AvNeil SS : LOVE at First 'SITE'..!!(Completed.!!)

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
After reading and commenting on the prologue I totally missed the two chapters but now after reading both the chapters I was like what was that even. 😆 Our evilness ofc...😉
Here shifting us all to complete warrior mode u both managed to shift the story in ultimately different directions. Kaha hum war zone me pahuch gaye the or kaha ye wedding planning mili. But still it was worth reading. Thank you so much! Whatever confusion you have will soon be sorted!😃
After reading both the chapters intensely my mind also is going in one direction only that both Neil and Avni are the discussed warriors in the game world hmmm...accha?😉
Anyways lived loved loved it.
U both together are quite explosive.

Thank you so much for enjoying this head-scratching, confusion filled ride!😃

Riya will be with you guys tomorrow along with the next chapter.

You would not like to miss that so do peek in tomorrow!

Love,

Payal.😃

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hi Nivi,

Thank you so much for liking this story even though we are narrating it in a jalebisque manner!😆

You'll be happy to know that Riya will be updating the next ch that will have quite a few of your answers; in just a few hours time.

Untill then.

Cheers,
Payal.😃

Yeah yeah yeah.!
I am here.!!!

Your cheers took some time ti reach me.! But finally i am here.!

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#143

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Girls, I'm extremely sorry for being this late. In spite of reserving first, I ended up being almost the last *me cries 😭*.

The update was hawt, I'm unsure of what else to add. My cheeks are burning red due to the continuous blushing reading the contents of your chapter. One month has done some serious damage to both of their views about each other. Avni feels she has wrongly judged Neil while Neil is all set to have her in his life. Finance Banker seems to be interested in going bankrupt 😆.

The bathroom scene, Riya likha kaise tumne. It was too hot to handle, aag dono taraf se hai par dhuwa toh Neil ke taraf se zyada aa raha hai. Did he ever attend any self control classes in childhood or something of similar lines.

Avni is Gabby, mystery decoded. Just give few indications that Empyrean is none other than a certain Neil Khanna.

There's some super shopping scenes coming in way, I presume. Saturday ka intezaar hi nahi hota.

Love,

Nivi

Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
Res, coz I don't want to miss the chance of being first.

Well, then, congratulations.!
Coz You are at First.! 😉

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

What was this ! I'm stuck with words . So one month has passed since they have started working and it helped them to understand the real self of the other without any inputs from their respective mother . Thoughts of both are in sync too . Wow ! I didn't expect such intimacy ☺️ I expected tease or smooch but definitely not this . This was hawwt !

It's clear that they are gaming . But why should Avni feel annoyed to work with Neil when she is totally falling for him . Aaap dono na will not leave linking between Gabby/Emprean with AvNeil . Iska mei kya matlab nikalun

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Aap dono bahut fast nikli Riyal!😆

I asked for one...mujeh theen theen Updates milgaye..

Waise ek baat batao...who coined riyal?

My res..!❤️

Unress

Firstly, congratulations on this new collab guys...🥳RiYal ka collab matlab kuch toh twist hoga...waiting for surprises(shocks😛)hugs and kisses!!

D villa D sinha...DR... conclusion Riyal ko D se pyaar hai lol

Oh my god!! Shweta and Neela wedding planners hai? So AvNeil ke shaadi ka planning kudh karlenge..bahar jaane ki zaroorat nahi padegi..

DR and doctor ...n doctors wali theme...ye sahi hai... Shweta bhi na..

Ohoo.. lawyer n investment banker... mere expectations badhgaye yaha...i can see them having some good arguments..with great counters...😆

Aur dostana 2? Woh kya tha? Tell me someone is going to see their dostana...🤣

I was thinking about arguments and yaha toh the Mr.Neil Perfect Khanna already hates Avni?😲

I think i already love this Avni....but wait...what just happened there😲? Woh sach mein hua?

Oh , there are here to plan the wedding...naicee.. I can imagine shaadi Mubarak type scenes with AvNeil 😳

Lo, here i was imagining zaan as DR..and DR is Neil's fitness icon?!?! Tut gaya imagination 🥺

Is he gay part toh.. Oh god!! 🤣

..i love DR...he wants them to execute it together..

Even I'm waiting for the fireworks..😉

And here comes the most awaited part...Them... I just loved it!!Hope it's what i guessed..😳

What was that☺️...i expected something from your intro but...this needed a warning! Ufff...And it did it's job to perfection...spiced up things tooo much... (*Fans myself*)hawt! Hawt! Hawt! I demand more such spice ups RiYal..☺️(just telling that we wouldn't mind... include karna ..na karna aapki marzi😛)

Guys, i have some Guesses(@battle of supremacy )...phir se...but let me not reveal them now...hihi..i want to see ki humari soch kitna milti Hai...😛

i love it... setting the bar high with your collabs...As always... looking forward to next update...

*Hugs*

Au haan...jaldi Update karna..Okay?😃

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: ...SA...
Aap dono bahut fast nikli Riyal!😆
I asked for one...mujeh theen theen Updates milgaye..
Waise ek baat batao...who coined riyal?
My res..!❤️

Hey Sanju Welcome!!🤗

We are very very nice people...didn't you know that?😉

RiYal was coined by your smart doc...I obv didn't object...waisey bhi the other options were all objectionable; see for urself...RiPa, PaRi, PaYa😆😆

Chal ab jaldi sey UnRes kar...waiting waiting!😃

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hey Sanju Welcome!!🤗

We are very very nice people...didn't you know that?😉
Matlab..pata hai ki fast hai aap dono..but expect nahi kiya ke itne jaldi Update karengey... Hihi😆
RiYal was coined by your smart doc...I obv didn't object...waisey bhi the other options were all objectionable; see for urself...RiPa, PaRi, PaYa😆😆
I absolutely love RiYal...it just sounds perfect😆 PaRi is cute too😳
Chal ab jaldi sey UnRes kar...waiting waiting!😃
Downloading them...kal subha unress karungi😳