their reaction

3. AvNeil doubt Metali

4. Neil joins the police department again

5. Exploring the internal turmoil Avni

6. Explore Neil's confusion

7. Neil Reaction

-love and repentance towards Avni

- Dislike towards Shweta

-Calculated and planned action and hate towards Metali

8. Entry of new positive character related Ayesha and Neela

9. Riya's re entry as a supporting positive character

10. AvNeil Moments


Index

Part {A}: AvNeil's Turmoil- Below

Part {B}: Ali - Below

Part {C}: DD - Pg 3

Part {D}: Neil's Reaction - Pg 3

Part {E}: Aman's POV - Pg 3

Part {F}: AvNeil Togather - Pg 4

Part 2: Recap - Pg 4
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Part 2{A}: AvNeil's Trumoil

Head Notes

1) This is DAY 1.

2) This is a day after Neil get to know about the truth.

3) There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and AvNeil's and Metali's sangeet.

4) This is the Start of Date 1. Hance Part {A} Of Part 2 This is update 1 of Part 1 has total 6 updates it has 5 more update.

5)Word Code

1.N: Neilajana

2 AANAAV: Avni Ayesha/Neil''s Avni/ Ananya Verma

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Sakoon House


(Avni's Room)

Neil eyes open the first thing he sees Avni's face and smiles

Neil Self Talk] I want wake up to this every morning. It will is the best sight

Avni wakes up she tries getting out of bed she realises someone is holding her first she gets scared then she realise it is her Neil she smiles cuddles into him and looks up at him. She ceases his face. Thinking he still smiling

Mera Neil... my love my hubby my Neilu my Tillu. Avni says

She starts kissing all over his face she comes near his lips

Jaan why did you stop last night you have kissed me alot. (He smiles see tears in her eyes wiping them) JAAN I LOVE YOU ONLY I AM NOT GETTING I WILL GO BACK HOME AND CANCEL THE WEDDING. Neil says

Neil no one will accept me now probably not even Bebe. Avni says

Jaan.. Neil says cupping her face

She kiss him deep and passionately.

Neil let me go I have take a shower before everyone comes. Avni says

Avni walk to the bathroom

Avni Self talk] One last time with my wifey is what Neil had said yesterday night so no let the night so what it is morning My Neil is still here

Avni turns back to Neil

Neilu you want to share shower with me. Avni says

Neil jumps on the opportunity. The have a shower together

(Hall and Kitchen)

N}You are doing

AAAV}No Neil still loves me I love him will always love him Metali is taking what's mine

N}No she not Neil divorced me

AAAV}He withdrawing the divorce

N}But for now he has divorced us

Jaan what's wrong. Neil asks

I am fine. Avni says turning away

Avni start cooking breakfast she is cutting some her finger.

Jaan. Neil says runs towards her

I am fine I used to it. Avni says

Jaan please stop hurting yourself I can't see you. (Avni burns her hands) Jaan enough I can't see you hurt. Neil says

Just leave let me be. Avni says

No I can't. You can leave to hid away your pain your pain hurts way more. Neil says

Avni fall down crying. Neil has never seen her so weak.

I have hurt you enough. Please leave me alone. the night is over. Avni says

Night is not us you are my Wifey. You are my strength. You are going to act like this I will not able to live a day. Neil says

I have hurt you enough I still can't forget that day I saw you broken because of me. I deserve the hate. Avni says

Jaan you were there. Neil says hugging here tightly

Avni nods

Neil Self Talk]For now let me leave this topic she needs my support I will ask her letter. First I have make her stay back here I will not be able to live without her for single second and if I have Metali to to even decode Metali's character because I know there is huge game plan Metali has she gives Juhi vibes I know for know Avni doesn't realise which isn't wrong I also didn't relaise it for long now I do. I need Avni she is my strength I can fight through anything without her beside me.

Jaan forget that. 10 years you were with Mowgli why did you keep him away from you could have given him the love he deserve. Neil says

Neil firstly I had to keep him and secondly I thought I stay away no harm will come to him. Avni says

Neil Self Talk] Jaan is lieing but what is not telling let's forget that she needs me

Neil please let be you asked for night now you are getting married to Metali. Avni says

Jaan enough of Metali thing you know very I don't want getting married to her please don't keep saying this I hate it. Jaan (Make her to look at him) Metali is not what she seem she has used your past once to keeps us away she can do alot more just get me she gives JUHI vibes. I know you wouldn't believe it that. Neil says

If you saying that I trust you Neil. But what will she get from it. Avni says

Jaan 10 years you have changed yourself so much or just want to ignore it all. Neil says

Neil but... Avni say

Metali always had a thing for me I never reciprocate it now that I like proposed her she will do anything to keep up to me probably the only person to to support her would be Mom. Neil says wiping Avni's tears

But what could it be. Kamini has already Mowgli... Avni says

Shh! Jaan nothing will not happen neither you Jaan nor our son Mowgli. Neil says

Neil if something bad happens. Avni says

Both of us are together and don't worry I have my contacts I will get to root of it. Jaan you don't worry I will make up for the 10 years we lost. Neil says

Khanna House

(Hall)

Where is Neil. I have't seen here since yesterday. Metali says

He would be in his room sleeping. Shweta says

Now you listen let my Tillu a least sleep a little in sakoon. Bebe says

Bebe is right let him rest. Shweta says

Sakoon House


(Hall)

Jaan what are you thinking. Neil says getting her closer

Neil if you are right then we also have to do something. Avni says

What do you want to do. Neil says puts Avni on his lap

Neil last time you called Metali to help us with Dayawanti if I am not wrong her name was METALI DUA now it ACP Metali Dubey something we are missing here wither that was fake or she married or widowed. I don't know. Avni says

I am not sure Jaan if she ever got married but when i was in academy there was this guy who loved her Rahil and confidently his surname was Dubey but he passed away 8 years back. Neil says kisses her on cheek

How long has Metali been around you after I went. Avni said

Jaan 8 years ago she resurfaced 2 years after you went. Neil says

Till we are not sure we can't accuse Metali but we can test this theory on her. Avni says

Avni turns to face him and kiss him on the lips.

Neil let me make food before everyone come that we can eat. Avni says

Khanna House


(Hall)

Metali's phone rings she is forced to leave. Neil comes

Tillu where had gone. Shweta says

I had gone to meet Avni. Neil says

Where are you going have breakfast. Bebe says

I already had with Avni. Neil say

(Neil's Room)

Neil Self Talk] What should I do. I don't want to marry Metali but I did give her my word I have seen the pride Jaan take in me keeping my word. I know Jaan will agree but I want another way to sought this women I CAN'T MARRY HER EVER.

Tillu. Bebe says

Ji Bebe. Neil says

Is Avni fine. Bebe says

You didn't do anything to her. Prakash says

Dad I know I have hurt Avni a lot in past some in my ego and anger I forgot Avni would never hurt me till she has another that was the reason she left me 10 year back and still didn't want return she was alone and scared I didn't I couldn't see through her facade. Neil says

Now you can't do anything it is to late she has moved on and you have promised Metali to move on marry her. Shweta says

What do you see in her she is just liar don't Mom you have always made wrong choice for me first that Riya Mehta the only good part of that was because of that I met Avni then you wanted to bring Juhi between Avni and me and now this Metali. Neil says

But she has moved on. Shweta says

Moved on means... she has occupation that what you mean by moved on (Shweta nod) you are forgetting I am a RJ. Nor her nither me have move on from each other. I loved her I love her I will always love her. I will never move on. So I will never love Metali even I marry her I never give Avni's place to her in this house my life and my heart. Neil says

But Metali is going to be your wife. Shweta says

Never even if I get married to her. Neil says

Avni hurt you so much I know how hurt you were when she broke the mangalsutra which you had kept close to yourself for 10 years. Shweta says

Yes she did that so I can move on just because she was hearing it everywhere that she is reason I haven't and in any case I hurt her worse with the filing the divorce and custody. I have never seen Avni so broken and helpless. Neil says

Tillu, Mowgli is your son you didn't do anything wrong. Shweta says

Mom you have a serious problem of double standards for me you have different rule for Avni you have different and I guess you have who different rule book for Metali. Neil says

Tillu. Shweta says

Leave me alone you will never understand me I wish Neela Maa was here today every thing would have been different. Neil says

Shweta you go you are no help here. Bebe says

Wait (takes her mobile) now go. Neil says breaking her mobile

Tillu. Shweta says

Go leave me alone. Close the door. Neil says

Shweta leaves

Tillu. Bebe

What have I have done I don't know how to solve this Avni will never come back to me how will I life. I fell like dying. Neil says

Tillu so what if you are divorced you both still love each other you two are still one. Prakash says

I don't know Dad I have already insulted and hurt her a lot I have done worst to her then she did by going away from me 10 year back. She still had reason I had none it was just my ego I could't see through her facade I wish I was not so blind. Neil says

Tillu I will talk to to Avni puttar. Bebe says

It not about her coming back or even Mowgli I know now Avni will never take our son away from me. It's me how will I stay with her when I am so guilty of misunderstanding her. Neil says

Tillu till you don't forgive yourself how will you face Avni. Prakash says

Dad how can I. Neil says

Tillu you think in peace. Bebe says

I wish Neela Maa was here today she would have understood to sloved everything. Neil says

Neela gave you this. Bebe says

Ji Bebe when ever I miss Neela Maa I take it make me close to her. Neil says

Let's go Sunny leave Tillu with her Neela Maa . Bebe says

(Hall)

Where is Neil. Metali asks

Tillu is upstairs. Shweta says

Let him be in peace for some time for god sake you are seriously a life punishment for my Tillu. Bebe says

Metali let him rest he not well. Shweta says

Why is his room locked. Metali says

Have you impersonated him or something. Prakash says angry

Actually I just want what Avni told him hi that he was with her the whole when Mowgli was at Syesha's. Metali says

He was spending time with Avni which he missed in in the lat 10 years and doing what a husband should be doing. Bebe says

Bebe but they are divorced. Metali says

Did Tillu tell you that. Tillu applied that all he can withdraw it to. Prakash say

Can that happen. Shweta says

Yes. Prakash says

But Neil said they were divorced. Metali says

When?? Shweta says

Metali is scared and angry

Let me call him. Bebe says

Bebe Neil sahaab has has gone out. Prakash Sahaab some lawyer has come to talk to you. Beema says

Metali is shocked and scared

Lawyer. Metali says

Come come. Prakash says

Neil had called me. Lawyers says

But why. Shweta asks

To withdraw the divorce petition from the court. Lawyer says

Hogi. Prakash says

Now Metali marriage is illegal till the divorce didn't happen and it case it happens she will go to jail for brake a family. Lawyer says

Till Neil doesn't know how does it matter. Metali says

Ma'am these orders can only be given to Neil sir they are legal documents. I have informed he told me inform his family here. His wife Mrs Avni Neil Khanna and his son Mowgli Khanna. Lawyer says

Can I collect the paper I am Neil's father. Prakash says

No Sir only Neil sir I will return soon. Lawyer says

Cremation Grounds

Maa I always come here when I miss you I you wouldn't have left us then how different things would have been I would have been with Jaan when in when she was pregnant we would have never been separated. If also we were separated like when I put Jaan in Jail you would have solved everything I wish you were here Neela Maa I have no one to help me I MISUNDERSTOOD JAAN FOR SO LONG at least whenI put he Jail I didn't leave a to stone unturned to tell Jaan I still love trust her now I did the opposite and guess what she even more broken she did to save Dad. You save me and see what I did I hurt and broke Jaan even more every I took away Mowgli from her if not for what Kamini did I would have never realised what a blunder Jaan (laughs a bit) Neilajana got herself arrested the Ananya Verma who was fearless you got back her to to revenge Dayawanti see what I made of Jaan, Neilanjana.. When I found her should have understood but no my anger my hurt my trust my EGO was so much bigger then US which I never wanted US was above everything for me. What have I got myself into GETTING MARRIED TO SOME ELSE IT HARDLY MATTER WHO IT IS I CAN NEVER EVER

Neil...

Neela Maa I knew you will. Neil says

When my children need me why will I not come.

Maa what should I do no one it understanding. Jaan, Bebe Dad, specially Mom. Neil says

Shwetaji is wants you happy Bebe and Prakashji and her don';t know the truth.

Metali is sufforcating me and the fact Jaan is not ready fight for me when she knows I still love her. Neil says

Neil stop thinking like a lost boy. You were a police officer I married my Avni to a handsome young intelligent man where are brain ACP have you resigned from them too.

But what. Neil says

You talk Avni you know if she is doubting Metali there is something wrong.

What should I do. Neil says

Your not Mowgli,Neil use your brains your phone and your contacts.

Maa but I am not an ACP now. Neil says'

But you still posses a brain and contracts and please stop this act of being guilt stuck Avni wants you to marry Metali because of Shwetaji use it to your benefit.

Neil closes are eyes till he open again there is no one

Maa thank you. (Call a senior) Sir it me Neil can I meet you today if possible. Neil says

Neil it's been 10 years yes you can meet me in an hour at the your police station. Commissioner say

Police Station

(Commissioner's cabin)

Sir may I. Neil ask

Neil come it is so nice to see to see you. Commissioner says

Sir a lot has happened in last few months. Neil says

How is Avni and your son. Commissioner says

You know. Neil ask

Yes I do. After ages you called so you want to join back. Commissioner ask

I know it will be difficult but if it is possible. Neil says

Yes you resigned but did the the department accept the resignation no (Neil was shocked) but to get you back officially will take some time and till then you can be part of department as a special investigator . Commissioner says

Sir can I have Neela Maa's case file I bet after I resigned nobody did justice to that.Neil says

Of course. Commissioner says

Neil Self Talk] Rahil Dubey Murder case Dad said said it was an accident

Sir, what's this Rahil had an accident no. Neil asks

As per media reports it is accident but actually it was a murder but who is murderer has to be found and more specifically is his wife MRS METALI DUA DUBEY the murderer or not as Rahil's family being all in police force have kept it under cover it is high profile case. Commissioner says

Can I see. Neil says

You want to slove this case but you will have to keep it away from Metali. Commissioner says

I will Sir. Neil says

How. Commissioner says

My flat she doesn't know it exist for now no one know I have got it back. Neil says

Okay makes sense. Here Neela ma'am, Avni's and Vidyut case file. Commissioner says

Sir can I asks you for a favor. Neil says

Please don't tell any one I want tell Avni first. She will be happiest. Neil says

I knew that so don't worry it a secret till you want want and before you ask Metali and you will not be working in the branch she will transferred to another branch in Mumbai. Commissioner says

Thanks Sir. Neil says

If you need some help setting your flat I can send some one. Commissioner says

Thank you sir. Neil says

There was a knock on door.

Come in. Commisoner says

Two girls walk in

Sir you seem busy. Naaziya says

Meet Neil Khanna he will join us soon as a senior special investigator. These two are special agents. This is Senior Agent Naaziya. Commissioner says

Hi you are. Naaziya asks

Neil Khanna actually just Neil. Neil says

Naaz. Ahana says

Ahana... I am Neil. Neil says

I heard. I am doing something. Ahana says

Neil Self talk] Why does she remind me of Jaan

Ahana take chill and give this to me who are you tracking. Naaz says

Naaz give it back. Ahana says

Sir may I come in. Frahan says

Commissioner nods

Ahana Self Talk] Bhai jaan is here now he will handle it.

Sir this file I this is confidential how... Frahan says

Naaziya Self Talk] Are you even my brother I doubt

I am Neil Khanna that is my Mother In Law case file. Neil says

This is DCP Frahan and he is Special investigator Neil Khanna and ex ACP too. Commissioner says

Frahan you seem to have an issue with me having the file she was my mother in law as per law I can take with permission of a senior officer of a kin as she my mother as I already said hance a kin so I can take it. Neil say

I know Neil I was not talking about Neela Ma, I was talking about Ms Avni Ayesha who was your wife now you have divorced. This is file I am talking. Frahan says

Mind your own business...Mr Frahan... Not a word about my personal life. Neil says

Chill you two let's just calm down Frahan. Samvid says

Naaziya Self Talk] Sam Bhai Jaan has better control he will manage everything

Neil s known for solving the most difficult case so let it be. Samvid says

Neil meet IG Samvid Ambani. Commissioner says

Sir nice to meet you. Neil says

Just Samvid. Samvid says

I will take a leave now. Neil says

One minute Neil all these files are departments property and confidential. Samvid says

I know I will keep them away from everyone. Neil says

Neil leaves but is outside Commissioners room

Ahana you called Frahan. Commissioner says

Yes I was scared that file has to many detail abhi abhi he has got to know about how Maasi ma had got know if he gets to know how will he react Di also doesn't know. Ahana says

Neil Self Talk] Maasi Maa... means Neela Maa has a sister I could never asks Maa about it I think Bebe or Dad might know

Chutki you called Sam. Frahan says

What can I do you would have spoiled everything Bhai Jaan atlest for aapa sake control yourself but no abbu and you are same when when it come Aapa and Puphi jaan both are over protective you two don't think ever. Naaziya says

Neil self Talk] Phuphi jaan... Ayesha Maa... that means Naaziya and Frahan are sibling and they Jaan's Mammu's kids. Jaan would even know that her cousins are here. Thats why Naaziya and Ahana are Jaan's cousins thats why they remind me Jaan. Samvid is Ahana's brother but Naaziya seems closer to him and Ahana is closer to Farhan. Blood is not everything

...

Footnotes

1. World Count: 3540

2. There are updates in Ali's , DD's and Aman's POVs.

4. This is Day 1, 4th day will AvNeil and Metali's Sangeet.

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Head notes

1. This Day 1 in Ali POV

2. This is a day after Neil get's to know about the truth.

3.There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and AvNeil's and Metali's sangeet.

4. This is part {B} of PART 2



Part 2{B}: Ali


I was in USA when I got to know about Neil getting married to Metali I was happy I knew Shweta Aunty was behind it but that was fine but I was shocked when i got to know Avni my childhood friend was alive not only that Avni and Neil had a 9 year old kid.

I came down to India so I could get to know everything I had promised Avni I will always take care of Aman as my own younger brother. Today he has started his own business he was equally shocked to know his only sister was alive but no one knew about it. She was living with Suhenri, Tara and Sitara.

Suhenari and her had started a orphan age. With Mowgli Avni and Neil son Syaesha aka Mishti and other kids.

Aman and I reached India we first met DD that we get unbiased version of everything. I was shocked Neil filed a custody case which he won couldn't even take of kid for one night. Now Mowgli is back Avni and Neil is still getting married to Metali.

One thing I realised Metali I knew has change this Metali can can go till any limit to get Neil and marry him. She was giving me feels of Juhi but even worse because Neil was being egoist with the situation this time braking Neil would be easier then Avni but he was being egoistic otherwise he would have never filed a custody case.

Aman and I got know everything but still no one knew why Avni left what was the reason because it was wasy to say it was Avni past would alone responsible or just Vidyut blackmailed her that why she did it or combination of both. BUT I knew Avni better and bigger there was something which no one knew.

I met Syaesha aka Mishti it was clear she knew something more but was not comfortable in telling might not remember me well she was just 8 years old that time.

After meeting Khannas, Suhaneri, Tara and Sitara I realised Suhaneri but she wouldn't tell me the way I wouldn't tell a lot of secrets Avni and I share. Finally Aman and I went to meet Avni and Mowgli. When Avni meet Aman and me both were equally emotions. We all talked. I could clearly see how hurt Avni was because of the whole custody and marriage drama like Shweta Aunty said she has moved on which she hasn't at all she still loves Neil she is hurting a lot with all the happening. Aman and I knew it was not easy or should be said next to impossible to get it out her but didn't mean we will stop.

SAKOON HOUSE

(Avni Room)

Avni, Why don't you shift in with Aman and me. I says

Yes Di. Our place is not far from Mowgli will be more happier and comfortable. Aman says

I have found a job in school I am getting Mowgli admitted there. Avni says

But Di... Aman says

Ok fine Avni but till you here at Sukoon house you can shift with us me and Aman also want to spend time with our nephew. I says

Fine. Ali did you meet Ali today is his sangeet you should go and meet him. Avni says

Di seriously he is hurting you so much you still want Ali Bhia to go attend his marriage. Aman says

Aman Neil and I were not meant to be together. Metali is good partner for him his mom also like Metali alot. Avni says

With that I could see she had lost trust on Shweta aunty. So now I had see if that she had trust in Bebe and Prakash Uncle. This is something I had go into. I very well know that Bebe and Prakash uncle were in favor of the wedding. I did meet Neil but it was he was not interested in wedding. He clearly said he still loves Avni and will always love Avni it was just Shweta aunty who was highly interested in Metali and his wedding Prakash uncle was not. Aman also observed this. Bebe was stuck as she wants Neil to happy at same want Avni to happy too.

Mumma. Mowgli says

Runs in and hugs Avni

Mowgli meet (Point at Ali) that is Ali Manmu. Avni says

I am you Mumma's younger brother Aman Ayesha. And you. Aman says

I am Mowgli Avni Khanna. Mowgli says

Who thought you this. Avni says

I did . Syesha says

Aman Mammu Ali Mammu. Mowgli says

Champ how are you. Aman says

Fine. Mowgli says

See what I got you. I says

Poha, Love you Ali Maamu. Mowgli says

Poha. Avni says

Mumma. Mowgli says

Suhenari will help you with the plate and then bring it here I will make you eat. then do you homework after which you can play with Aman Mammu. Avni said

After Mowgli eats he leaves to his home work.

What are you doing where are you going. Suhaneri says

Suhaneri, Avni is coming home with Aman and me. I say

Aman leaves to spend time with Mowgli. Avni and Ali continue talking. Neil come there so does Aman.

Avni where you going you can't leave me again and go. Neil says

Neil please let me pack I am not taking Mowgli away I am not shifting away. Avni says

Aman and I are listening I clearly knew if things continue like this there will be no chance of knowing anything. One of them will spill the beans but who is weaker in situation was to be figured out.

Avni you coming home with me it done. Neil says

I signaled Aman start talking so something come out.

And do what there attend your wedding seems interesting doesn't it Mr Neil Khanna. Sorry to says Di is going no where with you not today nor ever I am here I will take care of here. Aman says

Lets go. Neil says

Leave my sister now. Aman says pushing Neil

Neil. (Avni supports Neil pulling him up) Aman what is wrong with you. Avni says

Nothing is wrong if this man thinks he keep hurting you and you have no one to support he mistaken. Aman says

Neil please go I will talk to you latter everyone will be waiting for you it is Metali and your marriage. Avni says

That will happen when it has people can wait so can Metali. You are coming with me. Avni I will take care of everything just come. Neil says

Didn't I make myself clear Di isn't gping any where with you. You have already hurt her enough. you are such spineless person you snatched a son from his mother. (Aman starts bashing him) You know Di she can never hurt you on purpose but you didn't leave one chance to hurt her. Aman says

Avni pulls Aman off Neil

How dear you hurt my Neil like that I didn't expect this from Neela Maa would never liked this she gave her life for saving Neil my Neil this what you do this is respect you have for Neela Maa's sacrifice. Ali you, I always thought you would guide him Aman to do right you are not even stopping him the way he was going he killed Neil. Avni said

Avni what wrong in what Aman did any brother would have done the same and let's get this Neela maa did.t save this man she save her Avni husband who love her more then anything. I says

Enough Ali I don't know what got into you if Shweta Aunty wants him to move with Metali what's wrong in that it been long I left he has right live his life. Avni says

Mom... Avni I thought. Neil says

You know very well how Avni still lives with her past wounds which have scared her the last 10 years very badly that forced her to keep her only son away from her. I say

Suhanri Tara and Sitara told you this... Avni asked

Does that matter Avni or should I say NEILajana. I say

Ali that actually. Avni say

NEILajana means you kept me with always NEILajaana. (Tries to stand up) Ahh. Neil says

Neil please keep you hurt badly. (Neil held on Ali hand to stand) Neil.. Avni says

Aman again tries to beat Neil Avni comes in between

Shh! enough is enough this wedding is being called off right now. I am calling Dad now. Neil says

Neil... Aman will you stop creating so much commotion Mowgli is in next room think how he feel about his Mammu tried killing his father. Avni says

Di. Aman says

Leave now. Avni says taking out the first aid

Avni please think please come back home I will call of the marriage. Neil says cupping her face

No.. You have fulfill your promise to Metali. Avni says

I promised Neela Maa and you to keep you you happy and give happy family. Neil says

But your mom wants you to move on she wants me out of your life. Avni says

I don't care. Neil says

Please Neil understand. Avni says

This is not going anywhere. So I had poke Neil more he is weaker link here as always Avni will never give up her secret she has learnt it from Dayawanti probably the blood that runs in her vains.


You say you value Neela Maa promise still you hurt Avni so much you didn't even try to talk to her understand her you have hurt her enough now you no business your mom as well as you don't deserve Avni you all just deserve that stupid Metali. I say

Ali please. Avni says

What wrong am I saying.. I says

Ali what you know very well I love Avni not Metali yes I was using her to hurt Avni because I was hurt. I am not what I do was right It wasn't ... Neil says

Oh so you have realised you were you didn't do a mistake but crime you should have not lost your trust on Avni if you actually love her. I says

If I know what happened and why Avni did it I would never do it. Neil says

Then why are you still getting married to that selfish Metali before also she tried to separate Angel and you Superman. Syaesha says

Mishti keep out of this you are too young. Avni says

Please angel you have done what you could keep me happy and secure let me at least try I know you can only be happy with superman. Why do you want pay my father Vidyuts crimes. Hear me out Metali is no great in any respect I don't get what Shweta Aunty see in her she simply selfish. Syaesha says

Vidyut did what. I ask

Neil looked Avni. That meant Neil knew more then what Suhanri Tara Sitara and Mishti knew or should I says they were telling us.

Vidyut drugged Dad. Neil say losing hand on the secret

Neil... Avni shakes her head

Clearly Avni was the stronger one I should happy she was childhood friend but I was not because one fact which I could simply decode that means Prakash Uncle was drugged by Vidyut who made made him shoot Neil and Neela Maa came in between to save Neil.

Avni tell me what Neil is saying is lie you didn't do all this only to save Prakash Uncle. I says

Papa. Avni says

Ali walks to her and lift her. from the bed.

When will you grow up Avni did you even once think if Prakash Uncle gets to know what will happen you saved from jail and law but did you even once think about the guilt he will be in for making his only son suffer for 10 year and making you take such a decision. For him both Neil and you are same. How could you do this did not once think of this . Avni once.I say

Ali I had no option I would have come you.

Di. Aman says

You don't know how hard was to leave Neil when I saw him breakdown in front of Vidyut's house. Avni says

Wifey you were there then those death certificate. Neil says

What death certificate I don't know. Avni says

Did any one know about your plan. Neil asks

No. Avni says

I calling off this wedding now you are danger someone it behind your live Wifey. I need you save. Neil says

Avni why are now you are letting go Neil just because of Shweta Aunty. Everyone here understands why Uncle is important to you but why let go Neil. Is your love for him so weak it can't stand against Shweta Aunty. I say

Ali, Wifey you want to marry me Metali because my mother wants it right fine I will do that I told you before I will repeat again being with Metali in any capacity and even if it just friendship because she has no self respect as I have observed ...

Bhabhi where are you I want to talk.

DD..

What is she saying. DD say

What is she saying. Ali asks

Aman laughs. DD gives Aman a look.

Ali Bhai, Aman (looks at Neil) Sir what happened to you. Why is everyone here. DD ask

Aman and I came to meet Avni and Mowgli. Ali says

Mammu hit Papa so bad. Mowgli says

Aman you did this. DD asked

What was I expected to do...Aman says

You are going to apologise to Neil. Avni says

Yes you are going to say sorry to Papa Mumma is always right. Mowgli says

Mowgli see what I got for you. KK says

Wow. Mowgli says

Come lets play. KK says

KK and Mowgli go

DD what happened why are you shouting on Sunhari. Avni asks

Bhabhi why did you leave 10 years. DD ask

Because Vidyut scared me. Avni says looking at Suhanri

Why are you telling Sir, to marry Metali. DD ask

Because that what his mom wants. Avni says

Then why don't you get married too. DD ask

Why didn't Aman and I think of this

DD. AvNeil say together

What wrong in that. DD say

Di, DD is right. Aman says

DD Aman, you both need to understand Mowgli is my son and Neil is his father I don't need a man in life. Avni says

But.. Ali DD and I say

There no but it is done deal am I clear. Avni says

Bhabhi then get married to Sir why can't you do that give one reason. DD says

Shweta Aunty. I say

Avni.. Vidyut is dead you know that. Suhanri says

Wifey not again please don't you say you have caused danger in live I accepted it happily I love you I accept you as you are. Neil says

Till when Bhabhi why are letting that dayawanti effect you so much still. DD asks

Di, DD is right please don't do this. Aman says

Aman you keep out of it. Avni says

Aman your anger still rules at time here is prove. Ali says looking at Neil

Ali seriously how could you do this if something happened. Avni says

Its is better then marrying Metali. Neil says

Neil please. Avni says

Bhabhi why was Suhanri saying you leaving had something to Neela Maa murder and Prakash uncle has something to do with it. I say

Because it is... Neil says

Neil no please. I know there will no problem it is just DD but please no. Avni says

You trust Suhanri more then me. DD says

DD but... Avni says

Dad was drugged by Vidyut and that state he fired on me but Neela Maa came in between to save me. Neil says

DD please don't tell anyone. Avni says

Bhabhi, Sir and you can still get married. DD say

Wifey (Neil cups her face) why are doing this why can't we get married and be happy did something happened. (Avni hugs Neil tightly) Wifey what happened... (Neil starts getting hurt) Did Metali say something did she hurt you any way...Neil says

Mowgli comes there

Mumma stop crying. Dadi is bad. Mowgli says

Tiger what did Dadi say. Neil ask

She made Mumma cry she is bad. Mowgli says

Neil hugs both Avni and Mowgli.

WIFEY THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT WITH THAT METALI. Neil says

Avni and Neil share a look

That brings me to a question in my academy days Metali surname was Dua now it Dubey. DD you know you responsibility find out everything of Metali in last 10 years. Wifey you are coming with me. Neil says

Neil I have... Avni says

Wifey no arguments. Neil says

Bhai the wedding . DD asks

Thanks for the reminder Mom and Metali wouldn't let me forget it you know. Tiger is also coming with us. Neil says

Neil where are taking me tell me. Avni says

DD you go start your investigation. Neil says

Neil do you realises you have left police force 10 years back. Will you stop ordering DD. Avni says

This will never change Bhabhi. Love you Bhabhi. It just you who can order Bhai . DD says

I love the bound Neil and DD share it is just so pure. Just like Avni and mine.

That right no matter what neither will stop ordering DD nor he stop saying Ji Sirji why get between them you come with me. I say

Suahnari you want come along. Neil says

I will come. Suhanri says

Tara Sitara get Mowgli things he shifting in with Mammu's. Neil says

Both nod and leave with Sunehari. DD also leaves for Police station

Let's go. Neil says

But where. Avni and I say together

Just come Wifey. Neil says

Papa where are we going. Mowgli asks

Shh.. it's a secret. Neil say

They reach the the mall

Mall

(Outside)

Mall... For what sake wait you will know. I ask

(Inside)

Wait you will know. (Neil takes Avni to a shop) Go try this. Neil says

Why... Avni says

Just go try. Neil says

Why are we shopping. I ask

For the sangeet. Neil says

But... Avni says

You are coming and I am wearing green so decided go try. Neil says

Do go try. I say

Avni goes in to try. Neil is waiting desperately. After a few minutes she comes out. Neil is awestruck.

What happened Jijaji. Suhaneri says

Neil gives Avni a tight hug

Di you look so good. Aman says

Mumma looks awesome. Mowgli says

Way more then awesome. Neil says

I will go and change. Avni says

Wifey how is this. Neil asks

Is it to small for you. I say

It's for Tiger. Neil says

Avni nods

Come champ let's try it on. Ali says

Yes Mammu. Mowgli says

Avni went changed. Mowgli also come wearing the shearwani.

Mumma Papa. Mowgli says

Neil pays for Avni's dress.

Mowgli. Tara asks

His Mammu is a business man he will pay his only nephew. Meet Jaan and me that shop let me buy her jewelry with this. Neil says

Jiju Ji done with your jewellery shopping. I ask

Yes. Avni says

Wow Neil what choice you have. Suhaneri says

Wifey gets the best. Neil says

Neil walks towards the billing counter. I stop him

I am Business man when I can pay for my only nephew I can pay for my only sister. Why Di I can. I say

Ya whatever salle Ji but for your memory you have another sister I have only wife (Avni holds his hand possessively) aur humesha ek hi rehagi. Neil says

They go to Aman and Ali's house.[/I][SIZE]

[SIZE=4]Aman's House

(Outside)

Wow Maamu how big. Mowgli says

Not bad salle sahaab. Neil says

Avni pick her shopping bag. Aman picks Mowgli's. Neil also picks two bags jewellery bags are with the ladies. They go in

Tiger come here. How did you like the outfit. Neil says

I loved it. It matches with Mumma's ghagra. Mowgli says

Papa got you another gift. Neil says

What gift. Mowgli and I ask together

Here open it. I say

Wow see Mumma. Mowgli says

Go try it on. Aman go with him. Neil says

Ji Jiju. Aman says

Mowgli comes wearing it

Wow. Everyone says

Jiju you buy him this that why you told me buy him you know just like you I also haven't been able to pamper him. Thankyou Jiju. I say

Neil is just look at Avni.

I just go keep this in the room. Avni says

Take any room Di. I say

Neil notice clearly the tears Avni was trying to hid. He went behind her. Mowgli tried stopping Neil.

Champ let your Papa only he can take care of your Mumma. After your Neela Nani only your Papa can take care and understand your Mumma. Ali says

Ali but. Suhanri says

Why is Di doing this. Why is she building walls around her. Aman says

This how she protects her self from being hurt. She has always done this from childhood. I say

But you are somebody she always tells everything to. Tara says

Angel tells you everything you are been with her since her childhood. Syesha says

Mishti yes I have always been with her for Avni but I am not the one who brake her walls Till Dayawanti was concerned everything as Ayesha Khalla was involved but other things I always supported irrespective it being wrong or right. But only two people can make her confess what in his heart at easy one was Neela Maa and then Neil. I know Neil hasn't been himself for a while. I says

He has hurt Di and as usual Shweta Aunty is still the same she was she is still hurting and condemning Di for no mistake of his. Aman says

Aman if you or me were is Neil's place we would have done the same thing probably the custody was pulling it to far but other wise his reaction was not a over reaction. Till Shweta's Aunty is concerned I think she just wanting Neil to move as she think Avni has moved and has a purpose to live NOT REALISING AVNI AND NEIL STILL LOVE EACH EVEN AFTER NEIL TELLING THENM CLEARLY. Bebe and Prakash Uncle is against the marriage. Thats the way Shweta Aunty bad or good according to Neil can only move on when he gets married to some else. But for Neil it will be no less then a punishment to even be with Metali even is capacity of a friend it clearly visible from his expression. I say

Ali Bhai I am just worried if Di leaves again she is good hiding it 10 years that it took to find her it not KK and Mishti we wouldn't have found her. Aman says

Chill... There will be no hiding now she might want to leave as we know she is looking for a job some where far from main city. I says

But then if Neil can convince Avni why is adement to for Neil to marry Metali. KK asks
Defance machanism. Ali, Suhanri, Syesha and Aman say together.

She is just protecting herself from least of Neil's memories because she still love Neil and will always love her. I says

Everyone disperses.

(Ali's Room)

Bhai I had to talk to you. I say

Hmm. I says

Don't be angry. Aman says

Aman what's wrong. I says

Remember I told you about Riya wanting to meet me. Aman says

I told you stay away. I say

Yes I know but when Chachi came I had meet them. Aman says

Hetal Kaki... But why... I say

I don't know how but Chachi and Riya knew Di was alive that what they wanted to tell me. Aman says

But how did she knew. I ask

I don't know but she called me today so I told her i am in Mumbai and she was right about Di. Aman says

I noticed DD listening to us hiding outside

What does she want. DD says

I am don't know. Aman says

Let her come she seem to have changed staying with Hetali Kaki. I say

So I will let him come in the a while. Aman says

What happened DD. I ask

Sirji will never trust her. DD says

He will for now for Avni's sake he will. Now that Hetali Kaki is involved means Riya's grandparents are involved maybe even Vivek uncle her Mammu and Mammi and Priya are also involved they all seem to dislike Dayawanti. I say

Let's just hope you are right Ali Bhai. DD says

(Lobby outside: Avni's room)

Di please don't get angry. Aman says

What happened is Mowgli fine. Avni asks

Ha Mowgli is fine. But actually... I say

What is she doing here. I understand she is sister but Aman please tell her to go. Already we have Metali not another gang please it been too long I can't deal with it now not atleast till Jaan is back in Khanna House completely and happily. Neil says pulling Avni closer

Riya. Avni says surprised

Ali I didn't expect this out off you you know very well what she did at least you should have kept Aman away if not be away from her but keep are Neil says

Neil at least listen to her once she might know something it been long since then. Avni says

Just for you Jaan. Neil says

Ali, Aman and DD smile

Aman tells them how she meet Riya and Hetal a while ago and they told him about Avni being which he didn't believe. Riya's phone rings

Why is Metali calling you Riya anyways pick it up. I say

Priya where are you. Are you coming for shopping tomorrow is haldi. Metali says

Metali I am a little busy I will call you a while and I am at cousins cant't come for shopping. Riya says

Liers are lier always. Jaan I going upstairs come fast I waiting. Neil say

Neil goes to Avni's room

Metali always knew Avni was alive for... Riya says

Neil knows that Riya from Kashid. I know you want help but Neil will not believe you that she has been not only cheated by you but after that Juhi any some where by me too. Avni says cutting Riya

Avni what you did you were forced to do it and no not Kashid probably last 9 years everything that happened with in Kashid was because of her. Riya says

Are you sure. I says

See for yourself. Riya says

That means the investigation clearly showed Bhabhi was alive and Metali knew it for last 9 years but she never told Bhai. DD says

That means all we suffered in Kashid was because of Metali. Syesha says

Haa Mishti I don't know how much of past about me or even yourself you know. Riya says

Neil and Mowgli come there

Who is she. Mowgli asks

Hi beta I am Riya your Aman Mammu's friend. Riya says

Aman Mammu she is Mammi. Mowgli says

Mowgli come here. Avni says

Riya isn't your Mami like Aman is my brother Riya is my sister. She is your Maasi. Avni says

Maasi but why does Papa hate her. Mowgli say

Neil is just angry. Remember how angry Neil was angry with me... Avni says

Mowgli also knows the difference between anger and hate. What in your hand DD. Neil says

Nothing Neil. Please accept Riya apology only she can help us with Metali even Shweta Anuty is blinded with Metali's good facade. Avni says

Fine but Riya hurts you before Metali I will get her lost from here. (Avni peck him on the cheek and smiles) Jaan you come here (Pulling Avni to him) What do you want me to do hug and kiss Riya. Neil says

Neil if Maa would have seen this side of you she would have been shocked. Avni says

Jaan this is what 10 years of deprivation does. Neil say

They all spend time together planning against Metali.

(Next morning)

(Hall)

Neil Ali DD and Aman are leavining.

DD. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. DD says

I had to talk to you. You stay for a while. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. DD says

Neil Ali and Aman leave

(Outside)

What is your sister planning. Neil says

No idea. Aman says

Ali?? Neil says

I have no clue. I say

And if you knew you wouldn't tell childhood best friend's secret after all. Neil says

I join you in a while I have some work. Aman say

Neil and Ali leave

(Outside)

Let's go. I say

What do you think is Riya worth believing i can not risk it. Neil says

They start diving

I remember once a while a go Riya came to talk Aman and me neither of us gave it heed but when Hetal anuty came came Aman did talk to me so she can be believed. I say

Your are right but we have vigilant with her anything can expected she can change sides any time. Neil says

Vigilant... I just remembered where are we going. I asks

Somewhere where there no Mom no Metali. Neil says

Where...I ask

New but old I got it back a while ago but but made it livable a few hours ago. Neil says

Neil's Flat

Your bachlor pad. I says

Yes... My save have away from all drama. Neil says

All these files. I says

Private investigation don't tell anyone. Neil says

Another room. I asks

Vidyut's addition. Neil says

Ali phone buzz he reads a message

Can I see . I ask

Haa see why are you being formal. Neil says

Neil phone rings.

Jaan. Neil says

Where are you. Avni asks

Home. Neil says

Why did Papaji says you are not home. Avni asks

I on my flat. Neil says'

You got it back. Avni asks happily

Yes Jaan. Neil says

You have no plans of going back to Khanna House. I ask

Fine let's go. Jaan I coming to you in few hours and I am fine with Riya. Neil says

Love you Neil. Avni says

They go to the car

(Outside)

Aman you here. Neil says

Your got the flat back. Aman says

Yes. Neil say

Are we going to Khanna House. Aman asks

Yes. Neil says

I nod

[SIZE=4]Khanna House

(Outside)

DD you here. Neil say

Sirji I was waiting for you Bhabhi was worried when Uncle said you are not here. DD says

I talk to Jaan. Neil says

What that lying in the car. let me see sirji you go inside. DD says

Hmm. Neil says

Sirji congratulation you joint the department back as a private investigator. DD says

Congratulations Neil. Ali says

Congratulation Jiju. I say

Neil Ali and Aman go inside. DD takes the file and goes to police station


Footnotes

1. Word Count: 5173

2. Next will be DD'S POV and Aman's POV .

3. There 4 more update in PART 2. The part has total of 6 updates.

4. This is Day 1, 4th day will the Metali's Sangeet.

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1. This is Day 1.

2.This is in DD POV.

2. This is a day after Neil get's to know the truth.

3. There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and AvNeil'S and Metali's sangeet

4. This part {C} of PART 2.


DD
Sakoon House

(Avni's Room)

Bhabhi where are you? I want to talk to. I says

DD please listen don't pester Avni. She will not say anything she didn't even tell Neil. Suhanri says

You away don't you dear. Tara where is Bhabhi. I ask

Avni...Tara says

I am asking you something. I say

DD Bro what's wrong. KK says

Bhabhi. I ask

Inside in her room. Just chill Syeasha is also there. KK says

DD walk to Bhabhi's room[/D]

DD what's wrong why are you talking to Suhanri like this. Avni says

What is she saying. I say

What is she saying. Ali asks

Ali Bhai, Aman (look at Neil) Sir what happened to you. Why is everyone here. I ask

Aman and I came to Avni and Mowgli. Ali says

Mammu hit Papa so bad. Mowgli says

Aman you did this. I asked

What was I expected to do... Aman says

You are going to apologise to Neil. Avni says

Yes you are going to say sorry to Papa Mumma is always right. Mowgli says

Mowgli see what I got for you. KK says

Wow. Mowgli says

Come lets play. KK says

KK and Mowgli go

DD what happened why are you shouting on Sunhari. Avni asks

Bhabhi why did you leave 10 years. I ask

Because Vidyut scared me. Avni says looking at Suhanri

Why are you telling Sir, to marry Metali. I ask

Because that what his mom wants. Avni says

Then why don't you get married too. I ask

DD. AvNeil say together

What wrong in that. I say

DD Mowgli is son and Neil is father I don't need a man in life. Avni says

But.. I say

There no but it is done deal am I clear. Avni says

Bhabhi then get married to Sir why can't you that give one reason don't even say it is just

Shweta Aunty. I says

Avni.. Vidyut is dead you know that. Suhanri says

Wifey not again please don't you say you have caused danger in live I accepted it happily I love you I accept you as you are. Neil says

Kab tak Bhabhi why are letting that dayawanti effect you so much still. DD asks

DD is right please don't do this. Di Aman says

Aman you keep out of it. Avni says

Aman your anger still rules at time here is prove. Ali says looking at Neil

Ali seriously how could you if something happened. Avni says

Its is better then marrying Metali. Neil says

Neil please. Avni says

Bhabhi why was suhanri saying you leaving had something to Neela Maa muder and Prakash uncle has something to do with it. I say

Because it does... Neil says

Neil no please. I know there will no problem it is just DD but please no. Avni says

You trust Suhanri more then me. I says

DD nahi but... Avni says

Dad was drugged by Vidyut and that state he fired on me but Neela Maa came in between to save me. Neil says

Clean and clear I was shocked to save Dadji Bhabhi sacrificed 10 years of her life and now because of Shweta Aunty she was ready sacrifice her happiness. If Bhai (Neil) become as adement as Bhabhi then they can get married but I know Bhai to well he has caused to much pain and suffering in past few day he will not force Bhabhi.

DD please don't tall anyone. Avni says

Bhabhi, Sir and you can still get married. I say

Wifey (Neil cups her face) why are doing this why can't we get married and be happy did something happened. (Avni hugs Neil tightly) Wifey what happened... (Neil starts getting hurt)

Did Metali say something did she hurt you any way...

Mumma stop crying. Dadi is bad. Mowgli says

Tiger what did Dadi say. Neil ask

She made mumma cry she is bad. Mowgli says

Neil hugs both Avni and Mowgli.

WIFEY THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT WITH THAT METALI. That brings me to a question in my academy days Metali surname was Dua now it Dubey. DD you know you responsibility find out everything of Metali in last 10 years. Wifey you are coming with me. Neil says

Neil I have... Avni says

Wifey no arguments. Neil says

Bhai the sangeet function. DD asks

Thanks for the reminder Mom and Metali wouldn't let me forget it you know. Tiger is also coming with us. Neil says

Neil where are taking me tell me. Avni says

DD you go start your investigation. Neil says

Neil do you realises you have left police force 10 years back. Will you stop ordering DD. Avni says

This will never change Bhabhi. Love you Bhabhi. It just you who can order Bhai . I say

Suahnari you want come along. Neil says

I will come. Suhanri says

Tara Sitara get Mowgli things he shifting in with Mammus. Neil says

Both nod and leave with Sunehari. DD also leaves for Police station

(Time Skip)

Aman's House

(Ali's Room)

What does she want. I say

I am don't know. Aman says

Let her come she seem to have changed staying with Hetali Kaki. Ali say

So I will let him come in the a while. Aman says

I knew Sirji will never accept that Riya and her help even in the worst situation

What happened DD. Ali asks

Sirji will never trust her. I say

He will for now for Avni's sake he will. Now that Hetali Kaki is involved means Riya's grandparents are involved maybe even Vivek uncle her Mammu and Mammi and Priya are also involved they all seem to dislike Dayawanti. Ali says

Let's just hope you are right Ali Bhai. I say

(Lobby outside: Avni's room)

Di please don't get angry. Aman says

What happened is Mowgli fine. Avni asks

Ha Mowgli is fine. But actually... Ali says

What is she doing here. I understand she is sister but Aman please tell her to go. Already we have Metali not another gang please it been too long I can't deal with it now not atleast till Jaan is back in Khanna House completely and happily. Neil says pulling Avni closer

Riya. Avni says surprised

Ali I didn't expect this out off you you know very well what she did at least you should have kept Aman away if not be away from her but keep are Neil says

Neil at least listen to her once she might know something it been long since then. Avni says

Just for you Jaan. Neil says

Aman tells them how she meet Riya. Riya's phone rings

Why is Metali calling you Riya anyways pick it up. Ali says

Priya where are you. Are you coming for shopping tomorrow is haldi. Metali says

Metali I am a little busy I will call you a while and i am at cousins cant't come for shopping. Riya says

Liers are lier always. Jaan I going upsatir come fast I waiting. Neil say

Neil goes to Avni's room

Metali always knew Avni was alive for... Riya says

Neil knows that Riya from Kashid. I know you want help but Neil will not believe you that she has been not only cheated by you but after that Juhi any some where by me too. Avni says cutting Riya

Avni what you did you were forced to do it and no not Kashid probably last 9 years everything that happened with in Kashid was because of her. Riya says

Are you sure. I says

See for yourself. Riya says

That means the investigation clearly showed Bhabhi was alive and Metali knew it for last 9 years but she never told Bhai. I says

That means all we suffered in Kashid was because of Metali. Syesha says

Haa Mishti I don't know how much of past about me or even yourself you know. Riya says

Who is she. Mowgli asks

Hi beta I am Riya your Aman Mammu's friend. Riya says

Aman Mammu she is Mammi. Mowgli says

Mowgli come here. Avni says

Riya isn't your Mami like Aman is my brother Riya is my sister. She is Maasi. Avni says

Maasi but why does Papa hate her. Mowgli say

Neil is just angry. Remember how angry Neil was angry with... Avni says

Mowgli also knows the difference between anger and hate. What in your hand DD. Neil says

Nothing Neil. Please accept Riya apology only she can help us with Metali even Shweta Anuty is blinded with Metali's good facade. Avni says

Fine but Riya hurts you before Metali I will get her lost from her. (Avni peck him on the cheek and smiles) Jaan you come here (Pulling Avni to him) What do you want me to do hug and kiss Riya. Neil says

Neil if Maa would have seen this side of you she would have been shocked. Avni says

Jaan this is what 10 years of deprivation does. Neil say

They all spend time together planning against Metali.

(Next morning)

(Hall)

Neil Ali DD and Aman leaving.

DD. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. I say

I had to talk to you. You stay for a while. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi.

Neil Ali and Aman leave. Aman comes back

(Inside)

Riya. Avni says

You want to know how I got all this right. Riya says

Obliviously. I says

I met Metali after dadi died and I was living with ma at Nanu's. First I ignored her then I heard about Neela Kaki's dead and then yours followed. I told Mom about your death Mom didn't accept it so through Nanu's we got Neil resigned and she had case.She not realising who I actually was she told that she loved Neil and now his wife is dead now she can have him soon. I told mom. Mom told me keep an eye on her. Soon she gave me this file saying she successful closed the Avni's death case 6 months after your presumed and said that now one will ever get to know you were actually alive. Then her over keen interest in orphanage in Kashid and it was clear it was no good at all. Riya says

That why your tried to call me so many time. Aman says

Ya, I knew Avni wasn't dead but what was Suhanri, Tara Sitara connection with her specailly the orphan age. Riya says

Then what did you so. I say

Naanu connection they figured out Avni was in jail with them for wrong accusation of murdering Juhi. So I made comnnect that she was trying to know about Avni. Coinsidently there no one knew Avni. And who ever would have informed her knew her as Neilanaja and were strictly not reveal by Nannu's friend who happens to be a MP. Riya says

Then I came back here I found Ali here tried to tell him but he didn't listen but Aman heard me once Mom came here. Riya says

Chachi. Avni says

So once she said some Metali knew all about Avni. Aman was interest by then I had seen Avni and also realised she changed not only her name but herself also. Riya says

What else do you know. I asks

Metali killed her husband because he was not divorcing her after Avni's supposed death. Neil is no danger as such I think. Riya says

Riya do you know anything more. I ask

You have everything what I know with proof I have some sound clip if you want them I will message them to you. Riya says

Is there more. I say

For now only this. Riya says

DD first if by any chance if Neil has reach department remove this case he has guilty it will just increase that should happen. Avni says

But Bhabhi. I says

Please DD. Avni says

Okay Bhabhi. I will do it. I says

We need to plan something. Aman says

We do but first let me talk to Neil and Ali to. Avni says

Don't worry I will pitch Ali bhai in. Aman says

I talk to Neil about it but you said Neil is not in danger and she is not going physical hurt me in case. Avni says

Khanna House

(Outside)

DD you here.Neil say

Sirji I was waiting for you Bhabhi was worried when Uncle said you are not here. I say

I talk to Jaan. Neil say

What that lying in the car. let me see sirji you go inside. DD says

Hmm. Neil says

Sirji congratulation you joint the department back as a private investigator. DD says

Congratulations Neil. Ali says

Congratulation Jiju. Aman says

Neil Ali and Aman go inside. DD takes the file and goes to police station


Footnotes


1. In the next update there will be Aman's POV.

2. There 3 more update in PART 2. The part has total of 6 updates.

3. This is Day 1, 4th day will the AvNeil's and Metali's Sangeet.



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1. This is DAY 1

2. This is a day after Neil gets to know about the truth.

3. There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and AvNeil's and Metali's sangeet.

4. This is part {D} of PART 2


Part 2 {D}: Neil's Reaction


Khanna's House

(Hall)

Where were you. Metali asks

None of your business. Neil says

Why were you with Avni last night when we are getting married. Metali says

Because she is the person I love and she is my wife. Dad did my lawyer come and inform you I withdrew the divorce papers. Neil says

Yes Tillu lawyer had come. Prakash says

Good hance I am still married. Your engagement with me illegal and if Jaan I mean Avni wants she can do a case on for that she has my complete support Mrs Metali Dua Dubey. I will get you in jail and till I remember Avni professional is journalist hance can get a lot media to cover it's interesting isn't it MRS METALI DUA DUBEY. Neil says

Neil we are getting married she is your past you promised. Metali says

No I promised you that you will become a daughter in law of this house. That is all. Neil says

But Neil I LOVE YOU. Metali says

I LOVED MY WIFEY MY AVNI I LOVE MY WIFEY AVNI AND I WILL ALWAYS LOVE MY WIFEY MY AVNI SHE IS LIFELINE AVNI NAHI TOH NEIL NAHI. Neil says

But Neil... Metali says

(Neil's Room)

Beema. Neil says

Ji Sahaab. Beema says

Clean this place. Neil says

Carefull Beema you know how costly is this. Metali says

This is scrap you can throw it. Neil says

I got this for you. Metali says

So now I throwing it away. Neil says

But it was a our engagement frame. Metali says

Mrs Metali Dua Dubey our engagement... let me correct you Mrs Metali Dua Dubey your engagement which I simply did out of anger you can still walk out Mrs Metali Dua Dubey. Bima is the cleaning done. Neil says

Ji sahaab. Beema says

(Lobby)

Why are you locking the room. Metali asks

Because I fell like don't you question me ever in your live you have no right. Neil says

But I will... Metali says

You are no one at all you not even worth to call a women forget it I regret in my ego and anger on Avni I proposed you. You even worse then Juhi and for a fact Riya was 100 times better then you. Neil says

(Hall)

I don't know what happened to you suddenly what that fraud illegitimate... Metali says

Don't you dear say anything about MY WIFEY MY AVNI there no one better then her. Neil says

That women lied to faked her own death. Metali says

What ever Avni did she did is for us. Our happiness our safety. Metali always remember you are getting married to Neil not only because he has moved on but because Avni has also move on. Shweta say

Who funny mom no one moves on from who is their true love. Before you mention I moved on from Juhi. Two completely different people and situation. Juhi was not love it was just pure guilt of not being save her AVNI WAS IS AND WILL ALWAYS BE MY LIFELINE. Neil says

Our wedding. Metali asks

Oh that the wedding has been delayed by 1 whole week all the other use less function you want Metali which I personally don't have interest in. Metali and Mom any one of you hurt Avni by any means I will not spare you I will personal put you in Jail. Neil says

Tillu where are you going. Prakash says

Some where I get some peace. Neil says

Tillu are you going to Avni. Bebe says

Tillu. Shweta says

Neil where is the engagement ring. Metali says

I lost it. Neil says

Metali Self Talk] He never lost Avni's magalsutra for 10 years and couldn't take care for our engagement ring for few days

Whats is in your hand it for me. Metali asks

No it is for my Jaan my Wifey my Avni... Neil says

Neil you should find the our engagement ring first. Metali say

Do I look interested. Neil says

What happened to you Neil why have you so many marks. Metali asks

You got hurt Tillu. Bebe asks worried

Bebe I was with my Jaan My Wifey my Avni last night this just a few there are many more do want to see. Neil says

Tillu you have become shameless. Prakash says

What I do Dad I living shameless spineless people that I have to say these things. Neil says

Neil how can you do this with me. Metali says

Oh did I forget to mention the wedding you are so happy Mrs Metali Dua Dubey has been delayed by me for a week I can go further in delaying it if needed so you better use your brains and brake the wedding before it goes worst for you Mrs Metali Dua Duabey because here no one will support (Looking at Shweta adds)and somebody does can know it end my relation with them. Neil says

But Neil.. Metali says

Neil ignores and leaves to Sakoon house. Metali goes to a guest room and starts crying


Sukoon House

(Hall)

Neil reach Sakoon House and see Tara Sitara in the kitchen.

Neil Self Talk] So they all are back.

Go to Avni room. The first two things he see Avni hugging some guy and see a suitcase packed righty next to her. She can't be leave I surely not going to get married to Metali if she goes always from me.

Avni. Neil voice coated with jealousy insularity

Ali and Avni turn towards Neil

(Avni Room)

Neil you came back I thought. Avni says

Avni run and hugs Neil tightly. Neil reciprocates the hug with same intensity.

Neil Self Talk] She actually thought I will not return she is the one stressing on me marrying Metali not me. I want marry her again and stay with my Avni and our son and make up lost 10 years

Avni where you going you can't leave again and go. Neil says

Neil please let me pack I am not taking Mowgli away I am not shifting away. Avni says

Didn't you hear me you are not leaving me going again. Neil says

Neil let me pack please. Avni says

Avni you coming home with me it's done. Neil says

And doing what there attending your wedding seems interesting doesn't it Mr Neil Khanna. Sorry to say Di is going no where with you not today nor ever I am here I will take care of her now. Aman says

Aman pushes Neil. Neil fall but doesn't get defenses

Let's go. Neil says

Leave my sister now. Aman says pushing Neil

Avni gets worried and Neil notice but doesn't hit Aman back

Neil. (Avni supports Neil pulling him up) Aman what is wrong with you. Avni says

Nothing is wrong if this man thinks he keep hurting you and you have no one to support he mistaken. Aman says

Neil please go I will talk to you latter everyone will be waiting at home. Avni says

That will happen whenever it has to people can wait so can Metali. You are coming with me. Avni I willl take care of everything just come. Neil says

Didn't I make myself clear Di isn't going any where with you. You have already hurt her enough. you are such spineless person you snatched a son from his mother. (Aman starts bashing him) You know Di she can never hurt you on purpose but you didn't leave one chance to hurt her. Aman says

Avni pulls Aman off Neil

How dear you hurt my Neil like that I didn't expect this from you Neela Maa would never liked this she gave her life for saving Neil my Neil this what you do this is respect you have for Neela Maa's sacrifice. Ali you, I always thought you would guide him Aman to do right you are not even stopping him the way he was going he killed Neil. Avni said

Avni what wrong in what any brother would have done the same and let's get this Neela maa did.t save this man she save her Avni husband who love her more then anything. Ali says

Enough Ali I don't know what got into you if Shweta Aunty wants him to move with Metali what's wrong in that it been long I left he has right live his life. Avni says

Mom... Avni I thought. Neil says

You know very well how Avni still lives with her past wounds which have scared her the last 10 years very badly that forced her to keep her only son away from her. Ali say

Suhanri Tara and Sitara told you this... Avni asked

Does that matter Avni or should I say NEILajana. Ali say

Ali that actually. Avni says

NEILajana means you kept me with always NEILajaana. (Tries to stand up) Ahh. Neil says

Neil please keep sitting you are hurt badly. (Neil held on Ali hand to stand) Neil.. Avni says

Aman again tries to beat Neil Avni comes in between

To hurt my Neil you will will have hurt me understood Aman

Shh! enough is enough this wedding is being called off right now. I am calling Dad now. Neil says

Neil... Aman will you it and stop creating so much commotion Mowgli is in next room think how he feel about his Mamu tried killing his father. Avni says

Di. Aman says

Leave now. Avni says taking out the first aid

Avni please think please come back home I will call of the marriage. Neil says cupping her face

No.. You have fulfill your promised to Metali. Avni says

I promised Neela Maa and you to keep you happy and give you a happy family. Neil says

But your mom wants you to move on she wants me out of your life. Avni says

I don't care. Neil says

Please Neil understand. Avni says

You say you value Neela Maa promise still you hurt Avni so much you didn't even try to talk to her understand her you have hurt her enough now you no business your mom as well as you don't deserve Avni you all just deserve that stupid Metali. Ali says

Ali please. Avni says

What wrong am I saying.. Ali says

Ali what you know very well I love Avni not Metali yes I was using her to hurt Avni because I was hurt. I am not what I do was right It wasn't ... Neil says

Oh so you have realised you were you didn't do a mistake but crime you should have not lost your trust on Avni if you actually love her. Ali says

If I know what happened and why Avni did it I would never do it. Neil says

Then why are you still getting married to that selfish Metali before also she tried to separate Angle and you Superman. Syaesha says

Mishti keep out of this you are too young. Avni says

Please angel you have done what you could keep me happy and secure let me at least try I know you can only be happy with. Why do you want pay my father Vidyuts crimes. Hear me out Metali is no great in ant respect I don't get what Shweta Aunty see in her she simply selfish. Syaesha says

Vidyut did what. Ali asks

Vidyut drugged Dad. Neil say losing hand on the secret

Neil... Avni shakes her head

Ali Self Talk] Clearly Avni was the stronger one I should happy she was childhood friend but I was not because one fact which I could simply decode that means Prakash Uncle was drugged by Vidyut who made made him shoot Neil and Neela Maa came in between to save Neil.

Avni tell me what Neil is saying is lie you didn't do all this only to save Prakash Uncle. Ali says

Papa. Avni says

Ali Self Talk]When will you grow up Avni did you even once think if Prakash Uncle gets to know what will happen you saved from jail and law but did you even once think about the guilt he will be in for making his only son suffer for 10 year and making you take such a decision. For him both Neil and you are same. How could you do this did not once think of this . Avni once. Ali say

Ali I had no option I would have come you don't know how hard was to leave Neil when I saw him breakdown in front of Vidyut's house. Avni says

Wifey you were there then those death certificate. Neil says

What death certificate I don't know. Avni says

Did any one know about your plan. Neil asks

No. Avni says

I calling off this wedding now you are danger someone it behind your live Wifey. I need you save. Neil says

Avni why are now you are letting go Neil just because of Shweta Aunty. Everyone here understands why Uncle is important to you but why let go Neil. Is your love for him so weak it can't stand against Shweta Aunty. Ali say

Neil we have go with it Metali loves you and you are marrying her. Avni says

Ali, Wifey you want to marry me Metali because my mother wants it right fine I will do that I told you before I will repeat again being with Metali in any capacity and even if it just friendship because she has no self respect as I have observed ...Neil says

Why are you telling Sir, to marry Metali. DD asks

Because that what his mom wants. Avni says

Then why don't you get married too. DD asks

DD. AvNeil say together

What wrong in that. DD says

DD Mowgli is my son and Neil is the father I don't need a man in life. Avni says

But.. DD say

There no but it is done deal am I clear. Avni says

Bhabhi then get married to Sir why can't you that give one reason don't even say it is just Shweta Aunty. DD says

Avni.. Vidyut is dead you know that. Suhanri says

Wifey not again please don't you say you have caused danger in live I accepted it happily I love you I accept you as you are. Neil says

Till when Bhabhi why are letting that dayawanti effect you so much still. DD asks

DD is right please don't do this. Di. Aman says

Aman you keep out of it. Avni says

Aman your anger still rules at time here is prove. Ali says looking at Neil

Ali seriously how could you if something happened. Avni says

Its is better then marrying Metali. Neil says

Neil please. Avni says

Bhabhi why was suhanri saying you leaving had something to Neela Maa muder and Prakash uncle has something to do with it.DD says

Because it does... Neil says

Sirji what do you mean.. DD says

Dad was drugged by Vidyut and that state he fired on me but Neela Maa came in between to save me. Neil says

DD Self Talk] Clean and clear I was shocked to save Dadji Bhabhi sacrificed 10 years of her life and now because of Shweta Aunty she was ready sacrifice her happiness. If Bhai become as adement as Bhabhi then they can get married but I know Bhai to well he has caused to much pain and suffering in past few day he will not force Bhabhi.

DD please don't tall anyone. Avni says

Bhabhi, Sirji and you can get married. DD says

Wifey (Neil cups her face) why are doing this why can't we get married and be happy did something happen. (Avni hugs Neil tightly) Wifey what happened... (Neil starts getting hurt) Did Metali say something did she hurt you any way...Neil says

Mumma stop crying. Dadi is bad. Mowgli says

Tiger what did Dadi say. Neil ask

She made mumma cry she is bad. Mowgli says

Neil hugs both Avni and Mowgli.

WIFEY THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT WITH THAT METALI. That brings me to a question in my academy days Metali surname was Dua now it Dubey. DD you know you responsibility find out everything of Metali in last 10 years. Wifey you are coming with me. Neil says

Neil I have... Avni says

Jaan no arguments. Neil says

Bhai the sangeet function. DD asks

Neil Metali...Avni says

Thanks for the reminder Mom and Metali wouldn't let me forget it you know. And anyways the sangeet was 3 days later now it's a week later. Neil says

Neil Self Talk] Jaan will not say anything till the plan is there I know that. Tiger is also coming with us.

Neil where are taking me tell me. Avni says

DD you go start your investigation. Neil says

Neil do you realises you have left police force 10 years back. Will you stop ordering DD. Avni says

This will never change Bhabhi. Love you Bhabhi. It just you who can order Bhai . DD says

Suahnari you want come along. Neil says

I will come. Suhanri says

Tara Sitara get Mowgli things he shifting in with Mammus. Neil says

Both nod and leave with Sunehari. DD also leaves for Police station

Let's go check what your anuties are packing Ali says

Aman Mowgli and Ali leave. Neil is leaving to Avni pulls him back

What was all this. Avni says

What?? Neil asks

Why didn't you not attack back on Aman at all. Avni says

Why would I he was right in doing what he was he was just protecting his sister. Jaan I would done the exact same thing if it was Kareena. Neil says

Aee you Mr Neil Khanna no one that no one hurts my husband you understand kuch jo jata toh. Avni says

Husband and all. Neil says

Aur kya obviously so what you give divorce. Avni says

You were right there is something with the name she is afraid of coming out more then she was Rahil Dubey he loved her we were together at the academy Rahil Da and Dad are and Rahil and me were good friends. Neil says

Neil Self Talk] Not only a widow but she has Rahil's murder accusations on her to

Jaan do you still have that CD and latter or it is Metali's possession. Neil asks

It with her. But we can recreate and say it was the same if necessary. Avni says

Jaan Di. Samrat says

What happened Sam. Neil says

Neil uncle I had gone to Metali house to meet her. Samrat says

Samrat you are fine. Avni asks immediately

Yes Jaan Di I wnt with Karan and Syesha so don't worry. Samrat says

I found this. Samrat says

What is this. Avni asks

That CD you received in Kashid with this letter. Seems like she plans to use it again. Samrat says

She will not get the opportunity at all. Keep it save and we will use it at the right time. Neil says

Samrat leaves

What are you planning. Avni says

Jaan sangeet hai Metali ki shaadi ka remember abb gift toh dena banta hai. Neil says

Neilu. Avni says pecking him on cheek

Avni holds his left arm kiss it.

Jaan.. Neil says

I know this was how important to you. Avni says

It was our memory something I lived for 10 years with. Neil says

I am sorry. Avni says

Jaan I know you wouldn't have done it if you thought it was necessary. (He pulls Avni close to him) What happened you knew about it why all a sudden I KNOW YOU HAVEN'T MOVED ON THEN WHY ME MAIN. Neil says

I thought you will move you as you weren't ready to forgive me or even listen to me neither were you moving on and Shweta Mom wanted you to move on marry Metali I never how could let you suffer I LOVE YOU. Avni says

Mom you heard MOM and Bebe talk and you did it. I again blamed you for something you were forced to so by Mom and the situation how couldn't I see this. Neil say

Neilu you did nothing wrong. Avni says

Jaan stop saying this it just makes me more guilty... anyways let's go everyone would be waiting. Neil says hugging her tightly




Footnotes

1. Next part is Amam's POV

2.There 2 more update in PART 2. The part has total of 6 updates

3.This is Day 1, 4th day will the AvNeil's and Metali's Sangeet.

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1. This is still Day 1.

2. This is in Aman's POV.

3. There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth AvNeil's and Metali's sangeet.

4. This is part {E} of Part 2.


Part 2 {E}: Aman's POV

I was in USA when I got to know about Neil getting married to Metali I was happy I knew Shweta Aunty was behind it but that was fine but I was shocked when I got to know Avni my sister was alive not only that Di and Neil had a 9 year old kid.

I came down to India so I could get to know everything from DD. Ali Bhai always took care of me as he had promised Di as his own younger brother. Today I have started my own business. I was as equally shocked as Ali Bhai to know my only sister my Di was alive but no one knew about it. She was living wit Suhenri, Tara and Sitara. Which got to know from Ali Bhai were with her in Jail.

Frist time when I heard from Ali Bhai and DD that Neil put Di in jail I got angry I abused and accused him he didn't say anything didn't defend himself. He didn't even let Bebe Prakash Uncle Shweta Aunty Ali Bhai or DD defend him he said what wrong is he doing any brother would do this for his sister why you wouldn't Dad if was Maddy Bua. That had stopped me. I had asked him what had happened when he told me I understood and I apologised. Then he he wasn't worth being asked asked for apology I was shocked. I was confused I saw something like Di's mangalsutra on his then I spotted Neela Maa's photos on the wall with a garland which I already knew about her death right next to her was Di's photos smiling as happy as ever which she alway was when she was with Neil but what broke me was the fresh garland around it. I looked at Bebe and then Prakash Uncle and Shweta Aunty they just nodded I knew asking Neil wouldn't get me an answer I asked Ali Bhai and DD they clearly said that she died in a fire at Vidyut's house. I always had my doubts that THE AVNI AYESHA EVEN DAYAWANTI MEHTA FEARED WOULD DIED SO SIMPLY but unfortunately she had died according a death certificate. I knew there no scope of investigation at that even after 1 month which Ali Bhai told me. Not all was Di dead Vidyut was charged for her murder which he himself confessed which was make me doubt Di death even more. But the time and the place was not right as not only Ali Bhai but the Khanna and more specifically Neil was lost this was not the same man who fought Dayawanti, Pandit , Juhi and even Vidyut for DI TO KEEP HER WITH HIM TO LOVE TO MAKE HER DREAMS HIS.

Come to today Ali Bhai and I got to Di and Suhenari had started a orphan age. With Mowgli Di and Neil son and Syaesha aka Mishti with other kids.

We reached India we first met DD that we got a unbiased version of everything. I was less shocked more angry Neil filed a custody case which he won couldn't even take care of kid one night. Now Mowgli is back Di and Neil is still getting married to Metali. I don't know if Ali Bhai realises in his happiness of Di being alive that THE REASON DI DID ALL THIS DEATH AND EVEN KEEP HERSELF AND MOWGLI HIDDEN HAS TO BE BIG. Okay I don't like the but it feels like a cover name and not telling Neil now would only because because she was scared of loosing Mowgli to him.

Ali Bhai and me went to Khanna I met Metali there for the first time. Didn't like her at all not because she getting married my sister's ex husband but the person I didn't like. Ali Bhai told me that she has changed the only thing I could ask him was was she even worse then this before he laughed and said she was better. When he said said THIS METALI CAN GO TO ANY LIMIT TO GET NEIL. This reminded me women in Neil's life think he is a toy and they have right over him just like my dear cousin who has been trying to contact and was successful but we talk about it latter and then Meher aka Juhi and now Metali. But now the problem is with Di because after she is Dayawanti Mehta granddaughter would say what she doesn't want and Neil who is very nicely on a anger ego trip.

Ali Bhai and I got know everything but still no one knew why Di left what was the reason because easy to it was Di past would alone responsible or just Vidyut blackmailed Di that why she did this drama or combination of both. BUT I knew AVNI AYESHA better and the reason was bigger then anybody could imagine.

I met Syaesha aka Vidyut's and Juhi's daughter Mishti it was clear she knew something more but was not comfortable in telling might not remember Ali Bhai and doesn't know me at as she was just 8 years old back then as I was told

After meeting Khannas, Suhaneri, Tara and Sitara I and Ali Bhai realised Suhaneri knew but she wouldn't tell me the way just like Ali Bhai wouldn't tell a lot of secrets that Di and him share. Finally Ali bhai and I went to meet Di and Mowgli.

When Ali Bhai and I both meet Di we were equally emotions. We all talked. I could clearly see how clearly Di was hurt because of the whole custody and marriage drama like Shweta Aunty said she has moved on she hasn't at all she still loves Neil she is hurting alot with all. Ali Bhai and I knew it was not easy or should I say next to impossible to get it out Di but didn't mean we will stop.


Sukoon House

(Avni's Room)

Avni, Why don't you shift in with Aman and me. Ali says

Yes Di. Our place is not far from Mowgli will be more happier and comfortable. I say

I have found a job in school I am getting Mowgli admitted there. Avni says

But Di... I say

Ok fine Avni but till you here at Sukoon house you can shift with us me and Aman also want to spend time with our nephew. Ali says

Fine. Ali did you meet Neil soon is his sangeet you should go and meet him. Avni says

Di seriously he is hurting you so much you still want Ali Bhia to go meet. I say

I knew Di can't ever stop caring for Neil

Aman Neil and I were not meant to be together. Metali is good partner for him his mom also like Metali alot. Avni says

With that I could see she had lost trust on Shweta aunty. So now Ali Bhai and I had see if that Di still had trust in Bebe and Prakash Uncle. This is something we had do and do it fast time seem to be running out. We both very well know that Bebe and Prakash uncle were in favor of the wedding. Ali Bhai had met Neil but it was he was not interested in wedding either just like at the time Riya and his wedding. He clearly said he still loves Di and will always love Di it was just Shweta aunty who was highly interested in Metali and his wedding Prakash uncle was not. Bebe was stuck as she wants Neil to happy at same want Di to happy too.

Mumma. Mowgli says

Runs in and hugs Avni

Mowgli meet (Point at Ali) that is Ali Manmu. Avni says

I am you Mumma's younger brother Aman Ayesha. And you. I say

I am Mowgli Avni Khanna. Mowgli says

Who thought you this. Avni says

I did . Tara says

Aman Mammu Ali Mammu. Mowgli says

Champ how are you. Aman says

Fine. Mowgli says

I meet my nephew talk him for a while.

Champ how are you. Aman says

Fine. Mowgli says

See what I got you. I says

Poha, Love you Ali Maamu. Mowgli says

Poha. Avni says

Mumma. Mowgli says

Suhenari will help you with the plate and then bring it here I will make you eat. then do you homework after which you can play with Aman Mammu. Avni said

After Mowgli eats he leaves to his home work.

What are you doing where are you going. Suhaneri says

Suhaneri, Avni is coming home with Aman and me. I say

I leaves to spend time with Mowgli.

Through out these the only thing that rang in my head was about 3 years after Di death and 6 - 7 months of ignoring Riya my cousin she came with her mother Hetal Chachi to meet Ali Bhai and me which Ali Bhai ignored but I couldn't ignore Chachi she was a mother to me. They said that THEY KNOW AND HAVE CONCRETE PROOF THAT AVNI AYESHA YOU SISTER AND ONLY THRID MEHTA IS ALIVE. Just because Chachi I believed but didn't trust even after the proof Riya gave. But after Ali Bhai conformed a few months a ago frist I regretted that I didn't trust them then I was hurt that DI WENT THROUGHOUT ALL OF THIS WITHOUT ANYONE SUPPORT. I wanted to tell Ali Bhai about and now I want to tell Di. I see Neil come there he was asking about Di. Now what is going to happen. I go to Di's room

Avni where you going you can't leave me again and go. Neil says

Neil please let me pack I am not taking Mowgli away I am not shifting away. Avni says

Ali Bhai and I are listening we both clearly knew if thing continue like this there will be no chance of knowing anything. One of them will spill the beans but who is weaker in situation had a simple answer NEIL, DI WAS NEVER GOING TO SAY ANYTHING SHE WILL TAKE TO HER GRAVE AS I EXPECTED EXACTLY LIKE DAYAWANTI MEHTA ONE BAD THE OTHER GOOD BUT SAME CHARACTERISTIC.

Avni you coming home with me it's done. Neil says

And do what there attend your wedding seems interesting doesn't it Mr Neil Khanna. Sorry to says Di is going no any where with you not today nor ever I am here I will take care of here. I say

Lets go. Neil says

Leave my sister now. Aman says pushing Neil

Neil. (Avni supports Neil pulling him up) Aman what is wrong with you. Avni says

Nothing is wrong if this man thinks he keep hurting you and you have no one to support he mistaken. Aman says

Neil please go I will talk to you latter everyone will be waiting for you. Avni says

That will happen when it has to people can wait so can Metali. You are coming with me. Avni I willl take care of everything just come. Neil says

Didn't I make myself clear Di isn't gping any where with you. You have already hurt her enough. you are such spineless person you snatched a son from his mother. (Aman starts bashing him) You know Di she can never hurt you on purpose but you didn't leave one chance to hurt her. I say

Avni pulls Aman off Neil

How dear you hurt my Neil like that I didn't expect this from Neela would never liked this she gave her life for saving Neil my Neil this what you do this is respect you have for Neela Maa's sacrifice. Ali you, I always thought you would guide him Aman to do right you are not even stopping him the way he was going he killed Neil. Avni says

Avni what wrong in what Aman did any brother would have done the same and let's get this Neela maa did.t save this man she save her Avni husband who love her more then anything. Ali says

Enough Ali I don't know what got into you if Shweta Aunty wants him to move with Metali what's wrong in that it been long I left he has right live his life. Avni says

Mom... Avni I thought. Neil says

You know very well how Avni still lives with her past wounds which have scared her the last 10 years very badly that forced her to keep her only son away from her. Ali say

Unfortunately Ali Bhai was right Dadi had scared Di bad before she ever could heal fully and probably something or the other bad this time things were going good for Di Vidyut killed Neela and Di's past half healed wounds were revived.

Suhanri Tara and Sitara told you this... Avni asked

Does that matter Avni or should I say NEILajana. Ali say

Ali that actually. Avni say

NEILajana means you kept me with always NEILajaana. (Tries to stand up) Ahh. Neil says

Why did I ever think of this Riya also mentioned that Di had changed her name to Neilanjana.

Neil please keep sitting you hurt badly. (Neil held on Ali hand to stand) Neil.. Avni says

Aman again tries to beat Neil. Avni comes in between

Shh! enough is enough this wedding is being called off right now. I am calling Dad now. Neil says

Neil... Aman will you it and stop creating so much commotion Mowgli is in next room think how he feel about his Mamu tried killing his father. Avni says

Di. I say

She did have a point but either off the two had broken only then one will spill the truth

Leave now. Avni says taking out the first aid

Avni please think please come back home I will call of the marriage. Neil says cupping her face

No.. You have fulfill your promised to Metali. Avni says

Promise my foot that women is not worth all this.

I promised Neela Maa and you to keep you yoo happy and give you a happy family. Neil says

But your mom wants you to move on she wants me out of your life. Avni says

Shweta Aunty as expected.

I don't care. Neil says

Please Neil understand. Avni says

I shared a look with Ali. We both could see there was no progress. I pointed towards Neil and Ali Bhai understood I was trying to tell him Neil was weaker link I know he realised it to. So some how take it out of him. After all Di was Dayawanti Mehta granddaughter Dayawanti every would angry or not her blood run in Di's vain. I was listening to all this from outside

You say you value Neela Maa promise still you hurt Avni so much you didn't even try to talk to her understand her you have hurt her enough now you no business your mom as well as you don't deserve Avni you all just deserve that stupid Metali. Ali say

Ali please. Avni says

What wrong am I saying.. Ali says

Ali what you know very well I love Avni not Metali yes I was using her to hurt Avni because I was hurt. I am not saying what I did was right It wasn't ... Neil says

Oh so you have realised you were you didn't do a mistake but crime you should have not lost your trust on Avni if you actually love her. Ali says

If I knew what happened and why Avni did it I would never do it. Neil says

Then why are you still getting married to that selfish Metali before also she tried to separate Angle and you Superman. Syaesha says

Mishti keep out of this you are too young. Avni says

Please angel you have done what you could keep me happy and secure let me at least try I know you can only be happy with superman. Why do you want pay my father Vidyuts crimes. Hear me out Metali is no great in any respect I don't get what Shweta Aunty see in her she simply selfish. Syaesha says

Vidyut did what. Ali ask

Neil looked Avni. That meant Neil knew more then what Suhanri, Tara, Sitara and Mishti knew or should I says they were telling us.

Vidyut drugged Dad. Neil say losing hand on the secret

Neil... Avni shakes her head

I knew clearly Di was the stronger one I should happy she was sister but I was not because one fact which I could simply decode that means Prakash Uncle was drugged by Vidyut who made made him shoot Neil and Neela Maa came in between to save Neil.

Avni tell me what Neil is saying is lie you didn't do all this only to save Prakash Uncle. Ali says

I couldn't believe what I heard but where was Ali Bhai trying to get now.

Papa. Avni says

Ali Bhai walk to her and lift her from the bed.

When will you grow up Avni did you even once think if Prakash Uncle gets to know what will happen you him saved from jail and law but did you even once think about the guilt he will be in for making his only son suffer for 10 year and making you take such a decision. For him both Neil and you are same. How could you do this did you not even once think of this . Avni once. Ali say

Oh my god Prakash Uncle was the first one to accept Di as his daughter and even more as his daughter. Which unfortunately our Dad Ashish Mehta could never do. Justified or not I could easily see where Di was coming from.

Ali I had no option I would have come. Avni says

Di. I says

You don't know how hard was to leave Neil when I saw him breakdown in front of Vidyut's house. Avni says

Wifey you were there then those death certificate. Neil says

What death certificate I don't know. Avni says

Did any one know about your plan. Neil asks

No. Avni says

I calling off this wedding now you are danger someone it behind your live Wifey. I need you save. Neil says

This man here is searching ways and methods of convincing Di to let him call off his wedding with another women.

Avni why are now you are letting go Neil just because of Shweta Aunty. Everyone here understands why Uncle is important to you but why let go Neil. Is your love for him so weak it can't stand against Shweta Aunty. Ali say

God somebody finally Ali Bhai did the needed

Wifey you want me to marry me to Metali because my mother wants it right fine I will do that I told you before I will repeat again being with Metali in any capacity and even if it just friendship because she has no self respect as I have observed ...Neil says

This man will do what Di if even it is against his wish. Why is Di so scared of Shweta something must have happened. I heard DD voice . God grace he also didn't know anything looks like Suhanri spill the bean to him love can make you do anything.

What is she saying. DD say

What is she saying. Ali asks

I laugh. DD gives me a look.

Ali Bhai, Aman (looks at Neil) Sir what happened to you. Why is everyone here. DD ask

Aman and I came to meet Avni and Mowgli. Ali says

Mammu hit Papa so bad. Mowgli says

Aman you did this. DD asked

What was I expected to do...I say

You are going to apologise to Neil. Avni says

Yes you are going to say sorry to Papa Mumma is always right. Mowgli says

Mowgli see what I got for you. KK says

Wow. Mowgli says

Come lets play. KK says

KK and Mowgli go

DD what happened why are you shouting on Sunhari. Avni asks

Bhabhi why did you leave 10 years. DD ask

Because Vidyut scared me. Avni says looking at Suhanri

Why are you telling Sir, to marry Metali. DD ask

Good going DD but let's see if you can get the truth out of Di after all you are an inspector

Because that what his mom wants. Avni says

Then why don't you get married too. DD ask

Why didn't Ali Bhai and I think of this

DD. AvNeil say together

What wrong in that. DD say

DD is right. I say

DD Aman, you both need to undress Mowgli is my son and Neil is his father I don't need a man in life. Avni says

But.. Ali DD and I say

There no but it is done deal am I clear. Avni says

Bhabhi then get married to Sir why can't you that give one reason don't even say it is just. DD says

Shweta Aunty. I say

Avni.. Vidyut is dead you know that. Suhanri says

Wifey not again please don't you say you have caused danger in live I accepted it happily I love you I accept you as you are. Neil says

Till when Bhabhi why are letting that dayawanti effect you so much still. DD asks

Di, DD is right please don't do this. Aman says

Aman you keep out of it. Avni says

Aman your anger still rules at time here is prove. Ali says looking at Neil

Ali seriously how could you do this if something happened. Avni says

Its is better then marrying Metali. Neil says

Neil please. Avni says

Bhabhi why was suhanri saying you leaving had something to Neela Maa muder and Prakash uncle has something to do with it. I say

Because it does... Neil says

Neil no please. I know there will no problem it is just DD but please no. Avni says

You trust Suhanri more then me. DD says

DD but... Avni says

Dad was drugged by Vidyut and that state he fired on me but Neela Maa came in between to save me. Neil says

I was utterly shocked to hear what I heard. I couldn't believe what Neil just. I knew why Di did what she did I understand Prakash Uncle is a gem of person but that the problem which for some Di is understanding if he gets know about first he he guilty for shooting Neela Maa irrespective of being drugged and not remembering anything and if that not enough a million times more guilty for what Jiju and Di faced became the sacrifice the loneliness loveliness she face and specially Di. For Jiju condition he might forgive himself but he wouldn't be able do it for Di he seem love Di more then Jiju. This is very risky. I first wanted to crystal clear of what I heard. I heard DD shout or should I say be emotional. I followed him inside. There Jiju clearly said it again

DD please don't tell anyone. Avni says

Bhabhi, Sir and you can still get married. DD say

Wifey (Neil cups her face) why are doing this why can't we get married and be happy did something happened. (Avni hugs Neil tightly) Wifey what happened... (Neil starts getting hurt)

Did Metali say something did she hurt you any way...

There no point of doubt now. I was confused why was Di adement in get married the only man she ever loves and trusts more then anyone even herself to someone else. Guess what my guess was right. Yes Di would not say it out rightly but in his innocence little Mowgli said it.

Mumma stop crying. Dadi is bad. Mowgli says

Tiger what did Dadi say. Neil ask

She made mumma cry she is bad. Mowgli says

As expected Shweta Aunty can never change I will never understand her. Neil was angry was understatement but I knew something bigger was going in mind just like Di he likes to play big. Not small little wins straight check mate just like Di.

Neil hugs both Avni and Mowgli.

WIFEY THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT WITH THAT METALI.Neil says

Neil said his family was Di and Mowgli and not with that Metali. And now that women is going to face the worst. The slower the better otherwise people forget like Riya did once Juhi showed her true colors I was in jail but the stupid thing could be easily controlled from there she was very much part of all the crimes I committed except mudering Dayawanti

That brings me to a question in my academy days Metali surname was Dua now it Dubey. DD you know you responsibility find out everything of Metali in last 10 years. Wifey you are coming with me. Neil says

There is a starts the game it might be torturous for him but the pain hurt torture they yes THEY it has always been that Neil and Avni are one

Neil I have... Avni says

Wifey no arguments. Neil says

Bhai the wedding . DD asks

Thanks for the reminder Mom and Metali wouldn't let me forget it you know. Tiger is also coming with us. Neil says

Neil where are taking me tell me. Avni says

DD you go start your investigation. Neil says

Neil do you realises you have left police force 10 years back. Will you stop ordering DD. Avni says

This will never change Bhabhi. Love you Bhabhi. It just you who can order Bhai . DD says

I love the bound Neil and DD share it is just so pure. Just like two brothers rather siblings.

That right no matter what nither will stop ordering DD nor he stop saying Ji Sirji D why get between them you come with me. I say

Suahnari you want come along. Neil says

I will come. Suhanri says

Tara Sitara get Mowgli things he shifting in with Mammu's. Neil says

Both nod and leave with Sunehari. DD also leaves for Police station

Let's go. Neil says

But where. Avni and I say together

Just come Wifey. Neil says

Papa where are we going. Mowgli asks

Shh.. it's a secret. Neil say

[/I]They reach the the mall[/I][SIZE]

[/SIZE=4]Mall

(Outside)

Mall... For what sake wait you will know. I ask

Wait you will know. Neil says

(Inside)

Neil takes Avni to a shop

Go try this. Neil says

Why... Avni says

Just go try. Neil says

Why are we shopping. I ask

For the sangeet. Neil says

But... Avni says

You are coming and I am wearing green so decided go try. Neil says

Do go try. I say

Avni goes in to try. Neil is waiting desperately. After a few minutes she comes out. Neil is awestruck.

What happened jijaji. Suhaneri says

Neil gives Avni a tight hug.

Di you look so good. I say

Mumma looks awesome. Mowgli says

Way more then awesome. Neil says

I will go and change. Avni says

Wifey how is this. Neil asks

Is it to small for you. I say

It's for Tiger. Neil says

Avni nods

Come champ let's try it on. Ali says

Yes Mammu. Mowgli says

Avni went changed. Mowgli also come wearing the sherwani.

Mumma Papa. Mowgli says

Neil pays for Avni's dress.

Mowgli. Tara asks

His Mammu is a business man he will pay his only nephew. Meet Jaan and me that shop let me buy her jewellery with this. Neil says

Neil seem to want to buy the whole mall

Jiju Ji done with your jewellery shopping. I ask

Yes. Avni says

Wow Neil what choice you have. Suhaneri says

Wifey gets the best. Neil says

Neil walks towards the billing counter. I stop him

I am Business man when I can pay for my only nephew I can pay for my only sister. Why Di I can. I say

Ya whatever salle Ji but for your memory you have another sister I have only wife (Avni holds his hand possessively) aur humesha ek hi rehagi. Neil says

They go to Aman and Ali's house.


Aman's House


(Outside)

Wow Maamu how big. Mowgli says

Not bad salle sahaab. Neil says

Avni pick her shopping bag. Aman picks Mowgli's. Neil also picks two bags jewellery bags are with the ladies. They go in

Tiger come here. How did you like the outfit. Neil says

I loved it. It matches with Mumma's ghagra. Mowgli says

Papa got you another gift. Neil says

What gift. Mowgli and I ask together

Here open it. I say

Wow see Mumma. Mowgli says

Go try it on. Aman go with him. Neil says

Ji Jiju. Aman says

Mowgli comes wearing it

Wow. Everyone says

Jiju you buy him this that why you told me buy him you know just like you I also haven't been able to pamper him. Thankyou Jiju. I say

Neil is just look at Avni.

I just go keep this in the room. Avni says

Take any room Di. I say

Neil notice clearly the tears Avni was trying to hid. He went behind her. Mowgli tried stopping Neil.

Champ let your Papa only he can take care of your Mumma. After your Neela Nani only your Papa can take care and understand your Mumma. Ali says

Ali but. Suhanri says

Why is Di doing this. Why is she building walls around her. Aman says

This how she protects her self from being hurt. She has always done this from childhood. Ali says

But you are somebody she always tells everything to. Tara says

Angel tells you everything you are been with her since her childhood. Syesha says

Mishti yes I have always been her for Avni but I am not the one who brake her walls Till Dayawanti wasa concerned everything as Ayesha Khalla was involved but other things I always supported irrespective it being wrong or right. But only two people can make her confess what in his heart at easy one was Neela Maa and Neil. I know Neil hasn't been himself for a while. Ali says

He has hurt Di and as usual Shweta Aunty is still the same she was she is still hurting and condemning Di for no mistake of his. I say

Aman if you or me were is Neil's place we would have done the same thing probably the custody was pulling it to far but other wise his reaction was not a over reaction. Till Shweta's Aunty is concerned I think she just wanting Neil to move as she think Avni has moved and has a purpose to live NOT REALISING AVNI AND NEIL STILL LOVE EACH EVEN AFTER NEIL TELLING THEN CLEARLY. Bebe and Prakash Uncle is against the marriage. Thats the way Shweta Aunty bad or good according to Neil can only move on when he gets married to some else. But for Neil it will be no less then a punishment to even be with Metali even is capacity of a friend it clearly visible from his expression. Ali says

Ali Bhai I am just worried if Di leaves again she is good hiding it 10 years that it took to find her it not KK and Mishti we wouldn't have found her. Aman says

Chill... There will be no hiding now she might want to leave as we know she is looking for a job some where far from main city. Ali says

But then if Neil can convince Avni why is adement to for Neil to marry Metali. KK asks

Defiance mechanism. Ali, Suhanri, Syesha and I say together.

She is just protecting herself from least of Neil's memories because she still love Neil and will always love her. Ali says

Everyone disperses.

(Ali's Room)

Bhai I had to talk to you. I say

Hmm. I says

Don't be angry. Aman says

Aman what's wrong. I says

Remember I told you about Riya wanting to meet me. Aman says

I told you stay away. I say

Yes I know but when Chachi came I had meet them. Aman says

Hetal Kaki... But why... I say

I don't know how but Chachi and Riya knew Di was alive that what they wanted to tell me. Aman says

But how did she knew. I ask

I don't know but she called me today so I told her i am in Mumbai and she was right about Di. Aman says

I noticed DD listening to us hiding outside

What does she want. DD says

I am don't know. Aman says

Let her come she seem to have changed staying with Hetali Kaki. I say

So I will let him come in the a while. Aman says

What happened DD. I ask

Sirji will never trust her. DD says

He will for now for Avni's sake he will. Now that Hetali Kaki is involved means Riya's grandparents are involved maybe even Vivek uncle her Mammu and Mammi and Priya are also involved they all seem to dislike Dayawanti. I say

Let's just hope you are right Ali Bhai. DD says

(Lobby outside)

(Avni's room)

Di please don't get angry. Aman says

What happened is Mowgli fine. Avni asks

Ha Mowgli is fine. But actually... Ali says

(Hall)

What is she doing here. I understand she is sister but Aman please tell her to go. Already we have Metali not another gang please it been too long I can't deal with it now not atleast till Jaan is back in Khanna House completely and happily

Riya. Avni says surprised

Ali I didn't expect this out off you you know very well what she did at least you should have kept Aman away if not be away from her but keep are Neil says

Neil at least listen to her once she might know something it been long since then. Avni says

Just for you Jaan. Neil says

Ali, Aman and DD smile

Aman tells them how she meet Riya and Hetal a while ago and they told him about Avni being which he didn't believe. Riya's phone rings

Why is Metali calling you Riya anyways pick it up. I say

Priya where are you. Are you coming for shopping tomorrow is haldi. Metali says

Metali I am a little busy I will call you a while and I am at cousins cant't come for shopping. Riya says

Liers are lier always. Jaan I going upstairs come fast I waiting. Neil say

Neil goes to Avni's room

Metali always knew Avni was alive for... Riya says

Neil knows that Riya from Kashid. I know you want help but Neil will not believe you that she has been not only cheated by you but after that Juhi any some where by me too. Avni says cutting Riya

Avni what you did you were forced to do it and no not Kashid probably last 9 years everything that happened with in Kashid was because of her. Riya says

Are you sure. I says

See for yourself. Riya says

That means the investigation clearly showed Bhabhi was alive and Metali knew it for last 9 years but she never told Bhai. DD says

That means all we suffered in Kashid was because of Metali. Syesha says

Haa Mishti I don't know how much of past about me or even yourself you know. Riya says

Neil and Mowgli come there

Who is she. Mowgli asks

Hi beta I am Riya your Aman Mammu's friend. Riya says

Aman Mammu she is Mammi. Mowgli says

Mowgli come here. Avni says

Riya isn't your Mami like Aman is my brother Riya is my sister. She is your Maasi. Avni says

Maasi but why does Papa hate her. Mowgli say

Neil is just angry. Remember how angry Neil was angry with me... Avni says

Mowgli also knows the difference between anger and hate. What in your hand DD. Neil says

Nothing Neil. Please accept Riya apology only she can help us with Metali even Shweta Anuty is blinded with Metali's good facade. Avni says

Fine but Riya hurts you before Metali I will get her lost from here. (Avni peck him on the cheek and smiles) Jaan you come here (Pulling Avni to him) What do you want me to do hug and kiss Riya. Neil says

Neil if Maa would have seen this side of you she would have been shocked. Avni says

Jaan this is what 10 years of deprivation does. Neil say

They all spend time together planning against Metali.

(Next Morning)

(Hall)

Neil Ali DD and Aman are leavining.

DD. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. DD says

I had to talk to you. You stay for a while. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. DD says

Neil Ali and Aman leave

(Outside)

What is your sister planning. Neil says

No idea. Aman says

Ali?? Neil says

I have no clue. I say

And if you knew you wouldn't tell childhood best friend's secret after all. Neil says

I join you in a while I have some work. Aman say

Neil and Ali leave

(Inside)

Riya. Avni says

You want to know how I got all this right. Riya says

Obliviously. DD says

I met Metali after dadi died and I was living with ma at Nanu's. First I ignored her then I heard about Neela Kaki's dead and then yours followed. I told Mom about your death Mom didn't accept it so through Nanu's we got Neil resigned and she had case.She not realising who I actually was she told that she loved Neil and now his wife is dead now she can have him soon. I told mom. Mom told me keep an eye on her. Soon she gave me this file saying she successful closed the Avni's death case 6 months after your presumed and said that now one will ever get to know you were actually alive. Then her over keen interest in orphanage in Kashid and it was clear it was no good at all. Riya says

That why your tried to call me so many time. I say

Ya, I knew Avni wasn't dead but what was Suhanri, Tara Sitara connection with her specailly the orphan age. Riya says

Then what did you. DD says

Naanu connection they figured out Avni was in jail with them for wrong accusation of murdering Juhi. So I made comnnect that she was trying to know about Avni. Coinsidently there no one knew Avni. And who ever would have informed her knew her as Neilanaja and were strictly not reveal by Nannu's friend who happens to be a MP. Riya says

So you want us to believe this all. I say

Then I came back here I found Ali here tried to tell him but he didn't listen but Aman heard me once Mom came here. Riya says

Chachi. Avni says

So once she said some Metali knew all about Avni. Aman was interest by then I had seen Avni and also realised she changed not only her name but herself also. Riya says

What else do you know. DD asks

Metali killed her husband because he was not divorcing her after Avni's supposed death. Neil is no danger as such I think. Riya says

Riya do you know anything more. DD asks

You have everything what I know with proof I have some sound clip if you want them I will message them to you. Riya says

Is there more. DD says

For now only this. Riya says

DD first if by any chance if Neil has reach department remove this case he has guilty it will just increase that should happen. Avni says

But Bhabhi. DD says

Please DD. Avni says

Okay Bhabhi. I will do it. DD says

We need to plan something. I say

We do but first let me talk to Neil and Ali to. Avni says

Don't worry I will pitch Ali bhai in. I say

I talk to Neil about it but you said Neil is not in danger and she is not going physical hurt me in case. Avni says

Neil's Condo

(Outside)

Aman you here. Neil says

Your got the flat back.I say

Yes. Neil say

Are we going to Khanna House. I asks

Yes. Neil says

Ali nods and Aman message DD

Khanna House

(Outside)

DD you here. Neil say

Sirji I was waiting for you Bhabhi was worried when Uncle said you are not here. I say

I talk to Jaan. Neil say

What that lying in the car. Let me see Sirji you go inside. DD says

Hmm. Neil says

Sirji congratulation you joint the department back as a private investigator. DD says

Congratulations Neil. Ali says

Congratulation Jiju. I say

Neil Ali and Aman go inside. DD takes the file and goes to police station




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1. There 1 more update in PART 2. The part has total of 6 updates

2. This is Day 1, 4th day will the AvNeil's and Metali's Sangeet.

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1. This is DAY 1.

2. This is a day after Neil get's to know about the truth.

3. There will be 4 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and AvNeil's and Metali's sangeet.

4. This is part {F} of PART 2.




Part 2 {F}: AvNeil Together

Khanna House

(Guest room)

Metali whats wrong. Shweta says

That Avni. Metali says

I am not going hear anything against Avni if there anything else you can say. Nothing against Tillu either both are my kids. Shweta cuts in

Metali Self Talk] Good know one knows yet why Avni did what she I will never let then not even Neil whoever angry he might he will run to Avni immediately with look back at me all what have in order to get in last 9 years will go for waste

See Suuny ek naagin dusari naagin ke aasu pooch rahi hai. Photo le. Bebe says

Shweta Mom still you will still think Avni is all good. Metali says

Metali this Bebe's love for she has always been hot and sweet with me. It is very clearly Bebe and PrakashJI wouldn't accept you and give Avni place so as once Neela said to Juhi you will have to make you own place in their it wouldn't be easy but I on your side and only Avni can help you in this. Shweta says

She will snatch Neil from me as well as you Shweta Mom. Metali says

Shweta Self Talk] Why is she giving me Riya and Juhi vibes. Is she against Avni is Avni in danger. I have support her probably even hurt Avni but if that's the only way protect then

Shweta goes to kitchen gets Metali something to drink mixing sleeping pills

You rest here have this. Shweta says

Shweta goes to Sakoon house

Sukoon House[B]

(Hall)

Avni come fast. Ali says

Lets's go Mumma. Mowgli says

Shweta see Avni and Neil coming Neil looking happy staring at Avni like before

Jaan come. Neil says

(Outside)

Who is planning to drive Neil. Ali asks

Aman you have a driver. Neil says

Tell him drive my car. Ali you drive this car.Neil says

Chalo Angel come with me. Syesha says

Aman can go with you Karan, Jaan is coming with me. Neil says

Shweta is watching everything she happy and confused.

Shweta Self talk] I have both my kids from Metali for that if I have suffer hatred from wveryone also I will. But why are Tillu and Avni doing. Will Tillu actually get married to Metali. But where are they going

They sit in cars. Shweta follow them

Neil there is a lot of place. Suhanri says

You can sit but Jaan will sit right here on lap. Neil says

Neil where are we going you didn't tell yet. Avni asks

Mall. Neil says

Mall but why. Avni says

To shop for my wedding (he wink at Avni) Wifey what else. Neil says

What are you two planning to do with Metali. Ali asks

They reach the mall.

Mall

You will know Ali. Avni says

Tu toh let it be you didn't even tell me Neil knows everything. Suhanri says

Neil takes them a designers shop.

Here are you sure Neil. Avni say

They are costly but wifey you are priceless. They still have a price.

Shweta is watching all this from far. Avni goes to try a outfit which Neil chooses for her. She takes a few minutes to try the outfit comes out wearing. Neil is spell bound Shweta notice both neil desperation while Avni is changing and the happiness and love he hold Avni once she is out.

Neil. Avni says

Neil hugs her

Jaan I don't have words who wonderful you look right now. Neil says

Love you Neilu. Avni say in his ear

Sir. Sale women says

Avni goes and change. Neil goes pays for and gets outfit for Mowgli to try. Avni changes and comes out in normal cloths.

What this Mowgli. Avni asks

I am buying it for him Jaan. It is my marriage he needs to look like son you see. Neil says

Mowgli go try. Avni says

Saale sahab go help you nephew. Neil says pulling Avni to himself

Mowgli come changed in his outfit and comes

Aman you can't even dress up 10 year kid. Come here my batcha. Avni says

Abb laga raha humara chaota sa hero. Neil says

Jaan. Neil says

Suhanri Mowgli ko change karva de. Avni says

Jaan chal. Neil says

Neil Mowgli. Avni says

Salle sahaab will pay for his only nephew and also take care of him. neil says

Where are you taking me. Avni says

Jewelry shopping what else you would just come like that you have to look like ex ACP Wife after all. Neil says

Avni just smile.

Tanishq are you sure. Avni asks

What does it look like. Neil says

They buy everything matching to the out and Neil buys more which Avni doesn't know about.

Shweta is watching all these

Shweta Self talk] This is shaadi ki tayariyan aur shaadi ki shopping. Jis Tillu ko shopping se nafarat this voh ajj Avni ko saari shooping karwa vo bhi best se bhi best.

Abb ghar chale. Ali says

They leave the mall

Aman's House

(Outside)

Wow Maamu how big. Mowgli says

Not bad salle sahaab. Neil says

Avni pick her shopping bag. Aman picks Mowgli's. Neil also picks two bags jewelry bags are with the ladies. They go in.

Tiger come here. How did you like the outfit. Neil says

I loved it. It matches with Mumma's ghagra. Mowgli says

Papa got you another gift. Neil says

What gift. Mowgli and I ask together

Here open it. Neil say

Wow see Mumma. Mowgli says

Go try it on. Aman go with him. Neil says

Ji Jiju. Aman says

Mowgli comes wearing it.

Wow. Everyone says

Jiju you buy him this that why you told me buy him you know just like you I also haven't been able to pamper him. Thankyou Jiju. I say

Neil is just look at Avni.

I just go keep this in the room. Avni says

Take any room Di. I say

Neil notice clearly the tears Avni was trying to hid. He went behind her. Mowgli tried stopping Neil.

Champ let your Papa only he can take care of your Mumma. After your Neela Nani only your Papa can take care and understand your Mumma. Ali says

Ali but. Suhanri says

Why is Di doing this. Why is she building walls around her. Aman says

This how she protects her self from being hurt. She has always done this from childhood. Ali says

But you are somebody she always tells everything to. Tara says

Angel tells you everything you are been with her since her childhood. Syesha says

Mishti yes I have always been her for Avni but I am not the one who brake her walls Till Dayawanti wasa concerned everything as Ayesha Khalla was involved but other things I always supported irrespective it being wrong or right. But only two people can make her confess what in his heart at easy one was Neela Maa and Neil. I know Neil hasn't been himself for a while. Ali says

He has hurt Di and as usual Shweta Aunty is still the same she was she is still hurting and condemning Di for no mistake of his. Aman says

Aman if you or me were is Neil's place we would have done the same thing probably the custody was pulling it to far but other wise his reaction was not a over reaction. Till Shweta's Aunty is concerned I think she just wanting Neil to move as she think Avni has moved and has a purpose to live NOT REALISING AVNI AND NEIL STILL LOVE EACH EVEN AFTER NEIL TELLING THEN CLEARLY. Bebe and Prakash Uncle is against the marriage. Thats the way Shweta Aunty bad or good according to Neil can only move on when he gets married to some else. But for Neil it will be no less then a punishment to even be with Metali even is capacity of a friend it clearly visible from his expression. Ali says

Ali Bhai I just worried If Di leaves again she is good hiding it 10 years that it took to find her it not KK and Mishti we wouldn't have found her. Aman says

Chill... There will be no hiding now she might want to leave as we know she is looking for a job some where far from main city. Ali says

But then if Neil can convince Avni why is adement to for Neil to marry Metali. KK asks
Defance machanism. Ali, Suhanri, Syesha and Aman say together.

She is just protecting herself from least of Neil's memories because she still love Neil and will always love her. Ali says

(Avni's Room)

Wifey. Neil says

Neil you came here. Avni says

Neil hugs her immediately.

Why these tears I can still call off the wedding Wifey and the wedding does't change anything between I can't Metali your place in my life my heart all of that is all yours. Neil says

Neil it is not that I can never give Mowgli what you can see how happy he is. Avni says

Wifey you can give what I can never a mother loves only you like no body replace you for no one can replace you for Mowgli too. (Avni hugs him tightly) Wifey see what In got you. Neil says

When did you buy this. Avni asks

Shh. Just go and change I want to see my wifey look in it. Neil says

Both are blushing. Avni goes and changes. She step out of the bathroom in outfit Neil is spell bound. He make her sit facing the mirror. She holds on his hand.

What happened Wifey . Neil asks

Please stay hold me Neil. Avni says

Neil takes out few packs and keeps them on the table.

Neil. Avni says

Shh. (He starts making her wear the jewelry. Both are smiling at each other finally he puts a chuni over her head) MY BRIDE FOREVER MY WIFEY MY LOVE MY AVNI taht what it always stay. Neil says

Hugs him. Neil pulls her closer

Neil Self Talk] Why are you controlling your emotions so much I am your Husband not a stranger. 10 saal mein aapne aap ko kya se kya banna de ahsi hai Wifey your surrendering in front of Mom you always fought against her if she was wrong but her she is compleatly delusional I will prove it Metali is just another Juhi and nothing else she has already shown her true colors before in Kashid. Not only that she is shameless and has no self respect at all. I will prove this and also make you realise you can't live without me. You just watch

I will go and change some one will come. (Neil looks at her) Let me change my cloths this is not the most comfortable. Avni says

Avni Self Talk]Does he not realise what his closeness does to me. Has he forgotten there people downstairs. luckily that day at sakoon house there was no one.

Avni is changing in the bathroom Neil walk in and hugs her from behind.

Last time I wanted you to start because I didn't know why you were doing it and if reason you doing was my mother which I know I not going not to stop. Neil says

How is telling you to stop. Avni says

Neil had not recovered from the Avni's surprise reply that he was pushed against the nearest wall. Slamming her lips on his.

Wifey. Neil says

Neil do you remember the last time. Avni asks

I can never forget. Neil says

Neelu. Avni says

Avni rubs herself on him

Jaan. Neil moans

Nielu. Avni moans

Neil picks her in his arms and bring her to the room.

Jaan wait. I never thought I will be able see you like this. So wait let me do what I want. Neil says

Neil takes her to the dressing table.

Neil what you doing. Avni asks

Shh! (Neil tries to make her sit. She doesn't leave him) Jaan you will not sit (Avni shake her head hiding her face in his chest) Fine (Neil sits making her sit in his lap) Jaan close your eyes.(Neil make her wear jewellery and make her stands) Jaan open your eyes and see in mirror. Neil says

Neil all this. Avni says

This is my bride. MY WIFEY.. MY AVNI... AVNI NEIL KHANNA. Neil says

Avni turns to him and hugs him tightly.

You made me a bride now make me your wife. Avni says kissing him passionately

Yes my love but wait let me see you properly. Neil says

Avni starts blushing

Jaan this pink on your cheeks makes you look like you are 20 I feel to old. Neil says

There is a knock on the door

Di can we come inside. Aman says

No you can't. Get lost. Neil says

Neilu let me go and change. Avni says

But Jaan. Neil says

I am meeting Aman and Ali after so long please. Avni says

Fine let these two get married then I will take my revenge. Neil says

Avni goes and change in the mean while Neil wears her cloths. Avni comes out and keeps the outfit Neil made her wear inside carefully.

Avni can Aman DD and I come in now. Ali asks

Yes come in. Avni says

Di please don't get angry. I say

What happened is Mowgli fine. Avni asks

Ha Mowgli is fine. But actually... Ali says

(Hall)

What is she doing here. I understand she is your sister but Aman please tell her to go. Already we have Metali not another gang please it been too long I can't deal with it now not atleast till Jaan is back in Khanna House completely and happily. Neil says pulling Avni closer

Riya. Avni says surprised

Ali I didn't expect this out off you you know very well what she did at least you should have kept Aman away if not be away from her but keep are Neil says

Neil at least listen to her once she might know something it been long since then. Avni says

Just for you Jaan. Neil says

Aman tells them how he meet Riya. Riya's phone rings

Why is Metali calling you Riya anyways pick it up. DD say

Priya where are you. Are you coming for shopping tomorrow is haldi. Metali says

Metali I am a little busy I will call you a while and i am at cousins cant't come for shopping. Riya says

Liers are lier always. Jaan I going upsatir come fast I waiting. Neil say

Neil goes to Avni's room.

Metali always knew Avni was alive for... Riya says

Neil knows that Riya from Kashid. I know you want help but Neil will not believe you that she has been not only cheated by you but after that Juhi any some where by me too. Avni says cutting Riya

Avni what you did you were forced to do it and no not Kashid, last 9 years everything that happened with in Kashid was because of her. Riya says

Are you sure. Avni says

See for yourself. Riya says

That means the investigation clearly showed Bhabhi was alive and Metali knew it for last 9 years but she never told Bhai. DD says

That means all we suffered in Kashid was because of Metali. Syesha says

Haa Mishti I don't know how much of past about me or even yourself you know. Riya says

Who is she. Mowgli asks

Hi beta I am Riya your Aman Mammu's friend. Riya says

Aman Mammu she is Mammi. Mowgli says

Mowgli come here. Avni says

Mumma is she Mami. Mowgli asks

Riya isn't your Mami like Aman is my brother Riya is my sister. She is your Maasi. Avni says

Maasi but why does Papa hate her. Mowgli say

Neil is just angry. Remember how angry Neil was angry with... Avni says

Mowgli also knows the difference between anger and hate. What in your hand DD. Neil says

Nothing Neil. Please accept Riya apology only she can help us with Metali even Shweta Anuty is blinded with Metali's good facade. Avni says

Fine but Riya hurts you before Metali I will get her lost from her. (Avni peck him on the cheek and smiles) Jaan you come here (Pulling Avni to him) What do you want me to do hug and kiss Riya. Neil says

Neil if Maa would have seen this side of you she would have been shocked. Avni says

Jaan this is what 10 years of deprivation does. Neil say

They all spend time together planning against Metali.




Footnotes

1. There last update in PART 2.

3. This was Day 1, 4th day will AvNeil's and Metali's Sangeet.
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Recap


(Part 1)

Neil get to know the truth. Neil wants to withdraw the divorce. Avni forces Neil to marry Metali. AvNeil Moments in Sakoon House.


(Part 2)


1. AvNeil spend time together

2. Avni's interned turmoil

3. Neil confusion on what to do

4. . Neil wants to the reason behind Metali change of surname.

3. Ali Aman and DD get to know the truth and their reaction.

4. Neil Reaction

-love and repentance towards Avni

- Dislike towards Shweta

-Calculated and planned action and hate towards Metali.

5. Lawyer tells the Khanna's Neil has withdrawn the Divorce

6. Neil joins the police department again as a special investigator

7. Neil tells Metali to brake the relationship and maintain her self respect and dignity.

8. Entry of Avni's cousins (Samvid, Farhan, Ahana and Naaziya)

9. Riya's to help AvNeil against Metali

10. AvNeil Moments at Aman's House
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Part 3: Day 2

Neil's Plan


The next 3 updates will cover the Day 2

1. A truth about Metali's comes in front of the Khanna's

2. AvNeil and their Gang together.

3. Bebe's and Prakash's confusion.

4. Naano back

5. AvNeil's Haldi and Metali's Haldi.

6. Intro of new positive character.

7. Avni Khanna's and Metali Dubey's first faceoff.

8. Avni tells Neil a truth about Mowgli.

Index

Part {A}: Metali a Widow : Below


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