AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hi!!! Hey

Apparently I missed the 2nd update...m still in the process of figuring out how?? Me too.I waited and waited... finally posted d next one.

😃 I knew the goons would be in trouble & I was so right! 😆 Dt was especially for you.Dts y I was waiting for ur reaction for so long.

The Coffee date at the cafe under the stars was just!! Hai na.I was also like dis while writing it😆

But oops! Neil is Avniz roomiez honey wala fiancee!! That's a serious complication coz Avni would break her heart rather than someone elsez...shez too selfless! That is the problem, isn't it? But love is not something you can decide upon.Lets see where dis goes.

😆She took him into the girlz washroom to chat😆...No wonder Neil is enamoured with her...she acts unlike all other girls. Hatke hai toh hai woh😉

Next pls😛



Hey Paayal😊
Finally you are back.I thought either you left or you were busy or you didn't like it anymore.
Thnk God u decided to end my turmoil...in a good way.
Good to hear frm u again.😃

Love
Tapasi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: drbeth


Hey Paayal😊
Finally you are back.I thought either you left or you were busy or you didn't like it anymore.
Thnk God u decided to end my turmoil...in a good way.
Good to hear frm u again.😃

Love
Tapasi


Arrey I haven't left or anything m just barely active than before...

But I don't know how I missed the fact that u updated...😕

Sorry I made u wait...😳

Anyways, m glad the goondas got what I'd hoped they'd get from both Avni & Neil!!😆 Their other 2 friends were smarter that they knew not to mess with AvNeil...😆

Btw...I too love cold coffee & always order it irrespective of the weather!!😉
Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: paayaal


Arrey I haven't left or anything m just barely active than before...
I get it.Show is letting every1 down.
But I don't know how I missed the fact that u updated...😕

Sorry I made u wait...😳 koi nai😊 worth it.

Anyways, m glad the goondas got what I'd hoped they'd get from both Avni & Neil!!😆 Their other 2 friends were smarter that they knew not to mess with AvNeil...😆 yayee you liked it😃

Btw...I too love cold coffee & always order it irrespective of the weather!!😉 Me too.Its yum😆


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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
True to my promise, came back on Saturday. Hopefully, you'll forgive me for the delay in replying. Off forum, sometimes life gets so tight-scheduled we hardly have time to concentrate upon any other thing.
The chapter left me awestruck, with simple words you conveyed so much any conversation would have lacked. Avni and Neil never fail to amaze me in your story. Last time, I asked you a question 'can Neil get anymore cuter'. Now I answer to myself, 'see, he is cuteness overloaded.'
An obstacle in the form of Richa's engagement with Neil in their story which has not even begun. Waiting to see how you take this, Avni and Neil will never take paths which can hurt others. Will Richa understand the growing feelings for each other and step aside?
In the anticipation of next chapter.
Love,
Nivi


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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
What an amazing surprise Tapasi wasn't expecting that they will meet in such a situation but loved the whole bathroom conversation quite bold of avni to drag him there please update soon I just can't eait to know what happens next
Much love
Safia
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

What an amazing surprise Tapasi wasn't expecting that they will meet in such a situation but loved the whole bathroom conversation quite bold of avni to drag him there please update soon I just can't eait to know what happens next
Much love
Safia

Yayee.I managed to surprise evryone.
Abt d bathroom conversation...Thank you😃.Avni is our Sherni na...plus she doesn't think much when it comes to such situations😆

I'm working on the updates.
Will try to get it done by weekend😊
Love
Tapasi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Shit! 😆 I'm still in daze... abhi abhi kya hua? Neil is Avniz roomie's hone wala fiancee! Okay I'm still surprised but I dunno why I'm grinning like mad people😆
btw I always like hatke element😉
God inki toh love story start hone se pehle hi complications aagayi😆
Richa n Tanya ko uss stranger ka naam na batake ladki bachgayi
I liked that transition from being uninterested to pulling him along with her to the ladies washroom😆 no wonder Neil is attraccted to her outta all girls
But I'm really worried as Avni will never break Richa's heart so she may back out from some feelings she has for Neil
I loved their bathroom convo!
Neil is shameless apni hone wale fiancee ko imp call bol kar Avni ke saath flirt kar raha hai😆
Aww Neil is so protective about her❤️ I wish both of them understand their destiny call soon
Don't mind my laughter zyada shock ya surprise se mere dimaag ka screw thoda dhela ho jata hai! 😆
Next please Tapasi😃


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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Shit! 😆 I'm still in daze... abhi abhi kya hua? Neil is Avniz roomie's hone wala fiancee! Okay I'm still surprised but I dunno why I'm grinning like mad people😆

btw I always like hatke element😉 You are so adorable.I'm grinning like a psyco reading this😆.Chalo so I did manage to incorporate a small twist😃
God inki toh love story start hone se pehle hi complications aagayi😆 Love story bina complications ki hoti b nai😉
Richa n Tanya ko uss stranger ka naam na batake ladki bachgayi Exactly.She prevented a disaster.
I liked that transition from being uninterested to pulling him along with her to the ladies washroom😆 no wonder Neil is attraccted to her outta all girls Ofcourse she is hatke na.
But I'm really worried as Avni will never break Richa's heart so she may back out from some feelings she has for Neil well dts in Avni's nature. Let's see if we can prevent her from doing that.
I loved their bathroom convo! Thank you
Neil is shameless apni hone wale fiancee ko imp call bol kar Avni ke saath flirt kar raha hai😆 shameless lol😆.Waise he is always this way around her,isn't he?
Aww Neil is so protective about her❤️ I wish both of them understand their destiny call soon I wish the same😳
Don't mind my laughter zyada shock ya surprise se mere dimaag ka screw thoda dhela ho jata hai! 😆
Next please Tapasi😃


Zara this was so cute🤗
I felt like reading the reaction of a super excited kid😆
Love the crazy you😆

Will update this weekend hopefully😊

Love
Tapasi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: drbeth

Zara this was so cute🤗
I felt like reading the reaction of a super excited kid😆
Love the crazy you😆

Will update this weekend hopefully😊

Love
Tapasi


🤗
Mein dil se bachi hi hoon Tapasi😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful story please update soon, two strangers and that much interest in each other, already worrying about their status. love that she pull him in bathroom with such "haq se". thank you for writing lovly story, please update soon😊

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