My Lover, My Cheater, My Arranged Marriage In Drogheda (P16 PG23) Comp - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Awesome update! thank you for this...the raw emotions just really pull at the heartstrings! no matter how much neel tells her he loves her, its very hard for avni to forget what happened. It may have been a drunken mistake but its still very painful to get over. I feel for both of them. Beautifully written! thanks for the update, will wait for the next!

Hey thank you for this lovely comment!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Oh and thank you SO MUCH for the dedication...its really really nice of you! its a mind blowingly sweet gesture❤️ Big hug and much love to you🤗

No problem, much love❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

No matter what Neil does Avni can't forgive and forget so easily . It's hard for any woman . Now even at the thought of Avni with another man is just killing him and shredding his heart . Question is will Avni be able to cheat on him ? Agreed she is leaving to club but will she be able to ? This story has just pulled out my heart . But who knows they can fall in love yet again .

Sorry this story has made you sad!
Thank you for your comment, all will be revealed fairly soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Hey...dear the story is awesome rawsome..no doubt..!! U r brilliant with ur updates...amazing story line and emotions are portrayed beautifully..!!
But i literally can't imagine Neil cheated on avni.. 😭 even though inadvertently.. but still this is so hard for me to digest..!! My heart is aching for avni..!! I wish it was all just a misunderstanding..!! 😭
The story is just so impactful..!! Brilliant work..!!
Do update soonish plzz..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Hey...dear the story is awesome rawsome..no doubt..!! U r brilliant with ur updates...amazing story line and emotions are portrayed beautifully..!!
But i literally can't imagine Neil cheated on avni.. 😭 even though inadvertently.. but still this is so hard for me to digest..!! My heart is aching for avni..!! I wish it was all just a misunderstanding..!! 😭
The story is just so impactful..!! Brilliant work..!!
Do update soonish plzz..!!

Hello lovely, thank you so much!
Im glad you like it, I know its hard to digest, I was fearful when i first wrote it because of that because we all know Neil wouldnt do it, sadly not a misunderstanding!
Thank you so much, ill update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Hi, Iam one of the silent readers and honestly like e the concept of this story. It's beautifully written and every part of the story just flows quiet well and the suspense arghh love it. You are a star ⭐️ keep up and thank you for posting such a lovely story. Honestly can't wait for part 5 and hopefully Avni doesn't commit the same sin that Neil did in fact should show Neil a lesson that she is not worthless like him but at least keep him in suspense would be nice till he finds out Avni couldn't do it 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mamisha

Hi, Iam one of the silent readers and honestly like e the concept of this story. It's beautifully written and every part of the story just flows quiet well and the suspense arghh love it. You are a star ⭐️ keep up and thank you for posting such a lovely story. Honestly can't wait for part 5 and hopefully Avni doesn't commit the same sin that Neil did in fact should show Neil a lesson that she is not worthless like him but at least keep him in suspense would be nice till he finds out Avni couldn't do it 😉

Hello lovely, thank you for not staying silent and commenting, it means a lot!
Im glad you like the story, ah thank you!
I hope part 5 is to your liking!
All shall be revealed shortly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Thank you so much di 🤗
this part is also great😉
but i can't even imagine avni to be in another man's arms.
what has happened to avni means she cannot understand the feelings of neil i know he has cheated her but still he is crying a lot 😭
anyways i think next time she understand the emotions of neil😃
ok love you di❤️
please write more👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hi dear i was a silent reader and this is my first comment on any forums ur work has forced me to pen down😳 ..i loved all ur previous works and i will treasure them forever😉..we are used to see neil as mr perfect so this a a true change over...no matter what his deed cant be justified ..i would love to see him feel his guilt more😡...he must work hard to win her back...keep up d g8 work...stay blessed love u..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: adizafan

Thank you so much di 🤗

this part is also great😉
but i can't even imagine avni to be in another man's arms.
what has happened to avni means she cannot understand the feelings of neil i know he has cheated her but still he is crying a lot 😭
anyways i think next time she understand the emotions of neil😃
ok love you di❤️
please write more👏

Ah, thank you lovely!
I think its because shes so hurt, she knows he hurts to but hes still to blame
Much love!

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