#11 Mr. CARING Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Just read #10 as I can't recall what it was as it's been sometime since you updated. I am Really Sorry for this I reminded me of Mani Ratnam's Tamil movie "alay payuthey (remade in Hindi with Rani n Vivek Oberoi, can't recall the name). Should i take it as a ccompliment.? I watched that movie plenty times and that ending is somewhat was like yours. Just loved Neil in here. i havent seen the movie but i have seen one song of it. Aye udi udi udi. And that was played on Avneil too

#11 was a lovely extension. Neil's fear, care and love for Avni is way too much, even is that possible in reality? Hehehe.. you rocked again. Thank u so much for ur amazing words.Now please don't tell me #12 will come in April 😆 Hahahhaa 😆 No, Definately not.! It will be up soon.

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

The ever caring and adorable character of Neil which was shown in the show was fantastically depicted by you in this story. Thank you so much dear The caring nature if Neil is what attracted me to this show at the first instance. Same with me.! I used to think how can someone be so considerate and caring at first place, even for those whom he doesnt like. So after reading this part I began to love his character even more if possible. Aww. So glad to hear that.

Very beautiful writing and yeah even more beautiful execution of the perfect character of ACP Neil Khanna which we love from our core. Means a lot to me

Loved it truly awesome.

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Hey riya..!! So happy to read this after a long time😃 Hey Avni.! Sorry for the delay but it was unintentional

As usual it was flawlessly beautiful!! Aww. Thank u so much dear Loved the way u've described Neil's inhibitions of losing Avni... The way he took care of her, the adjustments he has made wid his work to give ample time and care to his wifey, his sober way of adoring her with morning kisses... All wer fabulous!! So haapy to know u have enjoyed those things. Thank u for mentioning that

Loved Avni's naughty way of skillfully convincing him to give her a sponge bath! Hehe Neil ki halat hum bhi samajh sakte hai :))Avni is such a charmer when she decides to be and even more if It is to tease her bechara pati 😉

Avni too is no less in recognising her hubby dearest ka apprehensive behaviour and so gracefully confronting him abt the same... Her hug!! Ohhh that was so much needed for Neil... Exactly.! He needed that assurance that physical intimacy wont hurt her further. That she will be safe. Avni did the best move to let him know the same

The lip lock too was beautifully written :)) again was much needed for this much in love couple... The intimacy written perfectly by u enhanced the whole scene :) Aww. Thank u so very much for that. It was much needed for me 😉

Special mention to the last verses... More specific the Last line took my breathe away "Teri rooh se rooh tak ka..." amazing way to end this beauty :) So glad to know that u loved them. They are part of my Never ending love for Short Shayaris. You may find them more if situation demands. I just wanted to give more impact to the situation. Thankfully it was well received

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

so beautiful, so glad you added on in this series!