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Posted: 7 years ago
Two updates back to back . wow ! I love to read your story . It gives a feeling that AvNeil are normal couples and have normal insecurities n arguments . I love such couple stuff than romance or smooch . I was so happy reading the update . They cleared their misunderstanding and assured that they will give time for the other . Neil was whining like a kid complaining of not giving chocolates . My heart went to him more . Avni too shouldn't be blamed here . Poor thing was trying to keep balance between work and personal space but couldn't handle it . My heart welled up when Neil found that she was wearing his shirt to fill his void . It was really hard to support either . My poor babies ! And towards the end they explored each other 😆 That was a good end for the update .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Two updates back to back . wow ! I love to read your story . It gives a feeling that AvNeil are normal couples and have normal insecurities n arguments . I love such couple stuff than romance or smooch . I was so happy reading the update . They cleared their misunderstanding and assured that they will give time for the other . Neil was whining like a kid complaining of not giving chocolates . My heart went to him more . Avni too shouldn't be blamed here . Poor thing was trying to keep balance between work and personal space but couldn't handle it . My heart welled up when Neil found that she was wearing his shirt to fill his void . It was really hard to support either . My poor babies ! And towards the end they explored each other 😆 That was a good end for the update .


yay! I'm happy you liked this update also! thank you for all your feedback! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awsmm update👏...
Loved how Avneil resolved their differences...especially Neil complaining like a small kid to his mother😳
U r awsmm as always❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
@ rinku and @naira
Thank you both very much!❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Agle update mei kya hai abi se mere dimag daud rahi hai 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Agle update mei kya hai abi se mere dimag daud rahi hai 😆


Haha😆 Kya daud raha hai aapke dimaag main?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh god
next update dedi already I dont know its updated.
Awesome one. Iam so glad they solve everything.
I love how neil complaint like a small child. He's cute.
Avni love him very much. Wow, chupke se neil ke shirt utake chalegai avni.
Aww, I love that photo part very much.
Its too good. Amazing chapter. Their romance
Loved it continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Oh god

next update dedi already I dont know its updated.
Awesome one. Iam so glad they solve everything.
I love how neil complaint like a small child. He's cute.
Avni love him very much. Wow, chupke se neil ke shirt utake chalegai avni.
Aww, I love that photo part very much.
Its too good. Amazing chapter. Their romance
Loved it continue soon.


Thank you. Glad ki aapko accha laga!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi..I like your style of writing & detailing..which brings a sense of "reality touch" to stories :) good job..:)
P.s: I absolutely loved your other ff which I read longtime back.(the road trip one)😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixS

Hi..I like your style of writing & detailing..which brings a sense of "reality touch" to stories :) good job..:)

P.s: I absolutely loved your other ff which I read longtime back.(the road trip one)😊


Thank you SO much! I'm happy that u feel it's real because that's definitely my aim! So it's really nice to hear that it's come through! And I'm glad you enjoyed the road trip one as well...it's my fav one too because it was my first ever FF. I hope that you will enjoy the upcoming stuff as well. Thanks for commenting!:)

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