#11 Mr. CARING Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ri finally!! Finally!! Yes Saf.! Finally

Mere blue munda ki shades aaghai.🥳
As usual u rocked ri. Awesome update. Neil khanna is a goal. thank u so much buddy
Every girl want a husband like him. Hayee.! He raised the bar so high
Aww,his caring shade is touched my heart. He's too cute to handle. Indeed.!
He took care of her and he dont want to leave her side.
I love the way u described his Fear.😳 So glad to knpw that i could convey my imagination
Aww, our sherni come to know about fear. Her naughty way to convincing him to give her sponge bath was cute. But iss ladke ke paas itni self control kese how?😕 Ab yeh toh vohi bata sakta hai. But really how can he resist Bhege Avni, upar se filled with naughtiness
Finally, she made him realise her feelings and help him to come out of his fear. That kiss was beautifully written.👏Loved it ri. Thanks again Waiting for ur next shade eagerly.


Wont let you wait for too long.!
I have so many ideas dancing in my head. Just need some time to pen them.!

Love ya Buddy.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: nina282

love it!!! was missing this fic. thank you


Thank u so much.!
That means a lot to me.!
Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: docritu99


Wont let you wait for too long.!
I have so many ideas dancing in my head. Just need some time to pen them.!

Love ya Buddy.!

so many ideas. Uff
Iam already dancing. Come on bring it on. Cant wait.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Awww that was really a lovely update ... Neil the caring hubby is always treat to to read and watch 😊


Thank u so much dear.!
Means a lot to me.!
Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Yes, yes, yes!!!! U updated... yah!! Mujhse excitement literally control nahi hoti hai😆 Yes.! Finally! I have updated this one

Omg!! Neil Khanna is goals and the way u describe him makes me fall harder for him☺️ Aww. Thank u so much for saying that
Hayee kitna cute update tha😳
Morning kisses! Hehe Neil ko laga ki Avni ko pata nahi chalega but he's forgetting something that she's our Lady Don😉 Exactly.! How can he Forget Her Wife is not a usual Women. She is bundle of uncertainity.
Waise Avni badi naughty nikli! Pata nahi hamare Tillu se kaise control hua... mujhse se toh control hi nahi ho raha tha I was like ja Tillu karle apni wifey ke saath romance🥱 Even Wifey wanted to romance. She would have happily obliged but Tillu was concerned that he may hurt her with More intimate physicallity
Aww Neil is so caring... kahan milega aisa pati?
Fictions Me. 😆
Hamari lady Don toh Nancy Drew nikli akhir kar apne pati se sach nikal hi liya😎 Hahhaa 😆 seriously
Neil is so afraid to lose her😔
Aww that kiss! Beautifully described Ri👏 Thank u 😊
Haww yaha toh Neil bhi naughty nikla... apni hi wifey ko do mahino ke liye book kardiya and that naughty wink though Yes.! Ofcourse.! If He is going to stay away for some time then he Will plan for compensation too 😉
Eargerly waiting for the next shade of Neil Khanna😃


Thank u so much dear for ur amazing words.!
They are my real rewards.!

Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Omg first things first...m glad u again started this one... Me too

Its one of my favs.. So glad to know that
Aww neil ek patnivrata patee hai hehe
Without a doubt
He. Loves her so much awww
Avni knows him inside out...
Neil khanna surely has a lot of self control🤣 His Self control is unparalleled.


Thank u so much Eku.!
So glad to hear from you.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: docritu99


Did i just get a combined comment for two of my stories.?

Ohh.! I am absolutely loving this.!
Thank u so much.!



Yes indeed it's a compliment and I have also combined two updates' comments. if you haven't watch the movie, go watch it. Brilliant movie. You're right, it's the movie with aye udi udi song. The end of the movie will have ditto dialogue "subdural heorm, what ever you call the blog clot in brain(I'm not a medical student)" hahahha

Thank god the next one will come sooner... wondering what's the theme for the next series.. we have seen the goodie2 Khanna till now and since avni is recovering, perhaps it's time to bring the Lusty Khanna eyeing on his wife? Hahahha. I know it's not easy to write but just my thought to share since this topic will never be on the show 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I was awaiting this update . I thought you were so busy with millionaire . Nah. Nah. It was that plagiarism fiasco that delayed it

Vulnerable and caring Neil is always an apple to eyes . There should be more of Neil Khanna's in this world ! Undoubtedly.! World will be a better place then He opted for work from home to take care of her . That really is a big gesture from husband . Indeed.! That too from a Husband Like Neil who love for his Field Work

Avni wanted to just lengthen the time with him😳it's natural when Neil has started intentionally avoiding . Avni is growing as a romantic wifey in this series. Show me toh aesa kabhi nahi hota We shouldn't underestimate Avni too . I thought she didn't know his staring session but caught him off guard and greeted him with kisses . Even Neil though the same. But then she is Avni. She can never be expected I wondered how she stayed quiet for so long without trying to pull from his mouth . Like she says all his dadagiri can only be in police station . In home she is the boss😆Aakhir bulwa liya sach ! Haha 😆 Really.! She do understand him like he did.

Poor Neil ! He was purposefully distancing as he felt he will lose her . Ye konsi desh ki insaf haiIfDistancing himself is gonna help either we can agree . Nah. Nah.! He was distancing coz he doesnt want to hurt her more from being physical with her in this weak situation. My bad.! Maybe i didnt convey it properly. But that was his care. He kept his needs below her Health. But there is a saying Na everything is fair in love and war ! He had more of backup plans to compensate for this distance . Ye Hui Na Neil Khanna wali baat . 3 months holiday ! in which 2 months is exclusively for him😆This is definitely costly for a head crime reporter Exactly ! If he is going to be away from her due to her health reasons then he has his ways of compensating it too. Avni wont miss her job too, i am sure wont let her. She will be too busy with him 😉


Thank u so much Sri for such awesome Comments.!
Means a lot to me.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: darsh333

You are back with a bang!!😃 Really. Am i.? So glad to know that

Hope the people who did injustice with our dear riya has got the rightful punishment! Ahhaa. I made sure that 😉

Loved this update😊the hug and kiss were the best parts for me😃 Thank u so much for mentioning that neil keeping avni away from him was painful🥱 He was doing for her health reasons only. It was a part of his caring nature.

The way you ended the update with those poetic lines were beautiful👏i loved those😊 Aww. Thank u so much for that. I am more of a poem person. But sometimes i write so deep that it bounces over people's head. So i usually avoid writing them here.

Waiting for the next update soon😃


Thank u so much dear for ur amazing words.!
Means a lot to me.!
Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: rilsaf

so many ideas. Uff

Iam already dancing. Come on bring it on. Cant wait.😳


Hahaa 😆😆

They are still ideas saf.! They arent penned down.! 😉
Hold onto ur horses dear.!

But still i love ur excitement.

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