AvNeil SS-The Perfect Imperfections {Ch 2}

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
@Sri & @Ashi - you need not memorize all the names in the character sketch, the way Avni and Neil will address these people will be enough for now. The names will surely be confusing coz maine bohot dimag lagaya hai to do their Naamkarann 😆.

I can see that you have done a lot of brain-storming to come up with these many names. 😆 You've done a commendable job. 👍🏼 Nevertheless all of them are beautiful!

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Lovely bond between the cousins! And I loved your choice of sarees too. I can imagine Avni in it.

Hmmm... so Avni is already in love with Neil. What about Neil? What's in his mind? Does he feel the same for Avni? And why does Avni feel that he won't love her?

All the cousins have gathered for Gayatri's wedding, I assume. It's good to see such beautiful bonds.

Finally our hero is here! I can't wait to see his reaction on seeing Avni. I want to read his POV too. Update soon Nivi. These stories are the only solace left for us now.

Love,

Ashi.

Edited by Ashi3 - 7 years ago

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Ashi3

I can see that you have done a lot of brain-storming to come up with these many names. 😆 You've done a commendable job. 👍🏼 Nevertheless all of them are beautiful!

Thank you so much 😳. I had to do many brain storming sessions to come up with the names for all the three generations.

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Lovely bond between the cousins! And I loved your choice of sarees too. I can imagine Avni in it.

Hmmm... so Avni is already in love with Neil. What about Neil? What's in his mind? Does he feel the same for Avni? And why does Avni feel that he won't love her?

All the cousins have gathered for Gayatri's wedding, I assume. It's good to see such beautiful bonds.

Finally our hero is here! I can't wait to see his reaction on seeing Avni. I want to read his POV too. Update soon Nivi. These stories are the only solace left for us now.

Love,
Ashi.

The bond between cousins is totally taken from the bond my cousins and I share, we are more of sisters than cousins. Growing in a close proximity with him, she is bound to have those feelings for him. She has her own reasons to decide against confessing her love. Besides, Neil is definitely irresistible and good at heart too.

All the cousins have gathered for Gayatri's wedding, in fact the entire Sharma family has.

The next update is going to be our hero's POV only, no worries. It is going to be up very soon, I assure.

Love,

Nivi

P.S. ~ I was surfing in web randomly for dresses when I chanced upon those two and later many more which I saved in my gallery. Putting all of those to use now. You'll see many more in the upcoming chapters.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
@Sri & @Ashi - you need not memorize all the names in the character sketch, the way Avni and Neil will address these people will be enough for now. The names will surely be confusing coz maine bohot dimag lagaya hai to do their Naamkarann 😆.

I wasn't trying to memorize . Just by going through I was bonkers 😆 Btw u kept up the title of the show Naamkaran 😆

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I wasn't trying to memorize . Just by going through I was bonkers 😆 Btw u kept up the title of the show Naamkaran 😆

yeah 😆.

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Wow south Indian touch to avneil's story

Nice plot

Waiting for next

Update soon

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
Wow south Indian touch to avneil's story
Nice plot
Waiting for next
Update soon

I always wanted to add South Indian streak in AvNeil's story, glad I could write a full fledged one. Thank you so much for liking this. Next chapter should be up very soon.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Somehow, I am not able to edit the "Footnotes & References" and hence I had to make a separate post for this. Please ignore the Sharma's house in the "Footnotes & References", giving a new mansion to them.

(the image is not clear, I know. But please forgive me).

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Superb Nivi 👏 I loved it how you kept it authentic, AvNeil are cousins 😳 it's quite common to get married to cousins in my family can't wait to see what happens next

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