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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Just loveddd it...👏
These are real life situations which actually happen but can't see on television screen...
We understand Avni being engrossed in her work but feel bad for Neil..He don't deserve this much ignorance😭...
Just waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

This always happens when both husband and wife are working . Either of them will be stuffed with work and tend to forget things n the other will feel as ignored . I could thoroughly understand Neil's condition. Poor man he was here for a surprise but all took a different route . Especially when your wife is so occupied all such type of thoughts occur . I dunno whom to support. 😆 But I really felt bad more for Neil 😆

Update soon please ! Hope they sort it out and enjoy their anniversary


Well I'm glad that this chapter has turned out to be relatable enough. I was worried that with the cheating angle I was pushing it too much. will update the patch-up part soon! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Nairagoenka2606

Just loveddd it...👏

These are real life situations which actually happen but can't see on television screen...
We understand Avni being engrossed in her work but feel bad for Neil..He don't deserve this much ignorance😭...
Just waiting for the next update


Dont worry, they'll talk it out. coming up in my next update. should be up soon! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Oh my god.
Wonderful update.
Its always happen in working couple life.
I can understand their pain. I felt sad for neil. He trying his best to talk to her.
But avni cant talk bcoz of work load. Usually we always read and saw this type of problems in wife's life. Always wife want to talk to her husband. But bcoz of work load husband cant talk to her. They didn't know wat wil happen. If its continued. So, neil want to suprise her for anniversary. But how neil suddenly believed wat he saw. May be bcoz lack of communication. Iam glad she cleared it. But iam it will hurt her. He actually thought she can cheat on him. Isse jyada ek biwi sehnahi sakti. Kitne understanding kyu na ho but yeh baath easy nahi hai bhoolnekeliye. Usne apne gusse mein usse doubt kardi. I can understand but he didnt know wat he did. He didn't trust her. Its slightly hurt me. Hope they clear and slve every problem. And I think avi should give him atleast some time. Continue soon dear. Iam glad u thought this matter to write. Well done.👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Oh my god.

Wonderful update.
Its always happen in working couple life.
I can understand their pain. I felt sad for neil. He trying his best to talk to her.
But avni cant talk bcoz of work load. Usually we always read and saw this type of problems in wife's life. Always wife want to talk to her husband. But bcoz of work load husband cant talk to her. They didn't know wat wil happen. If its continued. So, neil want to suprise her for anniversary. But how neil suddenly believed wat he saw. May be bcoz lack of communication. Iam glad she cleared it. But iam it will hurt her. He actually thought she can cheat on him. Isse jyada ek biwi sehnahi sakti. Kitne understanding kyu na ho but yeh baath easy nahi hai bhoolnekeliye. Usne apne gusse mein usse doubt kardi. I can understand but he didnt know wat he did. He didn't trust her. Its slightly hurt me. Hope they clear and slve every problem. And I think avi should give him atleast some time. Continue soon dear. Iam glad u thought this matter to write. Well done.👏


thanks for such a detailed comment! It makes my day to see that aap mere FF ko itni baariki se padhte ho and that you actually connect with it! this problem of work life balance i guess is common and something i thought would be relatable. i thought that this cheating angle was pushing it a little but i felt like it may work if i can justify it because of neel's increasing insecurities and frustration. and just given the circumstances he was quick to assume the worst. I'm not sure if it worked or not but thoda liberty le liya!😆 also i purposely switched it around because humesha zaruri nahi hai na ki wife hi insecure ho ya wife is free and husband is busy. it can be the other way around too. and i've already updated the next bit too. so i hope you like that too! will wait for your feedback on that too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
That was such an awesome update Neerja .. so relatable and so close to real life .. happens when both the spouse are working and most importantly when at a given time one of them is super busy and the other super free 😆..but these fights are important and necessary and asyou said these fights make them stronger as a couple .. make a couple take that extra step needed towards understanding the spouse ..look loo forward to seeing how you make them patch up 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

That was such an awesome update Neerja .. so relatable and so close to real life .. happens when both the spouse are working and most importantly when at a given time one of them is super busy and the other super free 😆..but these fights are important and necessary and asyou said these fights make them stronger as a couple .. make a couple take that extra step needed towards understanding the spouse ..look loo forward to seeing how you make them patch up 😊


Hey, good to see u back! glad you enjoyed this update and the next one is up too. so do check that out as well and lemme know if i did justice to that as well!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: neeraja91


Hey, good to see u back! glad you enjoyed this update and the next one is up too. so do check that out as well and lemme know if i did justice to that as well!

Hey did not notice that you already updated .. it was good ..I loved it that both dint held back their emotions ..neither complaints not encouragement was held back .and both patiently heard the other side and actually understood where the other is coming from .. great job 😊 and of course the way they made up for the lost lost towardsthe end was great too h😉
Hey if you are planning to continue the work life balance aspect - a small request from my side , please show how both of them work towards maintaining the balance .. in general women tend to feel guilty and step back a bit from work and the men and the family will not be even aware of what their lady is losing out on work front , they just assume that the fight solved everything ..or it will be the case that the man feels guilty of accusing the wife of not spending enough time and stops complaining and the wife just assumed that things have gotten better .. I am saying this from my life experiences with self n friends and their irrr spouses .. I have always felt that communicating openly even after the fight and patch up and taking a regular check on how we are handling stuff would have been more healthier for the individuals and the relationship on the whole..
Since avneil are so good at communication ireally wish to see how they handle it forward e
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
I am so sorry , the grammar and some words in my previous post were all over the place..having issues editing the post from phone .. not sure if it's IF or my phone that is doing this tamasha .. I hope it's readable even with few words missing or mis spelt
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Posted: 7 years ago
@firsttimehere. thank you for that brilliant suggestion.will definitely try and incorporate some of the ongoing battles with work life balance that they will have despite this talk they have had...will try and include that in the upcoming chapters. thank you so much for ur comments, means a lot that you take out the time to write your feedback! also no issues with the grammar..i got what you were getting at very clearly. can totally relate to the struggles of typing on a phone! 😆

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