AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 11

Originally posted by: canzasana

Beautiful story please update soon, two strangers and that much interest in each other, already worrying about their status. love that she pull him in bathroom with such "haq se". thank you for writing lovly story, please update soon😊

Hey tapasi . I know I am late as I never read all the ffs in the forum but I thought to give it a try today and omg I was speechless . Such a nice peace of work it is. Aaj kal mere sath aisa aksar hota hai ki main jis bhi Ff ko like karna suru karti hoon wo ya to end ho jata hai ya phir discontinue. Pls pls pretty pls meri is bad luck ko jhoota prove kar do or tum ise end mat karna. I read ur comment of before in which u were stating that u are leaving this forum so it's a genuine request pls consider it.

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

True to my promise, came back on Saturday. Hopefully, you'll forgive me for the delay in replying. Off forum, sometimes life gets so tight-scheduled we hardly have time to concentrate upon any other thing.

The chapter left me awestruck, with simple words you conveyed so much any conversation would have lacked. Avni and Neil never fail to amaze me in your story. Last time, I asked you a question 'can Neil get anymore cuter'. Now I answer to myself, 'see, he is cuteness overloaded.'

An obstacle in the form of Richa's engagement with Neil in their story which has not even begun. Waiting to see how you take this, Avni and Neil will never take paths which can hurt others. Will Richa understand the growing feelings for each other and step aside?

In the anticipation of next chapter.

Love,

Nivi

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Hey tapasi . I know I am late as I never read all the ffs in the forum but I thought to give it a try today and omg I was speechless . Such a nice peace of work it is. Aaj kal mere sath aisa aksar hota hai ki main jis bhi Ff ko like karna suru karti hoon wo ya to end ho jata hai ya phir discontinue. Pls pls pretty pls meri is bad luck ko jhoota prove kar do or tum ise end mat karna. I read ur comment of before in which u were stating that u are leaving this forum so it's a genuine request pls consider it.

And now about the story it was truly awesome. Just loving this new budding love story. Her saying that she is a karate black belt is just too funny for me.

Next their bathroom Congo was lit. He was flirting with the best friend of his would be fiance. And the shock when she heard the name Neil was just so well written.

Update soon pls.

Too cute :)) loved how Avni spoke in a drowsy mood with Neil and ofcourse I fell for Neil's charm here... ;)

Avni is unpredictable as always 😆 She took him to ladies bathroom and explained in an unexpected way . She is single piece without a substitute . She made him believe she has a boyfriend 😆 Lol .

Never expected this scene to come up!ne arriving at their home and both of them having breakfast all alone!it was a soo good to read the conversations😊

Originally posted by: drbeth

Heya .so what should I call you? If u dnt mind may I knw ur name?

First of all, I get you...even I'm not so good with keeping up wid all the FFs.So no worries.

Speechless!!!! Omg!!!! dts huge...my moment of the day.I just woke up and read dis and it brought a huge smile on my face.

Thank you so much for liking this simple story of mine.

And yes I would try my best to finish this. I know I hv stated earlier dt I might quit...dts cz the show keeps disappointing me time and again.But I'll do my best to break ur bad luck wid ffs😊

I too find d black belt.thing really funny whenever Avni says it😆

Neil is finding this girl irresistible... So he can't help himself.

Thank you so much dear for the awesome words of encouragement.

Love

Tapasi.

So, had been trying to catch up with updates, now that the weekend is here.