AvNeil SS-The Perfect Imperfections {Ch 2}

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Bhavsss
Ah, love the beginning! Avni and Neil in this universe fascinate me a lot, so excited to see what comes next!

Thank you so much, I'm pleased to hear that AvNeil in my story have already captivated you. Writing chapter 2, should be up very soon.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon

Thank you, glad to know you are loving this. Next chapter should be put up very soon.

Love,

Nivi

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Wow wow wow... Did I just see a Dil Raju's family entertainer movie ?? 😃 hehe trust me when I say this I absolutely loved the idea of a story on AvNeil set up against a Telugu backdrop ! Thanks muxh for writing this piece... I did start an SS adding some Telugu flavour to it but I'm unable to complete it... Anyway, dis story is interesting and loved each thing that u have written in precision...

Btw Neil, Avni ki Baava kada ? 😉 can I expect some Baava - maradalu scenes ?? Uff I'm already so excited 😃 can't wait to read more...

Btw , a small advice from me... please put up a note that as per our Telugu culture Cousins can marry... Cuz our friends from north might feel wierd since dey do not follow this :)

Love,

Avni

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Brightglow
Wow wow wow... Did I just see a Dil Raju's family entertainer movie ?? 😃 hehe trust me when I say this I absolutely loved the idea of a story on AvNeil set up against a Telugu backdrop ! Thanks muxh for writing this piece... I did start an SS adding some Telugu flavour to it but I'm unable to complete it... Anyway, dis story is interesting and loved each thing that u have written in precision...
Btw Neil, Avni ki Baava kada ? 😉 can I expect some Baava - maradalu scenes ?? Uff I'm already so excited 😃 can't wait to read more...

Btw , a small advice from me... please put up a note that as per our Telugu culture Cousins can marry... Cuz our friends from north might feel wierd since dey do not follow this :)

Love,
Avni

Dil Raju's fan aa ? If yes, then you have met another fan. His movies are a complete package a family can watch. I wrote enough with Hindi, not that I dislike the language, but felt as a writer I should experiment in different languages. I wanted everything precise for this one, coz it is totally different from the rest in terms of culture and traditions. There shouldn't be any confusion in readers' minds.

Avunu, Avni ki Neil bava avutadu. This is AvNeil's story, so most of the scenes will be situated around them only.

@Bold - done.

Thank you so much Avni!

Love,

Nivi

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Nivi awesome chapter...

AvNeil and south Indian background very nice combination😉

I'M a haryanvi bought up and educated in south indian state..we people do wonder how can people marry their own cousins or second cousin but i respect this and north indian guys do look hot in panche...

Is Neil avni' s bava's brother or related to him...

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: srain10
Nivi awesome chapter...
AvNeil and south Indian background very nice combination😉
I'M a haryanvi bought up and educated in south indian state..we people do wonder how can people marry their own cousins or second cousin but i respect this and north indian guys do look hot in panche...
Is Neil avni' s bava's brother or related to him...

Thank you so much, Sonal. Btw, where were you, gone into incognito mode.

In our traditions, we can marry our cousins if we want. In north, there isn't anything like bava-mardalu, vadina or something in similar lines, so people often wonder about how can this happen. But from legal point of view, the marriage is valid. I am not sure whether north guys will look good in panche, never seen anyone wearing it. It is mostly kurta pyjama or sherwani there, isn't it?

Neil is Avni's bava, Arjun and he are brothers. Check out the Dramatis Personae given on page 2. Let me know if you have anymore doubts.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Updated a banner for the story.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Omg ! The family tree 🤪 *faints* . It really takes so much thinking to give names to each character . 👏

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Read the character sketch just now, and I'm having a hard time remembering all the names and characters. I'm going bonkers trying to memorize them. I hope I'll get used to the names as I read the chapters. 😆

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

@Sri & @Ashi - you need not memorize all the names in the character sketch, the way Avni and Neil will address these people will be enough for now. The names will surely be confusing coz maine bohot dimag lagaya hai to do their Naamkarann 😆.

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