#11 Mr. CARING Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!!

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Finally I have been waiting for this series to start again and as always you managed to portray this shade so well that I am running short of words to praise you and your beautiful writing 👏

Caring Neil was a treat to read pure husband goal every girl needs to have a Neil Khanna in life 😳

Thank you for the update Riya and can't wait to see what you have in store for this series I am really excited 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aww...this is so adorable!!! Absolutely in love with this. I'm glad u r continuing the series! Will be waiting for the next shade!

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blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 8 years ago

Just read #10 as I can't recall what it was as it's been sometime since you updated. I reminded me of Mani Ratnam's Tamil movie "alay payuthey (remade in Hindi with Rani n Vivek Oberoi, can't recall the name). I watched that movie plenty times and that ending is somewhat was like yours. Just loved Neil in here.

#11 was a lovely extension. Neil's fear, care and love for Avni is way too much, even is that possible in reality? Hehehe.. you rocked again. Now please don't tell me #12 will come in April 😆

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Nidhii

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Posted: 8 years ago

The ever caring and adorable character of Neil which was shown in the show was fantastically depicted by you in this story. The caring nature if Neil is what attracted me to this show at the first instance. So after reading this part I began to love his character even more if possible.

Very beautiful writing and yeah even more beautiful execution of the perfect character of ACP Neil Khanna which we love from our core.

Loved it truly awesome.

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Brightglow

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey riya..!! So happy to read this after a long time 😃

As usual it was flawlessly beautiful!! Loved the way u've described Neil's inhibitions of losing Avni... The way he took care of her, the adjustments he has made wid his work to give ample time and care to his wifey, his sober way of adoring her with morning kisses... All wer fabulous!!

Loved Avni's naughty way of skillfully convincing him to give her a sponge bath! Hehe Neil ki halat hum bhi samajh sakte hai :))

Avni too is no less in recognising her hubby dearest ka apprehensive behaviour and so gracefully confronting him abt the same... Her hug!! Ohhh that was so much needed for Neil...

The lip lock too was beautifully written :)) again was much needed for this much in love couple... The intimacy written perfectly by u enhanced the whole scene :)

Special mention to the last verses... More specific the Last line took my breathe away "Teri rooh se rooh tak ka..." amazing way to end this beauty :)

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Sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

so beautiful, so glad you added on in this series!

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ri finally!! Finally!!

Mere blue munda ki shades aaghai.🥳

As usual u rocked ri. Awesome update. Neil khanna is a goal.

Every girl want a husband like him.

Aww,his caring shade is touched my heart. He's too cute to handle.

He took care of her and he dont want to leave her side.

I love the way u described his Fear. 😳

Aww, our sherni come to know about fear. Her naughty way to convincing him to give her sponge bath was cute. But iss ladke ke paas itni self control kese how?😕

Finally, she made him realise her feelings and help him to come out of his fear. That kiss was beautifully written.👏 Loved it ri. Waiting for ur next shade eagerly.

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia
Finally I have been waiting for this series to start again Me too.! I wasnt getting the green signal from Mods and as always you managed to portray this shade so well that I am running short of words to praise you and your beautiful writing 👏 Aww.. thats so sweet of you to say that. I am honoured

Caring Neil was a treat to read pure husband goal every girl needs to have a Neil Khanna in life 😳 Yes. He has set our expectation bar so high na.

Thank you for the update Riya and can't wait to see what you have in store for this series I am really excited 😃 Its A pleasure Dear. Also i am running short on themes so i needed some help from u guys 😉

Thank u so much dear.!

Keep showering ur love on this series like this and i promise some really awesome updates.!
Much love.!

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: neeraja91
Aww...this is so adorable!!! Absolutely in love with this. Aww. Thank you so very much dear. you have really been a consistent admirer of this Series. Just wanted to let you know that I Acknowledge the fact and happy about it I'm glad u r continuing the series! Will be waiting for the next shade! Ofcourse ofcourse. There was no way i was going to stop this

Thank u so much dear.!
Means a lot to me.!

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