AvNeil SS : LOVE at First 'SITE'..!!(Completed.!!) - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

What was this ! Googly!😉 I'm stuck with words . So one month has passed since they have started working and it helped them to understand the real self of the other without any inputs from their respective mother . Thoughts of both are in sync too . Yes. They have been resistant to the idea of being together because their moms were too insistent about it. But once they got to know each without any external pressure they fell for each other of their own accord! That is not to say that they did not have this connection/attraction towards the other, pehley sey! Wow ! I didn't expect such intimacy ☺️ I expected tease or smooch but definitely not this . This was hawwt ! Thank you thank you! They are living & working together for a while now and have feelings for each other...so accidents like this are bound to happen..😉 Waisey bhi feelings hain, spill ho gayi...; soap tha slip ho gayi; towel tha khul gaya😆😆

It's clear that they are gaming . But why should Avni feel annoyed to work with Neil when she is totally falling for him . It's the residual thing...she is so used to think that she hates him that now that her feelings have taken a 180 shez trying to convince herself that she has no burgeoning feelings towards Neil. Aaap dono na will not leave linking between Gabby/Emprean with AvNeil . Iska mei kya matlab nikalun 😆😆 All in good time my dear!😉



Hey Sri,

Sorry it took such a long time to get back to you. Riya was eager to be here but she suddenly fell ill & requested me to take over. So here I am..😃


Thank you for your lovely comment!

The dynamics between the two are changing and things are about to get more interesting.

Stay tuned coz we'll be back on Saturday with the next installment of the story!

Love,
Payal.😃



Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fabulous update

Love it
Continue soon


Hi,

Thank you so much!😃

We'll be here Saturday with the next update, do tune in for that!😊

Love,
Payal.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


Well, then, congratulations.!
Coz You are at First.! 😉


Waiting waiting...😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
This story reminds me of a Chinese drama I used to watch.
Loved it a lot.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neilavni

This story reminds me of a Chinese drama I used to watch.

Loved it a lot.


Hi,

Are you talking about Love O2O?

Thanks for enjoying our story. 😃

Do remain tuned in for more. The next ch will be updated on Saturday.

Love,
Payal.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal


Ok...will wait till tomorrow morning warna class...😆

Kardi unress @pg20 ... 😎 fast hu na mai?
PG stories matlab?😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shuba shuba☺️
I didn't expect this. Wat was that?
Awesome update. I don't know how I missed this chapter. Sry guys. Late hogai.
Definitely they are gaming. Are they living together? As a working partner?
But wat u guys did. Pani ne Aag Laga di (oops sry soap ne).
One month hogai. This is first attempt. First attempt haina?😆
They are working together. But avni feel annoyed with him?
I mean dono taraf Aag hai. Phir kya problem hai?😕
Ok let's see what happen. But this update was hawt. Loved it.😆😉
Continue soon eagerly waiting for next update.
Sry for late response.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Kardi unress @pg20 ... 😎 fast hu na mai?
PG stories matlab?😕


Good Girl!😃

PG maney Parental Guidance...we could have chosen PaRi as our Collab pseudonym if we were writing stories for kids!😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal



Hey Sri,

Sorry it took such a long time to get back to you. Riya was eager to be here but she suddenly fell ill & requested me to take over. So here I am..😃


Thank you for your lovely comment!

The dynamics between the two are changing and things are about to get more interesting.

Stay tuned coz we'll be back on Saturday with the next installment of the story!

Love,
Payal.😃



What happened to her ?Is it something to do with fingers
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Aap dono bahut fast nikli Riyal!😆

I asked for one...mujeh theen theen Updates milgaye..
Waise ek baat batao...who coined riyal?
My res..!❤️


Unress
Firstly, congratulations on this new collab guys...🥳RiYal ka collab matlab kuch toh twist hoga...waiting for surprises(shocks😛)hugs and kisses!! Awww that's so sweet of you to say that!🤗 We do try & give our readers thoda hatkey & thodey jhatkey!😉😆
#1
D villa D sinha...DR... conclusion Riyal ko D se pyaar hai lol na na...sirf Ri ko..😆😆
Oh my god!! Shweta and Neela wedding planners hai? So AvNeil ke shaadi ka planning kudh karlenge..bahar jaane ki zaroorat nahi padegi.. true...but pehley dulha dulhan ko to manao, kaazi kabsey tayyar baitha hai!😉
DR and doctor ...n doctors wali theme...ye sahi hai... Shweta bhi na.. her brain runs on another tangent altogether!!😆😆
Ohoo.. lawyer n investment banker... mere expectations badhgaye yaha...i can see them having some good arguments..with great counters...😆 no comments😉
Aur dostana 2? Woh kya tha? Tell me someone is going to see their dostana...🤣 If it was their story...😛

#2
I was thinking about arguments and yaha toh the Mr.Neil Perfect Khanna already hates Avni?😲 hehe...isliye no comments bola pehley se hi...😆
I think i already love this Avni.. me too😃..but wait...what just happened there😲? Woh sach mein hua? yep...our bindaas Avni wanted to ruffle some feathers...😆
Oh , there are here to plan the wedding...naicee.. I can imagine shaadi Mubarak type scenes with AvNeil 😳 Let's see if your expectations match what we churn out.😊
Lo, here i was imagining zaan as DR..and DR is Neil's fitness icon?!?! Tut gaya imagination 🥺 Awww...think Salmaan...that was our inspiration anyways!😉
Is he gay part toh.. Oh god!! 🤣 😆
..i love DR...he wants them to execute it together.. Me too...don't you love an intelligent matchmaker?
Even I'm waiting for the fireworks..😉 Patience patience...
And here comes the most awaited part...Them... I just loved it!!Hope it's what i guessed..😳 Do tell what u guessed & what was ur reaction!

#3
What was that☺️...i expected something from your intro but...this needed a warning! Ufff...And it did it's job to perfection...spiced up things tooo much... (*Fans myself*)hawt! Hawt! Hawt! I Thank yoy thank you...I'll shamelessly take all the credit for telling Riya to add a scene or two or three in this part!!😉😆 demand more such spice ups RiYal..☺️(just telling that we wouldn't mind... include karna ..na karna aapki marzi😛) Ummm...wait & watch!😉
Guys, i have some Guesses(@battle of supremacy )...phir se...but let me not reveal them now...hihi..i want to see ki humari soch kitna milti Hai...😛 Arrey bindaas bol daal...we also want to know what u guessed & how close u r to the truth!

i love it... setting the bar high with your collabs...As always... looking forward to next update...
*Hugs*

Au haan...jaldi Update karna..Okay?😃


Hi!!

Wah...what an entry Sanju! Welcome...🤗

It is so sweet of you to give comments for each ch separately.😃

We're hoping that we are able to exceed your expectations of us.

As for the next update...it'll be Saturday...so don't miss that!


XOXO
Payal.😃

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