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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Am coming across this poem for first time . I never realised the hero killed his girlfriend until you mentioned . It was really beautiful .

Oh man ! Avni never leaves a chance to taunt Neil . Narcissistic personality disorder 😆 Is he so self obsessed ? She really goes a step extra to taunt him . Oh god ! Avni is overtly possessive of Neil that he spat at his face all those words.

He is no less though . Loves to irritate her and enjoys her jealousy .

These phonetics 😆 Avni misinterpreted and was about to leave . I'm loving this side of her . In show we can never get this side. Neil must have been in cloud 9 after learning the reason for her Anger . 😆 If girlfriend is so much possessive life toh ban hi gaya uska .

This guy is a sure death ! His ministrations and tricks . As soon as he touched her hair I expected him to play that poem which he did .

I expected him to ask her for being his councillor 😆

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Zara

@ZaraxA

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Yay Simi you updated and it was a beautiful update as usual. I love Neil teasing Avni it's so cute to see. Avni get jealous was absolutely adorable.

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

"Think before u speak" is this Avni based on u Simii???😉😆

I love it. Gosh even I was like did he just called her Love?? 😆

Avni was so jealous if Neil didn't clarified it she would have murdered Rhea😆

I hope Avni's team win. Please continue soon😳

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Arieltabi
"Think before u speak" is this Avni based on u Simii???😉😆
I love it. Gosh even I was like did he just called her Love?? 😆
Avni was so jealous if Neil didn't clarified it she would have murdered Rhea😆
I hope Avni's team win. Please continue soon😳

Haha Tabby!

No, no. She is not based on Me!

I am not as impulsive as her, and have toned down the ''think before you speak'' thingy in me (quite a bit😉) 😆

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Awesome update simmi, loved it. I thought I was in class room.😆 I don't know how to explain it. But I got so many info from this chapter. How do u know about all this?

These two r brats. Kitne ladte.😆 they don't miss any chance to taunt each other. Neil questioned himself, y am I dating her? It's so hilarious.🤣

Actually, iam also thought, he called Riya luv. But u clarified that. Avni is so jealous. Neil ki oh my mata hone Vaali thi.😆 but he escaped. He enjoyed her jealousy.

Wat was that? Wat he's doing?☺️ oh god! He is such a tease. I loved this part very much. Continue soon dear.

Edited by avneil2 - 7 years ago

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Nooo... I'm not left with words to comment everyone here already pointed out everything so beautifully just loved reading every line it was just awwweeesssooommmeee

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: avneil2
Awesome update simmi, loved it. I thought I was in class room.😆 I don't know how to explain it. But I got so many info from this chapter. How do u know about all this?

These two r brats. Kitne ladte.😆 they don't miss any chance to taunt each other. Neil questioned himself, y am I dating her? It's so hilarious.🤣

Actually, iam also thought, he called Riya luv. But u clarified that. Avni is so jealous. Neil ki oh my mata hone Vaali thi.😆 but he escaped. He enjoyed her jealousy.

Wat was that? Wat he's doing?☺️ oh god! He is such a tease. I loved this part very much. Continue soon dear.

Hehe.. Thanks a bunch dear.. Glad you liked it!

I am an avid literature lover, so I know about poems like these 😆

AvNeil get on each others' nerves and that's what sets their relationship apart! 😆 I am sure you will enjoy their shenanigans more in the updates to come. Stay tuned! ❤️😳

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Oooh m loving this battle between Ms.Logical & Mr.Practical!

They both love having a go at each other publically while bringing their secret relationship in the convo tauntinglysomehow!!!!😆😆

Buit at 19 v can't expect much maturity from them!

I like how Neil has done Ph.D. in outsmarting his smartmouth gf!😉

The hair trick was sooo neat!! Hats off!!

& the whole confusion over Lav & Love🤣...English is truly a very phunny language!

This chapter was just too good!

I voted for daily updates...did that not win😲

So when will the next update be?

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: paayaal
Oooh m loving this battle between Ms.Logical & Mr.Practical!
They both love having a go at each other publically while bringing their secret relationship in the convo tauntinglysomehow!!!!😆😆

Buit at 19 v can't expect much maturity from them!

I like how Neil has done Ph.D. in outsmarting his smartmouth gf!😉

The hair trick was sooo neat!! Hats off!!

& the whole confusion over Lav & Love🤣...English is truly a very phunny language!

This chapter was just too good!

I voted for daily updates...did that not win😲

So when will the next update be?

It totally won, but my sleepy-head didn't since I forgot to check the thread! 🤣

Haha!

Next update will be tomorrow, pakka pakka! 😳😆

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Your style of writing is amazing👏👏 Just loved reading both the chapters..I know these r all long chapters and it takes a lot of time ...but can u update more frequently..Im greedy for your updates😃❤️

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