AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38) - Page 27

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Puja🤗

Iam glad u r updating.😳
Awesome chapter
Loved it.
Even I dont like public proposal. I agree with avni. Sometimes it will create unnecessary scene.
Ali is so cute. Lol his one liner was too good. Cant wait for next chapter.
Continue soon
Thank u so much for updating puja.

hello! Big higs right back at you'
Thank you for the wonderful comment. I am glad you are liking ali as well as the story!!

And premature public proposals always do create a scene. But, true love wale do make you go aww. Don't you think?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Ali is definitely a shayar 😃 I love this guy more than one in show . Looks like he is gonna be of a great help as he witnessed fireworks is mutual 😉 He was already with a good plan to help Neil to have alone time with her at terrace . Wish I could get a chance to visit Singapore 😆

As for proposal I am with Avni . I feel this should be more personal than going public . I can get Neil's point too but such things are even more better when they are private .

oh thank you! It makes me so happy that you like this Ali more! In the next update, which is already up, you'll find how big a cupid he really is.
And when you can, do visit Singapore. It is Beautiful!! But I do say that about all the places😆

Okay, so personal for you too. That is cute, i think so too. 😆😆

What do you think after this, will AvNeil proposal be a public or private thing or they will be tied down forcefully.

Do let me know. And thank you so much for the lovely comment!'
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome... Really enjoying the story...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

hello! Big higs right back at you'

Thank you for the wonderful comment. I am glad you are liking ali as well as the story!!

And premature public proposals always do create a scene. But, true love wale do make you go aww. Don't you think?

yes it depend on their love. 👍🏼
True love wale will make us go aww. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update puja👏
Aww, Iam loving this slow process.
This update was awesome puja. They are opening up.
I can sense some change in avni. Also neil can sense that.
Lol, ali he is one piece. Fun loving character. I genuinely like his character.
Aunty ko bejdi 😆
And smoothie part was so hilarious. Kon daalta hai smoothie mein spinach.😆
Poor neil, usse laga mint hai.😆
Ali ki ideas ko salam. Poha banao aur ladki patao.
Eagerly waiting for next chapter. Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome job! Love the little touches...gymming and bfast together. fighting about little things! so cute! Ali is such a sweetheart..uske jaisa cupid har kisi ko milna chahiye. sending the old lady and giving him the poha recipe this time, sending them up Marina Bay sands last time...he's too good! I really miss him in the show! kaash uska comeback ho jaaye! please keep updating! much love!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

oh thank you! It makes me so happy that you like this Ali more! In the next update, which is already up, you'll find how big a cupid he really is.

And when you can, do visit Singapore. It is Beautiful!! But I do say that about all the places😆

Okay, so personal for you too. That is cute, i think so too. 😆😆

What do you think after this, will AvNeil proposal be a public or private thing or they will be tied down forcefully.

Do let me know. And thank you so much for the lovely comment!'

I feel Neil must have noted that she loves proposal to be personal thing . So there is no question on this .

Ali ❤️ How I always missed Neil and Ali's friendship in the show which was shown only for a few episodes . Ali is definitely the best Cupid . He bribed an old lady😆 She was anyways correct. They did look like couple in love with all the banter .

I love how you mentioned their routine from breakfast to dinner along with their work routine. They have got so used and comfortable with each other that they miss the other when they are busy in their work😳😃. It gave a homely feel . Looks like plan is working and Neil is slowly and firmly entering her system . Avni knows that all these confused feelings for Neil is love not just a mere attraction ! Wohoo Avni is not that Tubelight as in show . Neil had successfully entered those areas in her heart by being just himself ! Also loved the fact that she has became so comfortable with Khanna's . Credits to Neil 😉

Their marathon over the smoothie was so cute for words I'm on AvNeil high . I always love these type of scenes than bold romance . Ali is anytime available for AvNeil . I'm going to fall for this guy than Neil or Avni 😆😆 And he didn't leave a chance to tease them and also help Neil . Poha will definitely make its way to her heart . 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aawww.. it was so cute and I loved it.. their small stunts at the supermarket, gym and while playing ludo was just too adorable! I couldn't stop smiling throughout the update. Ali is such a cutie too.. I these and their love for sweet things, adorable. Thank you for that super cute brilliant and lengthy update.

PS thanks for the proposal idea. Maybe I should start dropping hints. Muahahaha
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh WOW!! If you ever have the time please give us the expanded version of each of these...I love the ending n how you have tied it up to their promise in London to meet at Rockefeller and also that little scene from before where they saw another couple having a public proposal and had difference of opinion on that! The fact that Avni would be brave enough to propose n that too in front of the whole world... INCREDIBLE finish! I'd look forward to reading these ideas in a full fledged chapter...please do consider it whenever you find time. Much love for writing a beautiful FF and for giving us some closure too!
Edited by neeraja91 - 7 years ago

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