AvNeil SS: Deadly Games - Chapter 6 pg 12 Updated - Page 8

This chapter was so beautiful and best chapter of all . Be it their conversation or scenic beauty or their gestures it was spot on . I never thought Neil will share about his girlfriend with Avni. This Neil is more sorted and focused than the one in show . He is so clear about his connection with Avni . This is the only difference between Neil in show and the one here. He believes he will find his true love again! 0. That sand and waves theory is inspired from show right ?! That's the best part of this chapter. I can read this chapter on loop Why is Neil so perfect 😳

Really really loved this chapter! Awesome job. Loved the water sand analogies...look forward to seeing how avni figures out the truth about her past! Love the characterisation of avni and Neil here.

Beautiful is the word i wanna use here for the way u have explained two different aspects of Love through water and sand example...
Such piece of writing deserves to be appreciated

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome

Thank you so much dear😳

Originally posted by: iris_diaries

The concept is unique. Liked a lot

Thank you so much! That means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Binh

Wow... This was really good. I loved this avneilicious update to the core. Loved the whole conversation between avni and Neil.

But the best part was when Neil gives his views of how both sand and sea give each other a part of it's own and that is what true love is. That whole part was just beautiful... It was something I would never forget and would always hold in my heart. I can go on reading this forever.

CONTINUE SOONISH!

Thank you sooo much hun! 🤗This honestly means so much! I wrote this part straight from the heart, so I'm very happy to hear that it had an impact on you!😳

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

This chapter was so beautiful and best chapter of all . Be it their conversation or scenic beauty or their gestures it was spot on . I never thought Neil will share about his girlfriend with Avni. This Neil is more sorted and focused than the one in show . He is so clear about his connection with Avni . This is the only difference between Neil in show and the one here. He believes he will find his true love again! 0. That sand and waves theory is inspired from show right ?! That's the best part of this chapter. I can read this chapter on loop Why is Neil so perfect 😳

Awww thank you so much dear!😳 And nope, it wasn't inspired by the show😆 Was inspired by my own personal life! Have been heartbroken myself, so I just penned down some of my own contradictory thoughts about love in this chapter i guess😳

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Really really loved this chapter! Awesome job. Loved the water sand analogies...look forward to seeing how avni figures out the truth about her past! Love the characterisation of avni and Neil here.

awww thank you soo much Neeraja, that really means a lot because this chapter is really special to me! It was written directly from the heart, with a lot of things coming from personal experience! So thank you very much😳

Originally posted by: afshanmk093

Beautiful is the word i wanna use here for the way u have explained two different aspects of Love through water and sand example...
Such piece of writing deserves to be appreciated

This is such a compliment, thank you so much hun!😳 I really appreciate the love and support!🤗

Originally posted by: -Sanjana-

Awww thank you so much dear!😳 And nope, it wasn't inspired by the show😆 Was inspired by my own personal life! Have been heartbroken myself, so I just penned down some of my own contradictory thoughts about love in this chapter i guess😳